A Contract #2- FF on Maaneet (Last part pg 113) - Page 34

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Posted: 14 years ago
hey dear....😊😊😊
just read u FF in one go...loved it.....its simply awsum....👏👏👏👏
loved each and very part of it...beautiful concept nd more beautifully presented....
nd this Geet is super intelligent yr...CA, ICWA, MBA....now this is a lethal combination....😉😉
I guess even u doing CA or ICWA....read sumwhere in a comment someone had mentioned ICAI....actually even i'm doing a CA...so found a common nerve..😃😃
Nyways...continue soon...nd plzzzz do add me to ur PM list...😊😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update
loved it
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: padamjot

hey dear....😊😊😊

just read u FF in one go...loved it.....its simply awsum....👏
loved each and very part of it...beautiful concept nd more beautifully presented....
nd this Geet is super intelligent yr...CA, ICWA, MBA....now this is a lethal combination....😉😉
I guess even u doing CA or ICWA....read sumwhere in a comment someone had mentioned ICAI....actually even i'm doing a CA...so found a common nerve..😃😃
Nyways...continue soon...nd plzzzz do add me to ur PM list...😊😊


Thank u......
Yes Even I'm doing CA, I just completed my CPT n writing IPCC in this nov n u....
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sravss


No Geet meant that they will run without paying the bill........

Oh...Then it will be Double Mazaa...Maan's best punishment ever 😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update..............my my maan singh khurana going to eat @ dhaba without paying for it.............well want to c how maan is going to do that.............thanks for the pm pl cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hi everyone,

Guys as my B.Com exams r nearing (they r from 25th march) n I have my IPCC class everyday till 6pm I'm finding less time to write. I promise of long n regular updates after B.Com exams.Hope u will understand.

Thank u.

- Sravanthi.

Part 35

Geet n Maan reach the Dhaba,

Geet looks round confusedly

"What happen????"

"Nothing'."

"1st time."

"What???"

"1st time that u have come to a dhaba."

"Yes'..n u."

"Many times'.."

Eye opened width."(Stressing) Many time ''..u have come here."

"yes'."

Geet thinks."Maan has come to a dhaba many times''..interesting.."

"what happen???"

:"nothing Maan ."

"come.."

They both went n sat.

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Meera n yash reach the place.

"here we r."

"where did we come yash''..I want to go to Khurana house to meet Maan."

"going to Khurana house is imp or meeting Maan."

"meeting maan."

"then here we go''tonight we have business party n''"

"Maan will come here'.that's great but.."

"don't worry u r with me."

"thanks."

"lets go."

They both get down the car n go into the party hall.

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Maan asks geet "what will u eat???"

"I have never been to a Dhaba so u place the order."

"Ok"

Maan orders.

They get a huge glass of butter milk. Geet puts a shocking face.

"maan '."

"what???"

"what is it???" looking the glass.

Maan laughs n says."its butter milk Geet don't u know even that.

Geet looks seriously. "o really."

"really" (smiles Maan ) Geet gets anger n was about to say some thing n the boy there comes with the plates.

Geet clams down n starts eating. "woow its very yummy.". Maan smiles n they both eat.

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Yash then calls Adi.

"Adi come here."

"yes Yash."

"where is Maan sir.??"

"he did not come sir."

"what???" saying this he looks at Meera n Meera looks seriously at him.

"where is here'where is he" saks Meera

"Actually'''.a'.a"

Meera laughs n says "its Ok .I can understand how will u know.Lets come in n enjoy."

"I will drop u in Khurana house ."

"Maan is not there."

"O'.Adi did Geet come."

"No Yash"

"No." n thinks "Geet must have Made some plan n she did not tell me''what is it???? I shall ask her'.no I will not'' she should tell me she did not." N Gets angry.

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"maan I will just come."

"Ok"

Geet goes a side n calls Yash. But it was not connecting'.."what happen to Yash'.I shall call Adi"

Geet calls Adi"

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"Hello mam"

"Adi.is Yash there."

"yes mam."

"I want to talk to him."

"Ok mam" Adi comes near Yash.

Yash was talking to meera.

"sir"

"what happen Adi"

"Geet mam's call"

"O, excuse me" he that's the cell n goes a side.

"what happen Adi"

"nothing Meera, geet mam called Yash."

"O geet is '"

"Maan sir wife."

"O"

Yash goes a side,

"hello"

"hi, yash."

"I'm not talking to u"

"o really .then what r u doing now.."

Yash was about to cut the call n Geet says "O'.stop it."

Yash remains silent.

"Ok Yash I'm sorry."

"Tell me."

Geet smiles n says "I n maan came out."

"O'..so"

"so''fool."

"fool'''o maan sir came out along with u instead of attending important business party''.."

"Right"

"Ok this is to show Sasha that u r important to maan '..sir."

"Exactly'..smart"

"I know I'm"

"So do rest of the work using ur smartness."

"Doesn't worry I will she to that sasha realize it."

"Good..Ok bye."

"bye"

Yash comes near everyone ' Adi, pinky, meera, Romeo n at little distance Sasha.

He sees Sasha n then looks at everyone n says "Adi ur phone."

"Sir is everything fine y it geet mam call u'.."(Adi)

Romeo says "Y didn't Geet mam n Maan sir came here."

Sasha looks here eagerly n does even meera.

Yash says little loudly "Geet n Maan went out to dinner so they did not come."

"what????" shouted everyone'including meera n sasha.

Sasha thinks "Maan went out with geet without coming to business party'.." she was shocked.

Everyone says "what??" again looking at each other's face.

Adi says " I heard love change people but saw it today." N smiles n doe everyone there. Sasha leaves from there. She then gets a call from Maan, "yes MK."

"Sasha I'm not coming to the party manage it."

"Ok'MK'..but."

"bye sasha "

Maan puts the phone.

Meera thinks "Maan did not attend the business party'I'm maan put business related thing aside to go out with geet ''.Geet who is just his contract wife'..I can see the old Maan is coming back''I should definitely see this Geet who is bring back the old Maan slowly'.."

"Meera"

"A'."

"what happen"

"nothing''." Smiles meera n does Yash.

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Geet n Maan had their dinner.

"So''."

"so what Geet."

"Lets go"

"ssure" maan looks here n there with a tensed n confused face.

Geet silently watched him n smiled.

"lets go" saying this Maan gets up looks here n there.

The owner looks at him seriously.

Geet also gets up n thinks "I seriously don't know Maan what plan u have made but knows that we will definitely be caught." N smiles.

Maan n Geet walks few steps n Maan hold geet hand n starts to run n Geet follows maan.

They run some distance n stops suddenly seeing the owner in front of them.

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Edited by sravss - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

nice start...
thnks for the pm...
~Amira~

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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome dear
sweet start
ohh so sweet 1 mins 😳
very very sweet update :D
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Posted: 14 years ago
aww i hope maan says" luv makes u do crazy stuff" then pays the guy double the money for their order.
isn't it true that stealing of a dime or million is all the same.
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Posted: 14 years ago

wonderful one!!!

last part of the update was hilarious..............love it!!!

so sasha knws abt the contract..........but how???

con soon...........

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