MN-AT * It's all Destiny - Ch 19, Pg 59 THE END - Page 3

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Posted: 14 years ago
#21
thanks for the pm!!
and this was wonderful start!! keep on continuing!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome first part..
do continue soon
thanks 4 the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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dear bidzz awesum start....looking forward to the stsory...relly loved anu-nupur bonding.....
n taani's entry n her brave nature....loved mayank's entry too
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Amazingggg....biduuuuu love love loved it! <3 <3
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Thanks everyone for liking chapter 1.. 😊 Haha yeah, mayank is unlike other thieves 😳 Sharmeeli, obviously their lives are going to change in Mumbai, but how.. You'll start to get hints from the next updates.. 😉 Thought to post Chapter 2 today but I'm so tired that I can't update today.. Pakka, kal update kardungi.. 😃
Love... Bidz ❤️
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waiting for updates😊...!!!
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Chapter 2
"Dreams are going to be true"
~Scene outside the bar~
Taani came out of the bar and saw Mayank standing there waiting for her. She went to him.
"Itni der kyun lagayi?" Mayank inquired.
Taani looked nervous.
She replied nervously, "Woh actually change karne mein der ho gayi. Chal aab ghar chalte hai."
Mayank sensed something fishy. He felt that Taani was trying to hide something from him.
"Tu itna ghabrayi hui kyun dikh rahi hai? Koi pareshaani hai kya?" Mayank told concernedly.
Taani looked to the other side and said nervously, "Pareshaani? Nahi bhai sab theek hai."
Mayank seemed angry and he said, "Ek minute! Kahi kisine phir se tere saath kuch battamizi toh nahi ki naa? Kaun hai woh kameena bol! Uske chehre ka naksha hi badal dunga."
Taani smiled cutely and said, "Oh mere gusse wala bhai, aab iss gusse ko thoda side mein rakh aur bhagwan ke vaste ghar chal. [acts innocent and touches her belly] Mereko bohot bhukh lag rahi hai. Pet mein chuhe haati sab daur rahe hai."
Mayank laughed seeing Taani's innocence. He said smilingly, "Chal chal aab nautanki bandh kar. Chal phir ghar chalte hai."
Tani smilingly said, "Chal!" Then both sat down on Mayank's bike and set off for home.
~Scene Shifts to Anu-Nupur house~
It was dark. Anurag and Nupur were in deep sleep (Anurag on the floor and Nupur on bed). Suddenly, Nupur began to shiver and sweat. She seemed to be very scared in her sleep, as if she was having a nightmare. She kept moving her head slightly, sweating, shivering and blabbering something. Her nightmare was -
*The scene is blurry and in black/white*
A 3-year-old cute girl is walking in the middle of the road. She was so lost in playing with her doll that she didn't realized a truck was coming near her.
*Scene faded*
The girl was standing in the middle of the road and crying with lots of people surrounded by her and near her was her father, lifeless and fully covered with blood.
*Dream Ended*
Nupur suddenly shouted "BAUJI", jumped up and sat. She took some heavy breath and she was very scared. Anurag gets up seeing Nupur like this. He sits beside Nupur.
"Kya hua?" Anurag asked concernedly.
Nupur was hell scared. She kept blabbering, "Bauji mar gaye, maa mar gaye. Sab meri vajar se. Maine unn dono ko mara hai. Main khooni hoon. I have killed them."
Anurag understood what the matter was. He hugged Nupur lovingly and said, "Woh sirf ek hadsaa tha Nupur. Teri vajar se kuch nahi hua. That was just an accident. Tu shaant ho jaa. Kuch nahi hai, sab theek hai. Just relax."
Nupur felt peace in her brother's arms. She just closed her eyes but she was still shivering. Anurag took her into his lap and made her sleep by running his hand through her hairs. Nupur slept after sometimes. Anurag made her sleep properly by keeping her head on the pillow. After that, he too slept.
~Scene shifts to Mayank-Taani's house~
Mayank and Taani had their dinner. Now they sat on the floor to have some talk. But Mayank was all silent. He was in deep thoughts and looked worried. Taani notices this.
"Tu pareshaan kyun dikh raha hai bhai?" Taani asked Mayank concernedly.
Mayank looked into Taani's eyes in a way as if he was going to request her something. He said pleadingly, "Bar mein naachna chod de, Taani."
Taani waved her head, smiled a bit and said, "Tu phir se yeh sab soch raha hai? Main bola tha na ke iss ke baare mein baat nahi karne ko. Phir bhi?"
Mayank looked concerned for his sister. He said, "Dekh main yeh bardasht nahi kar sakta ke mere behen ke saath koi battamizi kare. Aur abhi tak aisa tere saath kahi bar ho chuka hai. Tu har bar kuch karke mujhe rok leti hai par aisa kab tak chalega bol?"
Taani took her brother's hands into her hands and said, "Tu janta hai ke humare upar laakho ka karzaa hai. Jab tak woh pura nahi ho jaaye, main naachna nahi chod sakti."
Mayank said, "Main hoon na yeh sab dekh ne ke liye. Tereko tension lene ki zarurat nahi hai re."
Taani replied Mayank, "Bhai tu akele yeh sab kaise samhalega? Jaise tujhe meri fikar hai, mereko bhi teri fikar hai. Iss liye jaisa chal raha hai waisa hi chalne de. Waise, tu aaj maal uthaane gaya tha naa? Kitna maal haath lagaa?"
Mayank waved his head and said, "Baat ghumana toh koi tere se sikhe. Pagal!"
Taani gave a proud smile and said, "Uss mein toh main ek dum mahir hoon samjha? Aab bol! Kitna maal haath lagaa hai?"
Mayank gave a broad smile and said, "19 laac!"
Taani's jaw dropped, her eyes became wide open, her brows raised and she was super shocked.
"19 LAAC?!" Taani shouted in joy and hugged Mayank. Mayank hugged her back. After few minutes when they broke the hug..
"HEY BHAGWAANNN!!!! LIFE BAN GAYI HUMARI TOH!!!" Taani kept telling all these in a high tone.
Mayank laughed seeing the excited Taani and he said cutely, "Arey chup kar pagli! Koi sun lega toh musibat ho jayegi."
Taani stopped her mouth now but still she was all excited.
Mayank told her smilingly, "Aab inn paiso se saara karzaa chukta kar dunga. Phir hum aramse rahenge. Aur haan, karzaa sab chukta ho gaye toh phir tereko bhi bar mein nachna chodna hoga."
Taani smilingly bowed her head in front of her brother Mayank and said, "Jo hukum mere bhai!"
Mayank smiled. Taani smiled, too.
~Scene Shifts to Anu-Nupur house~
Its morning. Anurag and Nupur were sleeping. Just then Anu got a call.
He yawned and said, "Itne subha kaun phone kar raha hai?"
Saying that he picked up the call and said "Hello!" in his sleep.
After few seconds...
Anurag jumped up and told in a high tone smilingly, "KYA?"
After a few seconds...
Anurag smilingly told, "Theek hai. Hum 2 ghante mein pohoch jayenge. Chal bye!"
Call disconnected. Nupur was watching all these - how Anurag was excited and all.
She yawned and said smilingly, "Kya baat hai dada! Itni subha subha chehre pe 50-watt ki smile. Baat kya hai?"
Anurag turned to Nupur, sat beside her and said with a huge smile on his face, "Boss ne meri mumbai transfer application accept karli!"
"WOW GREAT! CONGRATS!" Nupur shouted in joy and hugged Anurag.
After they broke their hug, Anurag informed her..
"Jaldi ut jaa. Humhe bags pack karne hai. Subha 10 baaje ki train hai." Anurag told her in an exciting state.
Nupur was shocked and told, "10 baje ki train? Matlab 2 ghante baad? Kya baat kar rahe ho dada?"
Anurag gave a broad smile, touched Nupur's cheeks and said, "Haan behena. 2 ghante baad. Aab baatein bandh kar aur jaldi utja."
"Par tumne itni jaldi tickets kaise kiya?" Nupur asked confusingly.
Anurag told her smilingly, "Woh actually main kal hi Taposh [Anurag's friend] se kehe diya tha ke agar boss ne manzuri dedi toh ussi waqt ticket karle. Abhi usika phone tha aur usne kaha ke 10 baje ki train hai. Chal aab jaldi chal."
Nupur smiled. She was feeling excited too. She smilingly told, "Haan chalo."
~Scene shifts to Mayank-Taani's house~
Mayank was sleeping peacefully and deeply. Suddenly he started moving his face, eyes and raising his brows as if he was dreaming something. His dream was -
*Blurry scene*
A girl in white salwar suit was roaming around in a gigantic garden full of colorful flowers.
Mayank was following her. Her hairs were in front of her face that's why he couldn't see her face.
He just kept following her.
*Dream ended*
Mayank opened his eyes in shock and sat. He said to himself confusingly, "Mereko aur ek ladki ka sapna? Yeh kya chakkar hai? Aisa sapne toh pehele kabhi nahi aaya, phir aaj?" Mayank was left confused.
~Scene shifts in the railway station inside the train~
Anurag was keeping their luggages above their seats. Nupur was sitting beside the window and guess what? She is wearing a white salwar suit. Nupur was looking outside through the window and smiling. She was in deep thoughts and that were, "Finally humare sapna sach hone ko hai. Finally hum log mumbai jaa rahe hai. Par Kaali maa, mujhe aisa kyu lag raha hai ke mumbai mein kuch aur hone wala hai, woh nahi jo hum expect kar rahe hai. Par aisa kya hoga? Kal se yehi baate mein dimaag mein aa rahe hai. Uff..shayad main kuch jyada hi nervous hoon. Onu Da theek kehete hai. Main kuch jyada hi soch rahi hoon. Anyways, yeh sab baate baad mein. Important baath yeh hai ke hum finally mumbai jaa rahe hai. So mumbai, here we come."
Precap:
First meeting of Anurag-Taani and Mayank-Nupur in Mumbai during the rainfall... <3333333
*THE END*
Friends,
Waiting for your comments/criticise desperately. Oh yeah there can be some mistakes in this update as i typed too fast. Actually i typed it very nicely in the morning but suddenly what happened and all got vanished. So galti ho jaaye toh maaf kardena okay. Thanks! :)
Take care..
Love...Bidz! 😳
Message to Supriya: Couldn't pm you because it says you have exceeded the number of unread pms. Sorry for that!
Edited by Bidz_cutegal - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#28
Fantastic update dear
loved the bonding b/w anu-nupur and mayank-tani...
feel sad for nups-but anu is sweet bro- he took care of nups ...:)
wow anu- nups r coming to mumbai...great...

waiting for fist meeting of Mayur and anu-tani
beautiful update- very nice
keep it up


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Posted: 14 years ago
#29

bidz...im loving the way ur showing teh sibling relationship...onu is such a loving bro!!! i loved him very much specially when he made nupur sleep!!! taani-mayank bondinag was also gr8..

n mayank's dream was coool...waiting for that muyur track n taanu track
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow, it's awesome!! Plz could you add me to ur PM list!! Thnx!!!

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