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chsweety22

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Posted: 14 years ago

#201

Originally posted by: maaneetfan123
amazing update loved it
thanks 4 pm

thanks😊

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chsweety22

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Posted: 14 years ago

#202

Originally posted by: -afsha-
Full comedy FF
The best was wen they meet in wedding fully drunkard

They were best in cursing sitting them in the last row hahahahahhahahahahaha

Bths love stry is paka sumthg different i feel

Maan was crying for hair fall

I thought he has sum major disease lyk Cancer tumour n all

Baap re kya namunas they are hahahahahahahahahahaha

Culdnt stop laughing

Update soon

the best part of this will be comedy

i too loved all scenes which u loved..

the best part comes after a while...we'll be literally🤣

will be updating soon

thnks

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chsweety22

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Posted: 14 years ago

#203

Originally posted by: sukklover
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dear...ur update just n n also ...also ...⭐️

..dear...👏👏👏

..really ...😳

...4 ur hard work dear..👍🏼.

tons of huges n kisses... ...🤗

...4 pm me...

..2 always PM me...😉

once again ...😃

lov,❤️

Tama

thank you so so very much dear

loved all ur pics..!!

they are beautiful

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chsweety22

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Posted: 14 years ago

#204

Originally posted by: debomaaneet
hi millie!!!
u'd pmed me,bt as i dint cm in IF 4 quite a long time,cdnt post any rly..4 dat m xtremely sry yaar!
n thnk u so much 4 da pms...
nw abt ur ff---hv read chapter 1 to 9 at a tm,it is just hillarious...da ff has a comic relief,n so it does mk our mind refreshng!! :)
do cntinue...n cntinue 2 pm me.i wont dare nt 2 post a rly anymore!!! :D
lv u..tk cr.

Originally posted by: debomaaneet
part-1,whn maan's mom sd,maine to tumhari diaper badlana 20yrs pahelehi chhor di thi...dis dialgue is 2oo funny.
then,maaneet 1st mtng n deir scooter ride act was hilarious.
after that,geet's laddu-crashing at maan's face!!!hahaha...
@chapter 9-dis chrime report directng act,n geet's laughter...oho,i jst cnt cntrl my laughter as well.
updt soon..

its okay yaar

u read and commented its more than enough

the best part of this ff will be comedy

much more to come

hope you like it too

will be updating soon

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chsweety22

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Posted: 14 years ago

#205

a very big thank u to all of u who liked the update

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chsweety22

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Posted: 14 years ago

#206

part9

part10

At shop

Woh dikhana

Shopkeeper showed that dress...after seeing it...woh red wala dikhana

This continued for 2 hours...meanwhile maan slept on the chair...

Maan chalo

Maan woke up startled...seeing geet empty handed and a pile of clothes in front of him he asked shopkeeper

Usne kuch nahi liya?

Shopkepper nodded his head to a no

Don't worry...every dog has its day...leaving them speechless...

Then they both went to another shopping mall...

Geet was busy looking at the clothes...

Tum sirf window shopping hi karti ho? Why don't u buy something?

Kuch pasand nahi aa raha

If u know what do u want to buy...then you will like something

I have my clarity on what and what not to buy

Accha..aisa lagta toh nahi hai...we just go see and buy...we don't take hours to select a single thing...

There is big secret behind ladies shopping...

Oh ho...!!!

That's a sort of psychology dear

Don't tell u have a reason to this time waste...

U don't know anything...the matter is...maan starts acting as if he is utterly bored...to which geet hits his head a bit hard...

He glares her...

Listen...

She starts walking ahead of him explaining things...

From the time the girls are born...

unka naam...unka school...unko kya padna chahiye...unki shaadi...kitne baccho ko peda karna hai..aur unke naam...aise important chezo mein ladies ko decision lene ka koi choice nahi hota...and the place where we get complete freedom is shopping...

Throughout this maan was staring at her with open mouth...

Geet turns back to see him

If we like then we buy otherwise we don't...

Am I clear? any doubts?

Maan bows his head and says no maam...

Geet smiled and replied..good

Suddenly she sees something nice...

Hey maan nice dress...hai na?

She takes that dress and goes to the changing room

Suddenly maan received a punch in his stomach and was pulled to changing room with a hand covering his mouth

thank you so very much for reading this part...

i hope you like it...

press like button if u are moving to the next part

please dont forget to comment at the end...😊

part11

Edited by millie_maaneet - 14 years ago

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sweet scorpio

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Posted: 14 years ago

#207

awesome!

poor maan😆

wonder who punced maan...

continue soon!

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namita25

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Posted: 14 years ago

#208

haila itna chottu update...😲
itne se hamara kya hoga...😆
and phir se cliffhanger ending..bahut naa insaafi haiii...😆
haii who hit my Maan...i am feeling tensed...🤣
next part jaldi update karooo..plz...
BTW I loved this part...

Edited by namita25 - 14 years ago