My Only Mistake! I'm A FEMALE (MG) #1

Pickachu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#381

Loveeeee the part!!!

Interesting!!

Continue soonnn.

Thanxx for the pm.

Fatima

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kajal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#382

well we don't know what is geet upto it is known by u only and surely geet will not abort the child

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kooliio

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Posted: 14 years ago

#383

Awesome update...!!!

Maan doesnt wanna get married to geet...!!!

Then what does he want?? what is he upto??

Cant wait for the next part...!!!

Pls cont.soon and thanks for the PM

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Shruti Jain

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Posted: 14 years ago

#384

Part 10

Maan warned Mohinder to keep quite and co-operate else he will have to pay for it, scared man agreed with him

Same did DM she too warned the family accompanying her.

Once they reached the temple premises DM called for Geet and gave her a camcorder of the size of a pendent and let her wear it in her chain, she fixed the transmitter in her hair clip.

She then asked Darjee that can Geet accompany Maan for a walk till they talk about the proposal,

Tayji said why not before Brij could utter a word and Mohinder called for Geet;

Darjee and Brij had to keep quite though they were cursing them in their minds.

Geet left with Maan, both walked slowly until they were out of sight, once on the road,

he pulled her and ran towards the car waiting in near by, in the car their was a receiver and a video screen catching signal from the equipments she was wearing;

she was stunned to see all this, he saw her confusion and elaborated her that they are planning to record the conversation between her and NT,

she was dumbfound with all this, she never dreamt that someone will help her like this, lest she knew why Maan was doing so, he was feeling guilty for what his bro did to her and wanted to at least help her get justice.

After 15 min, two police officer along with a lady cop, joined them;

M: Geet when is she coming?

G: at 10:30 am

M: ok now we will drop you at a walking distance from that place, make sure that your pendant is not hidden, and don't get nervous, and trust me I'll be there with in reach, these officers will be in the car keeping an eye and I will carry one more receiver so that I may hear you two, and don't panic I'll be just behind the nearest tree

G: ok, and thank you

M: don't thank me, I have my own reasons to help you, I will tell you, but remember you promised not to believe anyone about me I will tell you every thing, you trust me na

G: yes, I trust you and I remember my promise

They dropped Geet and Maan followed her,

While moving towards the destined place she gets flashes of Dev telling everyone she's the type of girl he wants, the rose scene and Dev saying 'I love you', when they first talk, and Dev tells her 'ever since I saw you, I've been dreaming of making you my wife..'; and then running looking for Dev at the airport, Brij slapping her, she holding a piece of hot coal in her hand, Brij telling her to take her mangalsutra and sindoor off - and then her wiping it off; she telling her dad that Dev killed that Geet she once was..

She also gets flashbacks of Maan saving her in the water; stopping the car from running into the water; driving off with her in the jeep which saves her from Brij; picking her up after she had fainted in her plot; Maan telling her she needs to stand up for herself; telling her that in order to use her brain, she needs to stop crying..

After 5 mins Maan saw NT coming towards Geet,

he warned her: Geet she is coming, Geet came out of her thoughts

G: NT Bhabhi, Dev has not come

NT: I am not your Bhabhi

G: pardon

NT: I am not Dev's Bhabhi, I am his, my relationship with him is bound by marriage, I ma his wife

G: what? (Shocked) but how is it possible, Dev, Dev married me

NT: you are right, but I am already married to him, I Naintara Rathod the daughter of a royal family, am a wife of Dev Khurana.

G: this can't be true, how is it possible? I am pregnant and you are saying, moreover you came with him with the proposal

NT (she changed her tone and spoke as if pleading): I had no other option but to agree with him, he gave me a harsh beating, what can a woman do but to agree with her husband, you know how being a female in itself is a crime, what would I have done? See today also he sends me to you, and has warned me that I should see to it that you have an abortion

G: no, this can't be true

NT: why would I lie? Look these are the papers I have filled in everything, you only have to sign the papers and go to this hospital they will do the rest

G: what are these papers for?

NT: they are your abortion papers

G: no, I will not go by your words, I will first meet Dev, and then I'll decide further

NT: look Geet your marriage is illegal; I am his first and legal wife, so this automatically dissolves your marriage, and as far as I am concerned Dev will never leave me as I belong to a royal family, now just come with me I will assure every thing will be al right

G: no, I will not come with you

NT: how dare you say no to Naintara Rathod, you don't know me, you have to come with me (she drags Geet)

G (shouts): Maaa..aaaann

NT (let go her hand): whom did you call?

G: its none of your concern, you B***, woman like you are a bad omen, you allowed your husband to remarry just for money, now look what I have to face

NT: I only asked him to marry you not to sleep with you, you S***,

G: hold your tongue, you are S***, selling your husband for money

NT (becomes very angry, pushes Geet, pulls her wrist): you silly village girl, you are calling me names

She raises her hand to slap Geet and just then some one holds her hand

She turns to see the holding her and gets a shock of her life

{note: you can watch ep#36 of GHSP on star player, I have modified the conversation between the two women, to get a full idea on how Geet felt you must watch it, Drashti Dhami potrayed the pain of the 18 yr pregnant girl very nicely}

if you can I will appreciate if you answer some of th equestions below, it might help me...

who held NT's hand?

now that Geet knows the truth abut NT and Dev, what will she do?

now that the police also knows the truth, will Maan send NT to jail?

how much is Dev involved in this planning?

is NT speaking the full truth?

will NT tell Geet how Maan knows her?

will Geet still trust Maan?

will Maan be able to tell Geet the truth?

what will happen to Geet later?

will she abort her child?

pls post your comments you know you all are my motivations

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part 11 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1606573/my-only-mistake-im-a-female-mg-1?pn=72

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Cutee999

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Posted: 14 years ago

#385

nice update dear....
loved it...
the person who held NT's hand is Maan for sure....
continue soon.

Edited by cutee987 - 14 years ago

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Audiwalia

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Posted: 14 years ago

#386

Okay i don't know weather geet believe maan or not but i m sure she will keep d baby....... Coz its main essence of GHSP...... Its d main reason dat i begain to stick wid GHSP...... D way she acted at dat tym i can't forget..... Nd u r writting ur own version of GHSP...... So i m sure u won't let her abort d baby.....lol..

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ammu5

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Posted: 14 years ago

#387

very good plan by maan n dadi

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MystiqueDew

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Posted: 14 years ago

#388

loved it.........wonderful plan!!!!!

MY POV

who held NT's hand? may be dadi or maan
now that Geet knows the truth abut NT and Dev, what will she do?course she needs to move ahead,so she m8 con her studies nd f8 to get justice
now that the police also knows the truth, will Maan send NT to jail?course he will!!!
how much is Dev involved in this planning?not by himself,but due to threats
is NT speaking the full truth?yes/no
will NT tell Geet how Maan knows her?no,i don't thk she will be able to open her mouth after seeing him der
will Geet still trust Maan?Definitely
will Maan be able to tell Geet the truth?he will for sure!!!
what will happen to Geet later?same as d 2nd ans she will become bold nd will decide nd lead her life my herself
will she abort her child?Definitely NO!!!!!

its my POv,don't knw whether its to ur idea or not!!!!

gr8 update!!!

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Shruti Jain

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Posted: 14 years ago

#389

Originally posted by: dia_ditz

loved it.........wonderful plan!!!!!

MY POV

who held NT's hand? may be dadi or maan
now that Geet knows the truth abut NT and Dev, what will she do?course she needs to move ahead,so she m8 con her studies nd f8 to get justice
now that the police also knows the truth, will Maan send NT to jail?course he will!!!
how much is Dev involved in this planning?not by himself,but due to threats
is NT speaking the full truth?yes/no
will NT tell Geet how Maan knows her?no,i don't thk she will be able to open her mouth after seeing him der
will Geet still trust Maan?Definitely
will Maan be able to tell Geet the truth?he will for sure!!!
what will happen to Geet later?same as d 2nd ans she will become bold nd will decide nd lead her life my herself
will she abort her child?Definitely NO!!!!!

its my POv,don't knw whether its to ur idea or not!!!!

gr8 update!!!

thank you

your POV is great

I hope that originally the CV's would have cinsidered these questions

I put on questions in the end as I know that when people were watching the serial they had similar quetions in their minds, I just want to know if you all also thought so

if you have not seen you should see that ep#36 it was realy very touching, I felt Geet's pain

thank you once again

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KrishnaSourav

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Posted: 14 years ago

#390

brilliant update. loved it.
rocking part.
loved nt- geet confrontation.
now y r u stopping here?
I'm more curious now.
update soon.

who held NT's hand?
ans:- I guess maan ,or dadi ma.
70%chance maan.

now that Geet knows the truth abut NT and Dev, what will she do?
ans:-hmmm tough question. I guess she will stay strong in her decision.

now that the police also knows the truth, will Maan send NT to jail?
ans:-yes of course

how much is Dev involved in this planning?
ans;- I guess nothing, actually to meet geet now and this abortion plan , all r nt's plan.

is NT speaking the full truth?
ans:- no no. kuch sach, kuch juth,sach she is wife of dev, and baki sab juth, sab usska plan hain.

will NT tell Geet how Maan knows her?
ans:-may be, it's her last attempt to save herself from police

will Geet still trust Maan?
ans:-50-50. in this circumstances, any one can lost trust.

will Maan be able to tell Geet the truth?
ans:-Yes but not so soon, later he will tell every truth to her.

what will happen to Geet later?
ans:- hmm, more problme in her life, her family member will go against her.

will she abort her child?
ans:- no.

nice question. replied in red.
give me marks😛😉

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