AR sesn 2 FF -kshitij ki aur- gulmohar pg 67 - Page 22

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Posted: 14 years ago
sami amazing part loved the way u have written this part cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
jyoths thansk dear for commenting
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Posted: 14 years ago
each time I read ur FF...my desire to see B2 increases ...anmol's pain is so much visible in front of my eyes😭😭😭.. Icant tell u di. if B2 happen then I want it to start it from ur FF⭐️ then it will rock👏 .
yeh duriya.....mujhse aur bardash nahi ho rahi hai..............😭

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Posted: 14 years ago
Dii jaldi update karo, taraz gaye hu mai aap ke ff padne keliye.😳 I know you are soooooooo buzy par humai thoda dyan dejiye ji.
Edited by SukuluvsParul - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
haan suku jaldi kar doongi dear kuch kaaam aa gaya hai so 31 tak hi ho payega😭
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Posted: 14 years ago

a small scene guys as a sorry for my bad behaviour......

Anmol was a bit worried,Tammy had slept at 8 ,she was simply too tierd.
Is she ok ?
he was restless and went to look for Ragini .
He went to her room and gently knocked on door , taking care not to startle her.Tammy was sleeping with khushi in diffrent room.
Ragini turned to look at him,she was standing near window and watching the moon and feeling light breeze of night,inhaling in its fresh scent ,mixed with smell of pines.She turned to look at him and her eyes dilated in delight at seeing him., but she realized he seemed tense.
Kya hua sab theek to hai na
He was stillstanding close to door,one hand on door knob
wo Ragini Tammy thak gayi jyada,doctor ko dikhaya tha na
yeh yes ,it was hectic for her;you dont worry Anmol she is fine.
He looked at her,all worried ,his eyes tense and questioning?
nahi theek hai wo
sure
i am her mother anmol yes she is fine
sorry ragini i did not mean that,it sjust i get so worked up where she is concerned
pata hai mujhe she smiled,stil standing by window
he laughed a little and looked down mai bhi na Ragini
He looked up and saw her once more,he saw a beautiful woman this time,standing in the window,bathing in moonlight ,she looked so ethereal,smiling shyly ,her hair were bit wet and all tendrils were hugging her face in most tempting way,light breeze was making fine surface hair fly a little,and water drops glistened like diamonds.
He moved towards her,holding her gaze , his feet moved slowly and Ragini felt as if she was waiting for eternity for him to come closer .
Finally he came close to her ,he sighed and loked at her closed eyes..and sighed Ragini..
and she felt his hand on her cheek,gently removing the wet tendrils from there ,she pressed her face in his hand unconciously and moved closer.
Ragini came another deep wisper and he held her softly.
Suddenly Ragini woke up from her magical experience and moved away
aap so jaeye ...aap ko pata hai mujhe yeh sab nahi pasand ,she tried a bit sternly,though her gaze was soft .
Anmol moved forward and held her shoulders gently...very gently he forced her to move towards him and said
Ragini
tumhari yeh duvidha....main dekh sakta hoon .Tum aaina tod sakti ho ,magar apne akas ko apne se alag nahi kar sakti,he moved closer and said in more intense voice
aur jaanti ho duniy aki koi bhi aandhi pyaar ke diye ko nahi bujha sakti......he bent forward towards her ,she closed her eyes,tears escaping her eyelids..
she could feel his breath close to her .ear,he wiishpered again
nahi bujha sakti..nahi bujha sakti..
suddenly he moved back ,the moment broken ,Ragini looked up and saw him standing there,his face looking composed ,she tried to read that closed face but to no avail.
he moved to go out,suddenly he turned and said
do the right thing Ragini..and please do it now
ragini couldnt speak a word and silently stood watching the doorclosing behind his back; her hand lifted to spot where he touched her ,.....
ok guys i take no credit in writing this scene ..i stole it shamelessly from a serial and shanti is culprit too for suggesting ke steal karo😆 original dikha denge kabhi ....abhi ke liye itna hi i will write chota sa kal bhi
Edited by sami01 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Dii ye kya bath hua no bad behaviour, we know ki aap kithne buzy hai🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

Dii it is short par to very very very very sweet. Anmol loves tammy so much and his love so pure. Angini relationship is so intense par at the same time simple and sweet. How I wish ki they showed such a scene in bidaai. Diiiiiiiiiiiii aap ne dhashuuuuuuuuuu likkha hai. YOU are simply the awesomest person and your ff is the bestttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt. I loved it.


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Posted: 14 years ago
Awww Sammy this was so sweet rey👏
I was in full blush !!
gawd yeah Anmol humey maar daley ga ek din
He will make us die a thousand love deaths !!

beautiful
U have a teaser kya..
Now I want him to embrace Ragini
She wants him to be with her
and he is tadpaofying her...

We need them back together

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Posted: 14 years ago
Wonderful Sami,👏

Wish Anmol had these guts to speak like this to Ragini.😉It could have been fantastic.👏

Awesome update👏 eventhough it was from some other serial .😉

Loved to read it just thinking of Angini.👏 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
suku thanks ...i want this scene in bidaai 2..apu did good in other serial(jahaan se churaya) ..thnaks for always giving me much needed hausla afzaai...
shanti glad u could blush.......wo original pe discusiion yaad hai na..phd kiya pura..y ait wa skind ateaser full bhi karenge
kritika..thank you chota dala as am crazy stuck..but u liked it so sweet wil lpost original scene neeche u watch,it was too good..hum kahaan kar paaye wo uski aawaaz ko insaaf..but tried...
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QaHGZtswEuA[/YOUTUBE]

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