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Posted: 14 years ago

u promised u will back after 32hrs with a update

but now 48hrs over....

update soon

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Posted: 14 years ago
plzzzzzzzzz update soon dear. 36hrs r over. can't wait more😭. atleast tell wen can u update d next part?
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Posted: 14 years ago


Hello Wonderful People😛

Here is a very short update. I know I was supposed to update in 36 hours, but could not. So wrote this small part out.

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"achha suno! Tumne driving kab seekhi?", he asked.

"char saal pehle. Mera ek colleague ,Nikhil, usne sikhaya tha!", she said.

"kya?kaun?", he asked, opening his eyes and releasing his hands around her immediately.

Geet looked up to meet his eyes. She could sense something wrong. She recollected her words again, "what's wrong with learning driving 4 years back?", she thought to herself.

"tumne driving kyun seekhi?", he asked angrily.

"matlab? Aap chahte the ki main driving seekhu!", she said, confused.

"tum aise baat kar rahe ho, jaise tum hamesha wahin karti ho, jo maine chaha!", he said, in an angry tone.

"haan! Aapne mujhe lecture ke baad lecture diya, independent rehne ke liye aur strong rehne ke liye! Ab kya problem hain? Driving na seekhu tuo problem aur seekhu tuo bhi problem?", she said, in a loud voice.

"Haan!", he said and turned away.

Geet shook her head in irritation, "ab maine kounsi ghalti ki?", she said.

He did not respond but she knew he was still awake.

She murmured to herself, "hey babaji, itni mushkil se inhe manaya aur ab sab gadbad ho gaya! Lekin main is baar bhi manake rahungi".

She tried turning Maan to face her. But he didn't. She rolled over him and faced him. "kya hua, Maan? Ab tak tuo theek the. Ab meri driving baat sun ke itna naraz kyun ho gaye?"

Maan turned the opposite direction. And Geet hugged him from behind and said, "pata hain, Nikhil ne mujhe itni acchi tarah se sikhaya, ki maine kabhi koi ghalti nahi ki, road pe!"

Maan closed his eyes and clenched his fist. He moved away and walked to the verandah and stood by the door. Geet came and hugged him from behind again, "kya hua, Maan?bataeye tuo sahi!"

"Kya tumhari Chennai mein koi driving school nahi hain kya, ki tumne uss Nishant se driving seekhi?", he hissed.

"Nishant nahi Nikhil", she said casually.

"Jo bhi hain. Khush kismet hain who, jiska naam Maan Singh Khurana ne liye. Waise who baat nahin hain. Tum bolo, tumne kisi driving school mein kyun nahi seekhi?"

"Maan, by the time I get back from office, it would be late. And at that time, which driving school will teach driving? So, Nikhil offered to teach me, in the night. So that in the late hours, I would not have problem handling traffic too!"

Maan carefully marked the words, "night", "late hours", "late from office!". His anger knew no bounds. He did not know why he was burning, but he did.

"tumhare koi lady colleagues nahi hain kya?", he asked sitting on the couch, and picking up a magazine.

"hain na!", she said, sitting beside him, on the couch. "kyun?" she asked, leaning onto him.

"unhe driving nahi aati?", he asked, turning the pages of the magazine.

"aati hain!", she said. She rested her head on his lap and pulled the magazine away. "kya hua? Aap itne sawal kyun kar rahe ho?"

He threw the magazine and yelled, "kyun? Ab main tumse sawal bhi nahi kar sakta?"

She jumped up hearing his voice. "Relax!" she told him. he got up from the couch and she pulled him back saying, "accha pati dev ji, jitney sawal karni hain kijiye. Main jawab dungi. Ofcourse aap mujhse sawal kar sakta hain maan!", she said, kissing his cheek.

He did not speak, he did not even look at her. "itna gussa kyun ho jaate ho?", she asked.

"mazaa aata hain!", he said.

"accha?", she said, sitting on his lap and resting her head on his chest. He held her waist and said, "batao, tumne Jenny se ya phir kisi lady colleague se kyun nahi seekhi?"

"Maan, koi free nahi the. They had to go home and make dinner, take care of their families", she justified.

"Phir driving seekhna chod deti. Itni bhi kya jaldi thi, driving seekhne ki?"

Geet rolled her eyes and looked at him seriously. "Main jaake so rahi hoon..!!! aap yeh magazine padh lijiye", she said and slammed the magazine into his hand.

He glared at her angrily as she walked to bed.

"usne tumhe chua?", were the words he uttered. She turned back to look at him, surprised, wondering if she heard it right.

"kya kaha aapne?", she asked.

"tumne kya suna?", he asked, putting the magazine aside and walking to her.

"aap kahiye! Mujhe neend aa rahi hain. Aur kal Muskan ke saath bahar jaani hain".

"tuo pati se zyaada ab tumhein beti ki parvah hain?

"haan!", she said, turning away. He pulled her back into his arms and held her tight. he looked at her and she looked away. He forcefully turned her to face him.

"Geet!", he said.

"kahiye!", she said, looking at her nails and then slowly into his face.

"usne tunhein chua? Did he touch you?", he asked, softly.

"kaun?", she asked, still unable to understand, Maan's insides were boiling because of a mention of a man by Geet, that too, His Geet, only his, forever and ever!

"wahin jo tumhe driving sikhaya!", he said, screaming.

Geet moved back, scared and her mouth fell open. "ab tak aapko Nikhil se problem thi?"

"tuo tumhein kya laga?", he said.

She smiled and went to hug him again and he pushed her away and went and sat on the bed with his legs folded. She went and sat beside him. she laughed and said, "ab driving sikhaye ga tuo chuna tuo……", and fell back onto the bed, with maan on top of her.

"usne tumhe chua? Haan ya na!"

"Maan, meri baat tuo suniye!", she said and he yelled back, "mujhe kahaniyaan mat sunao. Answer my question. Did he touch you?"

Geet looked away as though guilty. Maan looked at her, shocked and moved away from her. His eyes and cheeks turned red due to anger. Maan pulled the quilt away from her and went and sleep on the couch.

Geet started laughing. She ran to the couch and sat down on the floor beside the couch. Maan covered himself with the quilt and turned the other side.

She ran her hands through his hair and he closed his eyes, relaxing on the pillow. "Maan!", she called out to him.

"hmm!", he responded.

"bed pe so jaeye!", she said, "its not comfortable here!"

He got up and walked to bed, without any further arguments. She smiled and had tears in her eyes. she sat there looking at him for some time and thanked her babaji for bringing him into her life. What would she do without him?

She slipped into the bed beside him and moved into his arms whispering, "I'm only yours Maan!"


Alright sweethearts, that's it for now. Will come back with a longer update..... DONT ASK ME when...!!!!! 😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆 😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉

Hope you liked the short update...!!!!!!!


Thanks for all the Lovely comments...!!!!!! 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗


Soumya

Edited by pickle6586 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: pickle6586

very short update coming up in 10 mins

soumya



make it a looooong one soums.... pls
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: febinyusuff



make it a looooong one soums.... pls



too late febin..... i already posted it..!!!! sorry... but will make the next update long..!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: pickle6586



too late febin..... i already posted it..!!!! sorry... but will make the next update long..!!!!!



no problem sweety.. I was trying my luck 😉😉😉😉.. read it will comment sooon..
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Posted: 14 years ago
cute part

wants every thing back on track asap!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

it was nice sweet cute part....maan feelin jel....:) wow

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Posted: 14 years ago
I never knew 36hrs were so long😆😆 yaar
Thank God u didnt sepcified tym aft this update warna paka i wuld hav been waiting agn😆
Update
Loved it
Maan was hell jealous
N our sweet innocent Jhali Geet didnt got it also
Till the last he mentioned it😆😆😆
It was fab
The way Maan was getting angry menu laga kuch toh hojayega aaj😉
It was fab
Culdnt stop laughing seeing Maan lyk that
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Posted: 14 years ago
Gr88888!!
Loveee the part.
Maan is jealous!!
Continue soonnn.
Thanxx for the pm.



Fatima

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