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Posted: 14 years ago
PREVIEW FOR PART 30

MAAN AND GEET GOT CLOSE, WONDERFUL MOMENTS BETWEEN THEM.

MAAN GOT INJURED.

GEET TOLD HIM ABOUT HER WEDDING NEWS.

COMING UP IN TWO DAYS!

Many people have asked me that Sameer will remain positive or not. answer is YES.

Sameer will be positive in my story.
Edited by Asha2010 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
close moments between maneet ???
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Posted: 14 years ago
u have an amazing way of keeping us lingering here in this thread........ 👏👏👏nice way of keeping up d spirit of enthusiasm in us....... 👍🏼👍🏼giving us d precap is a gud idea....... 😊😊 i jus wanna noe who d hell is dis AMAN??😲😲 is maan suffering wid split personalitty?? lol😆😆😆OMG wat maan's gonna say to geet.?? 😳😳😳 is he going to put forth his felings for geet!!!!! hey babaji plzz kaash ....aisa kuch hojay.....
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow the preview is awesome but geet n sameer wedding n maan injured oh god
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh no y r u hurting maan like this..................cant see him going thro the pain when he sees geet getting married to sameer..................
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved ur ff....plzz add me to the pm....
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Posted: 14 years ago
sejal you are killing us with promos dear.....please update soon........
i am so so so interested in seeing how you r gng to twist the story to stop geet and sameer's marriage😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi😊

i read ur ff regulrly.......

i m writing a ff on maan n geet.....can u plz read it n tell m whether u lyk it or not......and if i should continue?????😊

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1617388/heartless-pg-45-part-8

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Posted: 14 years ago
Hello friends, I am ready with my part 30, please don't yell at me after reading this, I know it is hard to watch Maan in pain but this is what I have in my store for him right now. I am going for a mini vacation so my next part will be posted after a week, please understand. Please post some good comments as I tried my level best to describe feelings of all characters.

Part 30

"Geet, please don't ask the reason or any question and please just listen to my one request."Maan said.

"Maan, tell me now, don't be so formal."Geet said.

Maan took few steps towards Geet and he took her hand in his hand and asked "Would you like to dance with me?"

"Geet, oh you just want to dance, ok, I have no problem, but I have never seen Maan Singh Khurana like that, what's wrong with you Maan."Geet said.

"Geet, I told you, you won't ask me any reason or anything."Maan said.

"Ok Maan but there is no music."Geet said.

Maan took his phone out and played one romantic song which he had specially selected for this occasion.

Maan took her one hand in his hand and put her other hand on his shoulder.

They started ballroom dancing. Music was playing in background from his phone.

Like A Dream You Can't Explain Love Can Chase A Beating Of Your Heart
Like The Sunshining In The Rain Love Can Make Your Whole World Fall Apart

All I Wanted Now
I Just Wanna Spend My Life With You
Time Will Show Me How
Suddenly Everything Has Turned Me Inside Out
Suddenly Love Is The Thing That I Can't Live Without

You Are My Dream My Love My Life
I Just Wanna Spend My Life With You
You Are The One That Makes Me Smile
I Just Wanna Spend My Life With You

God I Love Somehow... I Just Wanna Spend My Life With You
You Can Show Me How

Suddenly Everything Has Turned Me Inside Out
Suddenly Love Is The Thing That I Can't Live Without

You Are My Dream My Love My Life
I Just Wanna Spend My Life With You
You Are The One That Makes Me Smile
I Just Wanna Spend My Life With You

What Have You Done To Me?
Is This How Its Meant To Be
Can't Control This Feeling In My Heart
I Can See Better Days Glowing Inside Your Eyes
And I Know You Feel It In Your Heart

All I Wanted Now
I Just Wanna Spend My Life With You
Time Will Show Me How
Suddenly Everything Has Turned Me Inside Out
Suddenly Loves The Thing That I Can't Live Without

You Are My Dream My Love My Life
I Just Wanna Spend My Life With You
You Are The One That Makes Me Smile
I Just Wanna Spend My Life With You

Love Is A Crazy Thing
Its Like When You Wanna Sing
And The Words Are Deep Inside Your Soul
When Somebody Comes Along Together You Sing A Song
You Just Let The Music Take Control

And I Wanted Now
I Just Wanna Spend My Life With You
Time Will Show Me How
Suddenly Everything Has Turned Me Inside Out
Turned Me Inside Out
Suddenly Loves The Thing That I Can't Live Without

You Are My Dream My Love My Life
I Just Wanna Spend My Life With You
You Are The One That Makes Me Smile
I Just Wanna Spend My Life With You

Song: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ihMcRwqjrwI

While dancing, his eyes drawn to her perfect loveliness, he looked at her, and every other breath strained to force its way from his chest. He felt the destined love, a karmic connection between souls that were fated to meet and collide. She seemed to project aura that was attractive and inviolable at the same time. Geet was rolling her eyes from his eyes to room or somewhere to avoid his intense gaze. Geet felt little uncomfortable and she was surprised by Maan's behavior. Maan was never like this and Maan wouldn't do such kind of things. She sensed something wrong with him, his eyes were trying to tell her something, something fishy but what, and she couldn't guess it.

He was not the same Maan she knew.

His look was so intense that he could kill her from his violent eyes, she couldn't move out of fear. His emotions were clear on his face, he looked stubborn about something, he wanted to achieve something which he didn't have, but what?

Both were enjoying dancing, Geet was taking it casually as he was his childhood friend. Some beautiful memories brought into their mind. Once Geet wanted to learn dancing and she forcefully asked Maan to practice with her when they were in seventh grade and Maan was not interested in it, but she threatened him like a teacher, she used to help him with his homework so she threatened him not to help him hence he said yes. While practicing Maan fell down as dancing was the last thing in his list, and both started laughing as this incident ran into their mind at the same time like a flash light. Geet didn't come out of this confusion yet, as she never thought that Maan could ever dance. But she didn't know that Maan had learned dancing only for her.

He came very close to her, she got embarrassed. She didn't see this coming; he was staring at her face acutely. He froze there and his hands reached to her lips, he started caressing her lips. For a second, Geet was in shock, she didn't know what to do, her senses stopped working, her eyes were closed like she was enjoying the moment but the fact was different. She wasn't sure about her reaction. Few seconds were passed, and then she stopped Maan's fingers right there and she moved away from him. Maan was so lost in the moment that he didn't realize what he did. He had goose bumps. He was embarrassed by his own very actions. Geet was silent as she wasn't able to form a sentence. She was apprehensive.

Maan was trembling. Maan gathered courage and said "Geet, I am really sorry, I am not sure you can forgive me as I can't forgive myself, but I am really sorry, and I mean it."

He walked towards the door but Geet stopped him.

Geet was so happy today by hearing her wedding news and Maan was the only person from her town so she wanted to cherish this news with him, she knew that Maan was a good person from heart so she was ready to forgive him.

"Maan, wait, I know you from childhood and I know that you are a good person, I forgive you."Geet said.

"What, Geet, say it again, you really forgive me."Maan said enthusiastically.

"Yes Maan, I forgive you and I mean it."Geet said.

Maan was happy, like flowers bloomed in his heart.

"Thanks Geet, I can't explain how happy I am by hearing forgiveness from you."Maan said.

"Maan, it is ok, now I want to tell you something, first let's have some water."Geet said while giving him a glass full of water. She noticed that he could be thirsty from his sweaty face.

Maan was excited to hear. He took a sip of water.

"Maan, I am getting married in a week."Geet said.

Maan was in shock with horror in his eyes like someone had stabbed him.

He clenched his fist inadvertently and the glass got broken, blood was everywhere, but he didn't feel the pain as his heart pain was much more than this pain. He lost the value of his life, he wanted to beseech God to take his life and give his remaining life to Geet, take his each breath and give it to Geet so that she could have much longer life than any other people so that he would get a chance to make his life useful for her at least that this way he could become part of her someway.

"Why did you give me birth on this earth, if you want to snatch away my happiness, God? Why? What do I do with this loveless life? Or rather there is no life without her. What do I do with this body which doesn't have any soul? My soul is with her. I have never come to you and I have never prayed you, but today I want to pray you for her, God, I will spend my this life with her memories probably if I can still be alive, but promise me that she will be mine for the rest of reincarnations, promise me."Maan silently wished to God.

Agar Mile Khuda To
Poochhoonga Khudaya
Jism Mujhe Deke Mitti Ka
Sheeshay Sa Dil Kyon Banaya
Aur Us Pe Diya Fitrat
Ke Woh Karta Hai Mohabbat
Wah Re Wah Teri Kudrat
Wah Re Wah Teri Kudrat Us Pe De Diya Kismat
Kabhi Hai Milan Kabhi Furqat
Kabhi Hai Milan Kabhi Furqat Hai Yehi Kya Vo Mohabbat
Wah Re Wah Teri Kudrat
Sisak Sisakke Is Dil Se Aah Nikalti Rahi Hai
Mujhko Saza Di Pyaar Ki Aisa Kya Gunaah Kiya
To Lut Gaye Haan Lut Gaye
To Lut Gaye Hum Teri Mohabbat Mein

Meanwhile Geet ran towards the kitchen to get the first aid kit for Maan, Maan was still in shock, but Geet thought he must be feeling pain because of his broken palm. She took antiseptic wipes in her hand to rub on his palm, after rubbing; she took bandages and wrapped it on his palm.

Maan woke up from his shock but his body was still numb, his eyes rolled towards her innocent eyes and he remembered what happened with him. He instantly organized himself and decided to wish her for her happiness.

"Geet, congratulations, it is great news."Maan said.

"Thanks Maan, you take care of your hand and take some rest."Geet said.

Maan left.

Edited by Asha2010 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
yaaaaaaaaa me first
i feel soooooooooo bad for maan n god what has happened to him he is just loosing himself
Edited by hinalshah - 14 years ago

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