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Posted: 15 years ago
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Awwwsome.... Desperately waiting for the next part.... Continue soon...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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suchi awesome cont soon plzzzzzzzz finish the kiss
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Posted: 15 years ago
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OMGGGGGGGGGG suchiiiii wht u hav done Yaarr . I know we will nt get dis scene in d show .I wish wecould hav got but yaarrr Amazingggggg . I m again n again reading scene 6 . n OMGG NIvRen's 1st KISSSSS tht 2 on lipssss . OHh god i got goosebumps . I just cn imagine Kinshuk n Neha Kissing heeheeee . U hav written d kissing part so beautifullyy . Amazingggggg yaaar
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Scene 7

Viren started to drive the car. He noticed Niveditha, who was looking out of the window, fiddling her saree's end and lost in her own thoughts.


He had definitely surprised her by his gesture but he felt confident that she wasn't upset at him.


Why would she be? He reasoned


Niveditha, stared at the passing roads and the distant mountains that ran the other direction. She could still feel the touch on her lips. The tingling sensation increased with the very thought. Her stomach contracted and heart paced faster.

Viren had turned on the radio in the car

Lets travel to yesteryears, the age of romance and subtle poetry. This is for that someone special.


[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VooHala_fAw&feature=related[/YOUTUBE]


Niveditha and viren, both looked at each other as the song started to play.

A beautiful emotion rose in her as the words started to pass through her. She turned away to look at the clouds, as if searching for something, a name that has been now written all over her heart.


Viren then took her left hand into his.


Niveditha looked at him.


He caressed her hand with his fingers using gentle pressure and then slowly interlocking them into his.

As the song continued to play, it took them to a world of its own...


Making him realize that, this love they share is the only treasure he had, the depth of which he did not fathom.


Viren turned her soft hands so that her palm faced upward and then he took them towards his face, gently rubbing them against his cheeks.


Niveditha looked at him gently,

She could understand his longing, and he knew that. He took his hands off hers and placed them on the steering wheel but she continued to stroke his neck with her index finger as if drawing different patterns on them.


...

They arrived in front of the resort.


After viren parked the car, niviedita and he, walked together towards dada saheb's room.

Edited by Suchi-NivReniac - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Suchiiiii....🤗
I'm on d verge of crying....its sooooooo beautiful dear...D way he takes her hand n her reaction....Small yet romantic...I'll cry any moment now...
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awesome part loved it cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Lovelyyyy Suchii . So emotional n Romantic . lovedd it . Plzzz continue soon .
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Simply fabulous Suchi. Sometimes best conversation is done without uttering a word and you can convey all your feelings to someone you love just by touch. Suchi you have portrayed that so beautifully in scene 7. I can't get enough of your retreat. Thanks Sweetie for wonderful treat.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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I can't thank you enough for this retreat Suchi !! This 7th scene has moved me so much that I keep reading it again and again and still can't get enough. U are amazing !! *hugs*
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Suchi..... awesome......
Nivi's confession☺️, the KISS, and the song played in radio... OMG.... ☺️
dear.. i am jus thinking how would my weekend go without ur retreat... :)
i am reading it again and again... :)

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