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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG...What Happened?
Why is that Raj interfering in Geet's life?
😡
Who is he?
God..Poor Maaneet!!

Hope this fight solves out soon
And 50 part congrats dear for it!!
Whats the Surprise ??😲
Pls pls pls update soon
And hope maan tells geet soon about MSK...!!

Geet chased by gundas??..Omg hope Maan comes there to save her..hehe!!
Hope so..lol😆
hehe..Thanks for the Pm!
Continue soon..!👍🏼
And congrats for the 50 PART..🥳
Keep writing like this :)👏
Edited by maangeetcrazy - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Ye Raj ka ki problem hai? Uff atleast he should have given a reason na.
Congratulations on your reaching the 50th update! May you always be gifted with such a wonderful writing talent. God Bless!
Are there any chances of us getting the 50th update sooner than usual? ;-) Say YES I'll be happiest person in the world hehe
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Posted: 14 years ago
woww dat was awesumm
i cnt believe raj did dat bless geet she listened 2 him and maan is fumingg god shes making him crazyyy and wats this gundas after geet ooo i cnt wait 4 more continue soon
Edited by angelic shaz - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
What the hell is that Raj dude's problem? Does he like Geet? 😲 He seems overtly protective of Geet...🤔
So many questions..😆

Thanks for the update Di!
I hope Maan kicks butt in the next update though I'm pretty sure he will 😉

Keep up the amazing work!
🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago

thanxs a lot for all ur love

muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Can't wait OMG
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Posted: 14 years ago


OMG Yay!!
Cant wait for the 50th Part!!!

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: maangeetcrazy



OMG Yay!!
Cant wait for the 50th Part!!!



me too.....
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Posted: 14 years ago

-truly magical-
part 50

maan packs his bag & stuffs up his jeep
daadi - maan aap kanha ja rahe ho
maan in angry tone - daadi I am going camping
daadi - there is so much of tension going around about high profil
kidnapping, it is really not safe for you to go out alone like this
maan - daadi I will be fine
daadi - prithvi kanha hain, where have u send him, atleast use aapne saat
rakh lethe.
maan - nahi he is held up...
he closed his eyes & got more disturbed thinking about her & just left
from there. he did'nt want any thing that reminded him about her.
as if he needed some thing to remind!!!muskan smiling at his thought

geet wanted to meet Maan but due to high security she was not allowed to step out.
as such she was really upset & disturbed with maan not respnding & now all this she
was freaked out. not seeing Maan & not talking to him was killing her.
she calls maans landline
daadi - hellow
geet - hi daadi & starts crying
daadi - kya huwa beta
geet - bachan mujhe se baad nahi kar rahen
daadi - tabhi camping ke liya gayen hain shabzaden
geet - camping!!!
daadi - one of his ways to run away from things
geet weeping - kab aayenge?
daadi - it will atleast take 10-15days he has gone towards Rishikesh riverside he just left.
geet repeats - 10-15days & cuts the call
she checks Rishikesh in the google. 250km thats cool, I can take a bus
lekin bus stand kanha milega, she googles that. uff yeh bachan bhi mujhse kay kay karvaten hain.
she packs her bag & sneaks out leaving a note for rano saying she is going for college camp. she reaches the nearest bus stand. few gundas start following her. she manages to get into the bus. but realized the bus was heading in a wrong direction. she got off the bus mid way.
those guys seemed to notice that & followed her in the desserted road.
those guys come closer to her. shes tries to put up a fight. she manages to knock few of
them with her smart punches & kicks.
she did fight well but got hurt herself when they hit her on the head with a rod, it started to bleed,
she knew it was no point putting up a fight she ran fot her life. they snatched her belongings.
she managed to escape & hid in the only jeep that was parked there.
the gundas came near the jeep..she closd her eyes tight praying to babaji & the jeep just moved.
geet lowered her head to avoid being caught. after moving little further, she reluctantly
geet - mera peeche gunda the issliya
maan saw her in the rear view mirror - tum!!
geet - aap!!
she moved in to the front seat & looked at the jeep
geet - don't tell me aap ka business sach main band hogaya
maan rolled his eyes
geet - aap ki car khana gaye
maan - just get out of my jeep he stopped the jeep at once

geet - mera peeche gunda pade hain
maan got worried & shouted - prithvi kanha hain
geet - main ghar se bahag ke aaye hoon
maan - kyun?
geet - mujhe aapse milna tha
maan noticed her forehead bleeding & immidiately moved his hand towards her face
maan - yah kaise huwa
she made a baby face - gunde ne mara rod se
maan getting worried & angry - tum problems ko dondh ke unke peche jati ho kya?
geet - hain aap kisi problem se kum thodi ho
he takes his hanky & wipes the blood softly & blows it.
tears rolls down her eyes in pain, he hugs her at once
maan - yeh kya hal bana ke raka hain
geet - as if u care, its been 1 week since u spoke to me
maan pushes her away rudly - u do'nt care about me
geet makes a baby face - aise nahi hain, I really care about u, dehko I came so far
looking for u, woh bhi bus main, can u imagine GEET HANDA bus main
maan - NO u just don't care about me
she hugs him
maan pushing her hand down - I don't mean any thing to u at all
geet - u mean the world to me, aap ki bina kuch bhi aacha nahi lagta
maan - well then u don't even know the name of ur world.
she wondered what was he saying
maan - u don't even know my name, tum jaan na bhi nahi chati
geet - aise nahi hain, main poch thi hoon to aap he kuch kuch bolte rahete ho
she mumered & ate her words when he shot another strin look & turns away from her
maan - maan lo main tumhare liya kuch bhi nahi, tumhare liya to tumhare friends hi sab kuch hain
she hugs him from behind - please missunderstand mat karona, I was upset
beacause raj said not to speak to u & I could not tell him the truth
maan turned to hold her chin his hands - phir maan kyun nahi lethi ki
kisiko training ki zarorat nahi
geet fluttered her eyes meeting his gaze wondering trianing aab yeh training kanha
se bech main aagya ..then she realized oye yeh to training BF/GF ki baat matlab kya
geet - propose kar rahe ho
he looked into her eyes deeply wondering ise ladhika ka main kya karon
geet again makes a complaining baby face - kitna unromantic tha
maan snaps back - so what do you want me to do, keep on waiting for a romatic
moment like armaan & create more missunderstandings, ki prem ki tarah
bache hone ka wait karoon, ke raj ki tarah phone main baat karta rahoon
geet - umm & hits his chest
he hugs her closer - phir maan kyun nahi lethi pagli
before they could slip into that momemt of their so called confession which muskan wondered was never required 😳 they hear few bullet shots😲😡 maan bends
their head down & starts the jeep. they get chased closely by car loaded with
few rough looking guys carrying guns & firing aimlessly at them. forcing
them to stop aside. maan pulls out gun & fires back at them.
geet - u carry a gun
maan - self defence
geet - do have the license for this
maan rolled his eyes & tried to drive & distract them by firing at them
geet - meri wajah se they are behind u now.
maan - just keep ur head low...pressing her down ..she finds more guns stacked up
near the foot rest. she takes the other gun & shoots gundas car's wheels
the car falls of the road.
maan - not bad
geet pulled her collar up..& noticed another car was stocking them
they manage to get them off their tail by going off the main road. after going little
away from all that maan stops the jeep - tum teehk ho na
geet - umm nodes her head..I am really sorry
maan gave a confused look
geet - I think this is that high profile kidnapping wale, they were behind
me for quite some time. I should'nt have come out alone. this was dangerous
i did'nt know they had guns. mere wajah se aapko bhi pareshani
maan closed her lips with his fingers - chup bikul chup
she hugged him tight - i can never put u in danger
maan - I think we should not be staying here longer.
they start driving further & realize they lost there way in the
side roads, they try to look around & driving around but it all seemed the same.
maan pulled out his phone, it did'nt have any reception.
they tried making marks to avoid repeating their tracks
it was getting darker. they desperately wanted to get out of the jungle
before night sets in. it was quite misleading & trapping.
it was way past 10pm now
maan - I think we should wait untill morning, warna petrol katam hojayega & we may
just get stuck here
geet - umm
he parks the jeep in a safer place & pulls the tent out

precap
chase continues

NEXT PART 51. Thanks guys for all ur love & support...hope u like this update as wellPlease please do comment
Love muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hope i'm first :D
edit:
YAY!!!! I'm first!!! ok now the comment;

Originally posted by: muskanp

-truly magical-
part 50

maan packs his bag & stuffs up his jeep
daadi - maan aap kanha ja rahe ho
maan in angry tone - daadi I am going camping (wow kya awesome tarika hai bhaagne ka. darrpok kahika)
daadi - there is so much of tension going around about high profil
kidnapping, it is really not safe for you to go out alone like this
maan - daadi I will be fine (kitna attitude marta hain by god)
daadi - prithvi kanha hain, where have u send him, atleast use aapne saat
rakh lethe.
maan - nahi he is held up...
he closed his eyes & got more disturbed thinking about her & just left
from there. he did'nt want any thing that reminded him about her.
as if he needed some thing to remind!!!muskan smiling at his thought

geet wanted to meet Maan but due to high security she was not allowed to step out.
as such she was really upset & disturbed with maan not respnding & now all this she
was freaked out. not seeing Maan & not talking to him was killing her.
she calls maans landline
daadi - hellow
geet - hi daadi & starts crying
daadi - kya huwa beta
geet - bachan mujhe se baad nahi kar rahen (arre geet isme bachchan ki kya galati hai? galati toh teri vo crackhead dost raj ka hain. u shud go and smack him)
daadi - tabhi camping ke liya gayen hain shabzaden
geet - camping!!!
daadi - one of his ways to run away from things
geet weeping - kab aayenge?
daadi - it will atleast take 10-15days he has gone towards Rishikesh riverside he just left.
geet repeats - 10-15days & cuts the call
she checks Rishikesh in the google. 250km thats cool, I can take a bus
lekin bus stand kanha milega, she googles that. uff yeh bachan bhi mujhse kay kay karvaten hain. (😲
geet handa bus mein? why cudn't she just get on some other guyd car liek she did the first time she met maan? lolz)she packs her bag & sneaks out leaving a note for rano saying she is going for college camp. she reaches the nearest bus stand. few gundas start following her. she manages to get into the bus. but realized the bus was heading in a wrong direction. she got off the bus mid way. (haha u gonna get kidnapped)
those guys seemed to notice that & followed her in the desserted road.
those guys come closer to her. shes tries to put up a fight. she manages to knock few of
them with her smart punches & kicks.
she did fight well but got hurt herself when they hit her on the head with a rod, it started to bleed,
she knew it was no point putting up a fight she ran fot her life. they snatched her belongings.
she managed to escape & hid in the only jeep that was parked there.
the gundas came near the jeep..she closd her eyes tight praying to babaji & the jeep just moved.
geet lowered her head to avoid being caught. after moving little further, she reluctantly
geet - mera peeche gunda the issliya
maan saw her in the rear view mirror - tum!! (maan thinking to himself- yeh ladki pehle apni stupid idiot frnd ki liye mujhse baat karna bandh karti hai aur abhi mera peecha karte hue yaha aa gayi? vo bhi akeli akeli?? abhi agar main apni not so perfect control kho baithu toh kya hoga? phir toh iski joote bhi mujhe hi khaana prega) 🤣
geet - aap!!
she moved in to the front seat & looked at the jeep
geet - don't tell me aap ka business sach main band hogaya (haha lmao geet is too gud)
maan rolled his eyes
geet - aap ki car khana gaye
maan - just get out of my jeep he stopped the jeep at once (how rude!)

geet - mera peeche gunda pade hain
maan got worried & shouted - prithvi kanha hain
geet - main ghar se bahag ke aaye hoon
maan - kyun?
geet - mujhe aapse milna tha
maan noticed her forehead bleeding & immidiately moved his hand towards her face
maan - yah kaise huwa
she made a baby face - gunde ne mara rod se
maan getting worried & angry - tum problems ko dondh ke unke peche jati ho kya? (nahi yaar isse dhundna nahi parta hai yeh toh problem magnet hai. problems aise hi isse attract hoti hai. of which u r one lolz)
geet - hain aap kisi problem se kum thodi ho
he takes his hanky & wipes the blood softly & blows it.
tears rolls down her eyes in pain, he hugs her at once
maan - yeh kya hal bana ke raka hain
geet - as if u care, its been 1 week since u spoke to me
maan pushes her away rudly - u do'nt care about me
geet makes a baby face - aise nahi hain, I really care about u, dehko I came so far
looking for u, woh bhi bus main, can u imagine GEET HANDA bus main (haan KITNAAA bada kaam kar dia lolz)
maan - NO u just don't care about me
she hugs him
maan pushing her hand down - I don't mean any thing to u at all
geet - u mean the world to me, aap ki bina kuch bhi aacha nahi lagta (oyye abhi I luv u bol hi de geet)
maan - well then u don't even know the name of ur world. (haha soo true)
she wondered what was he saying
maan - u don't even know my name, tum jaan na bhi nahi chati
geet - aise nahi hain, main poch thi hoon to aap he kuch kuch bolte rahete ho (uff phirse yeh geet bhi na)
she mumered & ate her words when he shot another strin look & turns away from her
maan - maan lo main tumhare liya kuch bhi nahi, tumhare liya to tumhare friends hi sab kuch hain
she hugs him from behind - please missunderstand mat karona, I was upset
beacause raj said not to speak to u & I could not tell him the truth (whatever geet)
maan turned to hold her chin his hands - phir maan kyun nahi lethi ki
kisiko training ki zarorat nahi
geet fluttered her eyes meeting his gaze wondering trianing aab yeh training kanha
se bech main aagya ..then she realized oye yeh to training BF/GF ki baat matlab kya
geet - propose kar rahe ho (no duh! kitne baar kare? pehle hi toh itna rare ring de chuke hai)
he looked into her eyes deeply wondering ise ladhika ka main kya karon
geet again makes a complaining baby face - kitna unromantic tha
maan snaps back - so what do you want me to do, keep on waiting for a romatic
moment like armaan & create more missunderstandings, ki prem ki tarah
bache hone ka wait karoon, ke raj ki tarah phone main baat karta rahoon
geet - umm & hits his chest
he hugs her closer - phir maan kyun nahi lethi pagli
before they could slip into that momemt of their so called confession which muskan wondered was never required 😳 they hear few bullet shots(UGH MUSKI DI!!!! soo close yet so faar)😲😡 maan bends
their head down & starts the jeep. they get chased closely by car loaded with
few rough looking guys carrying guns & firing aimlessly at them. forcing
them to stop aside. maan pulls out gun & fires back at them.
geet - u carry a gun
maan - self defence
geet - do have the license for this (no he doesn't he's a criminal *priya rolling her eyes at the stupidity of these two)
maan rolled his eyes & tried to drive & distract them by firing at them
geet - meri wajah se they are behind u now.
maan - just keep ur head low...pressing her down ..she finds more guns stacked up
near the foot rest. she takes the other gun & shoots gundas car's wheels
the car falls of the road.
maan - not bad
geet pulled her collar up..& noticed another car was stocking them
they manage to get them off their tail by going off the main road. after going little
away from all that maan stops the jeep - tum teehk ho na
geet - umm nodes her head..I am really sorry
maan gave a confused look
geet - I think this is that high profile kidnapping wale, they were behind
me for quite some time. I should'nt have come out alone. this was dangerous
i did'nt know they had guns. mere wajah se aapko bhi pareshani (haha they r probz after maan)
maan closed her lips with his fingers - chup bikul chup
she hugged him tight - i can never put u in danger
maan - I think we should not be staying here longer.
they start driving further & realize they lost there way in the
side roads, they try to look around & driving around but it all seemed the same.
maan pulled out his phone, it did'nt have any reception.
they tried making marks to avoid repeating their tracks
it was getting darker. they desperately wanted to get out of the jungle
before night sets in. it was quite misleading & trapping.
it was way past 10pm now
maan - I think we should wait untill morning, warna petrol katam hojayega & we may
just get stuck here
geet - umm
he parks the jeep in a safer place & pulls the tent out

precap
chase continues
Thanks guys for all ur love & support...hope u like this update as well
Please please do comment
Love muskan


ok muski di i commented on the whole thing loolz but ugh u didnt do the confession!!!! i demand the next part within the next 12 hours lolz😆

Edited by loveangle_4ever - 14 years ago

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