AR sesn 2 FF -kshitij ki aur- gulmohar pg 67 - Page 38

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Posted: 14 years ago
@sami..you do deserve it ..😊
waiting for full update as i know it will be really captivating..
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well fine di... I read it 5 times..each and evry word in my mind now i can deliver this part as a speach..... No more waiting. Plez update it soon di....
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well fine di... I read it 5 times..each and evry word are in my mind now i can deliver this part as a speach..... No more waiting. Plez update it soon di....
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aaj raat ko pucca have plot in my mind now
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Ragini felt secure and content ,as if cocooned in his warmth,her heart sang songs with birds and she sank back against him,hiding her face in his shoulder,he kissed top of her head softly and both of them stood listening to sounds of nature. They were so lost in themselves that they did not hear approaching footsteps or sudden halt and sharp intake of breath.

Vasundhra felt betrayed ..angry ...she couldn't bear the contentment this picture portrayed,it reminded her of peace of mind which she did not have...she cleared her throat and both looked back ,startled; Ragini was flustered ,she tried to move away from Anmol but he held her softly by holding her waist and looked at vasundhra , she looked disgusted and opened her mouth to speak but closed again ,instead she looked accusingly at Ragini.
Ragini struggled to move away from Anmol and mumbled mummyji wo bus chadhta suraj dekh rahe they......pointing to wards golden rays of hope who were playing hide and seek with dark corners and shadows...
anmol kept her close,forcing her to stop struggling while never leaving vasundhra's eyes..there was hint of challenge in his eyes and his lips had a soft hint of smile; he saw a struggling woman, a mother; a unhappy mother and .smiling photo of his mother and Nani flashed in front of his eyes; he blinked;his gaze softened; after all he loved this woman whole heartedly ;.and then pointed her to wards the golden rays again,sun was up even higher now and all the shadows had disappeared.she looked at the display and looked back at Anmol ,her gaze confused and questing,
Anmol left ragini's side and moved forward and grabbed stunned vasundhra's hands ,his eyes intent he caught her gaze and said Please Mrs Rajvansh lets look for wards to wards golden future...our future...and smiled indulgently at beaming Tammy who was running full speed into kitchen into his arms,pushing him back wards ;he held her close and closed his eyes...
Ragini and Vasundhra both looked at the picture the pair of them were making,sunlight was falling on their faces,one had closed his eyes to savour this momment making both these women feel very small indeed,as both had been the reason of seperation of these two souls.
The little angelic face was smilling like winter sun coming out of clouds to melt away the frozen mist on the windows of mind...Vasundhra was amazed at the sparkle in Tammy's eyes, her face was animated looking up at her loving Dad with such open love on her face,she felt as if she was invading on a very private moment,she looked away and blinked away those uninvited tears .
suddenly Animated voice of Tammy broke the momment and the chaos to get kids a breakfast started , a relaxed brunch was served, Ragini got so busy with it that she failed to notice anmol had gone to his study with a big file and cup of tea.
Anmol sat with his laptop and open file in front of his desk, his forgotten cup of tea laying on the side.He had two horizontal lines on his forehead and one finger was absently rubbing those lines as if trying to erase them. The deadline to Report to Mrs Rajvansh was looming over his head and he was dangerously late due to The celebrations in eastate ;had sidetracked him and he knew Vasu would pounce on him if there was even a single mistake.
Papa aap chodiye please...
arey beta get ready first, i have to finish this for badi mama...
no Papa you promised to play
beta I will,just get dressed , i am finishing up on this
suddenly Inder entered with a halwa plate in his hands...
arey bacho let your Papa work;warna your badi maa will eat him in lunch he chuckled..
yeh kya keh rahe hain aa bachon se... came a thundering voice,
vasu was not amused with Inder ..
arey sahi bola na maine ...you have it in your Contract ; quaterly reports that too fully audited so ...Vasu's eyes narrowed dangerously at the emphasis on word CONTRACT by Inder , she knew he had done it on purpose as he felt she was being unreasonable in her demands .
Anmol sensed the atmoshpere in the room changing, he bent over Tammy and pulled her ponytail lovingly and added
off you go princess; its time for dressup, he also lovingly sent Khushi away with a pat on head ,he then went on to close the door of study and faced two People ready to pounce on each other with full force.
He gestured to both to sit down and tried to divert their attention to a buisness matter needing attention but Inder was insistent
nahi Anmol she needs to answer us ; why such unreasonable request and wastage of resources and time on these reports, we could even go ahead with yearly reports,we are not like anmol's company,which requires quaterly earning reports due to its net worth.
Vasu did not like to be reminded of anmol's wealth,it made her feel unreasonable.
She looked up at Anmol and added You hid so much from us,how can I trust you ever with anything.
Vasu for god sake Inder was visibly trembling in anger , his face was flushed and he was breathing heavily.
Papji please calm down its ok ,I understand and I deserve everything she says.
No you dont yelled Inder turing to vasu how can you say he cant be trusted with anything...
Vasu was shocked at Inder,she took a tentative step back and held anmol's gaze for a long moment and added
But I trust you with Tammy
and left the room almost running..
Both inder and Anmol saw her leaving,anmol made inder sit and drink a glass of water,he even coaxed him to finish off his Halwa.anmol still did not like flushed face of Papaji, as he knew Papaj had recently started ot take Blood pressure medicine.
It was soon 5 pm, it was warm outside and childern were playing Football with Anmol
Papa yeh cheating hai shouted Tammy ..
kyun kyun all is fair in love and war.. chucked anmol
and cheated shamelssly to score one more goal..
tha laughter and tickling that followed this was something that stopped Ragini in midstep,still holding jug of water she looked at the merry party..
It has been so long since someone laughed like this in her angan ,she felt as if god had sent angels to sparkle laughter and joy after a long drought.
He hated being tickled,he was trying hard to break free,even angad had joied bacha party ...when suddenly he felt as if some one was watching him,hair on his nape stood and he turned his head and saw her standing about 10 feet away,wipping tears and smiling at same time.
their eyes met and for eternity both were still ,anmol failed to notice ticking had stopped and he was free once again;
aap log romance ko chodiye aur Ragini pani do ..alekh said while clearing his throat;an dlaughing at the same time
Ragini moved forward almost spiling water in haste ,while anmol got up lazily and came slowly towards her,she was surrounded by kids and he stood lazily his back to a tree trunk and a slight smile on his lips.
Soon kids were inside watching their favourite show while alekh went to finish some files,sakshi went to put her baby to sleep, Ragini and Anmol found themselves alone in Twilight hours where after sunset light was trying to battle the night ...
She sat on the bench while anmol strolled in lawn ,he came to her and sat down beside her and smiled
in background a song was playing...
I have been lonely for so long
trapped in the past I just can't seem to move on
I have been hiding my hopes and dreams away
just in case i need 'em again some day
I haven been setting aside some time
to clear a little space into corners of my mind
All i want is to find a way back into love..
I can"t make it through without a way back into love
Anmol looked into her deep eyes seeing the uncertainly and hope both fighting each other,while his eyes burned with same intensity as ever,demanding her soul , a complete surrender
he seem to be saying...
there are moments i feel if it is real
or if anybody feels way i feel
i need inspiration
not another negociation
all i want is to find a way back into love..
But when his lips opened they said exact opposite of his eyes...
Ragini ander chalein ..
while his eyes begged her to stay
wo kaafi late ho gaya na..
and his eyes looked at beautiful sky turning dark blue with promise of sparkling stars and a breeze laced with fragnance of Raat ki raani.
Suddenly Gudi bust out running
anmol bhayiya ander chaliye Papji ..
Ragini and Anmol got a huge jolt and both Ran inside...
Edited by sami01 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome part sami loved the angini moments and ioved vasu tellin anmol that she trusted him with tammy cont soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow sami, excellent part. well worth the wait.please continue soon. thanks
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Posted: 14 years ago
Fantastic and beautiful update Sami.👏👏

Loved father daughter bonding.😃👏

Anmol does n't want to go inside 😳but his lips said 'let us go'😊.Wish he opens up his heart to Ragini without hesitation.😃😉

What's the suspense about Papaji?😕

Waiting for your next update Sami.😃👍🏼⭐️
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Posted: 14 years ago
vasu trus anmol in tammy's matter... Thats a good sign... And loving angini moments.. Thank you for such a lovely part di. And you have written it well. No wonder it's you na.. I like the whol part di. Wiling to read the next part dii..
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Posted: 14 years ago
@sami..very very gripping part and scenes..👏
first scene itself is enough to capture the interest..wat a beautiful mesmerising scene..in the end part of the last chapter anmol was just close to ragini not touching her but in this one "Ragini felt secure and content ,as if cocooned in his warmth,her heart sang songs with birds and she sank back against him,hiding her face in his shoulder,he kissed top of her head softly and both of them stood listening to sounds of nature."just picture perfect...ragini how much will fight her feeling but at the end she herself cant control her heart's desire while anmol close to her..
vasu -anmol scene..the romantic atmosphere changed completely.ragini as usual wanted an escape route and excuse seeing vasu but anmol is there to not let this happen..very daring he looked at vasu and keeping ragini close to him..deep in his heart he still love the one he considers his mother now vasu..a plead to her to let go of all that happenned in the past and look for the biright future..at the same time his angel running at full speed to hug him..
his daughter his life and ragini-vasu felt the guilt while watching this genuine love of both father-daughter..they both were thecause of their seperation..
you have described such a picture perfect scene of this father-daughter bond.👏
anmol-vasu-inder scene..anmol has his hands full of work ..report to vasu as she dont trust him and inder very angry..anmol trying to calm the situation but things getting more worse with inder more hyper about the treatment of vasu to anmol..at the end vasu decides to leave but not before telling anmol she trust her with tammy..at least vasu accepted that tammy needs her father anmol..
last scene...happy moment of anmol with the kids and alekh..a precious moment which ragini has been missing and the mixed emotions was understandable..whenever ragini around anmol just sense her presence and he just looked at her and both lost in each others eyes and lost in their own world ..
a beautiful song so apt for the situation ..anmol heart's desire so much he wants ragini to stay and talk to him but says all the opposite...when the silence will break and both will confess their love..as anmol wish ragini to surrender her soul to him..
when will ragini stop fighting with her feelings for him?..
do continue soon as its time ragini realised anmol's importance and his place in her life..
inder taking BP tablets seems something has happenned to him..anmol back in the house has to take care of business.. his family..now inder ..
hope he is able to manage all this...
fantastic part and very interesting scenes which we can visualise while reading..keep it up ..👏👏👏
Edited by savee_k - 14 years ago

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