~maitri~ maaneet FF THREAD 2 UPDATED 1may - Page 63

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~maitri~
15

They slipped into a moment from where they couldn't not see a return, forgetting where they were, wat they were doing dancing passionately lost in each other.

They reluctantly pulled away from each other. It was more like some was parting one body into two. They were both embarrassed in front of each other. It was way too awkward to do something like this, especially when they were so close. They sat in the chair, silently had their dinner. They love each other offcourse they do.. they do more than two loves could ever.. they were best friends.. actually even more than that. Now this new feeling of attraction, more of physical seemed strange, actually making them uncomfortable within.. definitly not with each other.. they can never discomfort each other... not after spending 4 years together, 3.5 yrs living together.. no not now... !!!

he drove her to the airport they still were wondering wat to say.. they didn't want to say anything that would ruin the beautiful moment of their togetherness.. non was guilty ..non was ashamed.. but a feel of shyness..awkwardness kept lingering. Her cheeks were all red. He had never noticed her blush.. now every time he saw her ..he couldn't fail to notice it.. &..OMG.. the blush tantalized him. The thought it was his effect on her..was mesmerizing.

He halfheartedly walked her till the gate. She knotted her pallo, looking down.. he stood in silent with his hands in his pocket. They both looked at the flight schedule they had 30mins more..dam 30mins.. now the anxiety seem to suddenly increase. They wanted to say something but couldn't, just kept stealing glances from each other. Just then they saw a man running with a ladies hand bag, cops chasing him while a lady running crying..chor chor..mera hand bag.. chor chor!!!

they both looked at each other & broke out in laughter ..

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6am.. first morning in their flat.. she rushes into his room holding a rod.. genie.. genie..chor!!! genie chor!!
he turned around hiding his head in the pillow.. shoo..shoo.. go away
she pulled his pillow away.. genie chor!!..genie chor!!
he looked at her with his droopy eyes.. genie chor nahhi hain dodo, genie is genius
yeh lo.. genie chor!! nahi chor ..chor!!!
boxer..shoo..chor.
.he slept again
genie chor!!.. uttoo.. GENIE..she screamed pulling his spread away.
He got up at once..chor!! with his eyes still truing to open
she innocently nodded her head ..also nodding the rod that she held..
ouch dodo.. main chor nahi hoon. mujhe kyun mar rahi hoo
sorry.. lagi??

lagi ki bachi!!..
he snatched the rod.. khan ha chor..boxer kanha hain
boxer nahi.. balwinder
balwinder??
that was so an impossible name for boxer he thought
ballu bhi tumhari tarah so raha hain.. kisi ki ko ghar ki parva hi nahi
he paced out all worried..just to find a man lying flat on the floor.. ballu comfatably rolled away & continued to sleep.
isse kya huwa? He checked his pulse & immediately rushed to get water to splash on his face
tum police kyun nahi bula rahen? She asked hiding behind him..
chor uttah gaya tho problem ho sakti hain
Dodo yeh chor nahi hain
she made a cute face phir yah humare ghar main kya kar raha hain who bhi subha subha, mainne tho door nahi khola, tum aur ballu tho kholne se rahen..
Maan splashed water on him.. & kept the glass down in a thud!!
nakul got up at once ..nahi main chor nahi !!!! main chor nahi.. covering his face & head away from her.
She looked at Maan & then nakul
tum teehk ho nakul..maan asked patting his shoulder
he nodded fearfully looking at Geet
she straighten herself feeling a bit guilty some where..
Maan formally introduced - dodo this is nakul.. humara ghar ka all in all.. he takes care of every thing food, cleaning, bills, every thing
she yet came up with her silliest of doubt I thought bills papaji pay karten hain
he rolled his eyes
dodo!!
oh!!! ok
Maan turns to look at nakul's forehead that had a small red bump now.
Yah Geet hain.. meri dodo & hugs her sideways.
nakul smiles ..still bit scared of her

Next Maan sees was Geet & nakul were best buddies.
Geet had managed to get medicine for nakul's red bump on the forehead & he now seemed more friendly & acquainted with her than Maan whom is been with since childhood.. well that was his dodo. She would win any ones heart but her genie has to be there to push her to talk to them other wise.. the person will land up as chor..!!!

Precap
desi nashta!!!
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Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago

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