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Posted: 14 years ago
brilliant update update pls cont soonnnnnnnnnnn thank yu for the update
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Posted: 14 years ago
That was a lovely update pls do cont.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Amazing....Maan putforth his feelings so well.....wonder what geet says😍
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update
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maan so sweet of him the he told her she is his life uff shruti ur suppose to wait for the introde to come in so they can finish there conversation brilliant update it was super my dear love it pls cont soonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn thank yu so muchhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
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Posted: 14 years ago

PART 22

Rajji was happy to see Geet recovering, she helped her with the shower and ripped the sweat soaked bed sheets,

Geet sat on the sofa and noticed that Maan too needed to change as his shirt was also smelling sweat, she slowly went near her unpacked duffle bag and took out a similar color shirt;
she has brought about 4 of his used shirts with her, she went to the kitchen where he was warming up the lunch and gave the shirt to him,

M: mine,

G just nodded
M: you brought it with you.
G did not say anything just stared at the flooring pattern
M: but it is not washed
G still did not say anything and turned to leave
M: you wanted to feel me near you
G went all crimson and left
M just smiled and changed though not washed it still was better then the one he was wearing
He came out with the lunch
She was sitting on the sofa, he placed the food on the central table and sat on the single sofa opposite to her and called Rajji
M: Rajji come and have lunch and do not bother with laundry Nakul will see to it
R: how will Nakul see to it?
M: come sit here let me explain and eat first
He served her and himself with regular lunch and placed a plate of something that looked like khichadi to Geet
While eating he told her about his conversation with Brij, Geet just listened quietly, he knew very well that Geet showed her attitude only to him in front of others she remained quite
R: is it the outhouse?
M: outhouse is my place and though you may be my best friend I will not allow you to stay there and winked
R: then
M: remember the duplex near the pool side that Dev bro constructed as a model for HIG scheme
R: yes, that's quite elegant and 4BHK
M: exactly
R: is it ready to move?
M: all ready, Nakul would have had it all cleaned and furnished with basic furniture, you two can later do it as per your taste
R: oh! Maan thank you so much, living here is not that safe
M: you seem to forget that in friendship no sorry no thank you
R: sorry, oops
And both smiled
G: but Didi will it be right to live there, see even your office will be far from Khurana premises, and if you daily have to travel on that bike of yours in this traffic here your hair will be messed up and make up will I don't even want to think, in college it was ok but in office you need to look immaculate
R: yes Geet you are right, I did not think of that, I will look hell each morning at reporting time
M (this Geet knows very well how to manage her sister but I am also MSK): o! Rajji you need not worry I will give you lift or better you can buy a car and say bye to your Khatara Basanti,
R: oye don't insult my Basanti
M: ok sorry, but look she also needs rest, not she is old and needs retirement
R: yes, you are right but I can't drive a car in such traffic
M: you are Handa's daughter and Bakshi's would be Bahu, we will get you a driver
R: yes that can do
M: and even Yash can have a excuse to see you while dropping and picking you to the office
R blushed: oh! Geet we will both come in a chauffer driven car
M: hey, you are getting late is already 1:15 you need to be back in 15 mins
R: oh! Yes
Then she hurried and left in 5 mins
He went to the kitchen and washed the dishes, by the time he finished Geet went to her room, he came looking for her to find her sleeping, he went near her and held her hand, she opened her eyes and tried to pull her hand out of his possessive grip, but failed
M: still angry
No response
M: sorry, won't you even look at me
No response, a sole tear escaped her eye landing on his palm
M: Geet look at me,
She did not
M: look at me (in a harsh voice)
G: leave and I am not going to Khurana's
M: Geet I can't, try to understand I have become so used to being there it hurts when you are not around
G: someday I had to leave sooner the better
M: no, you are not leaving me (in anger)
G: Maan you need to do something about your temper, every time now a day's u talk to me it shoots up
M: Geet, you too have started hating me like all these people around me
G: no one hates you Maan simply no one, take this out of your mind, even your father
M: shut up defending others Geet, talk about yourself
G: what do you want me to say?
M: you hate me
G: no
M: then why can't you come with me
G: Maan we have no future together
M: let the future take its own time I am talking about now, now have you any reason not to come, Brij agreed Rajji agreed
G: when every one agreed then why are you asking me?
M: because what matters to me is your opinion
G: Maan the sooner all this ends the better, from today on I am only your secretary
M: fine, but Rajji's sister and Rajji are shifting to the K premises, no more arguements
at present this eventful day continues
will Maan succeed in taking the girls with him?
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Edited by smj1977 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh god hope geet anger cools down
bt want 2 see wt else can maan do 2 manofy geet
n awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeee updateeeeeee
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wonderful update.............loved it!!!
will Maan succeed in taking the girls with him?
ofcourse he will

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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome part. loved it.
loved they wat maan make understand rajjy but for geet it'll take time or if geet will go with him , still little angry on him.
but soon maan will make her up with also
update soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow that was an awsome one yaar ....loved it so much !!!

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