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@ kellz - love has made MK crazy....lol
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Loved the update & also the precap
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Originally posted by: Nilam2010

Loved the update & also the precap
cont soon....
thanx 4 pm....

thanks for loving the update and the pre-cap
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awesome!....
love the way how geet answered to maan!....
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wow this was interesting
was that dev on ph??
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@tina - thanks dear
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@Shining moon - thanks and glad you found this interesting....No it was Maan who irritated Geet by calling her...lol
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Forever -Part 9

It was a different experience for Maan to walk from office to his apartment, following every step of Geet secretly, but it was not too bad either as it relieved his anxiety. Geet went straight into the room never dare to look at him or ask him a single question that could have trapped him right then and there. Thinking that she might be too tired after working for a full day with so much tension, Maan decided not to bother her with anything. He took out her earring from his pocket and brushed his lips against it heedlessly and closed his eyes like a drunken head, but he rushed into the kitchen with the abrupt opening of the door.

Geet took out a water bottle from the fridge and sat on the chair next to the dinner table and tried not to recollect what had happened in the office earlier that day. "Shall we have dinner together?" she was taken back with Maan's offer. When he had learned to be so soft towards her, she wondered before reacting to his offer. She would not accept anything good from him, because it does not take more than a second for him to swift his mood. She shook her head, ran towards the room as tears gathered into her eyes from the thoughts that had accumulated into her mind. Maan stared at the water bottle and then at the closed door of the bedroom, baffled. He then threw the pan he used to cook his pasta in to the basin and went straight towards the bedroom, to ask what was up with her.

Maan lifted his hand to knock at the door, but he hesitated thinking that he should not ask her why she reacted like that, because he did not want her to know that she means more than just a secretary to him. He straightened himself as he concluded what to do, and banged on the door calling her name "Geet, open the door." Praying to babji, Geet opened the door and hid herself behind the door as Maan sounded very angry that he would do anything. She was proved wrong when Maan walked into the washroom as they share the only washroom in the apartment, so she quickly threw herself onto the bed and covered herself with the blanket.

"I'm sorry Geet....no, Geet, I'm sorry" Maan rehearsed while standing in front of the mirror, on how to apologize to Geet. With a great determination he came out of the washroom, but words did not come out of his mouth when he tried to call Geet, who was pretending asleep. He rushed into the small living room-cum-office and sat on the chair and surmised on how to proceed with his task. With much effort he went into the bedroom and stood in front of the bed to look at the innocent yet bubbly girl who was sleeping comfortably on his bed. Geet rolled onto the other side turning her back to him, feeling his presence inches away from the bed. Maan wanted to touch her but his hand did not move like his tongue, so he walked into the washroom again. He stood in front of the mirror, took out Geet's earring from his pocket and looked at its reflection through the mirror, but he was taken back when he saw Geet smiling at him upon seeing his silly act. "Geet, how come you are here?" he murmured and turned to face her, but she was nowhere around as it was a hallucination.

After a long time, Maan came out of the washroom and found the nervous Geet who was sitting on the bed. She got out of the bed and ran to him at the very moment she saw him coming out of the washroom, inquiring what was up with him "are you alright? I was worried for you" she broke out in front of him and touched his forehead as if she was more of a crazy lover. "Geet, I'm fine, nothing had happened to me" Maan helped Geet to sit back on the bed and wiped off her tears from his handkerchief. "You have scared me to death" Geet grumbled within her tears and Maan hushed her by putting his finger on her lips "Shh! Not anymore" and he looked deep into her eyes. As their gazes met they felt that something different and new ran within their nerves, it was a dewy feeling for them. "I'm sorry Geet" Maan found the exact words within her deep eyes and whispered the words into her ears as if he was hypnotized by her power. It was not only Maan who was spelled bound, but both of them. He put aside the strands of hair that covered blocked his way to her ears, he then put on the earring on her ears and inhaled her sweet scent that filled his hungry soul. Geet too closed her eyes feeling his warm breaths on her bare neck making her to feel that her uncontrollable heart would pop out at any time.

Savitri Devi, the grandma of Maan Singh khurana surprised her grandson by visiting him early in the morning during the weekend. Maan, who was expecting her to reach there only in the afternoon, was astonished when he saw her standing at the door step smiling at him when he opened the door. "Daadima, you are here at this time....I was thinking that you would come only in the afternoon" Maan interrogated as he realized Geet was still in the room. Savitri Devi explained to Maan that she did not need any appointments to meet him or any pre-arrangements to visit him, and walked into the apartment. Maan was worried thinking about what Daadi would think of him and Geet if she finds out about them staying together.

"No Daadi, actually the room is in a mess" Maan opposed Daadi when she tried to enter into the bedroom, but she told him to relieve his tension as she was there only to help him but not to make things worse for him. "Wow, Maan you told me the room is messy" Maan looked into the room when he heard Daadi's words and he was shocked by seeing his room after sometime, everything was perfect on its place. He sighed relieved but he was more bothered about Geet as he did not know where and how she would be right then. When he saw the washroom door closed he assured himself that Geet would have locked up herself there, but Daadi proved him wrong by opening the washroom door. "Daadima, are you up with an investigation?" Maan finally asked Daadi as her actions made him go crazy and mad for not knowing what might have happened to the owner of his soul.

The black hair on Savitri Devi's head had turned into grey color with lots of ups and down and experiences during her life time, so she would not be doing so much without any evidence. She smiled at herself on her gain and Maan's loss, while looking at the hair clip she picked up from in front of the doorstep. She would pay a surprise visit to Maan sometime around next week to see if she has smelled the coffee or not, it was a promise to herself that she made.
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Edited by amrita2010 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update
loved it
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
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Originally posted by: kashndsel4eva

awesome update
loved it
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
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thanks for the lovely comment😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice part.
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