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Posted: 13 years ago
AMAZING!
really luved it alot!
vegas baby!
they're goin to vegas!
wooohooo!
LOL m reacting as if m going wid them to vegas! hehehehehehe :P
m luving it!
n maan also happy tat both of them gnna b under d same roof :P hehehehe
sooo can't wait for d nxt update!
update reall soon(lyk real real soooon!)

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Posted: 13 years ago
Quote/*update reall soon(lyk real real soooon!)

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Actually I'm struggling...I have alredy written the scene 4 times and I'm still not convinced...hoping to finish it since last night...Gosh I want to be done with this one  fast...

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Posted: 13 years ago
hey.. it ws just beautifull...
loved ur update...
just awesome...
pls cont. soon........
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Posted: 13 years ago
Will you be updating in some time???
Please say yes😳
Posted: 13 years ago

Ok people...here is part 15...I hope you all like it...Man did it take me some time to write it (I think like 25 hrs)...this one is the longest one so far..firstly because i wanted to cover the full LV trip and the second to give Maan some time with Geet for all the time he had missed her ..I had to rewrite Maan and Geet scenes 4 times 😭..I wasn't content with what was coming out...because I  didn't want to be stepping on boundaries😉...I had to make sure that the essence of friendship was pronounced strongly than anything else.. I always kept forgetting to let you people know something about my Hindi...I'm very bad with grammar..so please bear with me...Please please post and comment...looking forward to hear your favorites...

Part 15: Cap ou pas Cap..(Game or not!)

<Maan's monologue>

We were at the airport'it was short notice'I could only manage seats on American'she was there'she smiled all right at Yash's or Meer's jokes'but it seemed all too superficial..She was still hurting underneath'

We boarded the flight it was a 5 hr 45 mts flight..crowded with a slight chance of discomfort'Ouch'I hated flying economy'one of us had to sit alone and Yash was more than happy to move three aisles down next to a blond. Meera was not comfortable and it was way too obvious'

Geet sat by the window seat, followed by Meera and then me in the aisle seat'Meera sat down checked the seat and for some reason'got up and asked to be seated in the aisle seat'she was not comfortable being centered'I was next to her'once again'she turned and smiled at me but clearly appeared pre-occupied'

She was not the same person I had walked with in Central Park'

2.00 hrs done and counting'the hard seat cushion was getting to my nerves when the most wonderful thing happened'.She was in deep sleep and her head was going back and forth due to lack of support'I decided to place a small pillow behind her neck and support her head'instead her head landed on my shoulder'she looked comfortable'I didn't want to move her'I wanted time to slow down'the logistics changed in split seconds'I smiled'it was going to be the most memorable trip ever'.

Meera tapped on my shoulder as we landed in LV'I had dozed off with my head leaning on hers'I didn't realize'I wish I was awake to have savored that time'As I was getting up I felt a pull at my collar and looked down'she was clutching onto my shirt collar'.well'I let out a loud breath and it was all too much for me to take in'as I removed her hands, two of her fingers caressed just beneath my collar bone and I could feel steam gushing out of my ears'

Funny as it was, being a long time new Yorker, I was used to getting bumped .. I was sure I had grown insensitive to people's touch'she disproved me once again'she had awakened so many unknown emotions and desires'that I thought had long died in me'

We rented a Volvo C70 and landed at Bellagio' we were staying at the villa'.

Meera: "MK, I thought I said'we were going to split the charges'"

Maan:" It's all cool meera'"

Yash:" Am I dreaming?'.I'm in one the most expensive stays in the LV strip'private villa at Bellagio'$6000 a night'."

Meera:" You shouldn't have MK'this is just going overboard'"

Maan:" Trust me'we all need this after the 6 hr flight from NY'I got a bad deal on the flight'thought I can make up with this'"

She was silent'she didn't participate in any of our conversations'

The villa could be put to good use with its two bedrooms,  five bathrooms, private terrace, pool, kitchen and a fully loaded bar'if only she could break out of the trance she was in'She seemed dis interested in everything'

Meera and Geet took one of the bedrooms and I and Yash landed in the other'

We all quickly showered and changed to hit the streets...I only wish it was fun for her too'Meera and Yash were ruling the roulette'lady luck was favoring them'

I was +400 at blackjack and Yash was at +150'Meera was a whooping +1700'Geet didn't engage with any of the activities'She would occasionally cheer upon Meera's wins'

Her spirit was dampened and it was rubbing off on Meera and Yash too'

It was 4.00 AM and we decided to get back to the villa...I had still not spoken a full sentence with her since the start of the trip'I wanted to' but thanks to my luck'we all crashed immediately after we landed in the villa.

The routine followed the morning too'we showered and changed 'we were about to go out'when meera called out to everybody's attention'

Meera:" Ok'Geet'see we want you to break out of this'"

I and Yash moved out towards the end of the room as we were not sure how this was going to turn out'

Meera:" I'm not going to go crazy'but lets take baby steps..lets try one day at a time' and I have a plan to make it interesting'"

She got all our attention including Geet'We all were standing surrounding the bed in Meera and Geet's room'She threw in a small box in the center of the room' it appeared to be a tiny gift box'she also threw a small paper bag alongside'

Meera: "Cap ou pas Cap'"

I understood immediately'and I smiled'

Yash:"What?...."

Geet seemed to show interest'

Meera:"Game or not'I have some dares in the paperbag'don't worry I don't know what it is'I asked a friend to write it down'each of us gets a dare and we need to do it no matter what it is'the one with the shortest time to complete the dare wins the gift"

Yash:" Cool'I'm up for it'Meera'I didn't think you had it in you seriously..lagta hain mujhe mera opinion change karna padega'"

She wacked him on his shoulder'

Yash:" Ouch'"

Meera:" but here is the catch'.you don't get to choose the dare you will be doing'someone else does'you cant tell anyone else that you are doing a dare "

Yash: " Wow'hold on'what kind of dares are there in this?  What if its too risky'"

Meera:" Don't worry its not'" she smiles'

Yash: " Ok'let me be the first one'"

Meera picked for Yash and it was "Wear women's clothes and get a girl to kiss you'"

Geet picked for Meera" Take 6 shots and dance on the poker table for 2 mts without getting thrown out"

Yash picked for me and it goes " Try to hit on a guy and get his card" I was doomed but felt much better compared to Yash

Meera picked for Geet which was to tap on 4 hotel rooms with people inside and not get caught'

Yash went ahead and bought a girl's dress from the hotel boutique as neither Geet's nor Meera's would fit him..It was hilarious when he changed into the dress'

I had to give it to him for being such a sport'She smiled'or shall I say laughed'

Yash went to the bar and had a conversation going on with a Blonde'at first she dismissed Yash'but the guy's charms eventually won her'.He convinced her to give him a kiss after 17 mts'

I was surprised he had it even going that long'It was a crazy sight and my tummy ached'She was laughing too'Yash ran to change'

The next was Meera'.She was not used to shots'It took her 13 mts to just complete the shots'She was drunk'I had no hope that she would even be able to get to a center room poker table and stay there for 2 mts'The guards are usually pretty active on the floor'

Meera was clever'she joined a table game and started a fight with the dealer'she made a huge ruckus and got on top of the poker table'She was a brat'.she managed to stay there for 2 minutes before the guards came running down..She only had to stand on the table'she was already swaying from the intoxication and almost appeared that she was dancing...The whole dare took her 19 mts'We were ofcourse thrown out of the casino'we just hopped to the next one'Meera was more fun after the dare as she was wasted after 6 shots'

Meera had already lost to Yash'

Next was my turn'I was embarrassed to the core but I didn't want to be spoil sport'I walked straight to the bar and had a conversation going on with a handsome guy'apparently'I was out of luck'the guy turned out to prefer guys too'Meera, Yash and Geet had a crazy laugh'Ofcourse I didn't have a tough time getting his business card..It took me only 7 mts'he was more than happy to meet me after a round of drinks'I ran for my life'

It was Geet's turn'Yash was holding onto Meera as she was high'I had to time Geet'we landed on the 7rd floor at Bellagio'Geet was at first reluctant to start off the dare'but with all our encouragement she walked into the hallway'we were all standing at the farend close to the stairs'all waiting to run'

She tapped the first door loudly'started the second and went on'An old lady was out the first door'The second door didn't get anyone out'the third door got a middle aged American man out'

The fourth door didn't get anyone out'

She had to do two more'but the two others who were already on the hallway were yelling at the top of their voices'Geet was cracking underneath'she closed her ears with her palms and broke into a run'she tapped on a few more doors not knowing if she will be able to cover two successful doors'

She was done'after 3.56 mts only and we all ran before the hotel security could get us'the old lady from the first room had already called them'.as we were running down the stairs'I felt as if we all had turned back our clocks and had become 10 years younger'

It was a ruckus'we reached the villa and couldn't control our laughter'Geet had finally broken out of it'Thanks to meera'

<Geet's monologue>

I couldn't help feeling better'.but something still bothered me and I was unpredictable'I wasn't sure when I would break into a crying spree'

Meer and yash had settled in...I walked to the terrace'the moon was shining brightly'I could use some fresh air'It seemed as if I was transported to a villa in Italy...it was a calming sight...Meera was right...Maan always goes overboard...


He was standing by the ledge'probably taking in the view of LV'

'he was dressed in white shirt and casual trousers'I couldn't take my eyes off him and felt it was a bad idea to be here'I was about to turn and get back to the room when he noticed me and called my name'

Maan:"Geet'"

Geet:" Ji'main to bus'abhi nikhal rahi thi'."

Maan:"Kyon'mujhe dekkar dar lagta hai'"

Geet:" Dar'kis baat ka daar'"

Maan:" Phir kyon baage chali jaa rahi ho'"

Geet:" Actually'mujhe paani'" and before I could finish my sentence he picked up a water bottle from a nearby table and handed it to me'

He scared me...I didn't know what this irrestible pull was'I didn't like it'His gaze pierced me'I pulled away my eyes from his'

I turned and was about to get out of there'when he held me by my wrist and stopped me'

He came closer and stood right behind me

'he let go of my wrist and turned me towards him'I lifted my head to meet his eyes'

Maan:" Ab tum kaise ho geet'"

Geet:" Ji'main teek hoon'"

Maan:" Sach sach bolo'tumhari aankhen kuch aur keha rahi hain'"

I lower my head'and tears start rolling down my cheeks'

He lifted my chin and made me meet his eyes again'He hesitated at first, but went ahead and wiped my tears with his fingers'

Maan:" Geet please bolo'what can I do?"

Geet:" It's not you Maan'.no one can do anything about my situation'"

His gaze turned angry'he turned away not to face me'

I walked towards him and stopped him by laying my hand on his shoulder'he turned to look at me once again'

Maan:" I'm sorry Geet I can't see you like this'mujhe bus vus Geet ko dekhna hai..jo central park mein saath chalne ki vaada ki thee'jo kisi aur ke liye vumeed rakthee thee'"

Geet:" Main ab bhi vahi Geet hoon jo aapke saath chaloongi..aap ke liye vumeed rakoongi..aapko hasaane ke liye kooshish bhi karoongi'lekin farak sirf itna hai ki'kisi aur ne mere saath kiye vaada thod diya hai'mujpar vummed rakna chod diya'hai'"

He waited to respond'almost as if he was fishing for the right words'I walked to the ledge and was almost half seated on it'He turned and walked  towards me'He stood close to me..but kept his distance and faced me'

Maan:"Tumhe kuch kar ne liye zaroorat nahin hai Geet..Aur 'mein apna kooshish hamesha zaari rakoonga'bus tumhe is haalaath se nikal ne keliye'mera haath pakadkar'agae badna hoga'"

<Maan's monologue>

As a sign of acknowledgement'she took her right hand that was clutched to her left and held mine....

She gave it some time...she didn't turn her eyes away from mine this time'she knew this was my promise to her'she slowly rested her forhead below my chin'right next to my collar bone but she didn't close the distance between us'we stayed that way for some time'and then she lifted her head to look at me and smiled'it came from deep within and I had waited more than a week to see one'

We both turned to take the view of LV again'

Maan:" Toh'gift box mein kya tha?

She took the box and placed it in my hand'I opend to see a deep blue cystal in it'it seemed rare'

Maan:" bilkul tumhari tarah'"

Geet:" Ji'matlab'"

Maan:" transparent'kuch chup tha nahin iske andar... jo bhi hai'sab saaf saaf dikta hai'"

She looked at me as if she was in agreement with what I just said'she knew what I meant'I wanted to make the air a little ligther'I went on to tease her'

Maan:" Main'teek tho keh raha hoon 'jo mann mei aaye'tum sab bol de ti ho'waise us din'peet's coffee mein'kya kaha'haan..ki mein tumhara peecha kar raha hoon'"

Geet:" Maan'." She had a fake anger on her face'

Maan:" Filter naam ki kuch cheez suni hain?...woh dalna padta hai baath kar ne se pehle'"

Geet:" To aap maan le the hain'ke aapke dil ke baath kabhi zobaan pe nahi laate'."

She paused and looked at me as if she was trying to look deep into me'we broke our gaze'

Geet:" I mean mera sawaal tha'ki kya aap hamesha har baat ko filter kar ke hi bataatein hain'." She paused'

Geet:"logon se chup the kyon ho Maan"

I didn't know how to answer that question'

Geet:" Aapne vaada kiya tha'.remeber project hot chocolate'"

We laughed'I liked the way she called it'

Maan:"Maine tumse kabhi kuch chupaya nahi Geet'waise" My words trailed off'I wasn't sure if I wanted to finish the sentence

"tum ho na' mujhe sika ne ke liye'har woh baat jo main nahi jaanta'"

She seemed excited'something came to her mind'she was trying to be the one who walked with me in central park'she started off her usual banter'her arguments' her theories'

We spent the entire night on the terrace'we walked around the pool a couple of times'sat for some time'stood by the ledge'.She even dipped her feet in the swimming pool while I stayed seated on the pool chair'

She made it up to me for the entire week that I missed her'

It was almost 5.00 AM'we wanted to catch some sleep before our flight to NY'as we were about to leave I wanted to apologize to her'I didn't know why'but I wanted to make sure she heard it'

Maan:" Geet'.Sorry'I dint check on you the whole week'I only pinged you'I didn't know how to come over or call'"

Before I could say anything'she cut me off'

Geet:"Maan'you didn't have to'aur baat rahi phone ki'aap jab chase mujhe call kar sak the ho'"

I wanted that'.I was waiting for her to define my boundaries and I was glad I got one'Her smile was changing as if wanting to tease me'

Geet:"'Lekin'call kar ke'aap karenge kya'ab bhi aap ek gante mein paanch shabd hi to bol te ho'aaj raat bhi main hi baat kar rahi thi'aap tho bilkul chup the'"

I wanted to tell her how much I had missed our silly conversations  and that I didn't want to lose one minute of it tonight..I didn't know if I was going to get such an opportunity again'

I smiled and brushed off her comment'

We walked back to our rooms'There was some thing in the air that told me it was changing'she was indeed holding my hand and was making an effort to move ahead'She forgot her crystal and left it with me'I stared at it for some time'it felt like she had left a piece of her with me'it was transparent'deep and above all PURE'

Edited by Hasini67 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing update!!!
I liked how Meera is taking efforts for geet😊
The dare game they played was fabulous. Really enjoyed that a lot in this update.
Infact, read it twice😛
Nice to see geet getting back to her old self, Thanks to Maan😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow! Fabulous updates! Loved them to the hilt! Meera and Geet's friendship is heart-warming.....true friends indeed! She is trying so hard to get Geet out of this....it hurts her to see Geet in pain.....great bond! Even Yash is so nice! So much fun to be with....lolz. Maan....lolz.....he could not have been happier......got an opportunity to be with her. Aww.....Dadi.....but her dream is gonna be a reality.....so she need not worry much. Lolz. The dares they got......🤣.....superb! I was so enjoying that part. Super-fun! Aww.....Maan and Geet's convo.....really nice.....their bond is strengthening and are getting more comfortable with each other......it's just amazing! Oh, I forgot......I just loved that strings bit in part 14.....it was too good! Do continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Fabulous, Mindblowing, Amazing... - it was really goood... I am loving the growing friendship/unknown feelings between MAANEET! Cant wait to read more of it.. They are soo good together!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
hv no  words love it ❤️
waiting impatiently for the next update do continue soon😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
Great update...Love how Maan and geet's relationship is progressing!