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Posted: 14 years ago
yiipppeee yiiipppeee....

jaldi karo.....
show bhi shuru hone wala hai....

waiting for it....

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Posted: 14 years ago
Waiting for ur next update.............😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Oh musky ,this waiting is killing yarr.. Plz help me.....
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~deewangi~
part 72

Maan yells on top of his voice - kha na bhook nahi hain
she gets really scared & looks around, luckily there weren't much people around. Maan just closed his eyes & rubbed his temple.
Maan - I am sorry & leaves from there.
He goes to the bar & picks up a bottle on his way out.

Geet changed into her night suit & arranged the dinner table. She realized he may be late. So she kept milk on the gas to make herself some hot chocolate. She cuddled up in the couch when she heard the doorbell chimed, then followed promptly by a hard knock that rattled the door. She knew instinctively who it was. Maan was leaning against the door frame, his breath of misting in the air. His eye were red in anger. She noticed the half emptied whiskey bottle he carried in his hand. He almost fell on her. She calmly guided him to the sofa.
Geet - main coffee banavoo, abhi doodh garam kiya hain
Maan - tum mujhe drink nahi offer karoghi..like trying to get me drunk, so that I will be easier to handle?
She knew he was probably bothered about girls offering him drinks in the party, she wanted to ask if he was bothered about some one in particular but she kept quiet. Instead she took his question literally
Geet - mujhe drink bana hi nahi aata, waise bhi pee ne ke baad it is hard to handle u not easy
he smirked - right..see u know... I get mean when I am drunk
she thought naughtily mean.
Maan - coffee chalighi.
He cuddled up in the couch..feeling her warmth comforting him placing the bottle on the side table. She kept watching her while she poured his coffee & milk for her. She walked in with two mugs. They took their drinks & she sat curled up in the opposite couch. They both drank their drink silently. He didn't say a word. She wondered wat was it that bothered him so much. He usually pours his heart out to her. How she wished she could momentarily tell him she was his Geet & he could tell every thing that was disturbing him but she feared telling she is Geet would only make it hard for him.
He placed the mug thud on the center table she looked at him.
Geet - aur coffee ?
He snapped - NO...thank u
it looked like he wanted to say some thing more
Geet - party ke baren main kuch baat
Maan - woh aise nahi thi
she knew he spoke about rimi, she couldn't hear about her, actually she didn't want to interfere between them, that will be wrong. She got up on her feet & immediately turned to leave. He reached out & caught her arm, swinging her around & hauling her up against his body in a single movement. He wrapped his arm around her waist. He cupped her chin & turned her face up.
He wouldn't hurt her, she knew that. She feared her attraction to him that made her uneasysh emight just give in to his very touch, she so much wanted him, but not sure how right was it, knowing he was drunk, she didn't want him to repent. She brought her hands up to press against his chest as he bent closer.
Geet - nahi..yeh teehk nahi hoga
she just turned her head aside making his lips graze her cheek. He squeezed her chin & brought her mouth back around holding her firmly. Instead of taking in her lips he let his mouth wander to her ear, where his teeth nibbled sharply, he let out a hiss almost melting with his touch. She wanted to say a no.. her mind was screaming, but her body reacted differently shuddering & wet.
She closed her eyes with a little sigh and kissed him back. She felt him tense, his lips stilling in desire. He lifted his head and she let out a little whimper of regret. Her eyes were just opening when she felt his lips return to hers, hard and demanding, his tongue flicking at the entrance to her mouth, demanding entry. With a groan, her lips parted and she returned his kiss with passion. Maan's tongue dipped into her mouth in the most erotic way she had ever known. Her protest to free out of the kiss, now left her dangling above the floor while he cupped her hips to his in a position of intimacy. She looked into his eyes. He read a clear denial in them tum mujhe nahi mana kar sakti, it almost came like a cry.
Geet - neche uttariyen na mujhe she pleaded.
He obeyed, slowly. He let her slide with excruciating slowness down the length of his body. It was so seducing she almost wanted to get back close to him. But she was determined she stepped back, away from him.
Maan - kal raat tho tumhe mujhe se koi problem nahi thi ?
she didn't know wat to say.
He smiled sitting on the couch back & took a drink from the bottle.
Geet - yeh kya kar rahen ho? bahut hogaya
Maan - hone do..mujhe hosh main rahena raaz nahi aata
she softly caressed his forehead - why do u want to get drunk..chodiyen isse
he drank again stretching his leg on the couch.
She was so worried to see him like this she almost cried why do u want to get drunk she asked again
Maan - yeh dil hain na mujhe bahut pareshan karta hain
he drank again. She came close to his heart & placed a soft peck.
He snapped pulling her hair & lifting her head away from him - tum bhi badal javoghi.
He closed his eyes & dropped his head backward on the couch - jaise woh badal gayen
a tear fell from her eyes. He continued - yeh sab iss dil ki galti hain. His hand let her hair & went to hit his chest. She held his hand & kissed it. Kyun badali woh..kya kami thi mera pyar main. ??? Ki main hi badal gaya!! shayad main hi badal gaya. She softly said - aap tho nahi badlen her heart knew that..he didn't change a bit
he snapped again - yeh dil bhi yanhi kahta hain.
Geet - woh aapse pyar nahi karti?
Maan - karti hain ..sab kahten hain
she didn't quiet understand
Maan - lekin. he paused momentarily..main badal gaya hoon shayad... he repeated himself..
she cupped his face - phir kya baad hain, she was so helpless
Maan - woh waise nahi hain thi... woh chali gayen hain...pata nahi kanha..kyun...kyun!!
He hugged her tightly.. . Kyun kyun mujhe koi pyar nahi karpata. Kyun mujhe chod kar chalen jaten hainsab. Pehle mama, phir papaji..(geets heart sunk..with the thought how much he loved her papaji) aur aab woh bhi ..tum bhi chali javogi..tum bhi chali javogi..tum bhi chali javogi..sab ki tarah
Geet - nahi main kanhi javongi
Maan - nahi javogi to badal javogi...jaise woh badal gayen badal gayen badal gayen
Geet - main aapko chod kar kanhi nahi jaa sakti
Maan - mera dil bhi yanhi chahta hain.. he pulled her closer & into his chest
she for once knew wat he really wanted for sure now. She had no clue wat was it between him & rimi.
She knew he wanted her in his life. She couldn't never leave him & not let him leave her. She had to be by his side, she couldn't see him like this breaking down. She would kill that Rimi with her bear hands to have hurt him like this. She could see he was totally high now. She eased him back to the couch. She knelt down & began to remove his shoes & loosened his belt. Kya kar rahi ho he mumbled. She softly relaxed him caressing his cheeks. His eyelids drooping even more. A faint smile quirked his lips. Tum humesha aise hi rahena. Then his eyes closed & sighed peacefully. She was contended to see the him happy smiling. She kissed his forehead & turned to leave. He held her & brought her closer agar main tumhe jane ko kanho tho bhi mat jana she hugged him & cuddled up next to him on the couch nahi javongi
he put his leg over her & his hand round her waist - agar main gussa karon tho bhi nahi
Geet - umm
his voice trailed of mumbling..agar main kanhon tho bhi nahi...tho bhi nahi...
PRECAP
Maan really angry..uff
~PREV
PART 71 NEXT PART 73~
Thanks guys for all ur love & support...
hope u like this update as well
Please please do comment
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muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 tumhe mere Maan se kya dushmani hai
kyo use sataa rahi ho
Muskan
please
my heart is weeping
my eyes are feeling heavy with pain
and this spliting head ache after reading your update
is killing me😭
it is a sin to write so well😭
Edited by smj1977 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
completly forgot about this… lovely update
xxx
Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
aww... the poor baby....🥺... kab muskaan kab.... when will he get to know, that darling!
Edited by ninand - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh god it was awesomeeeeeeeeeeeee
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Posted: 14 years ago

the last part of the update was really sweet..........loved it!!!!

y u r making maan to under go this much pain????

make everything fine soon.........can't see him in pain any more!!!

it is killing his soul nd it will end up killing nd cursing himself!!!!

wonderful update!!!!

geet was so cute nd understanding!!!

wish her wish come true soon...............killing that rimi(creature in maan's word)

loved the part!!!

Edited by dia_ditz - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
rr
Luvly update...luved geet's decision to stay beside him wht so ever happens n her urges to kill rimi...ahh...very much ma thoughtss...😆😆😉....n the precap..😕...ye maan vi na....but he had taken all the precautions beforehand by telling her not to leave him even if he gets angry...😉..continue soon..!!

Rohini

Edited by Rohini20 - 14 years ago

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