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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: maankigeet4ever

yes indeed love....right after the comments...i finally managed to finish it...


Great.....u r a darling

I'm gonna be off for lunch in a while....will be back by 2 i guess....

And yeah hope u r fine now...got rid of ur cold n flu....
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sharmake11

yash & pari cute &

sweet with professional
cant to see them more
wow maan feeling geet
hiding something from him
the stalker so obesessed
toward geet the precap
sounds good
cant wait to read
maaneet moment super
love it core
fantastic update
pls cont soonnnnnnnnnnnnn
thanks pm
thank yu so much

thanks hun...glad u enjoyed it...let's see what geet does....

Originally posted by: Dansindiadans

Art was nice but i hate the stalker

thanks


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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: esha143


Great.....u r a darling

I'm gonna be off for lunch in a while....will be back by 2 i guess....

And yeah hope u r fine now...got rid of ur cold n flu....

awwww....ok...me waiting for u to be back..enjoy ur lunch...
and yes..i am much better....i had to finish it today because i may not be able to write for the next few day as my cousin from Germany is visiting....
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: preethia

loved the update.................

loved all the maaneet moments..................
very happy that v r going to get a strictly maaneet update.............thanks for fulfilling our wishes......
who the hell is this stalker😡 disturbing the beautiful relationship of our maaneet..............
glad that maan has started to doubt and i hope he finds wats bothering geet sooner b4 its too late......

thanks hun....hope u like the next chapter too....let's see what happens next...

Originally posted by: YusLiz

I'm getting so excited about the pre-engagement trip but am super intrigue on the identity of Geet's stalker!

wow wow wow can't wait for the next one, pls don't take too long for the next update.

thanks hun....it;s the post-engagement hm...more on the stalker once they get backk....

Originally posted by: nahtani88

mind blowing update
cont soon

thanks

Originally posted by: -dia-

wonderful FF,loved it

add me in ur PM list

thanks hun...yes..u have been added...

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: maankigeet4ever

awwww....ok...me waiting for u to be back..enjoy ur lunch...

and yes..i am much better....i had to finish it today because i may not be able to write for the next few day as my cousin from Germany is visiting....


Hmm...thats good u r alright n having guests....but why does it sound to me like u r telling me to be a good girl n be silent...not making any fuss about updates for a few days...ha?😆😆...well if thats the case I certainly will not be silent and pester u with my demands😈..u know u still owe me an update on BL....😈😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Okay the much awaited Maaneet chapter is here...thank esha because it's because of her i posted it early...i was planning to write the update for Blind Love first...but i wrote this instead...

And i would like to thank everyone for their love and support...this FF has hit 100 pages....Thank you all once again 🤗

Hope you all like this chapter...but do ignore any mistakes

Ch. 18

Geet woke up the next day with a smile ready to enjoy the next few days with the man she loved. The good thing was that no one other than Dadi ma and Vicky knew where they were going. That meant the stranger didn't know where they were going either. She shook her head to shake off her negative thoughts. She was just going to focus on herself and Maan for the next few days. She freshened up before she started to pack her bag. Just then Anna walked in.

"Good Morning Geet, getting ready to go.", she said as Anna gave her a hug before starting to help her.

"Good morning Anna, don't tell me you knew too", she accused in mock anger.

"Guilty as charged", Anna said and laughed and Geet soon joined in.

"I am going to miss you Geet. My sister is going away, even if it is for a few days.", Anna said with a sad smile. Geet felt touched that Anna treated her like a sister just like she considered her a sister. They had gotten really close over the time they spent with each other.

"I am sorry Anna. I feel guilty for leaving with the wedding so close.", she said.

"Don't worry, Dadi ma and I will take care of everything. Come on let's go, Maan bhai will be waiting.", Anna said as she helped with the suitcases.

"Good morning girls", Maan said from the bottom of the stairs before he went up to grab the luggage with Vicky right behind him.

They both gave their own lady a hug before they headed off to the main house to say goodbye to Dadi Ma.

Nakool loaded the car while they stood by the car giving their final goodbye.

"You kids have fun, don't worry about the wedding prep." Dadi said sweetly before she gave both Maan and Geet a tight hug.

They were more hugs and wishes before Maan and Geet were finally off.

"Maan, can I know where we are going now? Pretty please", she asked as she batted her eyes at him.

Maan chucked and pulled her closer, "I am sorry but you are going to have to wait. But I am pretty sure you are going to like it, he said.

Soon the driver pulled up at the airport where the private chartered plane was waiting. Geet stared at the huge piece of machinery as she got out of the car. "Maan, are we going in that?", she asked in a fearful voice as she continued to stare.

Maan nodded and he held out his hand for her to take, Geet slowly placed her hand in his, "But I have never traveled in a plane before.", she said as Maan guided her towards their plane.

"Well, there is a first time for everything in life. And plus you can hold me if you feel scared.", he said as he laughed and they climbed the stairs. Geet shot him an angry glare. "I am just joking. Trust me, you will be fine.", he said in a serious tone.

They entered and Geet stared the place. It looked more like a room with comfortable sofa like seats, fridge, and other luxuries Geet didn't know one could have in a plane.

Geet sat in the seat nervous as hell about her first flight. She put her seat belt on and prayed to Babaji to keep them safe. Maan came in and sat next to her as he held her hand; he run his thumb to her fingers to sooth her. "Don't worry, there is nothing to be afraid of. The take-off will take a few minutes and then you can take your seat-belt off.", he explained

That caused Geet to grip her seat-belt tighter and shake her head, "No....Noo..it's ok, I think I will keep it on for the entire trip.", she said nervously. Maan fought to repress a chuckle. He could tell she was scared and nervous but she looked so cute.

"We will be fine, trust me. I am going to tell pilot to take off.", he said as he squeezed her hand before giving the pilot a go. Geet simply nodded before she gripped the hand rest with the one hand and the seat belt with the other.

"Babaji, please keep us safe.", she chanted repeated as Maan watched her as he belted himself in. He un-gripped her hand from the seat belt and held in his. She gripped his hand tighter holding on to dear life and squeezed her eyes close when she felt the plane starting to move.

Her heartbeat picked up and her stomach did a flip-flop when she felt the plane tilt that meant the plane was taking off. "Babaji, Babaji, keep us safe.", she prayed to the one above. Maan kept rubbing and squeezing her hand to console her. She soon felt the queasiness in stomach leaving and she was tempted to open her eyes and look outside. She felt Maan lean in closer, "it's ok Misiti, you can open your eyes if you want", he whispered softly in her ear.

She took a deep breath and slowly opened her eyes. She first looked at Maan who gave her a smile and then slowly turned to look outside the window. She gasped as she took in the image; she had never seen anything like it; ever. "Maan, look, wow, everything looks so small.", she said excitedly like a child as she pressed her nose against the glass. Maan grinned and leaned closer to look out the window.

"You like it?", he asked. She nodded with the grin before she looked out the window again in awe.

Geet soon relaxed with her fear of flying gone. She unbelted her herself and walked around to explore and Maan was happy to see her fear go away. The rest of trip passed quickly as they enjoyed each other's company fully. The pilot soon signaled them to belt in for the landing. This time Geet was excited as she held his hand and grinned. She stared out the window in awe once again as this time she watched the world become larger. And the plane soon stopped.

"Wow, that was so much fun Maan.", she said and he grinned in response as he held her hand to guide her outside.

They stepped outside into bright sunlight and hot weather. Geet realized she had so nervous about the flight that their secret destination had just slipped her mind.

"Welcome to Goa.", Maan said.

"Really, I always wanted to come here. I heard that Goa has the best beaches.", she said in full excitement as they walked to the car that waited for them.

"That's true. I have been here on business but this is the first time I am here on vacation; to just enjoy with the love of my life. The reason I chose Goa is because we only have a few days. But for our real honeymoon, I will take you aboard.", he said and she nodded and smiled.

Maan took the keys from the driver who was waiting for them. He signalled the driver to load the luggage before he held the front passenger door open for her and she stepped in. He then walked to the other side and stepped in.

After they had been driving for a while out of the city, Geet wondered where they were going. "Where are we going Maan?", she asked.

"Be patient. We will get there soon", he said in return.

Maan suddenly stopped the car on the side of the road. He then picked up a cloth and folded it as he asked her to turn around. "Maan what are you doing?", she asked in total confusion.

"Be patient Geet", was all he said as he tied the blindfold on her eyes before he continued to drive. Geet decided to be patient as he clearly had a surprise for her.

After a few minutes, he stopped the car and walked around to help her. She heard the sound of crashing waves and thought he brought her to a beach.

"Surprise, welcome home Misiti", he whispered he undid her blindfold.

Geet stared and stared. In front of her a beautiful villa by itself right beside a breathtaking beach. They was no other home in sight and no one seen on the beach. This meant they were going to be alone..by themselves..

"This is home ?", she asked in shock.

Maan nodded as he held her hand to guide her inside. "I brought this years ago when I came on a business trip. I fell in love with it at first sight. I decided I would bring the love of my life here if I ever found her and then you came in my life.", he said as they stood inside.

Geet was touched by his love for her, she tiptoed to give him a kiss on his cheek.

"Come on, let me show our house.", he said with a smile. He showed her around starting with the family room, living room that had pictures of them and the family already there and kitchen already set up with everything. Geet realized he had decorated it simple keeping her taste in mind. He then led her up the stairs and showed her the other rooms and their library before stopping at the last closed door. He opened and brought her inside.

"This is our bedroom; my favourite room", he said as he hugged her from the back and laid his head on her shoulder. Their bedroom had the view of the beach with a huge glass doors with led to a balcony. Their wardrobes already filled with clothes and the dressing table set up her favourite scents and makeup items.

"Maan this is beautiful, thank you. I love it all.", she said as she turned around to hug him.

"But you are okay with us staying here, you know alone?", he asked and Geet nodded with a huge smile.

"But we are going to use this room once we get married. We will stay in the other rooms for now.", she said as she laid her head back on his shoulder.

"Hmm, I knew you would want that, so that's why the other rooms are already set up. Just pick the one you want. Let me grab the luggage while you look around", he said as he dropped a kiss on her forehead before going out.

After he brought the luggage in, she held his hand as she dragged him outside to the beach. She slipped off her shoes as he did the same. Geet laughed as she felt the warm and soft sand in her feet. She left his hand and ran to the edge of the water. A giggle escaped her as she felt the cold water touch her feet. Maan watched from the close distance with the smile as he saw her enjoying fully; finally relaxed after days. She gestured him to come as she played with the water. He rolled up his denim jeans and walked to join her in the water. She grinned as she bent to splash water on him. He looked at her in shock before he returned the favour and splashed her back. She yelped as the cold water hit her and ran off. He laughed and chased her. He soon caught her from her waist and spun her around. They crashed on the sand laughing.

"Come on Geet, let's get cleaned up. I don't want you to get sick," he said as he rose and took her hand.

"That was awesome. I love it here already.", she said happily as they entered the house.

They both went off to their separate rooms to get cleaned up. After a while, Geet stepped out of her room and glanced inside his room to find it empty. She walked downstairs to see him in the kitchen with a apron and a chef's hat on with the news in the background on the TV. He turned around as he heard her walk in.

"Oh good you are here. Make yourself comfortable madam. Today, I am cooking.", he said as he began to chop onions.

"But Maan I don't want to eat Italian food, it's so tasteless", she wined

Maan chuckled "But we are having Indian food", he said with a grin.

Geet shot off the kitchen stool in a dash and looked into the pots and sniffed. She closed her eyes in pleasure as the aroma filled her senses. "Hmmm, it looks great and smells even better.", she complimented "But Maan when did you learn to cook Indian food ?", she asked

Maan looked up from his stirring as he answered, "When you were banned from the kitchen while you were recovering.

Dinner was soon cooked as they spent the time talking. Maan plated the food out and laid it on the tray.

"Let's go Geet, we will go eat by the beach and watch the sunset.", he said as he grabbed the food while Geet got the basket with the blanket, candles and dishes.

They settled down on the blanket and set up dinner. Maan placed the candles in the candleholders and didn't light them, as it wasn't dark enough yet. He fed her the first bite of the chicken curry he cooked.

"Yummmm, this is so good Maan",she said as she closed her eyes to savor the taste.

They fed each other, laughed and talked; as they enjoyed each other. Maan lit the candles as the light started to fade. They cleared the dished to the side and sat in each other's arms as they watched the fading colors of the sky as the sun set. Geet sat with her back against his chest and closed her eyes in content. She enjoyed the feel of his fingers in her hair. She turned and buried her head in his chest and hugged him closer as he kissed her head. He continued to run his fingers to her hair and she soon dozed off.

I gazed her beautiful face as she slept in peace with a smile on her face. I was happy to see her sleeping in peace without the worries, which have been disturbing her. I was planning on finding out what was going on. But I wished that she would tell me on her own. She must have a reason or else she would never hide anything from him as she valued the honesty in our relationship. I leaned to kiss her forehead once again and that caused her snuggle in closer. I was tempted to close my eyes and sleep right there but I didn't want her to get cold. So I scooped her in my arms, she once again snuggled closer as I took her to her room. I gently laid her on the bed, gave her good night kiss on the cheek and put the blanket on her. "Good night Misiti", I said as I turned on her lamp and turned off the lights.

She woke up the next day with a smile as she recalled yesterday's events. She hoped today would just as good as yesterday. She was about to get up to open the curtain just then the person she loved the most walked in with her breakfast. "Good morning Misiti", he greeted as he dropped a kiss on her forehead and placed the tray on the bed.

"It's just not a good morning, it's a great morning", she said in return with a smile. He walked over the window to open the curtain as sunlight seeped in.

"Be right back", she said as she dashed for the washroom.

She came out and they both had breakfast sitting on the bed.

"Geet, why do you get ready and I will take you sightseeing and shopping?", he said as he gathered the dished on the tray. She held his hand as she came closer.

"Thank you but I think you are spoiling me with all this pampering.",she said with a grin. He held her waist and he leaned in to rub their noses together.

"Well, guess what, I like spoiling you.", he said in return and earned a wide smile from her. "Get ready, I will be waiting downstairs", he said as he walked out.

True to his word, he was waiting downstairs in her favourite casual outfit: blue denim jeans and a white shirt. Hand in hand, they walked out to the car. He opened her door and she was about to step in when she saw a wrapped box on her seat. "What's this?", she asked as she picked it up.

"Open it", he said as he walked around to get in. She was busy opening her gift as he patiently waited for her.

"Woww, you got me a camera", she said excitedly she held it up to admire it.

"You need pictures from your trip so I thought why not.", he said as he started to reverse the car.

She pointed the camera towards and clicked a picture of him. "Hey, it works", she said as she went back to look at the picture. He smiled at her happy to know she liked her gift.

"You know I can never figure out how you manage to do everything without me finding out. Like how you managed to get clothes made for me, or how you bought this camera or pretty much how you plan every surprise.", she commented while they drove

"I am Maan Singh Khurana, I can do anything", he said in typical Maan Singh Khurana style.

He first brought her to Fort Aguada Beach Resort where once the original Fort Aguada stood. He explained that it was well-preserved seventeenth-century Portuguese Fort , which is part of the Goa History. They spent time on the resort while Geet took pictures and they wandered around.

He took her to other churches and temples, as Goa was famous for them. And of course there was lots of shopping that had to get done. Geet made sure she brought gifts for all the family members.

They loaded the car with the numerous bags in the evening. Maan was about to drive to a restaurant for dinner when Geet asked if they could go to the beach to watch the sunset.

So instead Maan pulled up to the nearest beach and they walked hand in hand to find a rock. They sat and watched the fading sun only having eyes for each other even on a busy beach.

"You know, I like our beach better. These beaches are too crowded with tourists.", she said as they walked back to the car.

"It's one of the main reasons I brought the place. It's isolated and away from the tourist crowd." He said.

They had dinner before they headed back home. Once changed into their night attire, they both decided to watch a movie before going to bed. Geet went through the collection Maan had; it turned out it was all her favorites with movies like DDLJ and Kuch Kuch Hota Hai. They watched KKHH sitting each arms and sharing a bowl of ice cream. Soon as after the happily ever after, they walked upstairs. Maan leaned in to give her a light good night kiss this time on the lips before they went off to their own rooms.

Geet woke up the next day as she stretched her arms. She saw that there was a piece of paper left on her side table.

Dear Misiti

You are probably wondering where your breakfast is this morning or where I am. I am sorry but I had to go for an urgent business meeting. I know I promised I would spend all the time with you but the meeting couldn't be put off. I will back for lunch and don't cook anything, we will go out.

Ok, Love you

Yours only,

Maan

I finished reading the note and folded it before placing it on the table. It felt weird waking up and not seeing him right away. I walked over to the window and pushed the curtains before the window. On impulse, I walked to our bedroom and opened the glass doors to walk in to the balcony. I leaned against the railing as the breeze played with my open hair. Oddly, I wasn't scared of being alone in this place. I knew no one could harm us here. I wanted to stay here forever away from the world, away the problems and away from that creepy stranger. I shook my head to brush those thoughts aside. I would deal with it once we went back; for now she had other things in mind.

I pulled up back at the house at 2 in the afternoon. I was dreading Geet's anger for leaving her for work especially when we were suppose to be on vacation. But what she didn't know was how important the work had been. I walked in and called out to her "Geet , Geet" but no response. I went upstairs and called out to her but again no response. I walked downstairs and saw a note sitting on the table and picked it up to read

So I guess you are home. If you don't see me in the house, that's because I am outside at the beach. See you in 2 minutes

Misiti

I rushed outside to see her waiting for me in a sleeveless blue sundress. I had never seen her in a dress but she looked just as beautiful. Her eyes lit up and a smile formed on her lips as she saw me approaching. She had a table for two set up at the beach. She ran to hug me and I lifted her off her feet.

"You look beautiful Misiti." I complimented as I held in my arms to take in her beauty. "When did you buy this dress?",I asked.

"I brought it when we went shopping but you had stepped out for a call.", she explained. "I missed you Maan", she said as she kissed my cheek and hugged me.

"I missed you too Geet but this meeting was very important.", I said as I held her to hand to walk to the table. "You made lunch, I told you we would go out."

"I know, but I decided to surprise you with your favourite.", she said as she unveiled the food which was of course Italian: pasta and lasagna.

Geet had managed to perfect her Italian cooking with training from Dadi and Nakool. After Geet gathered up the dishes to take inside just as Maan's phone rang. He picked it up and listened. "Okay, I will be there.", he said as he hang up.

"What's wrong Maan?", she asked.

"Sorry Geet, I have to go back. The client wants to see me again.", he said as they went inside with the dishes.

"But Maan---", she started before Maan cut off as he held off her shoulders.

"I know, I know, this is suppose to be our little vacation. I am so sorry love", he said.

"It's okay", she said as they walked to the door.

"But you are not scared by yourself, do you want to come with me?", he asked.

"No, I am not scared here, you go and be back soon", she said as she hugged him.

"Okay, I love you Misiti",he said as he held her by the waist.

"I love you too.", she said and he kissed her forehead.

With Maan gone, I was bored. I tried to watch a movie but everything seemed boring. I walked out to the beach and sat in the sand as the soft breeze blew around me. But even at the beach, I wasn't content. I realized Maan made everything enjoyable. With nothing else to do, I decided to take a nap for a few hours. With that thought in mind, I went to my bedroom.

I woke up much later than I had thought because it was 9:00 pm when I checked the clock. I got up to see where Maan was, I called out to him but heard no response. I was about to call him when I saw a package on the table. I picked up the note attached to it.

So my princess is awake. There is a saree inside this package, which I request you to wear. A car will pick you up in an hour. I hope an hour is enough time to get ready. I will see you soon.

Love you,

Maan

I picked up the saree; it was a beautiful yet somewhat revealing black net saree with minimal red work. Was he really excepting me to wear this?, I asked myself. Maybe we are going to be alone. Just then I found a shawl in the package. The man knew me too well. I picked up the stuff and went up to ready. Believe it or not, a hour wasn't enough so I had to hurry.

With just 5 minutes to 10:00, I placed the final touches on myself. I walked downstairs and adjusted the shawl around myself as the doorbell rang. There was a driver waiting the doorstep. I walked outside and locked the door. The driver held the door open for me. I got in the car but I had no clue where we were going. I tried to ask the driver but he replied by saying that he had specific instructions not to reveal anything. So instead I sat in silence for the entire ride.

I rubbed my hands in anticipation as I waited for her to come. I hoped she would like her surprise. I glanced at the watch, it was almost 11:00 pm; she would be here any minute now. A few minutes later, the car pulled up and the driver opened her door to let her out. She looked graceful in the saree with the shawl wrapped tightly around her.

She walked towards to me and took my hand as I held it out for her. She looked around in awe and asked, "Wow Maan, what's all this?"

"A romantic dinner for two on a yacht, thats all", I said as I helped her onboard and signaled the captain to get going.

He led to the table he set up for them . He held out a chair for her and walked off to get dinner.

" I feel like a princess Maan", she said as he served.

"You are my princess", he said as he sat down. "You can take the shawl off if you want, the captain is downstairs in the cabin. He won't be able to see you.", I told her.

She slipped off her shawl and placed it over her chair. I stared her beauty in awe. "You look beautiful just like a princess", I said as I continued to stare at her. She blushed a deep red as she looked down.

They soon finished dinner and Maan cleared the dishes. They then walked over to stand by the railing to watch Goa at night. Geet sighed as she leaned against his back and he wrapped his arms around his waist. "Thank you", she whispered softly and he leaned in to kiss her ear to accept it.

I glanced at my watch and decided it was time. I took my arms off her and she turned around to look at me.

"One second Geet, can you close your eyes for a minute?", I asked.

She looked at me with confusion, "Close my eyes?",she asked.

"Yes please", I said politely and she obliged.

I waited with closed eyes as I heard him move around. He had given me so many surprises over the three days; I wondered what he had up his sleeve this time. "Ok Geet, I am ready", I heard him tell me as he told my hand to lead me forward. "Open your eyes", he said. I opened my eyes and gasped as I stared at the cake on the table

"Happy Birthday My Princess", he whispered in my ear before he kissed my neck.

I turned around to face him with tears in my eyes and asked, "You knew?"

He kissed my nose as he replied, "Of course I knew, It's my Misiti's birthday." He wiped the happy tears that were running down my face.

"You know Maan, I never celebrated my birthday before, Brij Veerji never allowed such things, saying how we were trying to follow the Western ways. " I said as I looked at the birthday cake.

"And now we can. Let's cut the cake, shall we, he asked as he lit the candles. "Make a wish", he whispered.

I closed my eyes as we held our hands together; we cutted the cake and he sang Happy Birthday and we fed each other.

"What did you wish for?", he asked as he sat in a chair and sat me in his lap.

"I didn't wish for anything. I have everything I ever wanted: you", I said as I laid my head on his shoulder.

He touched my shoulder as he asked my to rise. He walked to the side to play some soft music "May I have this dance?", he asked as he bent down on one knee. I slipped my hand into his and we swayed to the music slowly. " Would you like to see your gift ?", he asked

"You still have a gift after all this?", I asked

"Of course I do, a birthday is incomplete without a birthday gift." He said as he reached into his pocket to pull out a slim box.

I opened it to find a diamond heart necklace, I picked it up and saw the back with our initials engraved.

"You like it", he asked as he secured it around my neck before kissing it.

I nodded and hugged him. "I love it, Maan how did I ever get so lucky to have you in my life?"

"No Geet, it's me who is lucky to have you in my life. You have taught me how to live life, how to enjoy life.", he said as he held me in his arms.

I kissed his chest as tears began to sting my eyes. I knew I could never keep him in the dark with the secret. "Maan , I have to tell you something", I said as I glanced up at him

He was instantly worried just as I knew he would be. "What's wrong Geet? Is everything alright?"

"No, everything is not alright.", I said as I told him the entire story beginning from the very first call to the very last one which led me my injury.

He hugged me tight as worry was written all over his face. "Don't worry Geet, I won't let anyone ever harm you. I promise", he declared.

"But what if he does something to you?" I asked with worry

He shook his head, "No Geet, don't worry about me. I will take care of myself. I am going to find out who is doing this. I will get the police, detectives, anyone and everyone on this to find that bas***d. I won't spare him. How dare he? How dare he?", he said as anger seeped through him.

"No, No Maan, he said he would kill you if I ever told you. No Maan you can't do anything.", I said with worry and tears as I held his face.

He touched my cheek, "Don't worry, he won't find out. I will make sure I am discreet. Come on, let's get you home"

He went down and signaled the captain to head back to the dock. He sat in complete silence as he held me while going back. I reached up to touch his cheek. He gripped my hand and kissed it before he hugged me tighter. I could understand his worry for me.

He guided me back to the car as he held my hand. He didn't say much as worry took over him. He helped me into the car before we headed home.

"Are you okay Maan", I asked as the silence finally got to me.

"I am fine Geet", he replied as he held my hand.

We got home and we went to my room; he waited for me get changed as he waited. As soon as I came back, he took my hand to take to the bed. He leaned against the bed rest and took me into his arms as he pulled the blanket up. As always he ran his fingers in my hair until I dozed off.

I watched her sleep; I think it was probably one of favourite things to do. I had known something was wrong and now I knew what it was. I was planning to track that bas***d down. And once I find him; I am going to kill him. No one and I mean no one dared to harm his Misiti.

Precap: Maaneet go back to Delhi; what is Maan going to do?

all the info on Goa tourism is from wikipedia....

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Edited by maankigeet4ever - 14 years ago
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Okay u hoped I like the update...well u must be kidding because I absolutely loved it.....there are surprises n surprises from Maan to Geet in this update😃...fantastic.....the fist plane-ride of Geet,her nervousness n excitement,then going to Goa.....thanks for that one by the way...I absolutely love beaches but never been to Goa yet.....their house in Goa with their own beach😍...haayee I too want my own beach now😳😆....their fun moments in the beach..he took all the care in the world to make her stay at the house memorable n comfortable....and then he cooked for her all the time... good fiancee😆....their outing and shopping....everything is just simply mesmerizing..... magical to feel...and all this to surprise her on her birthday...that's the best part of his plan....and the second thing I liked the most is Geet telling him the truth regarding that stalker.....I feel a huge burden has been lifted off now that Maan knows what the problem is.....now I'm tension-free😆...she did the right thing in telling him.....wonderful outing.....I can see they both became more close emotionally after their outing....I'm glad for that....

Thank you for being considerate enough to update this even when u r not feeling so well...Love you for this....and yeah I want a romantic one for their real honeymoon...I let this pass since emotional touch is more necessary right now for Geet to confide in him of the stalker problem.....and since I know how beautiful u can write romance...I'll be waiting for that😉😛😆😆
Edited by esha143 - 14 years ago
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CONGRATULATIONS for reaching 100 pages Reya....I hope very soon You'll have to open a new thread for this😃😃
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Originally posted by: esha143

CONGRATULATIONS for reaching 100 pages Reya....I hope very soon You'll have to open a new thread for this😃😃

thanks hun....i hope so too...
p,s can't wait for ur comment on the chapter...i am hoping you like it....
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Fantastic Reya!!! Lovely update with loads of Maaneet moments!!!YaaaaY!!! What more can one ask for?? Your choice of words made Goa all the more enchanting....Really enjoyed reading..Thanks dear👏

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