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Posted: 14 years ago
awssuuMMM!!!

eagerly waiting for next!!!


continue ASAP!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
gr8 update bt master z gonna b wid geet n maan z gonna get her like in the serial:(
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! soooooooooooo interesting ..............who s the master...............n plz save geet yaar............
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Posted: 14 years ago
very nice ff
i am dying to see what happen nxt
update soon
& plz pm me!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Are You Updating Now?
Please Do!
-Jassi
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Posted: 14 years ago
Gr888 update.
I hope geet is save.
Waiting for maneet meeting.
By the way is the master someone from the drama????




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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey guys: Sorry for the delay but here is the next part...sorry I can't give away YET who is the master or give any clues..i know i am being evil 😆😆...for diwali specail here is a long update!!...I hope you guys like this part..

Chapter 6

Maan received a call from Adi early in the morning...
Adi: Maan get to this place______right now...
Maan: Alright I will be there in ten minutes
When Maan went to the place..it was filled with news reporters trying to get glimpse of what happend...
Maan: Adi what happened
Adi: Someone found a body of one of the girl that was missing...
Maan: What is her name?
Adi: Naintara Rathod
Maan: Now he started killing them?
Adi: Yeah, seems like it but why all of a sudden we don't know

Maan and Adi went to see the body and was horrified at the state that the body was found in...the flesh of the body was eaten by wild animals from the forest...she must've been beautiful but now no one will be able to tell...this might be the first time Maan every saw a body this bad....her wrists had bruises on it...she must've been trying to free her hands from the rope...pieces of clothes were everywhere...he hoped that the animals didn't eat her up alive...Maan goes up to Dev...
Maan: Dev I wan't you to take this body and try to find some evidence...run some tests...
Dev: umm Ok I will...
Maan: Actually Dev I will come with you when you are running the tests...I don't think I can wait...
Dev had no choice but to take Maan with him...he didn't want to be suspicious....Dev did all the tests on the body...and gave the reports to Maan...Maan looked at the reports and was shocked...
Maan: He gave her some kind of drug...that would kill her slowly...how would he have access to this drug?
Dev: The drug that I found in the body system is only accessible by doctors...
Maan: Yeah you are right..that is why I can't seem to understand...is our kidnapper a doctor? hmm that seems like a good lead...
Dev: umm yes it is (he was beginning to get scared that he might get caught)
Maan: Anything else you found?
Dev: Umm seemed like she was alive when animals attacked her...and also before being tied up seemed like she was raped...i found a lot of bruises...but didn't find any DNA sample at all...
Maan:I can't just imagine the thought of the poor girl's death...anyway thanks Dev...

As soon as Maan left Dev called up the master...
Dev: are you crazy..why would you give her a drug to kill her...why didn't you just leave her there tied up..
Master: if someone disobeys me then they deserve a slow death...
Dev: What if Maan connects something to me...he knows that the drug is only accessible to doctors...
Master: if you sound like this then Maan will definitely find out...you are giving yourself away like that
Dev: what do you want me to do then?
Master: nothing just sit back and relax...nothing will happen

It has been a couple of days now since Geet has been in that hell hole...she couldn't think straight anymore due to drugs..it has been a while since she last saw him after that horrible night when he...she was sitting on the bed crying holding her knees...she needs to get out of here...Geet got up from the bed with all the energy she could gather...and walked to the door and started banging on the door...She started shouting for help...
Geet: Help!! Someone anyone can you hear me!! My name is Geet Handa..HELLO!!! anyone out there...HELP!!
Tina Roy could hear her screaming for help...she wanted to talk to her..but was scared to know what might happen if he finds out about this...we were forbidden to ask for help or even talk to anyone...she heard her scream throughout the day...repeating the same thing again and again...Help!! Someone anyone can you hear me!! My name is Geet Handa..HELLO!!! anyone out there...HELP!! Tina was scared for this unknown person Geet...she feared that if he finds out then she will die....
Tina: Geet please shut up...don't scream if he finds out then he will kill you
Geet: Tina I am Geet...i don't care if he kills me...
Tina didn't respond to her at all...she stayed quiet..he might be in the house...she didn't know...then one by one all the other girls started giving their names as well....
Geet: please guys we need to get out of here...did he also "force" you guys?
Tina: Yes Geet he did...
That was the last time Geet heard the voices from the girls...Geet understood that they might be scared...she couldn't walk back to the bed anymore...she crawled to the side of the bed and cried...then couple of hours later...she heard a door open..it was him she knew..she didn't had to look up
Master: Someone broke the house rules...
He walked up to Geet and jerked her hair up....Geet just looked at him...he picked her up with one arm..and held her head back...
Master: i told you if you EVER break the house rules you know the punishment
Geet: I don't care...you can kill me all you want...
Master: Ohh I will...

He threw her really hard on the floor...she screamed in pain...she started going toward the bathroom...he picked her up and hit her head on the bathroom mirror...some of the mirror pieces broke...she screamed in pain...other girls could here her cry in pain..they were all helpless...Tina covered her ears unable to take the pain anymore...Geet picked one of the broken glass piece and stabbed him on the arm...he let go of Geet and yelled in pain..then she stabbed him again on his leg...good thing he left the room door open...she made her way out of the room...she could hear him scream her name out loud....

Geet stay calm and keep going...don't think about the pain...she needed to find a way out ASAP before he comes back...she tried all the doors but they were locked...she couldn't walk anymore..her head was bleeding really badly...but she needed to go...she climbed down the furnished stairs...is this place new...seems like newly built..she could smell the fresh paint...she kept on going down the stairs not knowing where she was going...she could hear him coming...she fell down couple of stairs....she started crawling...and picked herself up...she kept on going..then she saw another stairs...these stairs seemed old and worn out...she started going up..she felt dirt on her feet...she saw a door and she opened it...rays of sun hit her face...

She made it..she escaped...the smell of dirt and the warmth of the sun never felt so good before...she kept on going...she knew he would find her if she doesn't keep going and kill her...she was still high on drugs...when she looked back to where she came from...the house wasn't there...she rubbed her eyes...was that her hallucination?....no she was sure that she came from there...where is the house?

She was surrounded by trees now...she could hear him yelling in the back: "Geet there is no escape" he laughed out loud...Geet saw big rocks at the end of the forest she decided to hide there...after couple of minutes...she saw him standing couple of feet closer to her...she started walking backwards and started walking again...his eyes were on her..he didn't take his eyes off even for once..he was walking really slowly...then she found herself at the end of a cliff...at the bottom of the cliff there was a small lake...she turned around and glared at him as he made his way towards her...

Geet shouted: I rather commit suicide then die from your hands!! (and jumped down the cliff and into the lake)
He ran towards her and it was too late...he stood at the edge of the cliff and stared below...he couldn't see her anywhere....


Precap: Maan: What a girl...where is she...which hospital...
Edited by mrs.msk - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Res

*EDIT*

LoLzz...Ur probably like
"Finally that dumb girl edits!"
hehe...srry
I had to go rite away
But, I read the update and my god!!!
It was AwesomeFantasticAmazingMindBlowing!
Geet is soooooooo smarty!!!
And I'm guessing Maan's talking bout her in the precap
m i rite?
I'm sooo happy Geet escaped!
I'm sure she's safe!
Update Sooooooooon!!
This is such a intriguing FF!
-Jassi

Yaayyyyy!
I commented first!
-Even tho I didn't edit
LoLzz
Edited by xxJaSsIxx - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update
loved it
the master is so mean
how dare he do that to geet
hope geet is fine
hope the rest of the girls escape
hope maan is close to finding out the truth
cant wait for da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
BREATHLESS AND A THRILLER UPDATE YAAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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