AR sesn 2 FF -kshitij ki aur- gulmohar pg 67 - Page 9

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Posted: 14 years ago
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aww hope the wait is worth gaals am having my thinking cap on so .....lets watch and see
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Posted: 14 years ago
#82
Hey dee..Interesting preview. Can't wait for the update. Vasu is 😡 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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guys i knwo i promised and i failed...................
but must say saved 2 lives doing so so forgive me my thinikng cap is on and am going to give extra surprise in update so bear with me for few more hrs guys thanks and love u all.....
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Posted: 14 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: sami01

a preview to next part..sorry for delay was busy with apu bday thread from now on will update sooner ......

Papaji why are you not arranging everything for birthday.
wo beta you dont worry we wil manage

we papaji..

yes beta we...

a puzzled ragini saw papaji walk away.....

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ragini was pulled to dance floor by powerful hands ,holding on to her not letting her fall,holding her close softly ,sweetly yet very very firmly ; it was slow dance .....the dance they never had..the dance they rehersed for almost 6-7 mths ago... every one clapped every one except Vasundhra rajvansh
she was very very angry...

to be updated by tomorrow night /SATURDAY EST


Nice suspenseful preview, waiting for the real thing😃 unlike Bidaai2 wonder when it shall materialise as still people are only talking no concrete stuff😕😡
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Finally it was dawn.....

The chirping birds were singing songs of morning....

Aayi bhor suhani aayi

Aayi bhor suhani aayi

Anmol smiled to himself,He was sitting in his warm bed,cozy with a hot chai in his hands..he was warming hi hand with warm cup,inhaling scent of sweet cardomon tea...speciallity of dia ma...

And now she was working around house singing this melody....

He smiled and picked up the picture of mother and daughter once again and said good morning ladies ..

Missing me ?

He sighed deeply and started to sing........

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WZssnH6qTfY[/YOUTUBE]
(used apu's original voice from another serial gals with pictures so if u reading ff see this firt so it connects...)
By the time he finished ,his throat was ful of unshed tears.......

Gosh how much I miss you two...

Ragini how can you

Please call me back ragini

He leaned his head on to backrest and closed his eyes...

A rough hand sat softly on his forehead,he opend his eyes and found dai ma's concerned and soft eyes..

She thurst his blackberry in his hand....

Reservation nahi karvana kya

A hint of smile came on hsi handsome face,he couldn't speak,so just nodded and bent his face to hide those tears....

Aansoo bekaar kabhi nahi jaate beta...

Na hi sache dil se ki pukaar

Jao apni beti ke paas biwi ke paas

Haan dai maa

Ragini got up early in the morning,the sun was glorious as always and morning air crisp and fresh ,yet it seemed every thing was sad,even birds seem to be singing sad songs..

She was making her bed when Tammy came in, Ragini couldn't help but notice a pallor on her daughter's face; her daughter had become much more wise than her age, she had been shocked by happenings of that fateful day .

She had turned into this serious child ,always mysterious, perfect in studies and manners, but a distant look on her face always worried ,and constantly seeking answers. Those eye s constantly burned inside her,

She looked at his picture beside mantel

Somehow she couldn't take that picture away ,his handsome face stared back at her,making her heart beat faster even now,that intense gaze...

Kya main gaalt hoon ,kahin main phir se......

I am doing injustice to my child.

she thought of her daughter's upcoming birthday ,she was surprised at Tammy's insistence .Normally Tammy ate less, just concentrated on reading and homework, did not play at all, but suddenly she was all excited and......calling around, she had caught her talking excitedly on phone about her papa.

Should she invite him,but mumyji may create scene ,she thought

Anmol was startled by phone ringing

Arey beta anmol where are you, you told me I don't have to do anything, in 3 days is birthday and barsi pooja in morning beta.....

Yes yes I know papaji,I have been running this big empire from long distance ,what is this?

I know beta but alekh is getting little resless

I know papaji,I think he will be fully well soon, then I will teach him basics, so he can run this empire, I will supervise of course,

Very well beta , I will go and read morning news

Anmol chuckled and cut the connection

Ragini saw papaji smiling and reading newspaper few minutes later

Papaji why are you not arranging everything for birthday.
wo beta you dont worry we wil manage

we papaji..

yes beta we...

a puzzled ragini saw papaji walk away.....

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Ragini was sitting alone in her room,unconciously she had put on anmol's favourite Sari,she sat in fron tof dresser and leaned to pick ............

Suddenly she looked up and saw him looking at her with devotion and sincerity

And was transferred into last year.....

She remembered how Tammy had become really clingy and slept in their room all the time.

Never once she had felt anmol's restlessness or annoyance,he was much more concerned about Tammy and her welfare than their new life togther.It was good thing ,but somehow it irked her ...

He doesnt care at all,she had thought.

One afternoon she was sitting alone in her room,in front of dresser ,trying to get ready to go out to bazzaar.

Suddenly she had looked up and saw anmol leaning in doorway watching her.

Suddenly her hands shook and she looked up in mirror,their eyes met and he held her gaze while slowly moving forward.....

Here something for you..

I have enough pendents and earings she said with mock seriousness...

I know

Phir ek aur kyun laaye....

How do you know it is that

He gave her a gift to unwrap...

It was a box,her hands shook and he came from behind and bent forward to help her,his arms wrapping her in himself and touched her fingers and guided her to open the gift.....whole time he was looking at her from mirror and she had frozen there too,she couldn't move her eyes....

Suddenly gift box fell and out came a beautiful bottle of perfume...

A dove sat on its top, shining and beautiful..

Arey yeh kya.....

Its smell reminded me of you...flowery, soft and .....

And......she asked in a whisper

A twinkle came in his eye and he smiled

He held her one wrist and sprayed the perfume, then bent to inhale its sweet scent,,,

He repeated the task with other wrist and then behind her ears...

He continued to inhale into that scent wherever he sprayed it...

In end he sprayed on her neck and bent to dig is face in there and said softly in her ears....

Seductive

Her legs turned into water and he held on to her, attacking her senses, consuming her

Bhabhi tayaar nahi hui aap......

Sudeenly she was jolted from her dream,...arey bhaiya ka favourite perfume,laga lo na,aise haath mein pakad ke kyun...

Gudi said ..
she nodded not trusting herself to speak..

Her eyes had unshed tears, she sprayed the perfume on her wrists and sighed deeply...

Mujhe raasta dikhayiye bhagwaan.....

Edited by sami01 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#86
Oye Hoye 🥳

Kya scene mara Gosh Sammy i was grinning soo much !! This Anmolis such a sweetheart yaar uska peech nahi chid tha p😆 he haunts her and she is missing him soo much !!!!

Loved the song original Apu;s voice and teh picture presentation !!
fantastic creation !!!

ur season two rocks babes !!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WZssnH6qTfY[/YOUTUBE]

Sam, when did Apu sing this, in Kaajal where please,😃 I need to know, connection jaroor huva 😳😳👏, Apu's own voice ⭐️⭐️⭐️
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Posted: 14 years ago
#88
Rekha he sang it when DPS was away from kaajjal
His dedication song
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@sami..i knew you will give us a real treat..😊
this is once again an awesome part of the FF..
the plus point to it the VM..wow apoorva's real voice so sweet and heart touching .."tum ho mere dil ki dhakan" can feel how much he is missing the two precious persons of his life.
feels so sad tammy no more that chirpy little angel ..ragini feeling guilty and still in two minds if she is doing good or not...
only one person who can bring back that smile and cheerfulnes in this angel is her papa..so she knows he will be coming and wont miss her birthday so all this sudden change in her behaviour...
blush blush that was one romantic scene of angini..anmol all that teasing/romantic with his wife..can visualise that scene and anmol in romantic mood..you make me dream...😍
dream over ragini back to reality and good you cant erase his memories/love he has for you from your heart and asking god for help..well he is coming ragini right..😉
fantastic ..so well penned down and so catchy..👍🏼
appreciate the great job you doing by writing such beautiful FFabout angini as we miss them so much.....thank you..👏👏👏..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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rekha here is link to original scene ,pic quality is bad but surveen was amazing in her longing for dev and apu did magic with just voice...
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FNom9zXYn5Q[/YOUTUBE]

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