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ixiaa thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
great update. nice story. the precap looks interesting
plz update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: egrat94

great update. nice story. the precap looks interesting

plz update soon

thanks dear!! will update soon!

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Posted: 14 years ago
helloooooo.......😃 waiting for the update ........kaha ho yaar😔 😡😉......was expecting it on sunday😭 ............pls zaldi update dedo😳
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Awe so both if then are unconditionally in love with each other but scared of what the other thinks and woah passion and desire is there fo both of them but the time isn't right so hence the interruptions and oh oh geet took maans reaction the wrong way but they've got two weeks together so these difference snd the love for each other would be cleared and confessed anyways great update and can't wait to read more 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: siroilily

helloooooo.......😃 waiting for the update ........kaha ho yaar😔 😡😉......was expecting it on sunday😭 ............pls zaldi update dedo😳

Arre yyar, I was very busy with driving my cousins here and there... One got a party, the other one got lectures hehe!

At the moment I am writing the next part!

Will update very very very soon!

PLZ Maafkardo yaar...

Sorry for keep you waiting!

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -shamima-

Awe so both if then are unconditionally in love with each other but scared of what the other thinks and woah passion and desire is there fo both of them but the time isn't right so hence the interruptions and oh oh geet took maans reaction the wrong way but they've got two weeks together so these difference snd the love for each other would be cleared and confessed anyways great update and can't wait to read more 😊

thanks yaar, will update soon!!!!

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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 26

Maaneet arrived @ Hawaii Airport and there was a car waiting for them.

Driver: Sir, are you going to you Hotel directly or do you wanna see some sites?

Maan: No we will go to the hotel. My wife seems to be very tired after the long trip.

Driver: Oki sir, you seems to be very caring about your wife. Ma'm, u are so lucky…

Geet felt something positive about their relationship, but still her doubt is there.

On their way to hotel Geet was quiet and Maan smells something fishy and decided to express his feeling very soon.

It was 8pm when they arrived @ the hotel. It was a very nice hotel with separate cabana's. So a newlywed couple can enjoy their Honey Moon as the way they wish.

Their Cabana was the biggest. One bedroom, a nice sitting room with a nice fire place, a dining room, a very nice bathroom and a sea faced balcony.



Bedroom



Balcony


Dining Room


Living Room


Bath Room


Geet was so memorized with the cabana and she was so attached to the romantic dining room.

Geet: Wow, i really love this place

Maan: Only the place

Geet: Tum kuch kaha?

Maan: Nahi..... go ahead

Geet: Wow Maan, this place is very romantic isn't it? For a couple who is in love, this place would be the perfect match.

Maan: So? you are saying this place isn't appropriate for us?

Geet: thinking;;; is he joking or is he out of his mind, love and Maan.. woh.. two different words.. romantic and Maan, kabhi bhi eak nahi ho saktha..

Maan: Geet? are you ok? you seems to be lost.

Geet: I lost myself long time back, but found it last night.

Maan, thinking: She seems to be upset with last night's incident, she must be thinking it's wrong. But Geet, wait for sometime, you'll not regret with you action and I am waiting for it.

Geet: Maan, you can think later, but now can we please have something to eat...

Maan: Oki, you go and change, I will go and order the dinner. OMG! it's already 10.00pm.

Geet: Do you want me to come with you?

Maan: No, you stay here and have a bath, i'll oder the food.

As soon he left,

Geet: Kados... Hey Babaji, kyun mai ease adimiko pyar kiya jisne muje pyar toh kya, abhi hate bhi nahi karte...


an hour left, Geet was waiting for Maan and their dinner..

Waiting... now it's 11.30. Geet thought she would go and have a look.

"Knock, knock" she heard it.

Geet: Oh Maan, the door is open, you can come in.. I was waiting for you and damn, i am so hungry, where have you been? why so late? what's for the dinner?

"mMMMMM"

Geet: Maan, is that you?

Man: Ma'm, i am your room boy and sir asked me to bring the dinner.

Geet: oh! sorry, i thought you are my husband. You can leave this try here. thankyou.

Man: No worries Ma'm. Oh! I forgot, Sir asked you to have your dinner as he will be late.

Geet: Late?

Man: Han, he went for something important and asked me to lett you that he will not return until 12 or 12.30

Geet: Ok, you can go now. thank you again.

As soon that Man left, Geet felt really bad.

Geet: He doesn't love me back, if he does, he will not leave me here alone. this was supposed to our honey moon, but i am not so lucky to spend my honey moon with a person who loves me back.

Why babaji, why??? why me??

Geet waited another 15 mins and thought to have her dinner.

She opened the big try and found nothing, except a white envelop with a red rose.

"Come near the sea house right @ 11.55pm, from a person who loves you a lot"

Geet was so surprised. who can this be.. @ first she thought Maan, and no, he can't be this romantic and he doesn't love her.

She was worried to go there without informing Maan. So she wrote a note,

"Maan, i am near the sea house. refer to the note with the rose : Geet"

She was about to leave when she saw another note attached to it.

"Come wearing a red sare, would love to see you like that, don't forget..."

So she wore a red sare.


The sea house was decorated with candles and it was soooooo romantic.

Geet saw another note in the table near the small hut.

"Take a seat near the hut"

So she followed the oder.

As soon she sat, lights went off and there was a dim light and it was pointing something, no actually someone.

Geet recognized the face.

Yes, it was none other than Maan, her husband, her love, her world, her everything..

She was shocked by seeing him. So he was the one who sent all those notes,

Maan and romantic, the two different words have met finally.

Maan slowly made his way towards Geet, and Geet stood their without knowing what is going to happen.


Maan took her both hands and was on his knees.

Geet was taken back with this action, she was blank..

Maan: Long time before, I saved a girl from the HP River. She had a long hair, big brown eyes, sweet thin lips, soft skin and killing smile.

I hated her, actually tried my best to hate her, but found that it was hard to hate her.

Somehow circumstances played with our destiny and we met again. She was my assistant, but every time she comes to me, I was gone blank, Maan Singh Khurana, the Man who had a very steady personality, was taken back by that Girl.


She was able to argue with him, was able to learn him how to deal with the things with Smile,

When ever she was around me, i lost my focus, my concentration.

I rejected two big projects just coz of her. I had no idea why that was happening to me.

Faith played another game, i was trying to go away from her coz i knew she was changing MSK. But i ended up with marrying her.

The girl who stole my sleep years ago finally became my wife.

I was so proud of her, proud of my wife.. But was confused.

Coz she still drives off my focus.

Finally, i've done the thing which i thought would nerve ever do, I listened to my heart.


Yes, MSK, the Maan who had no emotions, listened to his heart.

That answer shook me off, i was so shocked... Coz i thought I would never fall in love, but that girl changed everything,

Yes, I have fallen in love with that girls. Actually I loved her from the first day, but recognized it after the marriage.

Yes Geet you heard it correct.

I have fallen in love with that girl and that girl is none other than You.

He held her hands and kissed her both hands.


Yes Geet, I love you. I don't know whether you love me back or not, but i am sure my love is enough for both of us.

All this while Geet was crying with the happy. She took his hands and ask him to stand.

Before Maan could realize what is happening Geet kissed him. She kissed his forehead and said in low voice,

Thank you babiji, thank you.

Maan was so touched by her action. He also kissed her forehead.

Geet: I love you Maan, I love you............ both hugged each other very tightly and passionately.

Then the most awaited moment. Their first ever lip kiss with love.

They made it.

Maan took her lips by his. He kissed her possessively, passionately and by and by he deepened the kiss and hold her tight.

Geet was no longer able to control her, cuddled to Maan and both were kissing each other like there is no other world.



Precap: Fist night after the love confession... 😳


Guys I am really sorry fort he delay of my update. I was sooo busy with some work.

This was written in a hurry, so there will be heaps of mistakes.

Plz mind all the mistakes.

Leave a comment and hit the like button, plzz plzz

thank you,

love,

pini.




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Posted: 14 years ago
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Yayyy me first to comment
OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG
Yayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy Hurrayyyyyy
They confessedddddd
OMG It was awesome- licious part
Beautifull
just love it
how maan confesses awhhhhh
and there kiss..mar jawaaa..HOT
OMG precap..too delicious..lolz
OMG Please u better update soon
yes i am giving u a dhamki.lolz
Please
Thank u soo muchhhhh

Edited by maangeetcrazy - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
omg..supreb update.
confession was amazing.
love it.
cant wait for the nxt update.
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Posted: 14 years ago
great update👏👏
finally they confessed😊
maan's dialogues to geet were tooooo good.👏
lovely confession, loved maneet
pics that you have selected were also very niceeeeee
and the precap😳😳
thanx for the pm
Edited by mallu.crowe20 - 14 years ago

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