New ff:MANEET( Love War ) Thread_1upt PG97 prt 45 - Page 54

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Posted: 14 years ago
awsome update yaar loved it
update soonxx!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

awesome update

loved it

why does geet daadi scold her

cant wait 4 da next part

con soon

thanks 4 da pm

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Posted: 14 years ago

Lool she sat on him. Love how maan says that she is always looking at him and I am sure maan does mind that at all.😆😆😆

Loool geet jealous when the nurse is drooling over maan. Lool she took the cloth from the nurse.😆😆😆😆

Nahiii why did the phone have to ring, 😭they were just about to kiss.

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Posted: 14 years ago
hiiiiiii
awesome update
loved it
loved maaneet
loved da possassive geet
loved their moment
cant wait 4 more
precap looks good
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi,
Nice update!!!!!!!
good Maaneet scenes..........
Romance , ofcourse a kind of romance was also good.
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Posted: 14 years ago
part 43
geet thought that situation which they share. she did not get any answer.she felt shy sometime coz their closeness & another time she got angry on herself. she cursing herself. after few moments later her phone rang again. geet picked it.
dadima:
geet kaha hain aap? jaha bhi hain abhi ghar ayee.
geet confused: keya hoa dadima?
dadi shouted: pehle aap ghar ayee pher bataongi.
geet shocked, her grandmother never shouted on her. what happen today. may be she is sick. geet rushed out the wash room. she enter maans cabin, where maan waiting for her restlessly.
maan: geet, main tumhari waiting kar rahi thi. mujhe kuch tumhe batana hain. he wanted to cheer up her. but geet cut off his sentence . maan shocked.
geet: mujhe abhi jana hain. she took her bag & walked off.
maan: geet keya hoa. geet roko. he wanted to stop her he tried to stand up in his feet but he fall on bed again. he hated himself for this. he looked at the mirror he thought: keya hoa achanak geet ko, kahi geet mujse naraj to nahi hogaya. then he again thought nahi aisa nahi ho sakta... i mean why? jo kuch v hoa o sirf weak situation thats why he stopped.. not to able think anything wrong.but he got hurt. he really pissed off. then he noticed the tabeez.
on the other hand geet enter her house. dadi stood in front of her, she looks very angry.
geet petrified: keya hoa dadi?
dadi: geet, hum apse kuch nahi pochte iss ka matlab ye nahi ki aap man marji karenge. main janna chateho aap kaha thi do raat se.
geet eyes widen: oh dadima, main kaam pe thi. is leye..
dadi: geet, ye kis taraka kaam hain jo aap ko raat var bahar rehjna pare? mujhe bura laga ki apne mujhse jhoot kaha oss din ki aap apni dost ki ghar main thi jo aap nahi thi. kaha gayi thi aap.
geet silent did not know how to answer it.
geet: oh dadima, i m sorry ek emerzency thi iss leye main nahi chati thi aap pereshan ho. i m sorry dadima. geet looked down.
dadi hugged her.: beta, mujhe aap par pora varosha hain. iss leye to main aap ko delhi jane dia.
par beta ye jage ko to aap janti hain. yeha par ladkiya raat main bahr rahe to log acha nahi soch
te. aur aap mujhe bata kar jaa sakti thi. said softly.
geet stay back: dadima, mujhe logo ki parwa nahi hain, mujhe aap logo ki parwa hain mera vhai ki parwa hain or she thought about maan but she stopped. dadi ma in logo ko sirf bate karni aati hain madad karna nahi. jab hume madad ki jarorat thi tab koi nahi aaya. hum khud ek dosre ki sahara thi. aur humesha rahongi. mujhe mere family ko bachana hain iss ke leye mujhe jaan bhi dena pare tabhi main peche nahi hatongi. jaha tak logo ki sawal hain, in logo ki koi haq nahi hume kuch kehne ki. i don't care them.
dadi impressed to see her confident.
dadi: beta i m proud of u. take care beta. she about to leave when she notice her empty hand. dadi hold her hand. geet shaking..
dadi: beta apki kanggan kaha hain?
geet shaking still dont know what to say: dadi kangan main ...
dadi: dont say u sold that. her eyes filled with tears. beta aap to janti hain ki ye aap ki maa ki nishani hain. kaha hain kangan.
geet closed her eyes & said: i sold that.
dadi could not belive her ears she jerk her hand and yelled: ye keya kia geet? aap aisa kaise kar sakti hain. humari itni mushkil aa ye hain ferbi humne ye nahi becha. aap ne aisa kue kia.
geet: dadi, mere pass aur koi rasta nahi tha. mujhe kisi ki jindegi bachani thi iss leye mujhe ye cangan bechna para. she cried.
dadi asked: kaun hain, jis ki leye apne itna bara khadam uthaya. geet stooped then said: dadima, aap hai to kehte hain na kisiki jindage bachana farz hain. maine oski jindege bachane ki koushish ki. agar onhe kuch ho jata to main jindegi var khud ko maf nahi kar pata.
dadi understand someone special. she asked agin: kaun hain geet?
geet: hain koi. par agar onko kuch ho jata sirf mere cangan na bechne se tab keya aap mujhe maf kar pati?
dadi: nahi beta. well. aap ne jo kiya thik kiya.. i m sorry beta. both crying each other arms. then dadi left.
maan put his hand on tabeez.. ye tabeez kaha se aayi... kisne dia tabeez. he thought for a while but could not get any answer. he called adi from nurse phone & told him to send money his account. adi guess something fishy. but not dare to asked him.
maan thanx nurse & told her to get hospitals admission bills. but nurse told him that his wife already paid it. maan surprised. what she paid? but how.. maan understand geet must be hide something from him. he decided to asked her.
precap: maan force geet..😲
hope u all like it.. sorry for mistake..
Edited by reea88 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh my god !! awsome one yaar....loved it !!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: mrk_1

oh my god !! awsome one yaar....loved it !!

thank u dear..
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: naddiya26

oh scary precap

interesting update

thanx a lot... dear...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: reea88

thanx a lot... dear...

love your ff sweet heart ..🤗

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