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Amira.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: AMMI6
thanks for pm amira
loved title song and charachter sketch
awesome one please continue and just waiting for the introduction part

thnks 😉😉

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Posted: 15 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: heer193
omg............its so gud..........loved the vm...and last scene in it where both are behind there love......was the best part........pls add me in pm list....

thnks dear 😉😃
sureee 😉

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Posted: 15 years ago

#23

Part 1 (Introduction)

In Shimla

Arohi so rahi hoti hai uski behan (Purvi) ati hai, Purvi khidki se parde haatha thi hai, Arohi ke moo par suraj par tha hai, usse uljhan si hoti hai woh apne moo ke age haat rakhti hai aur baith thi hai aur haat haatha the huwe apni ankhein kolti hai

Purvi: Good morning Arohi
Arohi: Good morning di
Purvi: acha tu ek baat batta har subhe tere chehre par yeh muskuraat kyon hoti hai?
Arohi: kyon ki di muskuraane se din acha ghussar tha hai aur kabhi bhi woh pal aa sakhta hai jiss ka mujhe intezaar hai
Purvi: tera matlab uss pal ka jab tujhe tera rajkumar mille ga?
Arohi(shy): haan di
Purvi(smiles): chal aab jaldi se fresh ho kar kitchen mein aa jaa
Arohi: thik hai

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in Mumbai

office, Arjun apne cabin mein baithe huwe Laptop kar raha hota hai, koi andher ata hai aur kehta hai "Sir" tab hi Arjun apna Laptop niche karta hai

Arjun: Jagdesh, todhi hi dher mein meeting hai, files ready hai?
Jagdesh: Sir main issi bade mein kehne aa raha tha, main kal apni family ke saath bohot buzzy tha to main kar nahi paya
Arjun: tumhe patta hai ke mujhe har kaam waqat par pasand hai to yeh galati kaise huwi?
Jagdesh: sorry sir
Arjun ghusse se kehta hai: no Sorry!!! jao aur jaldi se karo, agar koi bhi galti huwi to tumhe patta hai na hamara kitna nuksaan ho sakhta hai aur mujhe nuksaan nahi kamiyaabi chahiye
Jagshesh: Ok sir

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in ludhiana

Meher (heer's sister) bed par baithi hoti hai aur Heer se baat kar rahi hoti hai, Heer ka moo dosri taraf hoti hai

Meher: maine dilwale dulhaniyaan le jayenge itni baar dekhi hai lekin phir bhi maan karta hai phir dekhoun sirf Raj ke liye, mujhe intezaar hai to baas sone ka to phir Raj mere sapnon me aye ga, di aap batao na apko kis ka intezaar hai

Heer mudh kar Meher se kehti hai

Heer(smiles): mujhe uss Prem ka intezaar hai jo meri akhri saans tak mujhse Prem kare aur mera akhri saans tak saath de
Meher: kiya aapko waki mein aisa laghta hai ke aap ko koi aisa Prem karne wala mille ga?
Heer: Kehte hai jab sachche dil se hum kuch mang the hain na to duniya idher ki udher ho jati hai hamhe milla ne ke liye aur jodiye to asmaan mein pehle sehi ban chuki hai aur mujhe aisa feel hota hai jaise mere liye bhi koi zaroor hoga

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In Canada

Club, sab dance kar rahe hote hain aur Prem ek chair par baitha hota hai, tab hi usse koi awaaz deta hai woh piche mudh kar dekhta hai

Prem: haan Preet
Preet: Prem bhai chalo na aap bhi dance karo
Prem: nahi Preet mera dil nahi kar raha
Preet: bro agar aap mere liye yahan tak aa hi gaye ho to dance bhi kar lo na
Prem(smiles): tujhe karna hai to tu kar
Preet: yaar bhai aaj kal aap bohot khoye khoye se laghte ho, akhir baat kiya hai?
Prem: patta nahi Preet aise laghta hai jaise mera koi apna mera intezaar kar raha hai aur mujhe bhula raha hai
Preet: yeah bro you are right, yahan par jo girls hai na woh aapka intezaar kar rahi hai aur aapko bhula rahi hai ke aap unke saat dance kare
Prem(smiles): tu bhi na Preet

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I hope u all like it,
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~Amira~

Edited by amira_saeed - 15 years ago

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AMMI6

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Posted: 15 years ago

#24

thanks. great amira awesome start
loved it , all the parts of prem, heer, arjun, and arohi and also the pictures are awesome .
great job continue the good work and update the first part soon