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Posted: 14 years ago
waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting for th eupdate
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@ heermeher, @ ivy_softy, @zaara2212
I will be updating soon.....
sorry for the delay, I was busy with my studies........


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Guys i'm sorry for the late update, hope u like it.

Part 22

Geet n yash start their work.At 5 in the evening Geet decides to go home,She comes out her cabin n was about to leave, Maan comes there

"Geet where r u going."

"home"

"home???"

"yes home"

"so soon."

she looks at the watch n says "Its 5 n the office hours r over."

"Ok."

"bye"

"bye"

Geet leaves the place n near the door she meets yash "Geet"

"what happen yash?"

"Geet plz come with me to the site, plz."

"but y should I."

"company."

"company????"

"plz Geet I will get bored, so plz come with me I asked everyone n no one is ready to come."

"no"

"thank u Geet" saying this yash hugs her n says "come" n just drags her.

yash n Geet goes to the site.

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Maan comes home. He goes to his room, changes n comes down.

"hi dadima"

'hi Maan, where is Geet?"

"Geet?"

"Geet."

"she did not come home."

"no"

"no??"

"no"

"but she left from office long along."

"what?"

"Hi dadima" says Geet n "hi Maan."

"hi" says both of them

"Geet u said u r going home." says Maan.

"yes, I was coming home but yash asked me to come to site so"

"O, so u had fun."

"S dadima."

" yash is such a lovely kid." says dadima.

"S dadima"

maan watches all this silently.

"dadima I will change n come."

"Ok Geet."

Geet leaves.

dadima looks at Maan n says "Maan y don't u take geet out today"

"what??"

"wrong question u should where n Maan u decide that." saying this dadima" leaves.

Geet then comes n says "dadima, where is she."

"Geet get ready we r going out."

"out????"

"S out"

"but y"

"wrong ? u should ask where."

"where?"

Maan smiles n leaves.

"this person is unpredictable"

Geet gets ready in a red sari, matching ear rings, her mangalasutri, sindoor, a red bindi, high heels, n just 2 gold kandani kangan. She looked very beautiful. She walked down the stairs. Maan was standing downstairs n was busy with some files.

"Maan I'm ready."

"Ok Geet."

Geet stands there quietly n Maan continues studings the files. After some tiem

"Maan"

'geet" saying this Maan looks at Geet. Maan then gets up while staring Geet. He stands up n still keep looking at geet.

"Maan."

Maan was so busy looking at Geet that he does not realize that Geet was calling this

"Maan"

Still he does not respond.

Geet then taps is shoulder n shouts "Maan."

Maan the comes back to this world n says "lets go" n leaves. Geet silently followed him.

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Maan n Geet reaches a place. Geet gets down n sees New life board n realizes it to be a disco.

"Disco."

"yes, this is the first time that u r here."

"yes It is the first time that I'm here but not to a disco."

Maan looks at Geet with a confused face.

"Maan I have been to disco Many times."

"O. but I though''"

Geet looks at Maan n was waiting him to continue n Maanwith little surprised n more disappointed face says "nothing lets go, It is this place most popular disco."

"I heard a lot about it but I never came here."

Maan n Geet was about to leave

"Maan sab." Says someone from behind.

Maan n Geet turn back.

"apa" says Maan with a huge smile

"Maan sab how r u? its been long that u came here."

Listening to this Maan becomes little sad. Geet looks at both of them silently but little surprised n thinks "Maan n disco."

"Maan sab u n ur friends use to come here frequently''.U people n ur Masti I can never forget'' but suddenly u people stopped coming'' for some days they came alone n then even they stopped coming."

Maan smile completely vanished n becomes sad n stands quite as he did not understand what to say.

Geet get confused n thinks " Maan used to come here regularly that regular that the watchman here reminders him''.Maan n his friends???? Maan n masti?????"

"Maan sad.."

Maan looks at him n tries to smile.

"u came alone today."

Maan does not reply , he was thinking of something.

"Maan sab.."

"sorry u were saying something."

"Maan sab u r alone."

Maan does not say anything n looks at geet n smiles "No I'm W*H Geet." Saying this puts his hands pointing geet."

Geet says "hello."

"hello Mam."

"Maan sab'."

"Geet is my wife."

"wife?????? But Naintara mam."

Geet gets confused n says " Naintara"

"nothing Mam, Its nice seeing u maan sab."

"bye "

"bye."

Maan n Geet leaves. N that Maan thinks "what must have happen that Maan'.."

Geet n Maan wee walking towards the disco.

"Maan u used to come here."

"S"

"u with ur friend????"

"s"

"where r they now?"

Maan looks at Geet seriously n goes.

Geet ran behind maan

"maan wait."

Maan stops.

"Ok if u don't want to say then don't, but atleast say me y did we come here."

Maan closes his eyes foe sometime n then smiles opens his eyes n looks n Geet.

"Geet dadima wanted us to go out today n I can't says no everytime''.Geet now we r friend so lets party for that tonight."

Geet smile n says "ok maan but''.."

"but."

"Maan f u would have told me that we r coming to a disco then I would have not wore a sari'.."

"Geet ur looking good in a sari."

"Maan but I can't dance n enjoy in disco with a sari''"

"ok then shall we go some where else."

"no'' lets go to a mall."

"mall??"

"S mall."

"ok"

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Maan n Geet reaches the mall n Geet goes upstair to lady's corner n Maan stays downstairs.

Geet after some time reaches downstairs Maan was sitting on a seat n was reading a newspaper.

"Maan."

Maan while closing the newspaper looks at Geet n gets shocked. Geet was wearing a skimpy red dress.

"geet."

"what happen Maan?"saying this Geet looks at the mirror and says "I'm looking fine'."

Maan smiles n says "Geet ur look beautiful but I was shocked seeing u in this dress."

"Y what happen to this dress."

"nothing'' I never taught that u will even this type dress '''."

Geet puts a ?mark face.

"I saw u only in Indian dress so I did not think that u will wear''."

"Y u have any problem."

"no..no.. not at all."

Geet smile

"lets go will r getting late.."

"ok "

"Geet u go I will pay the bill n come."

"I paid."

Saying this Geet leaves.

"u paid but''.. ok.. lets go."

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Maan n Geet goes to the disco.

Disco was full in masti mood with loud n josh full songs n every one dancing '. Geet n Maan smiles looking at each other. Geet runs into the group n starts dancing. Maan stand there in a corner n was watching everything silently.

Geet come to maan n pulls him into the Group. Maan stand there n Geet asks him to dance but he does not.Geet gets tried asking him n leaves..

After some time maan too starts dancing.




And completely involves in dance that he forget that Geet came along with him.

Geet gets tried dancing n goes to the counter n asked for a soft drink, some other person comes there n asks for a beer. the waiter there puts both the glasses there n they get exchanged. Geet first takes a sip thinks "this does not taste like coke but continues drinking. . Geet drinks a glass of beer first n likes it so she orders for second saying "give me same drink u gave me before" other waiter standing there smells the glass n gives her other glass of beer n then third n forth'''''..

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I pmed everyone but still if i forgot to PM anyone I'm sorry.

Edited by sravss - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG she had beer that was too much i luv it
Edited by heermeher - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awsome one yaar...oh my god !!! geet s drunk ????
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh gosh! Geet drunk...hmm pls continue soon
tx for the update
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Posted: 14 years ago
AMAZING UPDATE ITS FUN 2 WATCH DRUNKEN GEET CONTINUE SOOON
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Posted: 14 years ago
Gr8 one
Maan use gang out with his friends thats shocking one, & wt abt Naintara mystri
Geet is drunk, now i am egarly waiting to wt ll she do and hw ll maan react
Continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
thanx 😊 ......awasome update......
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OMG ,,,geet drunk....😆
next part me to definitely hungama hone waala hai,,,😆
waiting for the next part...
thnx for the PM...

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