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Posted: 14 years ago
Finally u r bc wit update!
Waitingggggg..............
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loved all update
waiting for next one
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Posted: 14 years ago
wil it take much time for the next update???
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***PARADOX***
Concept 1
part 28



Maan- HOW DARE YOU? He still went over his dad to punch him... But Arjun pushes him against the wall...
Arjun- CALM DOWN MAAN! CALM DOWN! He shouts!
Maan give his dad a angry glare... But after while he calms down.
Sams dad was he'll scared to bring out geets name again. But the question he asked was true....
Geets dad- Brij will merry sam. He will look after her for his entire life. He spoke out. He was silent all along. Shocked to see all this have happened and he had no clue. No clue about Anything!
Brij looks at everyone in sudden shock. He can't merry her. He doesn't love her.
Brij- NO! NO! No. He shouts out. I am not marrying her! No dad! You can't do this to me! You can't! I can never be come a father! I could never possibly do that dad! Please don't! I don't love her.
Everyone looked at him with a shocking expression. & most was sam. Her heart skipped several beats! She felt like her world was about to stop... She slowly walked towards him and slapped him tight.
Sam- I am rejecting you b****. I Am REJECTING YOU. She cried. Louder & louder. She fell on the floor on her knee. She wanted to die. She wanted to die.... She ran in to there kitchen and locked the door. She done this so quickly everyone was shocked. She looked round madly for a match & oil. She wanted to burn her self. Avantika, Rano along with sams mother ran to open the door... It was tightly locked. Maan shouted from the window along with others... Not to do this. Geet & shila ran out hearing all the hussel. She found maan trying to open the door along with Brij by force. Geet was shaking now. Something bad was about to happen in there life. Something... Then geets eyes widens at what Sammera doing. Putting oil round her body.
Geet Screams- DI! DI! Maan looked at her instantly. Then he peeped through the windows hurriedly... He banged the door harder.
Geet was crying her eyes out seeing everyone... Maan shouted at his mother- TAKE GEET WAY MUM! TAKE HER WAY! Avantika looks at the stair where shila and Geet were holding one another sobbing. She ran towards them and took them in to the library.

Maan and Brij managed to break the door. She was about to lit the fire when maan stopped her on time... Sam scrims in pain- please let me go. Please. I want to die! Let me die. She cried. Maan holds her in his embrace. He couldn't believe what just happened. He couldn't believe what his geet just experienced. He him self was shaken with all this incident! Everything went out of control & beyond. Out of maans reach.
Sam fainted in his arm......

Late evening...
Maan walks in geets room. She had a high fever.
Maan- how could I forget your immune system is too week! He smiles sadly and sits next to her. Holding her hand. Gently kissing the back. She experienced too much today. First that unwanted kiss now this. Thousand question is probably going through her mind but it's best not to answer now. It's best to leave it be for now. He changes the wet cloth on her forehead. She moans. Her fever was high. Very high. She slowly opens her eyes... Happy to see maan there. She smiles gently then falls back to sleep again.
Avantika knocked for maan to come out. He does.
Maan- yes mom?
Avantika- how is she?
Maan- really high fever. How is shila?
Avantika- she is perfectly fine. But it seems like something more effected Geet. Maan nodes..... Perfectly knowing what... He looks down in guilt...
Maan- are you staying here for the night?
Avantika- yes. Rano have broken down completely. She really needs us here.
Maan- i will stay with Geet.
Avantika smiles and leaves.
Maan walks back in again. Sat by her. Holding her hand tight. Promising him self never to kiss her like that again. Not at least she is mature enough! He feel sleep next to geet!

Sammera was In bed rest. She have refuged to merry Brij completely.

Next morning...


Geet woke up found maan next to her. She hugs him tight. She still felt little Ill.... But slept on maans chest peacefully.

Rano & Avantika walked in sams room. Rano have decided she will stay with them from now on... But she didn't want to.... Specially knowing Brij! They probably will ending up spending night after night... So avantika decided to her to the khurana mansion. She simply agreed. She didn't want to take control of her life anymore. She left it to the elders. Her life is ruined. She have destroyed her self.... It's only a body now. Without a soul.

Another day have passed. Maan dropped Geet to her school. Giving her kiss to her forehead. He was worried. She haven't asked anything about sam at all. Even shila. He was worried about both.

Maan walks in to the khurana mansion. Sam sat in the living room. She started to were slware kamiz. Maan ignores and walks towards his room.
Avantika- maan!
Maan turns round- yes mom?
Avntika- sam will be staying with us from now on!
Maan- yea! Whatever!
Avantika- could you go and talk to her al-teast. She have been sitting on the sofa & crying since morning. You know her. She might talk to you.
Maan- I don't have time + top of it Geet is not reacting! Even shila! I am going to call the philologist!
Avantika- yes do that but at-least talk to her. She might feel nice... Maan roles his eyes and walks in to the living room. Sammera was sitting there hugging her knee. Starring at nothing. Endlessly.
Maan coughs to break the silent! But she was still lost. He coughs again. Sam jumps and stood up instantly. Shocked.
Maan- are you alright? Mum told me you haven't eaten anything! Are you hungry?
Sam smiles faintly- thanks maan. No.
Maan- alright. Think this as your home. At 3 all the children will be back. So... You will have someone to entertain you. He smiles. Just enjoy.
Sam smiles- I think I killed that emotion with my own hand.
Maan- well you still have your whole life. Learn to enjoy! It will help you alot.
Sam smiles. Maan leaves...

At 3 maan gets ready to pick both Geet & shila up. He made a appointment with the physiologist.

The whole day maan spend with Geet. He dropped shila home later on and took geet out. She was lost. Maan parked the car somewhere ad she crawled in maans arm. Sleeping... While maan stroked her hair. He felt so safe with her in his arm. She was still in shock. To many thing happened. Psychologist strongly advised her to stay way from all this! The atmosphere. She needs a different surrounding. Maan was worried sick! Somewhere it was him as well... He done something that he shouldn't have. He shouldn't have!!!!!!!!



next- kiss me☺️😲



hay you… i ahve no clue where you all gt the idea of Maan & sam marriage. LOL🤣

sorry to pop the bubble.. but NO BIG BIG BIG NO. why should maan pay for sams mistake??????????

anyway he is more worried about geet at the mom… he have no time to play game…😃

THANKS MILLIONS for all those lovely long coments. hope this update is good… heheh THE KISS me.. i will see you 2moro☺️


clarification- this is the page 17 notes… :D pls do press the LIKE BUTTON.. & the comments :D

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hay you all… just loved all the comments thank-you so much…

mostly all of you have dobut about sam & maans marriage… can't say much about that but everything will be clear in next update…
now comes the Q… about THE KISS… :D the special one and only kiss which turned out wrong in many way … lol

well firstly geet is 15… mature enough t take the kiss…. but of course there was more then just a kiss… he was getting more physically active at the same time. this shaken her a bit. remember there are difference between seeing it & experience the real thing…. obviously geet wasn't ready for the other stuff but she mentally prepared her self for his kiss…..
its the other thing that effected her… like when he was really trying to break the barrier but stopped when felt geets uncomfortable leg….. then he didn't stop the kiss at all… & top of it increased the purser which left her breathless…. thats a another new exp… lol… i hope she will be mature enough to handle shock after shock from maan… near at the future… and of course the adult maans physical demands from her...☺️

heheh thats all… see you all later with update…
xxx





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Posted: 14 years ago
,thnks a lot keya...luvly update..n the precap...😳...no ideas abt who started the rumour over ur FF too...😆😆..tht maan n sam r to marry..😆...continue soon...!!!

Rohini

Edited by Rohini20 - 14 years ago
mishtib thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
what will happen to sam her future
whos demanding kiss me?😲

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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update.. felt bad for sam.. geet's so sensitive.. precap is jus wow.. continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it... tot brij wud say like this and SAM reacted exactly the same way i expected...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice update....
Lookin fwrd fr da nxt part. ...{kiss me...}....:D
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Posted: 14 years ago

nice part.

But why didn't sam go to her parents house?

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