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Sai Prasanthi

@Prasanthi

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+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#61

Just to prove I was here. 😛

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NJ, why do you do this?! I felt so nostalgic after reading this that...

That was quite an emotional one.Whose did I like? Everyone's. Each one is right from their own POV. You captured the right ones at the right places. Thanks for giving me one more from yours to glance back whenever I wish. Lub u!

PS: Will be on your ODAC soon. Plomish! Need a little more time.

Edited by Prasanthi - 15 years ago

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diyaa1pk

@diyaa1pk

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#62

Challengers. Colleagues. Rivals. Enemies. Peers. Friends. Lovers. Ex-lovers. Strangers. Acquaintances. Friends. Accomplices. Lovers. Fiances. Loners..

perfectly described relationship..... ur best ....loved dis post of urs.....u hav brought out the true essence of their relationship ...... girl I LOVE UR BRAIN😆😆.....

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Pebblez

@Pebblez

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#63

*im on break for four days, and I JUST woke up after the longest sleep ever :P im reserving my place here, and i am surely returning to it :)

loveyah!

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So the concept and the visualization for this part/story/OS whatever I may call it, was beyond amazing...I love the part of DMG you picked up to narrate here..I personally think the cvs could have made SO MUCH MORE from that point in the show where all the four protagonists were at clash with each other and themselves, and it could have been highlighted SO well with the great potential in cast they had at hand! oh well *sighs*

I love how you used the simple two words, Armaan and Riddhima, to explain the emotions of each character, and just the way of thinking of those words changed the whole context. Riddhima was, I have always believed, the most complex character in the show and hence should have gotten more space to untangle her 'complexicated' behavior :P (which is a self created word, yes)...Armaan ki to life hi shuru ho ke khatam hoti thi aik Riddhima ji pe, so his circle of life was pretty much messed up and dependent on our dear lady...as was Sid's, who unfortunately got so emphatically involved with both Armaan and Riddhima, that he somewhere lost his own identity...and simple, sweet Shilpa, who couldn't see beyond the possibilities of being in love with the man his sister loves, and therefore stepped back...as did Sid, to make the world all for Armaan and Riddhima...for them to end, finally.

Great piece of writing NJ, the specificity and the flow was endearing, I read this some 3-4 times and couldn't stop smiling :) your mind is work of a genius, at times. :D

Loveyah, and MISS you!! where the hell are you? kabhiiii nee dikhti gmail pe, and trust me i stay logged in for quite some time! =s *hugs*

Kiran..

Edited by Pebblez - 15 years ago

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imshveta

@imshveta

Navigator

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Posted: 15 years ago

#64

NJ the like button will never be enough for what you have done. For what you have accomplished. The emotional turmoils of all the characters, their insecurities and fears, all the dilemma, every feeling of the wonderful DMG journey woven into a one-shot. Not excessive but just about right. Kudos to you for managing this.
Love
Shveta

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shriya

@shriya12

Navigator

Posted: 15 years ago

#65

i dont come to IF anymore n hve no ide y...but i dropped by to say..miss u NJ..ths new thread mde me nostalgic...hw i used to remain stuck to BTNL....thn unleashing..i miss those times..evn tho i dnt visit often..i still adore u as much as i used to..keep up the grt work...will try n b mre regular..:):).. shriya...

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Sai Prasanthi

@Prasanthi

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#66

https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1362717&PID=37110128&#37110128

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Alia

@SimplyNice

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#67

Heyzzzzzzzzz NJ!! HRU DEAR 🤗....OMG this reminds me i have to read ur Other FF!! bt first i'll go through this one and all the others after this one!! boy i love winter vacations 🥳

Reserved!!

~EDIT~

ummm 🤔 a question Nj...DONT U LIKE ME ANYMORE😕?? i mean WHY U HAD TO CHOOSE SUCH A SAD SITUATION AMONG THE 4😭!! u very well know i cant tolerate sad stuff and situations😭! oh well anyways yeah yeah i agree to everyone here...this one was wonderfully written(like always)..and the emotion u wanted us to feel...can be easily felt once u read each and everyone's seperate musings...its like they were actually thinking all this when they were going through the whole sticky situation...

one particular thing that i simply love in ur writing..is ur ability to capture the readers interest by not disclosing the character at first! u kinda leave it to the reader to figure out what character is doing the thinking! i mean its like u give us a puzzle to solve and we hav mere seconds to do it till the times up and the answer in there infront of us! and with each sentence..the characteristics become more pronounced and by the the middle or the end..u throw us the biggest hint that solves the whole puzzle for us! ..Goddd! u know u hav it in u Nj...YOU WRITE SO WELL OMG!!! but i'll be utterly blunt abt one thing that m not so happy abt... u chose to write abt the horrible delimma they were in?! *cries in agony* WHY OH WHYYYY NJ!! *sobs hysterically 😭* ahem okay enough of that...time for more *brings out the journalist stuff complete with a mic and camera 🤓 *..no seriously Nj...we ur fans would like to know...what compelled u to write abt this particular scene? 🤓

lolz u know i simply dint like the end days of DMG..i seriously cant get over the fact that they changed EVERYTHING....and twisted the ending urgh! still mad...and do u remember by the end they brot in the old characters bt it was all so messed up..i was still feeling sad cz they could hav saved the show bt it kept slipping away in2 endless mediocrity...um sorry if m coming too strong..its just i loved the show alot to actually see it going that way...so i stopped watching altogather 😛

anyways the VM was perfectly made...with no probs in the editing and all...great scene selection! overall a well written piece with the cherry on toop-ur VM 👍🏼 now m gonna jump to the other FF that r waiting to be read and appreciated 😆 😉

catch ya laters! ⭐️

tcrzzzz!

~Alia~ 😎

Edited by SimplyNice - 15 years ago

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anu.happy4ever

@anu.happy4ever

Explorer

Posted: 15 years ago

#68

it was wonderfully written...that's all I can say for now :-)

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lakshmi

@meow23

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#69

i'm bak wld b here 4 eva now...

reserved....

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prerna

@prernawaghray

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#70

wow nj
it was awesome
u rock girl
this has to be the best piece of writing of urs so far
its not just their diary entries but their hearts that are doing the talking
loved it yaar
very touching