Fiza'a OS gallery thread 1 - Page 13

no chappals and tomatoes.. only CLAPS.. WOW... really nicely written..

mn os........ fareweellllllll

so instaed of chappals and tomatoes i'd like to give you some bournviles or dairy milks. it was so romantic!!!!!!!!!!

Originally posted by: .Divya.

no chappals and tomatoes.. only CLAPS.. WOW... really nicely written..

thnku so much for ur love dear

Originally posted by: roshneerakhali

so instaed of chappals and tomatoes i'd like to give you some bournviles or dairy milks. it was so romantic!!!!!!!!!!

thnku uuuuuuuuuuuuu sooo much

Originally posted by: DhanakZ

Such a cute Os

I loved cute Mayank act

Wishing Mayur very very Happy First weeding anniversary

Missing my Mayur so much

thnku so much daer

Originally posted by: -moona-

o fiza it is beautiful yarr...

so shweet os..

thnx for the pm

thnks

HUM TUM

so this one is for Faria.. dear n acAasthamayur

Though I thought tht title but due Faria its now..u can sugest wch one u like more

MAAN JAO MUGHAL_E_AZAM

Mayank: I am sorry '..bola na I am sorry..plz'na'im telling u I am sorry

Nupur: Tu kya kero'bolo kya kero'.koi buhat bara ehasaan ker rahy ho mjhy sorry bol ker'.ab kya zaroorat jao wapis'.ab sab kuch khatam hogaya

Mayank: Array baba tu ya hua'.mein dobara dkh lo ga'.

Nupur: Kyun tum koi shahzada Salim ho '.aur mein tumhari anerkali jo tum jab kaho gay mein shooro hojay gi'.

Mayank: Nhi na'Meray Mughal-e-Azam'.ab maan bhi jaoo'meri asi majal k ap ko kuch kahao'per is nacheez(bechara) per kuch tu rehim(pity) ho'.mein ny jan bhooch ker nhi kiya'sachi'tumhari kasam'.

Nupur: Meri jhoti kasam nhi khao..samjhy tum'.aur yeah tu tum bulkily mat kaho k tum ny jan bohj kern hi kiya'.kyun tum time per nhi asaktay thy ..

Mayank: How can I cum jan''there was a huge traffic jam

Nupur: Tu'it always is'.r u new in Mumbai' han'..if there would have been ur meeting ..u would have left 1 hr before'so tht ur nt late''tu now wht

Mayank: Cauz I was buzy in office'u know tht

Nupur: Why I always have to know'don't you find it important to be there with me''only ur important to u'.

Mayank: Nupur now ur talking irrelevant yaar'u now ur important to me'.morethn anything in ths world 'myself tooo'.so y r u thinking so

Nupur: Because it is sooo'

Mayank: Acha bolo'.asa kya kero k jo tum maan jao'sorry boliya'.kanpakar liya'.uthak bhatahk laga li'.aur kiya kero

She thinks a bit'n thn looked at him with a wining smile'

Nupur: Murgha bano'.

Mayank: Wht'

Nupur: Haan'simple murgha bano'.im askig u to do tht

Mayank: Tm ek software house k'senior manger ko murgha bany ko kah rahi ho'

Nupur: Nhi mein apnay so called'gud for nthing boyfriend ko murgha bany ko kah rahin hoon,,,,,

Mayank: Thk hai phr jo mein mango ga mjhy bhi milay ga'..

Nupur: No'no hugs n kisses for u'only maafi

Mayank: Thts nt fair'.

Nupur: To maafi nhi chaiy..ok fine

Mayank: Acha baba rukho na'..yeah bhi ker layta hoon'..

If you r wondering im stupid 'or have gone insane in love'.tu ur absolutely right..n I love tht'.n if u r wonder y I agreed on become a MUrgha'..tht in my life time I haven't'.i was a toper yaar'.a god boy'..but I am seriously a bad boyfriend'.

Today was her huge performance at the competition'even in the rehearsals and during the pre round I wasn't there with her'.my work didn't permitted me n she was too understanding..just asked me to be with her at finale'as it was dedicate to me'n I being a stupid, idiot, sadu'.missed it

But I was busy at an extremely important Work'.tht I did'nt thought I'll b late

But jab waqt bora ho tu kya ho''my watch stoped '.i didn't notice'stupid'..when half an hr was left for her performance I left'.n tha Mumbai terrific n its traffic'..i got stuck for an hr'due to sum VIP movement '.n now I am here 'doing anything I can do to make her smile'..though I am hating the fact I missed her performance

Tht was for me'.a performance for wch people say was breath taking 'though I hate it tooo ..only I have tht right to be breathless 'skip my heart beats while I m looking at her'..

Any ways back to the manofying 'else..i'll loss my life

Nupur: Nhi mein apnay so called'gud for nthing boyfriend ko murgha bany ko kah rahin hoon,,,,,

Mayank: Acha baba rukho na'..yeah bhi ker layta hoon

He was just about to bend down to be in tht postion'to obey hs lady love

Nupur: Rukho..tum sach mein

Mayank: Mein sach mein kya'.nupur ab yeah cheating hai'..ab kya

Nupur: Tm sach mein yeah kerny walay ho

Mayank: Hain tu'plainly

Nupur: Tumhain bora nhi laga

He saw her eyes melting at him'he move forward n said'..

Mayank: Thora sa laga ta'..but anything for ths in ur eyes'..

She instantly hugged him tight

Mayank: I remember sum1 said'no hugs n kisses

Nupur: Shutup maffi chaiy ya nhi'..

Mayank: Nhi ''.

Nupur: Kya' she broke apart..maafi nhi chahiy

Mayank: Sirf maafi nhi chaiy..he said misheviously

Nupur: Kyun 'buy one get 2 free ke offer hai'.maafi kay sath hug mil gai kafi hai''

Mayank: Nt fair

Nupur: So thik hai'I m going

Mayank: Array baba'wait run behind her'..chalo I'll drop u home

Nupur: Thk hai'..

They went towards the car n set in'' he was driving n stealing glance at her'.she was resting her head at back'..smiling n looking out side

Mayank: Why r u smiling'.seing her thn agin on road'

Nupur: Cauz im feeling gud'.

Mayank: Hmm u won competition'.. na..thts y ..gr8

Nupur: No

Mayank: Than 'wht

Nupur: I feeling gud n poud'.

Mayank: Y?????

Nupur: Cauz of u

Mayank: Me'.looking surprisingly'..

Nupur: Yes you'how can u do anything tht I ask u to do'.like even ths..its insulting'.

Mayank: Because I love u'.so its nt' he aid so plainly'like it was so obivious

Seeing her gazing at him in an AWW..he opened his arm to side hug her'she came close n rested her head n hs chest'he kissed her hairs assuring her hs presence always'she kept her eyes close..enjoying the feel'

Nupur: Why we stoped here'.

Mayank: Cauz I want to show u sumthing

Nupur: Wht

Mayank: Cum with me

Nupur: Where

Mayank: Ur behaving like a nagging wife..u know tht

Nupur: Adaat dalo

Mayank: Acha..tu aur kis kis cheez ke training on hai hmm

Nupur: Batao na'kaha chalna hai

Mayank: Meray matlab ke baat aai tu topic chnge

Nupur: Taang maat kero'warna phr se naraz hojao gi

Mayank: Emotional black mailing'..acha baba chalo..come with me

He went behind her..closed her eyes with one hand..n griped her with other'

Nupur: Whts ths'..

Mayank: He whispered in her ears'.surprise for u'.

When she opened her eyes..she find a simple table with loads of flowers, choclate bears..n everything she loved

She was on cloud nine'she turned to him seeing him all smile

Nupur: When did u did ths'.

Mayank: He raise his shoulder 'signaling guess

Nupur: Is ths was ur important meeting

Mayank: He blinked hs eyes I yes

She came forwder towards him n hit him tight

Nupur: Ur so stupid'I was scolding u like anything n u stupid'u were listening everything '..i ask u to say soory n me u did tht ..pagal ho kya

Mayank: Han..per sirf ap ka

Nupur: Per tm meray lyan itna sab kuch ker rahy thy aur mein'

Mayank: Kaha yaar..mein ny tu aur bhi buhat kuch plan kiya tha..per mein date plan kero aur kuch karbar na ho'.karbar ko kuch sahi kerty late hogaya''..phir traffic jam'I m so

He could'nt complete his words..as he found his lips sealed in a kiss by her'..shifting his hands around her waist he slightly lifted her from ground in an urge too deepen it more..n more

The broke aprt'..resting her forehead on his'.his hands were on her cheeks'his thumb caressing her cheeks lovingly

Nupur: I love you mayank

Mayank: He smile

Mayank: Kya baat hai'aj mjy per itna pyar kyun araha hai

She snaked her hands around him'tighly griping him'..

They settle down near the shores'.her head resting on his chest..hs hand stroking her hairs'.enjoying the language of silence'

Mayank: Nupur

Nupur: Hmmm'

Mayank: I was thinking'like if u find it fine'.we should take our relation to next step

Nupur: She was taken a back at his demad.. nhi he didn't mean tht..matlab

Mayank: Matlab'lets make our togetherness complete''

Nupur: Freak

Nupur: With great difficult she asked

Wht exactly do u mean

Mayank: He broke apart in irritation to see her scared n confused face

Uff Nupur'.relationship k next step kya hoga'mein shadi ke baat ker raha hoon..tum koi itni se baat samhj nhi aati'.

Nupur: Tu mjhy kya pata tum shadi ki baat ker rahy ho'.ek tu double meaning baatien kerty ho'.togetherness ko complete keraty hai..had hai'..mjhy kya koi batany aay ga k wht tdo u mean

Mayank: Itni obvious baat samhj nhi aati..aur is mein double menaing kya'..ek min ek min.. he grin at her'n her expression from red to anger change to red in blushing'.phas gay'..

Mayank: Aj tu kya baat hai janab'.he start moving towards her'.wasay tmhain exactly kya laga

Nupur: Dkho 'stop it

Mayank: Why..u want me to explain

Nupur: Shut up mayank

Mayank: Ok'.i can explain silently or shud I say practically

Nupur: Mayank I'll kill u'she run away

Mayank: Us k lyan bhi pehly meray pass tu aao

He run towards her n caught her..losing hs balance together they fall on the bed of waves'.the waves sliped away 'she has no escape'her hands where grapd by him'as he was on top of her'

Mayank: Han tu kaha tha..bolo kya kah rhin thi ap'.

Nupur: By God asay koi bol sakta hai'..kya

Mayank: Will u marry me'

Nupur: Nhi ..koi zabardasti hai kiya

Mayank: Hann'..nhi tu'leaning close to her

Nupur: Nhi tu

Mayank: Nhi tu..leaning close'.

She splashed salted water in hs eyes'..

Mayank: Ahh

She pushed him away n run away'.

Nupur: Soch lo phr asay hi life guzarni paray gi'.

Mayank: N u think im gonna spare u'n now u have two pending'n im gonna get it

Nupur: Nt so easy

Mayank: Dkh lay na

Nupur: Dkhao

He run towards her to get wht he wants..she run away nt from him'but to make run for her..

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Fizaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

thank u so much for writing this OS for us
u r soooooooooooooo cuteeeeeeeeeeeee...................

love u dearrrrrrrrrrrrrrr

and ur OS was as sweet as u.
it was super cute
there were ruthna-manana, then mayurs romance - hayeeeeeeeee it was too good

our nups is really dumbo type and our maynk - he is a naughty boy
kuch jaida he meri nups ko irritate kya

i loved this OS very much

awesome update dear
lovelyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy

plz plz do cont it.
write next part of this OS
i wanna c mayur marriage..................


take care
and thanx again for ur sweet OS.

wao wao so beautiful and lovely