~deewangi~ maaneet ff THREAD 8 PT 70 PG 142 27FEB - Page 76

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Posted: 14 years ago
please jaldi karo naa............🤗
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~deewangi~
part 69

He lifted her in air crushing to his body. kissing her every where he could. Her wet hair, the scent that swirled in the air, of her shampoo was seducing him. He could smell her scent and his eyes would glint, then as if she sensed some kind of change in him something differently wanting her, longing for her.
She would say something again, and a sense of calm would settle over him, as her voice would drown out the sound of her heartbeat. And the hunger for her, to want her would intensify.
He gave a soft growl of frustration as he heard the door bell rang. He placed one desperate kiss on her shoulder & went to open the door. He closed the rooms door, no way could he let anyone see his meet like this. No one..not even maid. Strangely he thought. He didn't mind that creature wearing wat ever...may be nude..too walk on the ramp..but meet..she was his..only his.. no one. It was the maintenance guy to fix the wall paint.
Geet locked the rooms door & changed into her suit. She came out to see the guy scrapping the paint. She frowned - yeh kya kar rahe ho
guy - just evening the wall, we will paint it after sir leaves
Geet was getting angrier & she stared at Maan who was confused why she was getting so angry at the maintenance guy.. after all he was just doing it up
Geet - yeh mera ghar hain I will do it
guy - lekin sir ne
Maan immediately came held her like she may just pounce at the guy - mam ne kaha na, woh karengi to bus wohi karengi
guy - ji sir
he didn't understand just left the place.
After the guy left..maan crossed his hand over his chest (like another heart & mind fight.. this girl may be behind his money..but off course heart won't listen) - umm.. tumhara ghar
she gulped her saliva, knotting her duppata & made a cornered face - aab main yanha rahti hoon tho yah mera ghar huwa na
he couldn't do much but to node. Somewhere in deep in his heart he wanted her to do it like always.
Maan - teehk hain teehk hain. Breakfast kar lo
Geet - kya banaya?
Maan - main tumhara servant hoon
Geet - aap meri liya breakfast bhi nahi bana sakte & turned her face like a baby
oh god she had the wand in her hand to make him do wat ever she wants - teehk teehk hain bana raha hoon. Aapna moo mat pholavo.
He went to the kitchen & put the bread on the toaster wondering wat was he doing, she came behind giggling & watched him closely. He chopped the onions & chillies & added to the beaten egg. Mujhe ek chilli aur lage gi. He rolled his eyes & added on more. She looked around coriander nahi hain. He barked nahi hain.
Geet - kaise cooking karten ho coriander nahi hain
he threw the knife - khud hi kar lo
she pulled his cheek - teehk hain na I will manage without coriander today, shamm ko office se atten shopping kar lengen.
Maan - aur kuch?
He noticed she was busy scribbling something on a notepad.
Geet - I am making a list, suno
Maan - umm
Geet - mujhe chuti chahiyen
he was getting angry at the liberties she was taking
Geet - mujhe ghar paint karna hain
Maan - sunday karlena
Geet - ek din main paint nahi hota
Maan - pata hain mujhe, tumhe tho 2 months lagen the..then he immediately changed the topic I mean tumhe office join karen 2months nahi huwen & you want holiday
she knew wat he meant first. But she pretended not to hear it - phir help karogen na
he turned to look at her.. he didn't know wat he was thinking was right or was it just his imagination he couldn't even voice his feelings he wanted to hear it again - umm?
She knew he understood it, she cleared her throat - help karoge na shopping main.
He murmured shopping my foot. Maan Singh Khurana & shopping no ways. But all he could tell her was umm
she knew wat he was thinking - humara ghar hain na
he was loving that humara there
Geet - tho hume shopping karni hain, aapko saath chalna hi padega
waise bhi he won't have left her a minute away from his sight he thought. He gave her the toast & omelet. He made coffee for himself & milk for her. They finished their breakfast actually landed up Maan feeding her.. poor Geet & get burned finger.
As they walked in the office. The whole staff was confused seeing her back & with him now. He shot a stern look to every one - is there any problem?
Every one looked back into there files.
Geet went into her cabin, he pulled her back holding her wrist took her to his cabin.
Geet - yeh kya karen rahen hain aap?
Maan - tum meri personal associate ho
she nodded
Maan - so u will stay with me
as if she minded. She dipped her down & blushed. It was her dream, her dream to be with him, the whole day, house, office, every where. She almost had a tear formed with happiness. He immediately squeezed her cheek & pulled her closer - u don't want to be here
she shivered & melted instantly, his harshness was just driving her crazy. Her cheeks turned pinker. She shook her head still looking down, wanting to stop her gaze to meet his, she knew he may just melt into her eyes so will she.
Maan - phir assoon kyun
Geet - khushi kye, it was my dream
I know that he so much wanted to say that
she corrected herself - it was my dream to work in a big company, kal aapne job se inkal tho..she couldn't complete the lie..he didn't want to hear that either..both knew it was a lie
he coldly said - I am not interested in ur ram khata
she twisted her lips
NOW DEEWANGI WILL PROCEED IN A SLOWER PACE.. MEANS NO MORE LEAPS..SO MAAN IS 27 & GEET IS 22..THEY ARE MARRIED FOR 11YRS..LEGALLY 4YRS
PRECAP
shopping..bechara dil ke haat majboor..
now Maan Singh Khurnan..shopping
~PREV PART 68 NEXT PART 70~
Thanks guys for all ur love & support...
hope u like this update as well
Please please do comment
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
yay yay yay yay yay
i m dancing and jumping around that i m the first one
i
m on cloud 10000


Intehan ho gaye intezar ki ,
ayi na kuch khabar mere yaar ki,
yeh hame hai yakeen,
bewafa woh nahi,
phir wajah kya hui intezar ji...........................



the update was worth reading
muah muah
and d images u used are awesome
Edited by 20tullip2000 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

chaloooooooo fist na sahi.............. second he sahi...............

lovely update. thanks muski
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Posted: 14 years ago
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😕😕....🤣.....maan is truly blind in love....muski di...me jus can't understand one thing...though i very much luv the present track...but wht abt rimi...n atleast wht abt dadi..??Does she not care for maan....it is strange tht she is not at all cared abt himn doesn't enquire abt his whereabts n rano.....but i luv the way how the two luv birds unite thru their hearts n souls...such a deewangi...god made...luv it..absolutely...n the precap...😆😉....ofcourse MSK will do shopping...hamari pari geet jo hei...he can't escape from her..😆😳...continue soon..!!

Rohini


Edited by Rohini20 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Tishna Tishna update ............................. Muski wanted more yaar .

lovely track moving with a slow and lovable pace
.👏

Continue soon ❤️
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow awesome muskaan..... geet taking her liberties.. a perfect wife....

excited for next update.. maan singh khurana.. on shopping!! wow awesome...

but i want geet to know what maan's problem is!!!!


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Posted: 14 years ago
😍❤️.... Muskaan u better give us a couple of double-updates... surviving this awesomeness at the current rate would be impossible.. 😳



oh.. and thank you soo soo much for -- NO MORE LEAPS... one more of those and I would have myself cut my heart out and mailed it to you to trample it with nailed boots..

dying with happiness seeing Maan being loved and cared for, while hes being his usual possessive self with her, unable to do anything except what she wants... love love love the way Geet so genuinely bosses him around neva hesitating ot holding back😳... yay!

waiting for the day Maan finally gets to know the truth and so does geet...


Edited by ninand - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesum update muskaan.....truly magical was gr8 too...uff...am luving the current track......luv u mmmuuuaaahhhh❤️
Edited by kawaii_geet - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Lovely update..👏

Pls update khamoshi na..

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