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Posted: 14 years ago
Liked both the parts
Dhiren is shweet heart yaar
Jus love him to the core
Priya is really smart n calm
She hav Maan n Geet's boths side
Liked how she treated her small bros n evn Piny n Adi
Maan n his love for Geet will never get less but increase always
Jus loved it
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi,
Loved the updates!!!!!!!!!!!
Hmmm so these 98, 99 & 100 were describing the life of Maaneet after every thing settled out...........
I loved the Punjab trip and the convo to reveal thier lfestyles,
that was s great idea,
and followed by my favourite.........photo and story session..........
it was totally amazing.
so totally Maaneet have 4 children, 1st and last being gals...............
great yaar....................
Priya is quiet smart...........
loved the children talks, they were adorable.............
Well, Geets parents and the settling was also superb!!!!!!!!!
whole family is together...........
Raaji is married.....great.........
the way you made Geet to say those details were simply amazing...........
loved the story..........
hmmm so is Vicky still a bachelor,
he is not married yet!!!!!!!!
and ofcourse Pinky and love story was also great!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nothing Can Keep Us Apart


Epilogue

Maan quietly opened the door to their room and slipped inside. He could see Geet standing next to the baby's bassinet and though her back was facing him, he knew what expression she had on her face. It was the same one that he had every time he looked at any of their children. Absolute admiration and love.

Geet must have heard him come in, for she turned around and asked quietly, "How was your video conference?"

"It was fine, once I finally got all the little distractions to stay in bed."

Geet laughed at the scowl on Maan's face, replying with, "What do you expect? The children are curious about your work."

"Hiding under furniture is something I might expect from Amit and Dhiren, but not from Priya."

"Maan, you were the one who insisted on working from home."

"Geet, I wasn't going to go into the office at nine o'clock at night."

"Maan," came the reply from his laughing wife, "you know very well that with the time difference between here and California, you could have scheduled the meeting for the morning."

"But I never would have been able to have the meeting here with the chaotic mornings we have, and I'm certainly not going back to the office yet."

"Maan, for just one little meeting, what was the harm?"

"Geet, you and Tanaya have only been out of the hospital for two weeks. I'm not going to even consider going back to the office until your one month checkup."

"Maan, I'm perfectly fine. You don't need to worry about me."

"Geet, telling me not to worry about you is like telling me not to breath. Anyway, you know that having had a previous postpartum hemorrhage raises your risk to have another one. I won't take any chances when it comes to your life."

"Two previous uneventful pregnancies and deliveries aren't enough to ease your mind?"

"Seeing you smile eases my mind." Maan grabbed Geet's hand and pulled her towards himself. "Having you in my arms eases my mind." Maan moved one arm around Geet's waist and pulled her close, reaching up to lightly touch her face with his other hand. "Seeing you and being with you is what eases my mind and gives me peace. Nothing else."

Hearing the love in Maan's voice as he said those beautiful words made Geet smile. Being in her husband's arms never failed to turn her insides into mush, and this time was no exception. Her eyes closed slowly and her lips parted as she leaned closer in anticipation. Maan was certainly not going to waste an opportunity to be close to his wife. He closed the small space between them by capturing Geet's open mouth with his own. Bodies pressed together and hands explored eagerly until they were interrupted by small baby noises.

Breaking apart slightly, both parents looked at their daughter, trying to determine what the noise meant. Her eyes were closed but they could see her fingers opening and closing. Realizing that she was still asleep, they stood side by side, gazing with love at their little angel.

After a few moments, Maan turned to give Geet's cheek a kiss, and whispered in her ear, "Thank you."

"For what?"

"For allowing me to be the husband of the most beautiful woman on earth, and giving me four of the most beautiful children ever born."

"They are beautiful, and I love them very much. But four is enough. I meant what I said. Do you understand me, Mr. Khurana?"

"Yes, Mrs. Khurana, I understand you. You know, actually, when Tanaya was born, and the doctor placed her in my hands for the first time, I felt like our family was finally complete."

Turning in Maan's arms, so that she was facing him, she replied, "Not quite complete."

"Not quite..." echoed Maan in confusion. "But you just said..."

"I want my devrani. When is Vicky going to stop dragging his feet and ask Meera to marry him? I mean, they've been officially dating for the last five years, and I know they were in love at least three years before that. Frankly, I thought he would propose right after she came back from America."

"You know why he didn't."

"I know, I know. They both wanted to make sure that after the long separation they didn't just jump into a relationship that had no foundation. Well I think that five years is enough of a foundation, don't you? Dhiren already insists on calling Meera, chachi. Why doesn't Vicky make it official?"

Maan smiled at the bossy tone Geet had adopted while she was lecturing on Vicky and Meera's relationship. "Don't ask me. I'm not the one involved."

Seeing Geet give her customary pout, the one that all their children had inherited from her, Maan chuckled and said, "I'll tell you a secret. About a week ago, Vicky came to me and asked me to get his mother's ring out of the family safe."

"You mean he's finally decided to propose? When?"

"I don't know when, but he's got some plan in mind."

"Oh, this is wonderful news. I'll have to talk with Dadima right away. I'm sure she'll want a big wedding. You know, I think she was a little disappointed that our wedding was so small."

"Don't get too excited, Mrs. Khurana, Vicky hasn't asked Meera yet, let alone she answered yes."

"Maan, don't be stupid. Of course she's going to say yes, and Dadima and I need to start planning right away, because I doubt they'll want to wait too long for the actual wedding and there are so many things to take care of."

"If my darling Ms. Hoshiarpur Express can stop speaking for two seconds, I'd rather she concentrate a bit on taking care of her husband."

"Taking care of her husband?" Geet saw the naughty glint in Maan's eye, and felt herself respond automatically. "How shall I take care of my husband."

"Some hugs would be nice."

"Oh, hugs." Geet gave a small smile and put her arms around Maan's waist.

"Kisses would be good too."

Geet leaned in to kiss Maan's cheek as his arms moved around her back. "Is that all?"

"Some cuddling would be nice."

Geet couldn't stop from smiling and blushing as Maan picked her up and carried her over to their bed. They both knew it would be several weeks before Geet was recovered enough for them to become fully intimate again. However, that didn't mean that they couldn't enjoy one another's company. Laying in each other's embrace, Maan and Geet talked about their love, life, family, and the beautiful future that they knew was ahead of them. Life would be wonderful together, for come what may, the would never be apart.

The End

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YaWNNF-GC1o[/YOUTUBE]

And Thanks Goes To:

Geet Hui Sabse Parayi Creatives and StarOne for giving us such a fabulous serial.

Who Got There First:

The End - Me First. This is good, because I don't GHSP to end. EVER!

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Did I surprise you all with this epilogue? I hope it was a pleasant surprise.😛

Thank you, everyone, for being so interested in Nothing Can Keep Us Apart. I hope you loved reading it as much as I loved writing it. This is the final update, but not the final post from me. When I finally have the entire story proof read, compiled, and ready for download, I will post and pm to let you all know.

With Love,

Laxmi2010

Edited by laxmi2010 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

THE END

👏👏 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
AND THEY LIVED HAPPILY EVER AFTER.......... LOVED IT
Edited by aditiwalia56 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awsome ending yaar...you are a fantastic writer,,
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Posted: 14 years ago
lived happily ever after loving and cuddling into each others arms......
what a warm and happy feeling....

loved your ff.......

hopefully you will be coming up with another one soon.......😊

CONGRATULATIONS AND ALL THE BEST FOR MANY MORE TO COME
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Posted: 14 years ago
Congratulations! Beautiful epilogue to a beautiful story. What a journey and what an end....Thnakfully, Maaneet are still around so now I am off to read your other FF😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
beautiful ff...... enjoyed it all yaar!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow lovely ending.. enjoyed it..
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Posted: 14 years ago
Beautiful ending
It was a wonderful ff

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