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Posted: 14 years ago
Ohhh soo maan have past wating to know his past and thanks for pm and happy new year
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Posted: 14 years ago
Loved da update
Do continue

Happy new year x
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey nice update dear.........
y maan was behave this much harsh towards geet n am feel bad for geet............
looking fwd............

happy new year🥳 dear............
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Posted: 14 years ago
thank u all for ur encouraging comments.😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
finally luved every part of it but let that maan realise how geet is important for him
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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 13
The next morning,
Maan comes into his room n sees that Geet wasn't there. He then gets ready and comes down.
"Maan, I ... sorry we were waiting for u."
"Good morning dadima."
"good morning."
then dadima and Maan walks towards the dinning table n settles there.
"Maan u know, today Geet for the first time prepared breakfast for us."
then Geet comes there from the kitchen.
"good Morning dadima."
"good morning Geet."
"good morning Maan."says Geet with a smile.
"good morning" says maan seriously.
"dadima today I have some work in office..."
"Maan I have many times told u that u will not talk about office thing at the dinning table."
Maan becomes silent and then Geet serves them.
"Geet sit down"
"Dadima u people have first then I will have my breakfast."
"Geet u don't have such culture. Be free"
"dadima from tomorrow I will eat along with u but for today........"
"u wish bata."
after eating a bit dadima says "wowwww, Geet its really tasty. what say Maan?"
"Yes dadima it is indeed tasty, geet is nice cook dadima."
"what do I know I'm eating it for the first time , u much have eatten after."
Geet and maan then looks at each other with a expressionless face and then turned towards dadima and smiled.
then Geet served them with gajal ka halwa and then dadima says says "O gajal ka halwa, its Maan's fav."
"I know dadima its why.." says this Geet smiles and then thinks "O then this Mr.Attitudes fav is gajal ka halwa," and turns toward Maan and Man sees her seriously and then she thinks "I will never prepare it again."
"geet......" saying this Dadima has a great smile on her face.
while eating this Maan has an different type of expressions on his face
seeing this Geet didnot understand anything but seeing their faces she should conclude that everything is fine and they r happy.
"Geet u know the best halwa i have every ate is maan's mom's and today urs. exactly like her bata. what say Maan?"
Maan with tears in his eyes says "yes, dadima. Geet its really tasty after my mom I found the same taste in urs. thanks for the hawla."
"Maan tell me when ever u want i will make it for u." n thimks "this mr.Attitude knows even to say thanks."
then Maan leaves to office and dadima to trust.

In afternoon,
"mam"
"what Nakul."
"some one has come to meet i Mam."
"me"
Geet goes down stairs.
"mam' says someone, he a crying badly.
geet worriedly says "what happen n who r u?"
"mam i work I khurana contractions."
"ok, y r u crying."
'mam my daugther meet with an .........."
"plz don't cry tell me properly."
'mam my daugther meet with an accident n I have to get her operated, I don't have enough money.mam i spoke with sir he asked me to take money for u."
"how much mam 3L."
"3L, ok I will just come."
geet goes intothe locker room and calls Maan but he does not pick up she tries to contact him for some time but he does not reply the Geet thinks "geet give him money much then u can tell maan." she opens the locker but does not find money there. She does not understand what to do then she reminder that there r 3L in her account so she draws a check of 3L ad gives it to him "here is a cheque 3L take it."saying this Geet gives him the cheque n that person takes the cheque and says
"Thank u mam., thank u so much."
"if u need any help plz let me know."
"thank u mam" saying this he rushes to the hospital.

In evening,
Geet and yash were there in Maan's room and they were laughing badly.
then Maan entry's the room and sees them. Maan gets annoyed and says "yash u r here and I was searching for u in the office."
"sir....."
"yash I don't find u in the company for at least half of the time I find u in my house."
" Sir today i went to site so I wasn't in the office."
"O, I don't think this is the site."
"no sir."
"then u r here."
"after the work before going to work I thought of meeting Geet, so I'm here sir."
"so u meet here."
"yes sir." yash turned towards geet n says "bye geet." n then maan "bye sir." saying this Yash leaves.
geet gets serious and say goes near to maan and says "maan if u have problem with Yash n don't talk to him but plz don't insult his bcz he is coming here for me n not for u. so plz from next reminder this."
saying this Geet runs behind Yash.
"Yash stops."
Yash stops n geet reachs Yash.
"yash I'm sorry."
"for what."
"that Maan...."
"Geet for that Maan should sorry not u n how many times i should tell u we r friend geet so no sorry n no thanks."
Geet smiles. "Yash I don't understand y maan don't like u."
Yash then all of the sudeen becomes serious and sad.
"Yash what happen?"
"nothing."
"Yash we r friend right."
"right. Geet Maan's friend leela loved me but I didnot, u know me right.with that she left to US, from then maan does not like me. He thinks I have broken her heart n I'm reason for her sadness, but Geet what is my mistake?"
after listening to Geet sadly puts her face down and thinks n then after some time says "no" while saying this she lifts her head and finds yash laughing.
"Yash...."
"sorry,sorry."
"Geet there is no such huge problem between me and sir it is just that he does not like the way I behave to girls n talk to them, u know.."
"yes I can understand."
"so he does not like me."
"O"
"But Geet i always wonder how did u fall for him."
listening to this Geet vanished n she didnot understand what to say.
"geet????"
"Yash u must have listened that love is blind n even now I wonder how I fell in love with him, but Yash Maan is really a good person."
"I don't know all that but I just know that maan is very lucky that he got a girl like u n I'm unlucky as i missed u."
"Yash stop using these cheezy lines on me."
"Ok, ok."
"What else."
"nothing I think I should leave now bye"
"bye."
then geet come into the room n finds Maan there
"Maan I have to tell u something."
"anything important, I'm busy now.'
"Maan someone came from office saying that u asked me to give them money as his daughter is in hospital."
"Me....... "
"I even call u but u didnot lift the phone, I gave them 3Ls."
"O yes i did send him but Geet how did u give them without even conforming, if they were not from my office then."
"maan first thing I thought is that watchman will not sent him without conforming that n second thing I thought is that at that situation that was not important only this is important what he needs money."
"Geet if he was not true , he just lied."
"Maan no one will lie like this, in this way n even if they lie n I get to know about it I will feel happy that she is not really in pain and her life is not in danger bcz for me than that 3L her life is important."
Maan just smiles n looks at her claimly .
"Maan I did not find any money in the locker so I gave him the money from my account."
"Geet what if I don't give u that money."
"Maan I thought u will n if u don't I can't do anything except for not trusting u next time."
'And money."
'I'm not desperately in need of money now n they r if they would have come to me also I would have give to them but the only difference is that I would have asked them to pay back slowly."
"now what will u do."
"nothing ,I really don't care who gets the credit of giving money n saving her life, I just care about is her life saved or not. It is n i don't need anything now. And i can never ask them money as now I'm Khurana khandan's Bahu." saying this Geet leaves n listening to her replies Maan just with smile on his face stands calmly staring at her as she leaves.

Edited by sravss - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
res that was a goood update
thank u sooo much....lol
Hmmmmmm so gajar ka halwa is maan's fave - interesting..........and maan had tears - awwwwwwwww
maybe this thing can work out
but maan needs to trust geet - honestly y send someone home to get money from geet when he must surely knw there was nothing in the locker??? or was he just testing her......hmmm i wonder!?!?!
hmmm liked geet's last line...........and the whole deal with yah - heheehehehhehe maaan is jealous - wooooooooooo
hehehee
cnt wait for more
Edited by Tishuu - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awe liked the halwa scene it was so touching and I love geets attitude and awe poor yash getting evil glares from maan but love his bonding with geet and liked the last scene geet gives such damaka answers anyways great update and continue soon 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey,
I liked the update and Geet's responses to Maan n his questions.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice update Sravanthi. 😃 Geet prepared Gajar ka halwa for Maan.

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