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Posted: 13 years ago
jaldiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii bahot sad dose mila aaj geet ka.. want something happy happy
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: princess163

 
though I wait for TM update but for a change I love Geet in this FF
in all others I love Maan
that's why I potrayed  a strong Geet in my FF fate has it all set as Maan was always the best in the FF's but in this FF Geet is far better then him
hey and don't you ever read MY only mistake I am a female
pls read once if you have not read it

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Posted: 13 years ago
waiting waiting waiting ..😊.
 hope u gve us happy Happy walaa update today ðŸ˜Š
pehale hi GHSP dekhke ...mood sad ho gayaa hai 

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Posted: 13 years ago
me too eagerly looking forward to read the update :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
i also want a happy update
realllllllyyyyyyyyyy happy n full of celebrations n all
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Posted: 13 years ago
Di.. I think Im dreaming..... R u gonna update TM again..... Plz update Deewangi also..... Plz.... Plzz.... Plzzz.....plzzzz
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Posted: 13 years ago

-truly magical-
part 145

 
 
like always she never doubted him... it was just the pain of someone else around him. She thought she would have over grown all that with age, with the hardship in her life..with so much more in her life to hurt, pain & burn, never thought such things could matter ..but it did..sadly did more... now..still looking at his reflection on the glass.

How could she still understand him, not question his intentions.. how can she surpass her own self every dam time.. he kept looking at her in awe, there was no quetch, why she was not complaining, when it hurt her, he knew it hurt her, he knew she was sad deep within why she didn't want to express herself, like she did always, why she is holding back. How can things change so drastically between them, he wanted to shake her ..he did held her arms & shook her Geet
she looked at him.. blank.. mujh se galti ho gayen..
he shook his head..with tears in his eyes
I should have been more careful with mk
he didn't know wat she was talking now
main kya karti main dar gayen thi.
He blinked couple of time trying to figure out wat she was saying.. she was looking down now
main sambal nahi payen khudko
nahi Geet she is fine..dehko aunty ki ghodi main so raheen hain, bechain tho kuch na kuch karten raheten hain..
he thought may Geet was feeling bad about wat mk did to sam. He really didn't care..
she didn't look up, she knew mk was safe.. nothing could happen to her when Maan is around.
The party was almost over, every one had left, Rano took mk with her. Rano felt they needed this time together. She was just hoping things sorted.

 
she took another drink..
Maan - Geet
usse din aise nahi hota tho.. mk pre-term nahi hoti
he realized she was talking some thing totally different
she clenched the glass hard in her hand.... I failed ..
nahi Geet u didn't
I couldn't take care of her..
u did ..u did wat best u could
she crushed the glass in her hand.. he jumped back in shock.. she didn't even move a inch..her eyes was still stuck at the table..her hand bleeding furiously' well the best was not good enough then..
she got up to leave. She was fine.. didn't seem like she was drunk, but definitely she was very angry at self. Maan extended his hand trying to hold her bleeding hand.. main tumhe drop kardeta hoon
she looked at him.. kamse kam aaj hi kah diya hota.. ghar challo..
she pushed his hand down.. thanks.. meri ghadi hain
I can't let u go away like this
she shook her head.. how shallow was that sentence she thought. & continued to walk towards the car park. Maan held her hand & dragged to his car. She didn't say anything.. how could she.. she was just enjoying his touch, command over her. He pushed her in & front seat & tucked the seat belt. removed a first aid from th dashboard & tied around her hand.
Chup chap beti raho
itne saal se chup hi tho hoon she thought
he went around & drove the car towards her house. Suddenly their car was stopped in between the high way. They were reminded of the first time they were stopped. Police.. hit is windshield. To roll down the glass.
Maan - tum rukoo I will handel it.
Cop - license & ghaadi ke  papers
Maan pulled the documents  & showed it to them, he was scared...he didn't want anyone to see her here like this, it could cause a sever misunderstands in her life. He didn't want to add up to her agony.
Cop saw the paper .. Maan Singh Khurana.. he smirked.. looking at the time 11.45 pm ..aapke saat kaun hain?
Reporter took a snap of him.. Geet noticed the camera person & the cop questioning him. She got out at once wild & furious. The cop was stun.. seeing gk walking towards him..
Geet - yeh kya ho raha?.. pulling her kurti's sleev behind & removing the bandage
Maan - tum andar javoo, I will handle it.
Geet ignored him & gave a piercing look to the cop
cop - ji woh hum...
she walked straight to him with out waiting for him to complete & smashed his face with a punch.
Maan was shocked with her reaction.. Geet !!
Geet - iss ki liya wardi pehnte ho tum log sa**l, she pulled his belt & began to hit him u sw***. The reporter took few snaps. She took his camera & crushed it into the floor. she pulled out the roll & put around the camera persons neck... she took out the memory stick & bit it into two with her teeth.
Reporter - u can't touch a journalist
she pushed him on his chest.. I can't touch u... she slapped him on his face again & again..walking towards him.. kaun rohkega mujhe.. tum.. roko... roko... common.. stop me..!!
Maan - Geet stop it.. Geet...
Geet - u don't even know whom u r dealing with she spat..
Maan held her from waist & took her away.
Reporter tried to protest.. the cop held him back.. she can kill u .. & no one will question her..
cop - yeh hi yanha ki DCP hain chal yanha se..
reporter knew the DCP was strict, ruthless, hated media.. encounter specialist..the best force could have.. he gulped his saliva & left from there with his bleeding lips.
 

Geet shouted - I will kill that bast***, sa***, ma*** ch***, son of B****
Maan closed her mouth ..bas..ek sabad aur nahi!!
they drove quietly until they reached home.. Maan was disturbed with her coldness, roughness, now the language..wat was it with her, he knew she was violent.. but to this extent, how she just raise her hand on a cop & the reporter.. OMG ..just hope the media doesn't create a big thing about it tomorrow.

when they reached home she fished her pocket for the house keys & opened the door. He was just waiting for her to get in safely. The drink began to hit her, she trembled as she stepped in.. she sour under her throat.  He held her & made her sit on the couch.
Maan - wat language was that
Geet - inhe yah basha samjh aati hain..she spat.
Maan - tum kanha ka gussa kanha inkalti ho?
She stood up & cupped his face dearly & looked at him - main gussa nahi hoon
he looked at her eyes.. there was love.. nothing else.. there was no concealing, she was not blank anymore.. there was only love in those eyes.. he looked at from one eyes to the other.. how can she.. still love him.. so much. Those eyes spoke to him.. told him ..he meant the world to her. Still so much is left unsaid, he could sit there & keep reading them.. it would take him far too long
he knew that much she love him.. how could she still!! he was trembling in her grasp, hearing the pain mingled with love in her voice. His cries finally come to a halt returning, clogging his throat.
 

After a few long moments she leaned forward rising in tiptoe & placed a kiss against his lips, stroking a shaky hand down the line of his throat & slipping it into his hair. Maan ran a desirous glance over her, searching out her eyes, his pulse quickening, shuttering, hammering against his chest. His hand unknowingly tugged into her waist rising her further to him. How can I be angry with u.. woh bhi aaj ke din.. she spoke into his mouth.
happy birthday .. she kissed him again.. tears welled from him his eyes. He felt his soul was born anew, his heart was awaken.
Maan - tumhe yaad tha!!!.. he himself had forgotten.. he had not celebrated his birthday ever since she left ..his birthday reminded him only of her, her love, her complete acceptance of the relation.. which he again saw in her eyes today.. breathless & conflicted searching for answers to questions he didn't understand & finding none,  she inched back & looked at him wondering why he asked that.. how could she forget his birthday.. she looked at him in confusion. Why will she forget his birthday.. she looked at him with fluttering eyes..these simple words confuse her, for she thought she knew what they meant, until she lost and won some may be!!!

 
Confusion, Pain, and sorrow seem to always surround them, the feelings they hide though in this search they seem to be all they could find & still hope they would share the reason why they weren't together anymore.. when they were one!!! Geet fell on the couch slipping into deep sleep. He stood their numb, it was beyond comprehension, beyond belief. Even her kiss made no sense. For her kiss when it had come as her concealed eyes had promised it must, had nothing like complain.. just love..plain love. Yet still it had brought with it an awakening of his senses, an unfurling of emotions & passions that he had been long since denied. A kiss so momentous it had reawakened both his heart & soul. He ran his hand couple of times in his hair brushing them backward, an expression of the turmoil going on inside himself, until she pulled his hand towards herself in sleep. Making him lean on his knees, to sit beside her & just simply watch her asleep peacefully..
 
precap,
birthday party
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muskan
Edited by muskanp - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
muskan plz update deewangi................

yipee mee first to comment
lovely update.........
Hope maan gets to know the truth soon...........
Edited by puth - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Brilliant  and emotional part.
loved it.
 first time they talk but still not cleared any confusion . still same state.
geet told about mk's premature  but maan didn't get it.
now police seen gk and mk together and khan and ayur will know about it.
anyway, maan know another side of geet, her language and they she speak now.
maan stunned and shocked to hear this.
maan took geet with him to gk's house but missed to see then name plate cause it's night.
 when he failed to see it in morning.
geet kissed him and wished him birthday but maan didn't get it.
he thinks y she loved him now after what he done to her
he thinks y she wished him birthday like this when she moved on?
maan still don't know who is dcp or gk.
hope he will know it soon.
precap is birthday party mean maan's birthday party then sure again geet will be hurt and maan's engagement will be announce or something like that,
update soon.


Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update muskaan..........
u r a grt writer..
update deewangi soon..........
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Edited by mona1992 - 13 years ago