FF: Lethal Attractions~~~Thread 1~~~ - Page 4

Hiiii... Really different concept & storyline.. Its damn interesting.. Please add me to ur PM list... & please update soon.. I wanna to know who is d ciminal...

hey continue soon............very different yet interesting

Its too interesting!!!

awesome update

Note: THANX SO MUCH GUYS!! I was really surprised at the comments that you guys left...I will thank everyone individually after this post 😆😆😆

Without further ado here is the next chapter!!


He was talking on the phone...
"You have my money"
Master: Yes I have...you know what to do
"haha yeah I know"
Master: Alright then see you soon and come to the same place
Sighed " Alright see you then

He hung up the phone and just sat there waiting for the next person...
Master was a unique man..he believed that men loved to hunt and lived for it...A man's eyes never stop searching for beautiful and sensual women...they were meant to do that. Master was smart and strong..he never questioned master..he just did what he was told too being well aware of his powers...

Anyone could be a master and one wouldn't even know about it...just like him he was easy to blend with the crowd...his job was to complete the assignment that he was assigned to do or he would face the consequences...

He always wanted to live a rich life and loved the hi-fi life that many people get to have..and he hated them for it...he didn't know how he even got himself into this position..but had no choice as it...his job was to get him beautiful girls...he still doesn't know what he does with them or where he keeps them or even know why some selected girls...but he didn't care...he just needed to make money..he smiled at his thought...thinking what will he do first with all the money...maybe buy a house...go take a trip around Europe..buy anything and everything that comes his way..whether he needs them or not....

He needed to get his next target for the master and plan his next move carefully again..he knew he would never get caught...he was too good...he laughed out loud..people passing by was giving him some weird looks..who wouldn't seeing a guy sitting by himself and laughing for no reason...

Suddenly he was distracted by a familiar voice...
Maan: Dev what are you doing here...
Dev: Maan good to see you here..and smiled at him
Maan: Nothing I was just getting a coffee and saw you sitting here
Dev: ohh yeah I just came here for the same reason...
Maan: So you should come today for dinner and meet Dadi
Dev: umm yeah I will let you know if I am able to...
Dev then checked his time and realized that he was getting late for his next mission...
Dev: Maan sorry to cut you short but I gotta go, its an emergency
Maan: ok Dev see you tonight then

Dev sat down searching the crowd waiting for the person to come out...he saw couple of girls staring at him..he smiled at them and waved..."sorry girls not interested in you guys"
While still scanning the crowd...BINGO its your lucky day Miss. Geet Handa and smiled...


Well hope you guys liked it!


Edited by mrs.msk - 13 years ago

My reply to everyone's post!

Thank you everyone for liking the intro...


@shah10: Thanx so much am glad u liked hte chapter 1...keep reading to know whts gonna happen next lol
@swetha10: Thanx so much...hopefully next chapters will be as entertaining
@iqbal4ever: you have been added to the pm list and thanx for the round of applause lol..
@cutiepie...: sorry there were way too many numbers lol..ahaha but thanx so much
@anufa: Thanx
@bluedreamz953: Am glad you were suprised to know that it was maan and geet lol...
@vaniabi: haha yea maan is different isn't he lol..lets see how he plays his role as a detective lol
@hemvb: haha geet will come in for sure and I love maan and geet jodi as well...
@tinatartari: haha Tina just wait and read lol...i cant gaurentee whether tina will live or die lol..ahhaa but i will try
@pickachu: great name first of all...and thanx
@ansah: yea it was unpredictable and i hope i keep surprising you guys lol
@maansi007: Thanx so much..I will def. PM lol
@sona-rai: thanx so much
@maanEET_Fan: you have been added...and thank you for liking the fan fic
@krati5: Thanx so much!
@bhanu_rekhag: Thank you: yea it is thrilling I thought why not try soemthing differnt lol
@shreya satish: Thank you so much!
@Tressa: ahhaa am glad u like the fan fic..and yea it is mix of both isn't it lol..ahaha am a big fan of CID so thought lets try this out lol..haha
@cute gauri: Thanx so much
@shivangi783: you have been def. added to the pm list..am glad u love the concept lol
@kashndsel4eva: haha damn u r right with ur guess lol..ahhahaha good one!

awesome update pls do cont soonnnnnnnnnnnnn but when we kow the kidnapper i hope he doesnt kidnap Geet  see soonnnnnnnnn

story ko jaldi agaye barhao...........aur please update ki lambaie bhi

awesome update

Nice update.omg its dev ! i wondr who wil b master thn.plz add me in ur list