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Posted: 14 years ago
yes finally maan and geet meet
i hope she escapes from master
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow ur FF is sooo interesting..cud u add me to ur pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago
Edited my comment on page 20
wanted to be first to comment
but then had to leave to do some firewrks
hehe
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: xxJaSsIxx

Edited my comment on page 20

wanted to be first to comment
but then had to leave to do some firewrks
hehe



hahah FINALLY you updated ur comment..it took u forever lol...Just kidding😆 aww i hope u had fun with fireworks..my fireworks happen at fourth of July in US 😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: mrs.msk



hahah FINALLY you updated ur comment..it took u forever lol...Just kidding😆 aww i hope u had fun with fireworks..my fireworks happen at fourth of July in US 😆😆

LoLzzz...
We just did a few of those small ones
My actual firework happen on July 1st
(Canada Day)
-Jassi
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Posted: 14 years ago
yiiipppeeee so finally geet escaped and now geet and maan will meet👏 lovely
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Posted: 14 years ago

ur ff s amazing yar 👏

plz add me 2 ur pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey guys: So So So sorry for late update lol...here is next chapter!!!
Chapter 7:
It was early in the morning...Maan was doing his workout when he heard his cell ring...
Maan: What
Phone....
Maan: Where
Phone..
Maan: Ok I will be there

He drove really fast to the the place...it was Saint's Hospital..Adi was already there waiting for him...Maan saw Adi in the main lobby
Maan: Are you sure she is one of the girls
Adi: well she is unconcious right now...but the looks of her state yea she might be
Maan followed Adi to the room where she was being held...when he saw he couldn't believe it....her face was all bruised up and her lips were swollen and kind of purple...she had a cast on her right leg...
Maan: who found her...
Adi: Couple of guys saw her in the lake...and well brought her here

Couple of days passed..Geet was fully conscious but was mostly quiet...she didn't speak to anyone at all not even the nurses...her brusies were cleared up and her leg was healing a well....Maan stayed with Geet everyday ..he didn't want to take any chance with her safety...Maan came to Geet's room with coffee...
Maan: Geet I brought you coffee..do you like coffee?
Geet was kind of apprehensive and looked at Maan and shook her head no...Maan noticed that she was kind of scared...
Maan: Geet you don't have to be scared...I am with the police..I am the detecitve that is handling the case of the kidnapping...I know you must've been gone through hell over there....but we need your help in solving this case...can you trust me Geet?
Geet: Yes
Maan: Good now first thing first...you have to be strong...i know you don't want to think about the place right now...but I need to ask you questions...are you ok with that?
Geet: yes I can try...umm can I have tea if it's ok?
Maan: laughed umm sure I will tell the nurses...

After taking a small coffee and tea break...
Maan: Ok should we begin?
Geet: yes
Maan: What do you remember about the kidnapper?
Geet: umm well I was kidnapped from home at night...I live by myself...so when I came home from my college...when I was sleeping I though I heard some noise so i slowly took the bat that I keep near my bed for safety reasons...he came up behind me and...(hesitated)
Maan put his hand on Geet: It is fine Geet if you don't want to go any furtuher..I understand...
Geet: No am ok...I will do whatever I can to help you find other girls....(she continued) the kidnapper knew my name..he knew that I wasn't married either...its like as if he studied me idk how...I hit him on the stomach with my bat...and tried to run out of the house but couldn't and then he gave me some kind of a drug...after that idk what happend...
Maan: Did you look at his face?
Geet: no i didn't he was wearing a mask...but I could recognize his voice...
Maan: hmm thts good...so what happened after you woke up?
Geet: when I woke up I was in a room...which was completely furnished...and then this guy came in the room...it wasn't the same guy that had kidnapped me...he was also wearing a mask...
Maan: different guy? how do you know?
Geet: his body movement and his voice was different....
Maan: Ok Geet this should be enough for now...take a rest for now...ohh by the way I will be here if you need anything...
Geet: Alright than you..
As Maan was about to leave to give her some time alone...
Geet: umm can I ask you something?
Maan: Yeah sure...
Geet: what is your name detective...If you don't mind...
Maan: laughed: sorry I totally forgot to introduce myself...Hi am Maan Singh Khurana...you can call me Maan (put out his hand for a handshake)
Geet: Am Geet...Detective Maan (with a smile and shook his hand)
Maan: just call me Maan (and left the room)

Maan couldn't believe how beautiful she was....she had a really nice smile and beautiful eyes...he smiled thinking about her at the hospital lounge...Maan had informed Adi about the information that Geet presented...now they had two guys to catch which made both of worry....there were two psycos out there working together....


Precap: Maan: you have to stay at my house...
Geet: what..why?
Edited by mrs.msk - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
amazing update pls cont soonnnnnnnnnnn

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