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Posted: 14 years ago
@ Sammy:

WOW!!👏...Gr8 update Sam😃...i've been waiting for this update for so long, n believe me it was worth the wait!😳😉...but why was it so short?...the story's getting very interesting..wonder why Ragini n Anmol are separated..😭😭...can't see them pining for each other like this!😕...so please bring Angini back together soon!🤗...BTW, i Loved that VM you added to the FF!👏👏👏...very creative...😊...n Apoorva sang that song originally?😲...must say, he's one store house of talent!!👏...Loved the update n the perfume scene was so...😍☺️...i can imagine just how beautiful Angini would look together in that scene!😳😳...Do update soon😉...n this time we need it to be a L'il longer as well!😳😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sami01

rekha here is link to original scene ,pic quality is bad but surveen was amazing in her longing for dev and apu did magic with just voice...

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FNom9zXYn5Q[/YOUTUBE]


Thank You so much for sharing his one Sammy...👏👏👏...hadn't watched Kajjal..😳...this scene was so beautiful, Loved Apoorva's voice in this one..🤗...i could feel those emotions in his tone!👏😳😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
i know guys i make u guys wait so much na,is baar promise ke wait wont be long..
and yes yaar apu can do magic with voice,voice is so so expressive,his talent is so much on this..and in kajjal sceen surveen was so real in her emotional portrayl,both were just wow....and apu dominated the scene even when he was not physiclay present
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: shanti05

Oye Hoye 🥳

Kya scene mara Gosh Sammy i was grinning soo much !! This Anmolis such a sweetheart yaar uska peech nahi chid tha p😆 he haunts her and she is missing him soo much !!!!

Loved the song original Apu;s voice and teh picture presentation !!
fantastic creation !!!

ur season two rocks babes !!!

yes lol shantii anmol haunts ragini..24/7 he will sure come soon to be with her......
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sami01

Finally it was dawn.....

The chirping birds were singing songs of morning....

Aayi bhor suhani aayi

Aayi bhor suhani aayi

Anmol smiled to himself,He was sitting in his warm bed,cozy with a hot chai in his hands..he was warming hi hand with warm cup,inhaling scent of sweet cardomon tea...speciallity of dia ma...

And now she was working around house singing this melody....

He smiled and picked up the picture of mother and daughter once again and said good morning ladies ..

Missing me ?

He sighed deeply and started to sing........

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WZssnH6qTfY[/YOUTUBE]

di I actually forgot about this apu's song in kajjal😭😭..he sings so well👏👏👏
(used apu's original voice from another serial gals with pictures so if u reading ff see this firt so it connects...)
By the time he finished ,his throat was ful of unshed tears.......

Gosh how much I miss you two...

Ragini how can you

Please call me back ragini

He leaned his head on to backrest and closed his eyes...

A rough hand sat softly on his forehead,he opend his eyes and found dai ma's concerned and soft eyes..

She thurst his blackberry in his hand....

Reservation nahi karvana kya

A hint of smile came on hsi handsome face,he couldn't speak,so just nodded and bent his face to hide those tears....

Aansoo bekaar kabhi nahi jaate beta...

Na hi sache dil se ki pukaar

Jao apni beti ke paas biwi ke paas

Haan dai maa

Ragini got up early in the morning,the sun was glorious as always and morning air crisp and fresh ,yet it seemed every thing was sad,even birds seem to be singing sad songs..

She was making her bed when Tammy came in, Ragini couldn't help but notice a pallor on her daughter's face; her daughter had become much more wise than her age, she had been shocked by happenings of that fateful day .

She had turned into this serious child ,always mysterious, perfect in studies and manners, but a distant look on her face always worried😲 😲😲😲😲😲😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭,and constantly seeking answers. Those eye s constantly burned inside her,

She looked at his picture beside mantel

Somehow she couldn't take that picture away ,his handsome face stared back at her,making her heart beat faster even now,that intense gaze...

Kya main gaalt hoon ,kahin main phir se......

I am doing injustice to my child.(I dont know ragini what happen between u & anmol why he is living separate but one think I m sure of is that u r doing injustice not only with tammy but with my poor anmol)

she thought of her daughter's upcoming birthday ,she was surprised at Tammy's insistence .Normally Tammy ate less, just concentrated on reading and homework, did not play at all, but suddenly she was all excited and......calling around, she had caught her talking excitedly on phone about her papa.

Should she invite him,but mumyji may create scene(oh! my God what happen to vasu again??????please sami di send her to some remote place😡) ,she thought

Anmol was startled by phone ringing

Arey beta anmol where are you, you told me I don't have to do anything, in 3 days is birthday and barsi pooja in morning beta.....

Yes yes I know papaji,I have been running this big empire from long distance ,what is this?

I know beta but alekh is getting little resless

I know papaji,I think he will be fully well soon, then I will teach him basics, so he can run this empire, I will supervise of course,

Very well beta , I will go and read morning news

Anmol chuckled and cut the connection

Ragini saw papaji smiling and reading newspaper few minutes later

Papaji why are you not arranging everything for birthday.
wo beta you dont worry we wil manage

we papaji..

yes beta we...

a puzzled ragini saw papaji walk away.....

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Ragini was sitting alone in her room,unconciously she had put on anmol's favourite Sari,she sat in fron tof dresser and leaned to pick ............

Suddenly she looked up and saw him looking at her with devotion and sincerity

And was transferred into last year.....

She remembered how Tammy had become really clingy and slept in their room all the time.

Never once she had felt anmol's restlessness or annoyance,he was much more concerned about Tammy and her welfare than their new life togther.It was good thing ,but somehow it irked her ...

He doesnt care at all,she had thought.

One afternoon she was sitting alone in her room,in front of dresser ,trying to get ready to go out to bazzaar.

Suddenly she had looked up and saw anmol leaning in doorway watching her.

Suddenly her hands shook and she looked up in mirror,their eyes met and he held her gaze while slowly moving forward.....

Here something for you..

I have enough pendents and earings she said with mock seriousness...

I know

Phir ek aur kyun laaye....

How do you know it is that

He gave her a gift to unwrap...

It was a box,her hands shook and he came from behind and bent forward to help her,his arms wrapping her in himself and touched her fingers and guided her to open the gift.....whole time he was looking at her from mirror and she had frozen there too,she couldn't move her eyes....

Suddenly gift box fell and out came a beautiful bottle of perfume...

A dove sat on its top, shining and beautiful..

Arey yeh kya.....

Its smell reminded me of you...flowery, soft and .....

And......she asked in a whisper

A twinkle came in his eye and he smiled😳😳

He held her one wrist and sprayed the perfume, then bent to inhale its sweet scent,,,

He repeated the task with other wrist and then behind her ears...

He continued to inhale into that scent wherever he sprayed it...

In end he sprayed on her neck and bent to dig is face in there and said softly in her ears....

Seductive☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️

Her legs turned into water and he held on to her, attacking her senses, consuming her

Bhabhi tayaar nahi hui aap......(yeh guddi bhi nah!😡humne toda aur angini scene mil jata😡)

Sudeenly she was jolted from her dream,...arey bhaiya ka favourite perfume,laga lo na,aise haath mein pakad ke kyun...

Gudi said ..
she nodded not trusting herself to speak..

Her eyes had unshed tears, she sprayed the perfume on her wrists and sighed deeply...

Mujhe raasta dikhayiye bhagwaan.....(ragini ab Bhagwan tumhe aur kitna rasta dikhayenge.....ab woh bhi thak chuke hai😡😭)

👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
di its so touching & emotional 😭

ab the curiosity bar bar kar asmaan chu chuka hai.....kab yeh mystery aap khologe????????😳
but the promo part is not included..what happened to that slow dance ???
so many questions di..we all need answer😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
poonma sharminda mat kar re am in process of writing kya karoon.....busy ho gayi thee
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sami01

poonma sharminda mat kar re am in process of writing kya karoon.....busy ho gayi thee

di pls aisa mat bolo😭
I just read ur FF now..so u can take more & more of ur time😳
just sit & write whenever u find time ............no hurry........................😳
here we all love u ..so dont feel guilty or anything 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
my appologies to suku and poonam for being 24 hr slate,poonam knows the reason😉..so ladies am sorry kal dekhoongi i have headache
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sami01

my appologies to suku and poonam for being 24 hr slate,poonam knows the reason😉..so ladies am sorry kal dekhoongi i have headache

hehehe di then sorry to mujhe bolna chahiye...
I m still thinking 😉😆sorry cant help it😳
between u 2 were right ..just listen to what ur heart says....😳
between my defence speech is ready😆 koi confirm news miljaye bas 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
The sun was bright and distant peeks of Himalayas shone with white snow, the tall jungles of deodar and oak trees covered the green slopes,.

We will be there in short 20 minutes sir.

Came a voice from his headphones, killing the noise of engine and propeller fan.

Suddenly the house came into view and its beautiful immaculate grounds; a wave of nostalgia hit him like a rock, he suddenly fell back in his seat;

Are you OK sir came a concerned voice over crackling static noise

Yes yes I am OK you concentrate on landing

Faces of his mother and Nani rushed to meet him as soon as the helicopter landed on the splendid lawns of estate.

He stepped out and took deep breath in cool clean air, trying to blink away his tears .

A man of about 60 came forward to take his bag

Namaskar kaka kaise hain aap

Tum kaise ho beta main to acha hoon and welcome to Munsyari.

Anmol looked around trying to see what was being done to restore this splendid estate,and instead saw his younger self wrestling with family dog and his mother and Nani laughing ,
Kaka was watching him closely and touched his shoulder ,bringing him out of his trance
Come inside and have a look

Anmol went inside and inspected the renovations, house looked spectacular, comfy and homely but very traditional, way it used to be when Nani was alive, how he used to come and spend holidays long after his mother's death .His mom was only child and he was his nani's world, widowed at 40 his nani had managed the estate with help of his father; and finally she too was lost in same accident that claimed rest of his family ; He touched a picture of his nani and mom lovingly and smiled ,

you will be able to meet Tammy soon. He moved to go out, suddenly looked back at photo and softly added and ragini of course.

Anmol looked at his phone and smiled

Remembering his conversation with Tammy earlier in the day

Arrrey beta; of course I will come ,Your papa will fly straight to you he added using his hand movements to mimic the plane motion, she giggled from distance.

I can't wait papa 2 days left'

Yes sirf 2 din

A soft smile touched his face yes 2 din he said softly to no one in particular.

suddenly he turned around and found Kaka back after dropping his luggage of in his bedroom.

Kaka how are arrangements ,he asked .

Aap fikar na karein beta we have arranged for everyone to come here, everyone will be here by afternoon, they are doing puja very early at 4 am for Sadhna ji .

Yes yes

Aur kamini ji nahi aayi ? asked ramu kaka

He turned back and chuclked kaka dai maa and helicopters don't work, she is coming in car

Both men exchanged laughter.

He then went on to estate office to meet up with staff;
So when will they reach here, he asked his estate manager

By 2 sir if everything goes on plan .party starts at 7 so they would have enough time to rest and freshen up

Yes I know it is little hectic but '.I want Tammy to see this place, my heritage

Yes of course sir.

Anmol went on a long stroll on the vast grounds, passing tall oak trees,remembering his happy days ,days of sadness ,days watching ragini sleeping ,her insistence about divorce,way he had to leave the house ,that pain everything came rushing back

Ragini was sitting in garden and wondering about Papaji's insistence that Tammy's birthday will be celebrated in hills,on his friend's estate ,Mumyji was also eager as their close friend Mr. chada and his wife had already for their estate to arrange everything.

Where is this estate she wondered

Why was she feeling so restless in anticipation

Tammy was so excited and happy

Anmol aayenge kya ,did he promise Tammy.

May be he should come

He had made every birthday of Tammy so memorable, from her very first one.

She remembered how he had brought a small cake home on Tammy's first birthday ,as it was just 3 months after ranvir's death

In her rudeness she had told him off but he had softly kissed little girl's head and said happy birthday my angel,and made her cut the cake all alone and fed her a morsel.

She smiled at the thought,he has never missed any of her birthdays.

Suddenly she looked down ,a bucket of water was siting on her side,suddenly she saw anmol's reflection asking Ragini please don't make me do this ,stop me Ragini ,mujhe Tammy se door mat karo..please ragini '.

Uff she closed her eyes

Yeh aawwaz kab tak ..kab tak gunjegi mere man mein'.

a song was playing in background bin tere bin tere'.

Anmol was sitting on a bench watching distant peaks,thinking about Ragini

Mali was putting rose planters in a row his radio was playing bin tere'.bin tere'.

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zbpjb8y6lGU[/YOUTUBE]

Anmol got up determined to make things better for all of them and called papaji up for arrangements

Mr Chada and Mrs Chada have arrived sir

Oh thanks

Anmol went on to greet them and showed them to their room

Thanks so much uncle aunty he said later on

Beta anything for you ,we love you and Ragini and we want you to be happy together

We wil be together uncle and we will be happy.

Yes that is the spirit ..and cheers to that and they went on to discuss the party and arrangements

And anmol what are you giving Tammy this year..

Wo uncle

Both of them had tears hearing what anmol mentioned

Beta we are proud of you'

Ragini was packing her clothes ,a very excited Tammy was jumping up and down,muma one week in hills wow..

Yes beta Chada uncle has inherited a new house there so they have invited us there,we would all go early in morning beta ,so we could be there for the part in evening.

But mummy how will we go

Charted plane se beta came inderjots reply and then helicopter,so in 3 hours we will be in Munsyari.

Wow sach mein bade papa

We will all go

Ofcourse

And will partner come bade papa

Came khushi's question

Wo kyun aayega wahaan vasu asked suddenly everyone was in Ragini's room

Mummyji tamay ke birthday par un se jyada hak kisi ko nahi hai

If we could call him

No

If he comes I wont go

Well vasundhra please lets pack our bags,vacation time now.

At 1 45 pm on the said day all clan had safely landed in the estate,welcomed by Mr chada and shown to their respective rooms to rest and freshen up.

Ragini had put both khushi and tammy for a nap and laid beside them

Somehow she had felt a sudden connection with this estae,as if on landing here some one had embraced her, a motherly feeling had engulfed her,as if tender hands of mother had come and soothed her,a calm had descended over her,she had felt drawn to this house,a glimplse of a photograph in distance had made her heart skip a beat ..who were these two ladies ,but she had to rush with weary children to their rooms.

Now the kids were asleep ,she decided to go and look around,house was quiet,and huge she was lost and opened a door to conservatory,suddenly a sweet smell of tropical flowers and fruits engulfed her and she felt as if she saw a man in corner

Could it be him

She moved forward ,almost ran to his outstretched arms and hugged him,

Kahaan chale gaye the aap ,maine keh diya aur aap ne maan liya. why couldn't you get angry with me, why couldn't you refuse to go ,Tammy ko chod ke kaise aap.She began to shake him at same time hugging him tightly,suddenly she felt her arms were holding on to nothing ,she looked around ''.

Suddenly light reflected and she found herself on same spot, looking at light playing tricks on her mind ,of course she was alone here.

Suddenly she heard door open and a strong fragrance of his cologne came towards her, she inhaled deeply and thought I can even smell his cologne ,what is wrong with me, sudden footsteps startled her and she turned to se him watching her with brooding expressions from about 10 feet away..

What is wrong with me today; all I can see is him

She tried to blink and clear her vision, but he was there and slowly he moved towards her, a intent expression on his face ,she backed off in panic and found herself against the glass wall of conservatory.

He kept coming closer ,she covered her mouth to stop the sobs from escaping ,her skin looked stark white, she saw his expression changing to alarmed and he moved forward more quickly.

Ragini, she lifted her feet to leave when suddenly his arms pinned her from both sides

Ragini

Is my mind playing tricks again, but I can sense his presence, I could sense it from moment I landed in this place, but is he a illusion, why does he look so faint, why is his vision shaking, why '

She lifted her hand to touch his face and a jolt of electricity passed through her..

Ah he is here in real, suddenly her legs gave away, he moved forward to catch her

Next she saw herself waking up in her bed, was it a dream'

Did he come, I can still smell his cologne on my clothes,she got up startled,

Oh Tammy ko ready karna tha

She went forward and saw both khushi and Tammy looking like princesses and smiling Sakshi giving last touch to their outfits.

Ah Ragini did ab kaisee hain aaap

You were sound asleep and chada aunty said not to disturb you,please get ready.

Alekh and I have brought you a special saree please wear that

Arey is ki kya zaroorat thee'

No ragini didi you do so much for me,this is a small gesture .

Once Ragini left she gave a thumps up to Anmol who was standing in balcony

Ragini went to get ready and saw a shimmering cream saree with red borders in softest crepe.

Anmol loves crepe a thought came in her mind and she stilled

I should have told him to come ,she punched his number

He can't come here but I should at least tell him we were close to Missouri, he can visit Tammy may be.

She tried calling but he was not available,so she went on to get dressed.

Her elegance and grace was making moon look ordinary in comparison.

She went on to go out towards terrace where Party was being held.

Suddenly when she was about to open the door to terrace her hand stilled,she looked at a photograph ; in a open study, door was partially open and she was seeing picture's reflection in a mirror in hall; a newly married couple were smiling at her,it was a black and white photo and for a second she thought it was Anmol starring at her,but on closer look she realized the woman's sweet smile was so like Anmol's .Could it be his parents

Suddenly things made sense to her, Paapji's secrecy. Mr and Mrs chada's weired inheritance, this party on Tammy's birthday in middle of nowhere,

She looked around and went into the study; a gasp came out of her mouth ,his smiling photograph with various people, unknown faces ,yet they seemed so known, as if all were smiling at her, talking to her, her head started to spin and she turned to flee when suddenly she hit someone.

Sambhalke his arms came around her to steady her

Yeh sab aap ne'

Lets go everyone is waiting

Papa come please.. partner suddenly everyone was surrounding them, a stunned vasundhra was looking at the celebrating party,fuming in anger.

Ragini was so confused ,

Papa start the party with dance ,with mama ofcourse

Yeh sab kya hai came a angry reply from Ragini

And she turned to leave, suddenly he held her hand from behind and moved closer never leaving her wristshe came to her back and held the wrist with his other hand and softly sang'

rooth na jana tum se jo kahoon to..

please follow the song on next post...

Edited by sami01 - 14 years ago

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