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amail1601

@amail1601

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Posted: 14 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: sugaryanu

Abhay (smiling wickedly): Yeh T hai. And she is all yours... 🤣

Abhay would actually breath a sigh of relief if T gets hold of a new guy! lol

Chaand and his love story! Haha too cute! :P

Nice update Adi! :))

Thank you soo much Anu!! Glad you liked it! 😳😳😳

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Tv-Fanatic

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Posted: 14 years ago

#72

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Originally posted by: amail1601

Part 6

Chaand continues his story........awwwww my fav. part😳

Chaand: I did not want to meet the girl. Maine mana kar diya...

But mom. She said I have to meet this girl. I said no....but she said I have 5 days.......hawww poor chand ko dhamki mom ko mallom ni he will shw blue eyes agar ushko gussa aya😆

Haseena: Then?

Chaand: Then I went to the jungle.....prowled around andheri raat mein......twice I thought I saw something, but then I thought it was just an illusion......

For five days.....paanch din.............

(The fire crackles loudly in the silence while Chaand and Haseena think of the fun they have in the jungle.............The phone rings, but they ignore it.)Dey should have agar baby vampy ak phone hua toh..!!oopsie biggie vampy😉

Chaand: And then it was the sixth night. A stormy night. I had to meet that girl. I refused. But mom......she said she would ground me.....phir no jungle mein mangal.....

*sighs*

I wore my best black cloak, and we went out to her place.

What a place it was..........ek chhoti si pahaadi par ek bada sa palace.......huge trees all around.......aur bats....hundreds...thousands........................

Haseena (dreamily): How romantic.................

Chaand (holds her hand and smiles): Yeah...............it was beautiful.............

Tab tak mujhe sirf tumhaara khayaal tha...aur wahaan jaane ka bilkul mann nahin tha..I did not want to go.....but suddenly, I felt drawn to the place..............

2000 stairs chadh ke hum upar gaye........aur dheere dheere door khula... "Aaeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee" kar ke....

Haseena: Oh Chaand...........

Chaand: And then I saw her. Use dekh kar I was spell-bound.......................

Dis one i loooooooooovvveddd ittt yaaaarrrr wowww how romantic storriee jungle mein mangall.!! 😆😆😆 was wearing a huge smile whike reading dis part😆

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Daanish goes to the Dobriyal house, but Panchhi is not there. Puzzled, he thinks of going to his office, but remembers that he took the day off. He decides to go to the market to hang around and watch girls.

*errgghhh iss amoeba ki entry zaroori thi kyaa..! want to read more of chaand n haseena😳M their fan in ur FF😆

In the cafe, Kabir and Angad are sitting in a corner, watching Abhay, Pia and Siddharth...

Kabir: Dekh use......ek ladka aur phasa liya. Aur dono uske liye ladne ko taiyaar hain.

*sings*

Maasoom chehra...nigaahein farebi

Labon pe hasi aur dil min daga hai....

Angad: Ek minute dude! Labon pe hasi nahin hai...dekh toh!

*both look*

Pia is sitting quietly, staring at her burger.

Siddharth (softly): Eat.

(She starts eating. Abhay tries to call her again, but she does not respond, so he turns on Siddharth..)

Abhay: Stop your tricks now!

Siddharth (innocently): What tricks?

Abhay: I know who you are. Mere saath drama mat karo.

Siddharth (still smiling): Really?

Abhay: Really.

Siddharth: In that case, you should try to stay out of my way instead of interfering in my life.

Abhay (menacingly): Maybe. But Pia meri hai😲😲. She's mine. Agar tumne use hurt karne ke baare mein socha bhi toh....

(Suddenly T cuts in.)

T: Baby!!!!!!!!!!!

(Abhay looks at her in surprise and disgust, but heaves a sigh of relief when she throws herself at Siddharth.)

Siddharth (pointing to the girl clinging to him): Yeh kya hai?

Abhay (smiling wickedly): Yeh T hai. And she is all yours...

(He makes Pia stand up, and walks out with his arm around her waist...)

hahahahhahahha yu must ahve written dat dialogue in black by keeping pathar on ur dil hainaa..😆

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Heyy adii enjoyed reading ..!! well done..!!👏 waise y pia was staring at burger usmien bhi usko kuch fishy lga kya😆 n don't forget to call Mr. khadooos on his b'dae😉

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amail1601

@amail1601

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Posted: 14 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: Jungli Billi
*res*

will be back to comment properly- read it and loved it. 😆
aww..thankoo! 😳

Edit!

OMG!! we got to hear more of the chandeena love story 🤣
loved how you've used phrases like 'the firewood crackles' really feels like u can hear it and see chandeena sitting around the fireplace...😆 does that make sense? 🤔
yeah....makes more sense than what I wrote. 🤣

wow...glad you noticed! 😉

ROFL @ cloak... really captured the 'good old' days for chand.
lol...got a bit dramatic there. *whistles*

me was thinking when reading chote se mountain pe bada ghar kaise ho sakta hai 🤣
jaise badi si Haseena ke paas chhota sa Chaand ho sakta hai. 😉

@Danish bit: grrrr no comments..
@T: hilarious! 🤣
😳

waiting to find out more about sid... got me curious now..

😆😆😆 suspense jaari hai. 😆

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shaggyscooby

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Posted: 14 years ago

#74

Love chandeenas idea of romance🤣 Sid will now get T and it will be worse than a pain in the neck Im loving this Thanx for the pm and what a fabulous update👍🏼 please make T torture sid😈

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Lekha Ishwar

@-Destiny-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#75

🤣 LMAO...... Gosh Madam A .....🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣'

u got me on a Laugh riot🤣🤣

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amail1601

@amail1601

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Posted: 14 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: Inu-13
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Heyy adii enjoyed reading ..!! well done..!!👏 waise y pia was staring at burger usmien bhi usko kuch fishy lga kya😆 n don't forget to call Mr. khadooos on his b'dae😉

thanks for the feedback nehoo. 😊😊😊

umm...burger is a mystery thodi thodi....kuch weird nahin laga? 😉😆

ahh...mr. khadoos is always welcome. 😊

Originally posted by: shaggyscooby
Love chandeenas idea of romance🤣 Sid will now get T and it will be worse than a pain in the neck Im loving this Thanx for the pm and what a fabulous update👍🏼 please make T torture sid😈

lol...I'm glad you liked it. 😆😆😆

You're welcome....thanks for reading. 😉

torture? you didn't like sid? 😆

Originally posted by: -Destiny-
LMAO...... Gosh Madam A .....'

u got me on a Laugh riot

Ahem...glad I could make you laugh Miss L. 😊😊😊

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amail1601

@amail1601

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Posted: 14 years ago

#77

Hellooooooooooo friends!!!!!!!!!!!

I know normally milestones are like the 5th or the 10th or the 20th or *forgets numbers* the nth post, but I'll take this 7th part as an extra-special milestone. 😆

Why? That's because this is the first post on page 11!

So why is that special??

Arey....serial nahin dekhte kya? January 11 is my Abhay's 😳 official birthdate, that's why!! 😆😆

And of course, India just won a thriller of a cricket match that had me behaving like a vampire with myself. 😳😳😳😳

And yeah, January 16 is the date represented by the numbers Yahoo! gave to me zabardasti when I tried to create an e-mail ID. 🤣

So, in this extra-special post on this extra-special day, I want to thank my readers for reading and actually appreciating my FF. 🤗🤗🤗 Keep reading and keep posting your feedback - it IS invaluable!!!! 😳

And for those who appreciate that hottest pair of lovebirds Chaand and his haseen Haseena, here is a li'l gift... 😉

http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/9217/chana.jpg

Feel free to use!! 😛

Where's part 7?

Not so fast.....uske liye have to do thoda intezaar... 😉

Edited by amail1601 - 14 years ago

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shaggyscooby

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Posted: 14 years ago

#78

@amail1601 I like sid but after how much abhay went through with T I cant want to let sid go that easily 😉

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amail1601

@amail1601

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Posted: 14 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: shaggyscooby
@amail1601 I like sid but after how much abhay went through with T I cant want to let sid go that easily 😉

lol...well, we'll just have to wait and watch. 😆

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amail1601

@amail1601

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Posted: 14 years ago

#80

Part 7

Daanish was having a good time at last. He had had fun on his day off from both work and Panchhi. Sure, he loved her, but he could not have 'fun' with her. Maaya was dead, though he did not know if he felt good or bad about it. Her pregnancy had been troublesome, but she was someone a guy really could, unlike with someone like the staid Panchhi.

"Enough with the 'thinking'. I deserve to have some fun now", he scolds himself as he leads Reva, a girl he had met in the pub, towards his front door....

Reva: Wow D! This place is beautiful!

Daanish: Hmm..

Reva: Your wife will be very lucky.....such a beautiful house...sooo huge...

(Daanish lets her ramble on and on while he unlocks the door. When they finally step inside, the house is dark.)

Reva: Oooooooooo!!!!!! Didn't you pay your electricity bill, naughty boy?

(Daanish does not reply but starts lighting a few candles.)

Reva: This is soooooooooo romantic!!!!!!!!!!!!

(She moves towards a table and picks up a picture of Daanish and Panchhi dancing at their engagement.)

Reva: Your fiancee is pretty D baby, but does not look like she can be much fun.

Daanish (moving to take her into his arms *writer pukes here*): Yeah? And can you be....fun?

Reva: Yes, of course!

Daanish (leering): Ok then. Prove it.

Reva (moves back a bit): I need to use your bathroom first.

Daanish (sighing): Upstairs...attached to the bedroom. (moves closer again) Want me to take you there?

Reva (moves back again): No no...I will find it myself. Why don't you get some champagne in the meantime. (looks at him suggestively) You wanted to celebrate, remember?

Daanish: Ok...come back quickly...I don't have much patience.

Reva: I won't take long baby, coz I cannot wait either......

(She goes up the stairs while Daanish pours cheap champagne into two flutes. As he is setting them on the table, a sudden gust of wind blows out the candles. He tries to light them again, but burns his hand. Suddenly Reva appears and lights a candle.)

Reva (whispering): We don't need so many. We just need one.....

(There is now a change in the atmosphere - a sudden tension, anticipation.. Daanish is spellbound..... He moves to draw Reva closer, who lays her head on his shoulder. Minutes pass by, when suddenly they hear a loud bang.)

Reva (frightened): What was that?!

Daanish: Just a window baby. Now let's just get on with it.

(There are more bangs and Reva threatens to leave.)

Daanish (angrily): Ok ok...I'll go close them. And when I get back, you'll do what I brought you here for.

Reva (in a small voice): Ok.

(Daanish goes off to close the windows. Upon his returns, he takes Reva into his arms again and is about to kiss her when light from the candle flame flickers across her face. Daanish faints in shock!!!!!!!)

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Edited by amail1601 - 14 years ago