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Posted: 15 years ago
aww dadi pestering geet was sooo cute...!!!=)... amazing update once again... =)
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maan: geet zid matt karo aur yeh fruits khao
tum pregnant ho aur tumhay inki zarurat hay
a voice came from behind ''pregnnant???''
both maan and geet looked in the direction of that voice and saw savitri devi standing there

TOGETHER FOREVER
Part 11


dadi: pregnant??
she walked towrds maan and geet who were looking at each other in shock
dadi: kon hay pregnant?
geet and maan sighed in relief
maan:wo..... umm.... dadi maa hamari aik client pregnant hay
dadi sat down on her chair facing geet
dadi: geet beta aap yeh fruits khaey na
maan:dadi may b geet say yehi keh raha hu laikin yeh meri baat nahi

maan rahi. zid kar rahi hay
dadi: maan ap ki mangetar hay tou ziddi tou ho ge na
acha geet beta please ap yeh fruits kha lijeay
geet: dadimaa nahi please
maan:(in a stern voice) apni haalat dekhi thi tum nay jab may tumhay
yaha laya tha?? chalo ab yeh kha lo
maan took a sliced apple in his hand and took it infront of geet's mouth
geet opened her mouth and let maan feed her the apple
when she was finished with the apple slice maan was about to take another one for geet
when she pinched his hand under the table
(cuz she was feeling shy infront of dadi and wanted to stop maan)
maan looked at her furious but geet smiled at him then looked at dadi who was looking sideways
then she looked at maan and showed him her toungue and started eating another sliced apple
maan just smiled at her innocence and childish behaviour
dadi cleared her throat
dadi: geet beta aap kaha say hay?
geet: umm... dadi may hoshiarpur say hu
dadi: tou ap ka parents?
geet felt abit hesitant
geet: wo wohi hotay hay
dadi: ap k parents mujhay broad-minded lagtay hay. meri aik welfare
hay us nay waha servey kia tha aur us k mutabik waha ki zyada
tar families larkio ko kaam kay leay bahar nahi bhejti....
geet was feeling restless and her mind was having flashbacks of her past
tears swimming in her eyes
maan noticed this and was about to say something to dadi to stop when he felt geet get up
geet gotup from her chair and ran outside to the garden

dadi looked at maan because of geet's sudden behaviour
maan: baad may dadimaa
saying this he got up and followed geet to the garden
it was dark outside but he spoted geet
she was sitting against the fountain and tears rolling down her eyes
maan came to her and sat down beside her
he put his arm around her shoulder
geet felt warmth with his touch and let her head fall on maan's shoulder
maan let her cry
he knew crying would help her lose some burden

maan: geet bus shhhh...... ab rona bund karo
geet: maan may dadimaa ko kya btau k may yaha kaisay ai? kin

haalat may ai? may unhay kaisay btau maan kaisay?
maan: geet pehlay tum rona bund karo...... aur dadimaa ko may
smjha du ga k tum say tumharay khandaan k baaray may kuch
na puchay kyu k tumhara is dunya may koi nahi
geet looked at maan with teary eyes and cupped his face
she corrected
geet: aap aur iss bachchay k siwa koi nahi
maan hugged her tight
maan: itna bharosa hay mujh pe?
geet broke the embrace and rested her forehead on maan's
geet: han.. apni jaan say b zyada
maan kissed her on her forehead and then started helping her to stand
but in doing so geet stumbled and fell in the fountain
maan came to the fountain and saw geet sitting there fuming and water falling on her
maan starts to laugh at her
geet: may yahan bheeg rahi hu aur aap waha kharay ho k hans rahay hay
maan:tou aur kya kru? chalo ab utho warna baimaar ho jao ge
geet: nahi mujhay nahi ana (she said irrritated)
maan: GEEEEET!!!!! ab bahar niklo
geet: aap ko pata hay may kitni irritate ho rahi hu
maan: kyu?
geet: kyu k ab mujhay dobara nahana paray ga aur baal b dobara dhonay paray gay. ughhh!!
maan:acha yeh sab batay baad may kar laina ab tum bahar ao warna.......!!
geet: warna kya?? huh?
maan:warna may khud tumhay nikalnay aa jau ga
geet: tou aa jaeyay na may nay kab aap ko mna kia hay
maan: acha geet may aa raha hu
maan got in the fountain and furiously picked up geet
geet was shoked to see the sudden anger in maan
maan headed towards the outhouse
he opened the door and looked at geet who was looking at him
maan's anger ceased away when he looked into those big innocent eyes
both were lost in each other
maan headed upstairs and entered geet's room without taking his eyes off of her
he placed geet down and headed out
geet: suniye!!! ap kaha ja rahay hay?
maan:garri say tumhara bag nikalnay ja raha hu
maan came back with geet's bag in one hand and a towel in the other
he placed the bag on the bed and handed the towel to her
maan: please apnay kapray bhi change kar lain warna tumhay thund lag jai ge
geet just nodded
took out her clothes and opened the bathroom door but turned behind
geet: please aap yahin rehna
maan smiled at her to assure that he would be here
geet went inside
maan was feeling too hot and removed his shirt (he was wearing his usual black vest underneath so no worries)

geet: ughhh!!! phir say nahi
maan became worried
maan:geet kya hua?
geet: aap k is phuwaaray nay phir say apna jalwa dikha dia hay. meray kapray phir say geelay
ho gye hay. maan please mujhay dusray kapray pakra day aur pleeaase is baar koi fazul
shart mut rakhiey ga
maan remembered the last time this happened and smiled
he took out the first clothe that came in his hand and handed it to geet

geet: maan yeh aap nay mujhay kya pakra dia hay? ab may yeh pehan kar aap k samnay au
ge??
maan:tou problem kya hay us may? ab jaldi say bahar ao

after two minutes geet came out slightly embarrased and shying
maan looked at her
she looked gorgious
maan looked at her from head to feet and then realized that she was wearing a knee-length
kurta
tried looking away but she was lking sooo beautiful and irresistable that he was not able to
remove his gaze from her
maan walked upto her slowly and lifted her chin up
geet blushed on seeing him without his shirt in his black vest and then looked up at maan
he kissed her on the cheek and was moving to her lips when the light went out
geet got away from maan and took out the candle from her bag and lightened it
she placed the candle an the dressing table and turned behind to find maan just inches away from
her....................

back with another update 😊
hope you enjoyed it 😃

and noor again feeling naughty 😳😈😈

please do leave your comments
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Edited by NoorFatima - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey i just read ur FF i really loved ittttttttt

it's so intrestingggggggggggg

i would really like to read more. plzzzz add me to ur p.m. list

and update soonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
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Posted: 15 years ago
pls when a yu gonner update next part i can't wait read lovely update i hope the truth doesn't come out now i want Maaneet to get married first pls cont soonnnnnnnnn
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Posted: 15 years ago
great part ...just loved it...
how was ur exams...???
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: nilu710

Hey i just read ur FF i really loved ittttttttt


it's so intrestingggggggggggg

i would really like to read more. plzzzz add me to ur p.m. list

and update soonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

aww thankyou soo much
and i've added u 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sharmake11

pls when a yu gonner update next part i can't wait read lovely update i hope the truth doesn't come out now i want Maaneet to get married first pls cont soonnnnnnnnn

umm... dont know wen i'll update next but i'll try n do it soon inshallah 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: muskanp

great part ...just loved it...

how was ur exams...???

hey thanx
and they were really gooooood 😃 thanx
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Posted: 15 years ago
great update dear that was really adorable...
i am so loving it all...great do keep writing
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Posted: 15 years ago
noor plz get more naughty😉i like it!!!n plz try 2 translate it in english 2 so i cn understand it better m so poor in hindi n ur dialogues r in hindi.plz dnt mind ma comments.i know it takes u long 2 write bt....

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