❤️Anjaana Anjaani❤️ Chapter 5 pg 18 - Page 7

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Posted: 14 years ago
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this is Awsome!!! i really enjoyed reading it.....im loving combo of the india pak actors.....and i always enjoy the couples who have never been on screen couples but they r brought together..lyk Ali and Jenni....im loving their track alot....plz do continue....
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Posted: 14 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: MewPrincess

@Sofna what r the problems in characters dear? please tell me i would clarify you 😊 and no dear not a writers block i just wanted to make a new story a much better one and trust me you will love it


@Simi thnx 4 liking it dear

@Nirjuu thnx Di thnx a lot

Dnt wry no big prob....it's jst with many chrcters i kpet going bak between the first part n character sketch to put nmes to faces😆😆....nothing to wry..like i sed...as the story progresses ...we will com to knw each n every chrcter.....properly😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@Rabz thnx dear thats very encouraging i'm sure i'll pdate soon thanks to your kind encouragement and i was thinkig about making siggies for next chapter just wait Kabir will be introduced😉

@Sofna don't worry dear i'm sure you'll understand quick and yeah why don't you open two tabs on one kep characters and other the chapter hhat would be much easier than
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Characters:

CHAPTER 2

Two Different Era's
Two Different Lives

Past:
Kabir was sitting in his room alone he looked at the bracelet in his hand it had arabiic carved on it .A tear drop fell from
the nninteen years olds eyes as his life flashed before hiis eyes
(content below is of drama Kismat and i wrote nothing of this i just copied it from updates so you guys dont have problem
about Kabir's childhood honestly i didn't watch the beginning week of this show so correct me if i'm wrong)

Note:In this story Kabir knows his reality and childhood but doesn't know who is his father

His early childhood was a bit blury to him but he remembered what his foster sister just told him how his real mom Rukhsana died
after giving birth to him how his foster mom who took him as her own grew him up and his foster sister Saraswati who loved him like a real
sister even more than that but his foster father hated him and beated him daily he had less cloths and more scars,bruises and burns
with that Kabir lifted his shirt up and saw in the mirror his back whhich still had a mark of the ruthless beating he had that day
he shuddered as it came all back to him he sighed and woe the shirt again.He rememberred how one day his foster mom asked him to run away
.He ran away and was safe again with a new foster father Asif but that didn't remain long either he got kidnapped but somehow Kabir managed
to run away tha time he was 12 and life had thrown much hardships at him at a tender age but all became better he met his best friend Jayant
once whenn he was selling combs on roadside a smile appeared on his face but it vanished again as he thought about 2 days ago when he met his
sister Saraswati again after many years he didn't recognized her but yesterday he found out he couldn't believe it he knew his foster dad was a bad man but..
that man sold his own daughter how could he .His sister was now a ....he shuddered at the thought his poor angel was now a ...

Tears kept falliing don and he couldn't stop them ....What the poor boy didn't know his destiny was about to change for the better or worse

(okay this was hard to write i'm crying now my poor Kabbi poo)
Kabir as siting quiely wen Jayant entered

Jayant:Kabir tu kya kar raha hai tujhe kaam pe nahi jaana?

Kabir rembered fast and Kabir ran off to work fastr than the wind

Present
...............

Rosh went to her room and knockd

Neha:yes
Rosh:hello i'm Roshni
Neha:oh hi i'm Neha .....wanna get lunch i'm hungry (okay now Neha is hungry again after eating the last cake LOL)
Rosh:......umm...sure

both after Rosh unpacked went downstairs in canteen where Kinny spotted them

Kinny:tum wapis aagayi ? arrey kitna khaati ho tum? tab hi toh kahoon itni moti ho!

Neha:excuse me?

her anger outbusing
Kinny:your excused

he started walking away but stopped by the suprized Rosh

Kinny:and who is this?
Rosh:....umm...i'm Roshni

she said matter of factly

Neha:oh c'mon just go

Kinny:why should i? ......so Roshni where are you from

Rosh got a bright idea she signaled Nea quietly to use the pudding and Neha understood quickly

Rosh:oh...i'm from mars

said Rosh in a duh voice.Using he hand she snuck a pate of pudding behind her back and after signaling both dumped the pudding on his head and started laughing
Kinny got angry bu ran outside while Ainy congratualated them .Feeling satisfied by thier good deed both sat a tabble

Shehroz:wow you guys were amazing ...i'm Shehroz
Rosh:hi Shehroz thnx i'm Roshni
Neha:m Neha nice to meet ya

a voice came from behind

Neelam:hi Shehroz,Neha and Roshni i'm Neelam

all three: hello Neelam

all of them started laughing and became friends

......Next morning

Neha:Ros i'm late you finish up i'll meet you in class
Rosh:fina yaar

Neha ran to class while Rosh finished up her shower got dressed in pink Pak kurta pyjama and tied hair in a pony and ran fast downstairs to be stopped by
no one else but Ali

Ali:hi Rose
Rosh:you talking to me
Ali:yes your the only Rose here
Rosh:you got my name wrong its Roshni
Ali:i know Rose is nick name for you
Rosh:okay.......i'm late i gotta go

Rosh walked off to be blocked by him again she turned other side but Ali kept blocking

Rosh: you have a problem
Ali:no not at all
Rosh:can i go?
Ali:let me think...ummm...no...yes...okay go

Rosh laughs

Rosh:thank you .....i guess
Ali:your welcome Rose

Giaa was walking to class when she twisted her foot

Giaa:owww....

Aham was there ran to her help

Aham:are you okay?
Giaa:do i look okay?

Aham shook his head

Aham:let me help you

Aham carried Giaa bridal style and ran to the nurse

Aham:is she okay?
Nurse:yeah she is fine just twisted her ankle
Aham:thanks

Giaa:owww ...ouch..the pain
Aham:stop over reacting
Giaa:i'm not over reacting....oww

Aham:let me help you back
Giaa:you better!!!

Aham helped her back to the girls hostel


Past
...............

Kabir returned after meeting his sister like he did after work his heart cried a bit more he looked at the sky in the stars as if asking God about his destiny he kept walking in complete lonliness untill
a bright light started flashing not far off Kabir suprized as this area was mostly emty at this time ran forward to the lights location

...............

Present

Rosh was standing near the window it was night time stars twinkling her heart wanted to go outside she looked at Neha who was fast asleep she sighed and went out feeling the wind she was completely alone
she started walking and reached the back garden there was a fountain there she sat near it suddenly the same bright light started glowing in fountain she reached out inside the fountain and oulled out a lockett

Rosh:what is this?

................

So you like it ? the Destiny of Kabir and Roshni are linking together what is this locket? and how is it gonna effect them?

Two Different Era's
Two Different Destiny's


Edited by MewPrincess - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awosome Meww wonderful . I read all in 1 go n U r fantastic jan . Plzz cntinueee soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@Moni Di thnx dear thnx a lot

@Nirjuu Di thnx thnx a lot Di
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome update mew 👏
poor kabir...my heart is crying for him 😭
his father was such a bad guy...sold even his own daughter....shudders
loved the fight b/w kinny rosh and neha...poor kinny girls just messed their hair.awwww

and ali flirting with rosh...i like it 😉
thanx for the pm yaar
update next part soon.....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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really nice update....waiting for more..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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loved it...plz continue soon (:
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Warda.

awesome update mew 👏

poor kabir...my heart is crying for him 😭
his father was such a bad guy...sold even his own daughter....shudders
loved the fight b/w kinny rosh and neha...poor kinny girls just messed their hair.awwww

and ali flirting with rosh...i like it 😉
thanx for the pm yaar
update next part soon.....


warda that father was Kabirs foster father it means that his foster mom adopted Kabir so they were his adopted parents while Saraswati was their real daughter Kabir is Muslm while his adopted parents are hindhus

Yup Rosh and Neha will get to be best friends while Kinny will be bothered by both

Yup Ali is just annoying osh he wants to cheer her up so that she feels welcome at college

Originally posted by: Rabz_14

really nice update....waiting for more..


thnx dear thnx a lot

Originally posted by: _gunjan_

loved it...plz continue soon (:


sure dear thnx a lot

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