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Part 31


she smiled hiding her smily face in his chest...
dat was d ans...she can never b angry of him...
she can never protest him for anything...
he whispered again - y u hurted urself...????????

...
tears started to roll out of her eyes..making his vest wet...
he understand she is crying...
he didn't like dat...
how could she cry...
she has d right to smile..to laugh..to talk non-stop...to dance in rain..to live her life

like a princess...
he can never let her cry...
he wiped her tears wid his thumb...
she hugged him again...whispering softly into his ear - for hurting u...
...
ohh god...
is she mad...he wondered...
i hurted her so much...
she hurted herself bcoz she think she hurted me...how can she even think like dat...
she didn't even once realized..dat its me who hurted her...

how can his princess b so delicate..so innocent...
he could never let her go away from his eyes even for a second...
...
dey remained in each other's embrace...
geet was in her blue drip (night suit)...
while maan in his vest n trouser ( he directly came from his gym )
but deir were no lust...in both of dem...
dey were so close...feeling each other..making deor heart insure dat dey r together...
dey were feeling d peace...
it was pure love...pure like a drop of rain...
dey didn't even once think of crossing deir limits...
yes...
deir love was limitless...beyond any limit...
but deir respect towrds deir love was again limitless...
deir respected each other...

deir closeness not even once spiled deir mind in wrong way...
dey just wanted to feel each other's hear...pure sign of love...
...
how can d love b so pure...
so seren...
so calm...
people say love hurt...
but now dey knew...only dose people say dis who never experience true love...
true love never hurts...
rejection hurts...
loneliness hurts...
d fear of lossing love hurts...
d pain for each other hurts...
but love can never hurt...
" LOVE IS D ONLY MAGICAL THING IN D WORLD DAT COVERS UP ALL D PAIN...ALL FEAR..EVERY BAD

EMOTION...N MAKES OUR LIFE WONDERFULL N MAGICAL..."
...
DEY EXPERIENCED IT 2DAY...
n found dat dey r somewhere understand d meaning of

love...
it was d 1st step of love dey climbed...
dey even loved to get hurt in love...wat a thout...
...

its been a hour..dey were still in each other's embrace...
eyes closed..smily faces...
d couple was shining like a complete star in d spotlights..n d moonlight which were

adding more new shades in deir love...

...
maan whispered again - subah se kuchh nahi khaya na...
geet thinking - hayye rabba..inki jadugari fir se shuru ho gayi...in har baat kaise pata

chal jati hai...
maan very well knew..wat is going on in her mind...
maan switched off d ligh suddenly...
geet suddenly closed her eyes wid sudden darkness...
her heart started to beat faster...
maan hold her had tightly - m here...
she calmed...
geet - aap ko har baat kaise pata chal jati hai...
maan - jaise ki...
geet - jaise ki..mene khana khaya ya nahi...
suddenly geet made her gol-gappa face...
geet - aap ko mere ghar kaise mila..heyy babaji..aap sach me batayiye..kahin aap jadugar

to nahi hai na...

maan rolled his eyes...
geet - aur aapne light kyu band ki...mujhe apko dekhna hai..andekhre me to aap bhoot lag

rahe ho...
...
maan sit up instantly - geet..tumne mujhe bhoot kaha...
geet too sit up..poking his nose wid her finger index.. - ye aap ki naak hi hai na...
maan find her so weired - ye kaisa sawal hai...
geet - to fir aap etne kale kale kyu dikh rahe ho...
maan rolling his eyes - kyunki light off hai duffer...
geet making gol-gappa face - aap ne mujhe duffer kaha...i hate u...
maan thinking - maan is baar galat mat sochna...eske har meaningless baton ki tarah ye

hai...i love u to nahin bola..par i hate u jarur bol diya..god ..ye ladki...
...
geet find his quite...
she thout he got angry again...
she suddenly grabbed him..hugging him tight...
maan hugged too...but confused..wat happened to her again...
geet - i dnt hate u..i really dnt...me b na budhhu hu..har waqt bakwas karti rehti

hu...
maan smiled hugging her gently...
geet innocently spoke - did i hurt u again...
maan - u can never hurt me...aur waise b..mujhe hurt karne ka haqq sirf tumhe hai...
geet smiled wid his ans..loosing her hug..again sit back at place...
...
geet - mujhe bhook lagi hai...
maan - geet me tumse abhi bhi naraz hu...ye kya kiya trumne aaj...wat type of behaviour

is dis...tum koi chhoti si bachee ho..kamre band hone ke liye...
geet made sad baby face...
maan - tumne socha ke tumhari family kaisi hogi tumhare bina...ro ro ke sabki kya halat

ho gayi hogi...
geet strted to well tears...she suddenly remembered wat her family might b going

through...
maan could hear her cry...
he instantly cupped her face wid his hands...
he was so close to her open eyes...dat she could make out d image of his face a

bit..atleast his sprkling eyes...
...

maan - achha baba..ab ro mat..jao bahar jao..sabki sorry kaho...aur sabke sath khana

khao...abhi...

geet - aap jaoge to nahi na...
maan - nahi jaunga...ek aur baat...tum bahar sabko promise karogi..dat u vil never

hurt urself again...

geet nodded...
she was about to leave...
...
maan hold her hand pulling her in his hug...
tears rolled out of his eyes...
he cried softly - if u hurt urself ever again..u vil see my dead body...n dats my

promise...
geet hugged his tight...
tears rolled of her eyes...
geet - m sorry..i vil never hurt myself again..i promise...i promise..pakka wala

promise...
...

geet went out..closing d door...properly...
maan instantly checked d door from inside if its properly closed to avoid any prob...

...
geet came out...
she couldn't see d image of house...
rajji sleeping on mumma's lap wid train of tears...
mumma crying mutely...
papaji n brij veeji sitting on stairs..holding deir head...

...
geet immediately ran towrds brij...hugging him tight like a baby...
brij surprised...exited...hugged her tight...
...
papaji n mumma ran tords her...hugging her tight...
geet - m sorry veerji..i promise..me aisa dobara kabhi nahi karungi...
mumma was crying her eyes out looking at d bandeages on her hands n feet...
geet hugged mom... - meri bachhi..ye kya halat kar di hai..agar kuchh ho jata toh...
...
rajji wake up wid sudden noise...
she was so happy to hav her didi back..she ran ...jumping in her arms...
dey shared a big hug together...
n made deir way to dining table...
brij called all d frnds telling geet is ok now...
...
handa family decided not to ask her anything about d incident or she may get hurt

again...
d dine was full of fun...
papaji mumma brij rajji all were trying to make fun..laughing..chit chating...fight...
just trying to make situation easy for geet like nothing happened...
...
but geet was lost in her thought...
she checked d tight...
its been almost a hour since she came out of room...
" hayye babaji..me kitni selfish hu..unhone kahaya b hoga ya nahi..mumma to papaji ke

bina kabhi nahi khati...aur me...jab bhagwan akal baat rahe the to m kaha thi...kahin

wo chale to nahi gaye honge..."
she was just playing wid food...
rano noticed it - puttar kya huva..khana achha nahi hai...
geet umped snapping otu of her thoughts - nahi.mumma..bahot achha hai..mumma mujhe kamre

khana hai...me jau...

all agrred wid her not to stress her more...
as geet's feet were hurt..rajji helped her till stairs...
...
geet didn't let her in...n closed d door saying gud night...

...
geet turned to see if he is here still...
...
she cnt believe wat she saw...
lights were on...
she looked at d bed...

MAAN was sleeping peacefully on d bed wid his chest facing d bed...
she was not able to see his face properly due to d DUPATTA of her 1 dress dat he was

holding tight in his hand
...n covered his face wid it...
...
he looked so calm..so seren..sleeping so peacefully...
she moved closer to him...to hav a proper view of his face...
but her dupatta was just playing wid her emotions..covering his face..not letting her see

him...
he was sleeping at 1 corner of bed...
geet sat on d floor on her kness...near his side...
n moved closer to his face...
...
she looked at him from bottom to top...
very well build up...
his toned body...shining skin..looked amazing wid just vest...no wonder..y is capable of

pulling close in a jerk...
she shied of he own thouts...
she moved a bit more closer...
rested her face near his face..sitting completely on d floor like a small baby...
...
her hand slowly ran towrds his face...
carrasing his face softly over d dupatta...
he felt tickled wid sudden warm touch...
he smiled in his sleep...which geet didn't notice properly..thnks to her dupatta...
...
geet finger slowly strted to remove her dupatta from his face...
she slided d dupatta from fis forehead to his eyes...to hav a clear view of his forehead

n eyes...it seemed magical...
his closed eyes..felt so calm..so pure...so soft..so trusty...
she slowly kisses his forehead...n den his eyes one by one...
it felt tickled to both...
...
geet slided d dupatta further to his nose...
she smiled remembering how she pointed his nose in darkness asking him if its actually his

nose...
she kissed his nose softly...shied again...
she slided d dupatta further to his lips...
his lips were so perfectly shaped..like a actual rose...pink in color...
she moved closer...very closer...
she could feel his calm breath fanning her...
a blushing smile teased her lips...thinking wat was she up to..
she kissed his forehead again...

...
rested her face near his face...
softly closed her eyes...
both like to ends of a river..remained near each other...forvere...
like two rosed kept near each other...smelling each other...
like a pair of earings...nothing without each other...
like a chain wid pandel...
like two eyes...who r different but still 1...watching same..same views...
just made for each other...

"
kitne door door ho...
...un dono ke rasate...

mil jate hai jo bane...
...ek duje ke vasate...
...ek duje ke vasate...


jaise dil hai dhadkan hai...
...ek duje ke vasate...

jaise ankh hai..tadpan hai...
...ek duje ke vasate...

jaise barakha sawan hai...
...ek duje ke vasate...
ek sajani..eksajan hai...
...ek duje ke vasate...
...ek duje ke vasate...
...ek duje ke vasate...


us rab ne jab dil diye...
...dil ke do tukde kiye...
dono pe ek naam likha ...
...ek geet aur ek maan likha...

ab ye dil dhadkate hai...
...milte aur bichhdte hai...
ek duje ke vasate...
...ek duje ke vasate...
...ek duje ke vasate...
...ek duje ke vasate..."

...
two real soul mates...
ek duje ke vasate...just for each other...
never to let go...
...
geet slowly came out of her dream...
slowly opened her eyes...
he was still sleeping holding her duptta tight...like a baby...
geet smiled...
just kept staring at his innocent face...
...
like she was drawaing d image if his face on her heart...never to vanish...
his face looked calm..pure..shining..soft...like a small baby sleeping very

peacefully...
she kept looking at him endlessly...
...
...
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Edited by Angelic_mishty - 13 years ago
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how are u feeling now di? Yet another enthralling update .loved it to the core.
Edited by mansi95 - 14 years ago
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beautiful part. loved geet thinking "jab bhagwan..............."
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yippeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳
she saw him finally.............................
u hv written so beautifully abt their love.................
well the 1st step is passed and she has seen him ...............
the next is to know abt him..............
hey take ur time to update and take care............
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great part....
after such a long time
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That was so beautiful 😍 ❤️
Thank god Geet caame out of room ; @ least her family members are relieved
She brought her food for Maan 😳
Finally Geet saw his face

Loved the update 👍🏼 & get well soon dear .....
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome fabulous
loved it
love u dear
pls cont soon
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Part 32


2:30 AM
he enters her room from d balcony...
she was sleeping peacefully on d bed under d duvet...
he thinking - ek me hu..jo ese manane etni raat tak jag raha hu...aur ek ye hai jo aaram

se kharate le rahi hai...jo b ho..aaj bacha lena kanhaji plz...
...
he moves near d bed...sitting beside her...
turns on d side by lamp...
moves near to her face whispering - jaan...
...
she almost jumped wid d sudden ghosts voice...screaming...
awww...
b4 she could scream lou...he grabs her mouth wid his hand...
NT - dev...u r hurting me..
dev realizes dat his grab is litle too strong...he looses instantly...
NT throws a pillow on him...
NT - wat d hell r u doing here...mene mana kiya tha na...get out...tumhari nayi gf so

gayi jo mera...
...
b4 she could complete her sentence...
dev places a soft kiss on cheek wid a sorry baby face...
NT looks at him angrily...
dev - plz baby..etna gussa...she is just a frnd...nothing else..
NT - i dnt want ur stupid explanation...leave now...
dev - tum kyu etna gussa ho rahi hai..she is annie's frnd...waise b wo kisi aur se pyar

karti hai...

NT - ohh...usne tumhare is fake dil ke tukde tukde kar diye...
dev - how mean..i hate u...making grumpy face...
NT - great..coz i hate u too...she too making a grumpy face...
dev wid sudden smile - i was kidding..can i ever hate u...ab plz mujse baat karo na..u

havn't talked to me from last night...
NT - u better go..or i vil call guard to throw u out...
dev - r u talking of dev singh khurana to b thrown out...
NT - yes..now go...
dev - baby..she just told me dat she loves sum1 who loves sum1 else...but i dnt know dat

sum1 else...dats y being 1 sum1 i tried to help her sorrow sooth out from dat sum1

else...
NT scratching her head - can u tell d meaning now...
dev - actually mujhe hi meaning nahi pata ke mene abhi kya bola..lekin..i swear..i just

love u baby...
NT - prove it...
dev - ok...i can jump for u from d train...
NT - hav u ever travelled by train in ur lifetime...
dev - no..but still i can...
NT - r u serious..u can jump...
dev - but obvious..train rukte hai jump kar dunga...
...
NT throwing another pillow on his face...ouhhh..i hate u...
dev catching d pillow - now plz..say u gorgave me...
NT - try hard...
dev takes out a diamond ear-rings from his pocket...
Nt'e eyes just popped..screaming.omg..it so pretty...
dev - now vil u hug me..i missed u so much...
NT - me or my hug...
dev - wat u think...
NT - shut up..n hugs him tight...
...


6:45 am

geet still rolling on her pillow...hiding herself in d spread..
searching her mr.chocolaty on d bed wid her had...
but her hand fails...
she opens her eyes in a jerk..sitting on d bed...
she turns around...d whole room...
but finds him nowhere...
...
she closes her eyes..wat exactly happened last night...
she slept on d floar watching him endlessly...
n he was in a deep sleep on d bed...
dey how cum she is on d bed..n he is nowhere...
" aye lo...mujhe jagaya b nahi..aise hi chale gaye...khadus..."
her eyes falls on d plate..food is still dere...
her tummy strts making noise..."mujhe bhook lagi hai..."
...
she decided to sleep more for sum time...as she slept very late..thnks to his killing

face..dat she kept staring...
" hayye rabba...kitne handsum dikh rahe the raat me..matlab din me bhi...overall is just

too charming...ohh god..wats happening to me..."
...
b4 she could get in d spread again...
her eyes fell on d side table to find a letter on it...
she immediately pickd it up...
she blushed thinking its his 1st letter...she hides herself in d spreat wid only hands n head to b seen...
opened it...
reading...

" JAAN (geet blushes)...

gussa ho ke bina bataye chala gaya (geet nods as yes)...but my princess was sleeping so peacefully on d floar (geet makes baby face)...ke mera man nahi huva usse jagane ka (geet smiles)...

by d way..tumhe nahi lagta ki tum bahot moti ho (geet makes gol-gappa face)...muh band karo..makkhi andar chali jayegi (she closes her mouth)...tum uthate huve..mera ye muscles b dard karne lake (geet makes grumpy face)...muh kyu bana
rahi...achha baba...me majak kar raha hu
(geet smiles)...plz aise mat muskurao..warna mera yaha man nahi lagega (geet hides in d spread)...pehle pura padh to lo...tumhare cupboard se tumhari ek taswir li hai aur tumhara dupatta b (geet makes surprising face)...wat...ab ek din sab mere ghar hi aana hai (geet blushes again...)

achha suno..me aaj london ja raha hu (geet eyes fills up)...jaan its about business...bahot importnt meeting hai...ek week me vapas aa jaunga...i promise (geet still foul mood)...tum aise udas ho jaogi to me kaise ja puanga..aur waise b..me nikal chuka hu...i vil miss u (geet nodds a no)...u better miss me...aur haan...jab me vapas nahi aa jata..agar mujhe pata chala ke tumne dobara koi stupid si harkat ki hai..ya khudko hurt kiya hai..den u cnt imagine wat vil u do (geet kisses d letter)...raat ko labon par to nahi diya...aur ab letter ko kiss kar rahi ho...not fair (geet blushes instantly)...ohh god..i vil dye for dis blush of urs (geet
makes naughty faces
)...dnt look naughtily..i may just eat u (geet smiles)...

achha u sleep now..raat ko mujhe ghurne ke chakkar me..so hi nahi payi (geet thinking me ghurti nahi)...achha..raat ko to laga ke mujhe kha hi jaogi (geet thinking..inhe har baat kaise pata chal jati hai..heyy babaji)...tumhara jadugar jo hu...ek aur baat...tum sote huye bilkul.....(geet eyes twinkles in joy)...MISHTY lagti ho...meri mishty (geet blushes)..ok ..dat blush is enough for me to travel till london (geet thinking i vil miss u)...i know..u vil miss me..but i vil miss u more...u sleep now..sapne me milta hu...

- tumhara khadus "

...
geet imeediately hugs d letter as much as possible...
a sudden overburst of all happy emotions..takes over her mind...
she hides herself in d duvet..not stop blushing n smiling...eyes closed...
still kissing d letter under d duvet...

...
maan in plane
takes out geet's pic...
while holding her dupatta in his hand tightly...
kisses d dupatta many times..smelling her scent in it...
maan's smiles on his own childisn behaviour...
"is ladki ne..maan singh khurana ko kya bana diya hai..ek 18 yrs teenager..."
he carrases d pic very lovingly...
places it near to his heart..hugging it softly...
she looks more delicate in d pic...he scares if her pic even get hurt...
trying to feel her in within...
remembering d beautifull time dey shared last night...
d way she saw his face...kisses him...
he was on 9th cloud...
his smile..completeness..was very wekk visible on his face...
he was happiest dat finally she saw his face...
atleast dis hide n sick game in lowered at sum maner
...
still she dnt know anything about him..his name..his personality..his business...his

image in d world..nothing...
...
dey both r like mystarious book for each other...
jiske har panne par ek nayi kahani hai..bas padhte jana hai...aur yuhi ek dusre ko

padhte padhte..zindagi gujar jaye..bas aur kya chahiye...bas ek dusre ko samajhte jana

hai..aur ek dusre ka banate jana hai...
...


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love
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Edited by Angelic_mishty - 13 years ago
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WOW mr.khadoos has written a love letter for his princess.that was soooo romantic.....great update.😊
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wow first love letter it just awesome ,amazing, wonderful yaar
loved it !!!🤗

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