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sana

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Posted: 15 years ago

#21

Aftr so many days u r writing a poem...its awesome and sorry for the late comment my com was nt working

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deepali

@-Deepali-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: simiv
Hi Guys! I am writing a Poem after sometime. Its about Shaan and his secret of success!! I think that he leads a charmed life with everything going for him. See, even Rahul is turning into a new leaf!! Please read and comment!!

Luck... not by chance!😃

He was born

In a rich house

With a silver spoon

In his mouth

He wished to cry

said he had it bad

well if I was him

I won't feel too sad

He is blessed

with rare good looks

His sleeek profile

could launch a 1000 books!

He looks like a model

but he can act

a rare species

now what do you say about that

He has a lovely partner

Please don't be surprised

Yes,she's too good to be true

A 'typical' Indian wife

He was lazing away

Life was a treat

Till his girl urged him

To stand on his own feet

And guess what he took upve

But 'music' as his career

His dad raised a ruckus

But succumbed under pressure

Did he have to struggle?

Who are you kidding!

He bagged Ehsaan as his opening act

Everyone does his bidding

Then there is this guy

Who has a 'panga' with him

But he's just not aware

That Rani Jhansi is his shield

So he'll escape unscathed

He is one deserving male

But he is willing to share his luck

His shoes are up for sale😉😆

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Hahaha....!!! Man if life was as simple as that!!

Please do share yr thoughts...Thanks!!

Simi

awesome and excilient poem simi🤗 very nice.loved it...but shaan sara music bhool gaya hai ...hamari rani jhaasi ne usa sab bhula diya hai.so he goes to dhulwadi🤣

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Simi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#23

Mucho Thanks to all of you guys:

Ash, Sana, Deepali, Rooj!!...........<3<3<3

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Simi

@simikr

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Posted: 15 years ago

#24

Happy Monday Odhanians!!

Here's a poem on Rahul...especially for Ammu and Rooj!! ...😃

Rahul

I am Rahul

No, not 'The Rahul'

Future premier of our land

But the 'vile' Rahul of RBO

I was the mysterious element

The disfiguring old scar

Who stole the thunder

From Shanak's SR

I had an awesome plan

To rake up an old wound

And obtain my revenge

His future was doomed!

I also have a love interest

To kindle forgotten desires

But it turned out to be a damp squib

Without a spark there ain't no fire

I had a lot of potential

Had they just penned my lines better

Added subleties and nuances

To my unidimensional charactor

I mastered ' Villainy for Dumbos'😆

I laid out an elaborate plot..............

But...Shaan's now a rockstar😕

While I'm just a naught!

And that cheap MMS trick!

I knew it wouldn't work

The Shanak bond will get stronger

And I'll be painted a jerk😡 ................

But all's not over Rahul

Donot leave in disgrace

If not a villain, then a friend

We long to see a smile on your face!!😃

Perhaps I got a little too carried away there!!

Please do comment!! Thanks!😊

Simi

Edited by simiv - 15 years ago

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Manita

@-Manita-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#25

simi dear........you are simply superb !!👏

what a beautiful portrayal of poor Rahul.😉....(I say poor because he has been a victim of lethargy from writers.😆...)

I loved "stole the thunder from SR" 😆and "MMS wouldn't work and I'll be painted a jerk".....

perfect !!

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Simi

@simikr

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Posted: 15 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: -Manita-
simi dear........you are simply superb !!👏

what a beautiful portrayal of poor Rahul.😉....(I say poor because he has been a victim of lethargy from writers.😆...)

I loved "stole the thunder from SR" 😆and "MMS wouldn't work and I'll be painted a jerk".....

perfect !!

Yes, Manita...he definitely did not get his due. So he's 'poor Rahul' and thanks dear!!😃