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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi Amrita,
I read ur FF and loved it!!!!!!!!!!
The whole emotion were shown beautifully,
The best part so far was delivery sequence and Maan initiatives on Baby, loved them all,
you have done a great job in describing each n every small thing n emotion,
loved your job!!!!!!!!!!
Please add me to your PM list,
i would be glad to read updates and pass comments on them,
Love
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Lakshmi86

Hi Amrita,

I read ur FF and loved it!!!!!!!!!!
The whole emotion were shown beautifully,
The best part so far was delivery sequence and Maan initiatives on Baby, loved them all,
you have done a great job in describing each n every small thing n emotion,
loved your job!!!!!!!!!!
Please add me to your PM list,
i would be glad to read updates and pass comments on them,
Love
Lakshmi

Lakshmi *hugs*
I'm so glad that you loved my FF so far, and will try to maintain the feel till the end.
Thanks for the lovely comment, dear...it means alot to me :)))
Please do send me a buddy request, so that I can add you to the list
love,
Amrita
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Posted: 14 years ago
Lovely FF
I read the whole thing in one go.
Amazing, do pm me when you update the next part.
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Posted: 14 years ago
i read your ff but i never commented because i am always busy with work and school but when i watch the show and i don't like it i read your ff and say wow there happy story at least thank and please update soon because you make my day bright 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
ammo....
yaar...our cutie pie a gaye.....
main to miss kar di thi but thanks yaar tere pm ke liye...😛.
cuttii me kina miss kiya ..😭..
sachhi yaaar...
all updates r supar..👏👏👏...
keep it up frnd..👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sukklover

ammo....
yaar...our cutie pie a gaye.....
main to miss kar di thi but thanks yaar tere pm ke liye...😛.
cuttii me kina miss kiya ..😭..
sachhi yaaar...
all updates r supar..👏👏👏...
keep it up frnd..👍🏼
lov,❤️
Tama

Hey Tama
happy to see you back, even I missed you and your lovely comments here
and as soon as you are back, you have come up with such a sweet comment...thanks dear😛
love,
Ammo
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Posted: 14 years ago

To Love Again - Part ' 42

The weather was beautiful after a stormy night, there was freshness all around and people were busy with their activities with high hopes. The beautiful flowers and the leaves on the trees were still moist due to rain, but the whole garden smelled wonderful with the fragrances of flowers. Geet walked up and down in the garden with Mahek, who was in her pram making chuckling sounds, giggling with Geet's moves as they played peek-a-boo together.
Myra stood next to a rose plant and closed her eyes as they become moist after seeing the bond between Geet and her daughter, Mahek. With a smile curved on her lips, she approached towards Geet who was busy talking to Mahek, and she murmured "looks like mommy and baby are having so much fun". Geet turned back and saw Myra who was standing beside them and welcomed her with a smile and said "Myra", as Myra nodded in agreement they headed towards the house.

As they entered to the house Myra said "she is so cute like you, Geet", and smiled at Mahek who hid her face beside her mommy's neck. Geet heard the sound of a man's laughter from Daadi's room as they passed Daadi's room to go up stairs. Who it could be, she wondered as she found it difficult to believe that Daadima has someone so close to her other than Maan. She could not take a single step further, as she felt her feet were fixed on to the ground with cement, she felt numb with the thoughts that rambled in her mind freely, forcing her to turn back and see who he was. With all her effort she turned back and walked towards Daadima's room, she knocked at the door to derive their attention to her and she succeeded as Daadima asked her to get into the room. Myra, who was standing aside with Mahek, exchanged a quick glance with Daadi in her nervousness not knowing how Geet would react with the fact about Vicky.

"Vicky, your sister-in-law" Daadima introduced Geet to Vicky, who was sitting on a chair beside Daadima's bed and he turned to have a look at Geet. "Vicky" Geet uttered, while looking at the man who was looking at her from head to toe. Geet widened her eyes in astonishment; she has never thought that she has to face anyone who would remind her of her bitter past. Vicky has the same eyes as Dev, who had betrayed her like that no one would ever thought of, but his smile was more of the same like Maan, genuine and manly. Daadima helped Geet to sit on the bed as she understood Geet's thoughts by seeing how she stared at Vicky, and offered her a glass of water to calm her down. Geet smiled at Vicky blankly, not knowing whether she has to talk to him or not.

Geet excused herself from them and went out to go to her room to spend some time alone, she thought about the mysteries in the family and wondered about how much more that she still has to face. Maan, being her husband has never mentioned about his second brother Vicky, to her and neither did Daadima. She become saddened with the thought that Maan did not tell her the truth about his family and brother, but there must be a reason for that, she concluded.

"Geet, open the door" Myra called Geet as she did not get any respond to her thuds at the door. Geet was taken back when she heard Myra and Mahek's voice outside the door; she adjusted herself and smiled while opening the door for them. Myra did not ask anything from Geet, but she knew that something has happened to Geet so she initiated and said "Geet, you can tell me anything you want, I won't tell anyone". Geet was touched with the affection in Myra's voice, and for the first time after Mahek's birth she missed her sister Rajju. Myra saw the glowing tears that gathered into Geet's eyes, she become worried but remained silent until Geet spoke "thank you Myra, you reminded me of my sister Rajju", Myra who has no idea about what happened to Geet thought that as Geet was missing her family so badly, so she has to visit them, if not call them.

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Geet was still restless thinking about the Vicky mystery when Maan came home in the afternoon; he used to come home a bit early since Mahek was borne knowing that he has to help his wife at times. Unlike other days Geet was silent while giving an afternoon bath to Mahek and Maan sensed that something was wrong with his bubbly wife, so he stepped into the washroom and splashed some water onto Geet's face expecting the same from her. Nothing has happened like he expected, Geet remained silent and wiped her face with her dhupatta and attended Mahek who was kicking the water splashing onto Maan and Geet, making them wet while she enjoyed. "Looks like daddy's princess has annoyed her mommy today" Maan whispered into Geet's ears and moved towards Mahek to help her with the toys inside the bath tub. "No, mommy's princess didn't do anything to annoy her mommy, but her daddy did something to annoy her mommy" Geet spoke out while making a face at Maan, who stared at her puzzled not knowing what he did wrong.

Wrapped in her tiny towel, Mahek lied on the bed waiting for her mommy to make her ready to go for a walk in the park, she was a little baby but she could always sense and understand what her mommy plans for her and them. Maan jumped into the bed and started to tease at Geet, pretending that he was just making his little princess to laugh, for which Geet too giggled at last.

"Where are we going, baby?" Maan asked indirectly to Mahek but looking at Geet who was combing her hair, while standing in front of the mirror from where she could clearly see Maan who was sitting on the bed. "Baby Mahek, tell your daddy that we are going to visit Vicky uncle" Geet let out what was disturbing her for so long and Maan cried "what?" as he rose from the bed. "Yes, Vicky your own brother" Geet turned to face Maan who was stunned with her answer; she wanted to know what Maan hid from her.

"Excuse me, Geet" Maan lifted and carried Mahek to downstairs with him, to leave her with Daadima, so that he could talk to Geet about Vicky. Geet sat on the bed wondering why Maan reacted like that when she just told the name of Vicky, and why he took Mahek with him, but she was relieved for a while as she knew that Maan could not go anywhere or do anything he wanted as long as Mahek was with him. She was taken back with the sound of closing door, and she lifted her gaze to look at Maan who was standing right in front of her, anguished. Maan questioned Geet "how did you know about Vicky?" he looked straight into her eyes so that she could not hide truth from him anymore, and he was right about that fact.

Geet stood on her feet and answered him "I know everything about him and I am not going to tell, like you did. Ah don't worry Maan, I won't trouble you with such mysteries that you never wanted me to know" she spoke to him and to him it was a false accusation against him. Maan moved closer to her and asked "what did I hide from you, Geet?" she took a step backward and answered "everything". Maan felt like that somebody slapped hard across his face when Geet said he hid everything from her, but she did not know why he has never told about such issues within his family.

"Ok, I'm going to tell you that everything now" he caught her wrist with his hand and dragged her in front of the window, so that he could get some fresh air which would help him to control his temper. He ogled outside and asked her "Geet, did I ever lie to you?" befuddled with his question she shook her head gesturing a "no" to him. He then scrutinized her for one last time before revealing the so called mystery he hid from her.

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Though Vicky and Dev being Maan's step brothers they have never realized it in their lives, until Dev married to a girl named as Nayantara, who always wanted Dev to be the heir of the Khurana family. It was Daadima and Maan who were against her, Vicky being the youngest among the three brothers did not have much knowledge of how wicked that the real life games could turn out to be at times. As Nayantara ruined Maan's life with Samera, she even spoiled Vicky's life too with her false accusations, by bringing up some of the hired guys to prove Vicky guilty in front of his family without his knowledge. It was due to the shame that Vicky left his family by then and when Maan discovered the truth it was too late to bring Vicky back to home as he had left the city by then.

Maan looked at Geet with narrowed eyes and asked her "if I tell you about this before, would you be able to bring Vicky back to us? What more would happen to you other than being upset knowing the wicked plans of Nayantara? Tell me Geet, will you be able to help me to sort everything out then?" Maan shook Geet's shoulder as she stood there next to him, feeling guilty and sad for behaving like a fool in front of Maan. "I have never wanted you to suffer in life, and how could I even forget what you had suffered" Maan managed to whisper into her ears huskily, trying to hide the tears gathered into his eyes while thinking about the past that he would have never revealed if it was not his Geet. He dragged her into him and hid his face within her silky hair when he could not hold back the tears he held back for so many years, while she held his back with her hands, thinking that it was time for her to do something for him.
Precap : A small family re-union😆

P.S. I hope I managed to solve some mysteries in this part, I made it short coz I have already written about it in the story. If you liked the updated, feel free to press the like button and please do comment😊

Edited by amrita2010 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow...Naintara is really a bit*h
Hate her to the max!!!!!
Thanks a lot for the update Amrita
Love you
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Posted: 14 years ago
that was fab update ammmu.....really loved it
poor geet has to go through all this....
but the maan is always there for her.....
and mehak and daddy talk was cute....
thankuuuuuuu for superb update 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
it was a fab update
love the mehak part
continue soon

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