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Posted: 14 years ago
hi... How are u feeling now??? Hope that u're fine... Get well soon dea...
& ya Im waiting for ur update..
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Posted: 14 years ago

-truely magical-
part 6

geet turns on one side with the phone under the spread
maan - tumhe mera number khanha se mila?
geet - jhanha se aap ko mera number mila!!
maan rolled his eyes
maan - tum kisi baath ka sidha sidha javab kyun nahi de sakti
geet - aap baath hi aise karthe ho..she cuddles up in her pillow
resting the phone between her cheek & pillow
maan - tumne mujh se chit chat karne kaliya subha subha phone liya hain
geet - nahi romance karne ke liya!!!!
snaps back
maan - GEET
geet - definitly not!!!!..waise bhi how can I chit chat with u?
maan - why?
geet - mujhe self talk karne ka koi shauk nahi hain
maan - wat selftalk?
geet - chit-chat with u will be like talking to myself
maan - nahi aise baath nahi hain
geet - oh really!! samjho hum chit-chat karte bhi hain to kya hoga
maan - kya hoga
geet - pura samya main he baath karthi rahoonghi...aap sirf umm!! hmm!!
maan smiled
geet - waise why did u save my number
maan - woo ..woo
geet - I know, aapne watch ke bare main pata karne ke liya hi na
aur kya baat ho sakthi hain. actually it was left in my purse last night
maan - kyun main tumse baath karne ke liya bhi tumhara number save kar sakta hoon!!
geet - joke of the century...starts laughing
maan - nahi seriously
geet - fir aap kahoo gha aap ko mujhe se love at first sight hogaya
maan - haan
geet - yaar subha subha to bundle math maro na!! kuch to sharam karo
maan - tum se kaise sharam, tumhare saat hi to aise baath kar sakte hain
geet - stop flirting nahi to main abhi call cut kardonghe
maan - nahi nahi!! aise math karna
geet - thats better..wat ever u doing
maan - tumhare bare main sooch raha tha
geet - BYE
maan - ok ok !! I was working out
geet - seriously!!! thats why alram & all
maan - umm!!
geet - work out hogaya?
maan - umm!!
geet - tabhi main soochu itna sweaty sweaty smell khanha se aarahi hain?
maan sniffed himself & then rubbed his head
geet laughed holding her stomach!!🤣🤣🤣🤣
maan - GEET!!!
she continues laughing u smelled ur self right!!! 🤣 🤣
maan - GEET!!! stop it ..stop laughing now
maan - stop it now nahi to I am cutting the call
geet - teehk hain nahi has thi bus
again starts laughing u actually smelled urself he he he🤣🤣🤣
maan - OK BYE
geet - nahi nahi I am seriously not laughing
..she giggles very softly😊
maan actually smiled😳
maan walks to the wash room & puts the phone on speaker
geet - Mr.bachan ...itna bhi sweaty nahi ho ki u have to have ur shower
u wiped with that towel na..ur ok..now..seriously.
.& giggles
maan looks around - tum ko phone main sab kuch dihk tha hain kya
geet - General knowledge dear!!
maan - is main GK ..could u explain.
..maan continues with his shower
geet - all guys are the same..after completeing the work out
will throw the vest..wipe with towell check out in the mirror
shower, fir shave, fir cologne splash karo ghe
waise tum kaun sa use karthe ho...wait wait I know ur perfume
she sniffs her hand ..bends to smell her neck around her waist..umm yah
Davidoff Hot Water & I am sure u use the same after shave
maan - how are u so sure
? maan finishes his showers & applies the foarm on his face
waiting for her answere
geet - itna perfume pota huwa tha aapne mera uppar se aab bhi Davidoff Hot Water ki smell
aa rahi thi...I am sure some body in the disc would have thought I have
this fasination for men perfume
maan - how can u smell of my perfume
geet - are yaar I fell on u & ur watch the stuck on my back...
maan cuts him self!!thinking of her bare back!!
geet - did u hurt ur self..uff!!!jaldi se detol laagavoo abhi...
maan takes the detol...in the cotton was about to apply
geet - aise nahi..phela wash the foam from the cut
maan rolls his eyes
geet - wash kiya?
maan - umm!!
geet - aab deehre se ..uuuffff ufffff...slowly slowly
..she was blowing
maan - tum yeh kya kar rahi ho?
geet - phook rahi hoon
maan - phone se
geet - teehk hain teehk hain I was just concerned
making faces ..dard to nahi ho raha
maan bins the cotton & turned to leave
geet - Mr.bachan don't u have to shave the other side..batho batho main aap to
bhul hi gaya na
maan turns to look at the mirror..
geet - socho main no hoon to aap ka kya hoga?
maan - umm!!
slidding his blade on the other firm cheeks
geet - be carefull this time ..
maan - umm!!
geet - hogaya?
maan - ek min...
she rolled on to the other side
maan - aab bolo hogaya..he wipes his face & applies the after shave
geet - aacha aap ne stubble kyun rakhi hain
maan - kyun tumhe aachi nahi lagthi
..walks to the room in towel
geet - nahi aise baath nahi I was just asking
maan - seriously u don't like it
geet - how does that matter any way
maan - wat if I say it matters..
pulls out the towel to change
geet - then I really can't say much..because I have not seen u without ..
she delebrately pauses...
maan pulls on his towel back
geet giggles..phone main waise bhi kuch nahi dihktha hain
maan - GEET..
geet - aachaa baba I was just joking
maan - so u were saying about my stubble
..smiles & continues changing
geet - nahi i was saying!! I have not seen u without stubble so can't really say
waise most of the girls like cleaned shaved men
maan - i don't care about them..as far as u don't mind its fine by me
geet smiles - aap baaz nahi aavooghe
maan opens his ward robe
geet - kaun se shirt phen rahe ho?
maan - white!!
geet - aaj saturday hai
maan - so?
geet - why so formal
maan - office ja raha hoon college nahi
geet - fir bhi
..he keeps it back
maan picks another one
geet - woh nahi..pick up the black
maan - waist coat ka colour bhi bata do
geet - kyun rooz main hi bata thi hoon kya
maan - seriously tum pagal hoo
geet - ok ok!!! wear the dark red types
maan - umm!!
maan changes his dress
geet - wat time do u have to reach office
maan - 9.00 am
geet - fir aap itni jaldhi kyun ready ho rahe ho?
maan - wat do u think the time is?
geet - 6.30am
maan - well GOODMORNING DEAR meri ghadi main time check karo 8.00am horaha hain
geet - u mean we are on this call for 2hrs
maan - actually 1hrs 45mins..tumne 6.15am phone kiya tha
geet - kitna bathe banathe hoo aap uff!! meri puri subha ki neied kharab kardhi
maan - right!!!
geet - BYE mujhe college ke liya late horaha hain
IS ANY ONE STILL WONDERING WAT WAS THE ENDLESS CALL ALL ABOUT????
precap
papa ji shouting at geet because of Maan Singh Khurana😲
thanxs for all the comments loved it..hope u like this part to
please please do comment
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
res
*edit*
this part reminds me of a conversation I had during summer with a friend!! Perfectly described 😃
⭐️⭐️
Sadaf
Edited by kyphfanz - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wao amzing enless call just luved the conversation continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

phone convo was so brilliant..........

i mean it was sweet, romantic, and adorable............
i loved it..........
so full marks for this awesome update......
plzzz continue soonnn
reva
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Posted: 14 years ago

C-U-T-E conversation

why is Geet's dad yelling at her? Update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
ufff..... u stopped at the very interesting part yaar .... 😲..nice update... dress selection ....oh maan hearing advice on selecting dress !!!!!! expecting the next update soon.....😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Omg they talked for such a long time
This was truly remarkable and I'm just awestruck on the way she knew what he was doing like the smell part and the shirt part especially...omg...Although I know that it's just fiction but I feel like it's all true.
Thanks a lot di...please update soon
Finally the weekend's gonna be over(here,its around 9p.m.)I dunno what's the time over at ur place,perhaps the morning?)
Thanks again for this lovely FF which is gives such a young feeling! Makes me feel so fresh! Really can't wait to read the next part....
Please get well soon di! Call it coincidence or what but I'm also sick and so are 2 of my other best friends....Lolz....Anyways,Get Well Soon

Lots of love,Shaila
Edited by bluedreamz953 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow...that was just so good...really great...
and the convo between them is really cute...
geet deciding...bout all.....really sweet....
do keep writing
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow !!!maan actually listened 2 gee t fr tht long thts cute...nd she smelled herself wow !!!

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