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Life, Love and Story

Part 1

khurana mansion in pari's room

pari: guess what just happened?'

geet:umm tmhay koi nya boyfriend mil gya hay??

pari: oh geet shut up yaar may nay sirf do hi ko chora hay

geet:han do hafto may do boy friends ko tum nay chora aur bakio nay tumhay chora

pari: acha us baat ko tou choro guess karo kya hua guess karo na ya phir tm rehnay he do tm kuch fazul baat he karo you know what bhaiya america say wapis aa rahay hay

geet:acha.. kb?

pari: kal. oooooo i'm soooo excited

geet:kitnay dino k leay a rahay hay?

pari: babes! wo is baar wapis nahi jaey gay

geet:that's a surprise!!! per kyu kya hua? dadimaa tou waha hay tou tumharay bhaiya kyu wapis aa rahay hay?

pari: bhala bhaiya dadimaa ko akailay waha chor saktay thay?? nahi na.... dadi maa nay bhaiya say kaha k wo india wapis ana chahti hay aur yahin rahna chahti hay tou dadi maa nay bhaiya ko wapis india shift honay k leay mna lia hay.

geet:waisay wo kitnay arsay baad aa rahay hay?

pari: atay tou takreeban har saal hay laikin sirf do din k leay atay thay

geet:tou do din may tou wo sotay rehtay thay na. may nay kabhi unhay apnay kanray say bahar nahi dekha aur agar bahar atay thay tou uncle k sath chalay jatay thay unka kaam dekhnay k leay

pari: han.... lekin wo bahar is leay nahi atay thay k unka samna agar prem say ho gya tou unka gussa aasmaan chu jaey ga. tujhay tou pta hay na k bhaiya ko prem ki bak bak say kitna gussa ata hay

geet:han yaar wo bihat bak bak karta hay. khota mujhay cllege may marwata tha

"oye tu kisay khota keh rahi hay??"

prem said while peeping inside the room

pari: tu hmari btay sunn raha tha?

prem:tum logo nay aisi bat hi kya ki hay jo may sunta?? (he came in and sat on the couch)

pari: hahaha may b kahu k tu darr kyu nahi raha

prem:kyu???? aisa kya honay wala hay jo may darru?

pari: geet tu bta isay

geet:is ka saroo bhai a raha hay kal

prem who was sitting on the edge of couch fell down after hearing this

pari:oye geet my bro is not saroo wo dunya k savse achay bhaiya hay.

prem:kya!!!!!!??? kal?? may phir tumharay ghar teen din baad he aau ga

pari: tujhay ab aanay ki zroorat nahi hay phir

prem:kyu???

geet:kyu k wo is baar wapis janay k leay nahi aa rahay. wo ab wapis india shift ho rahay hay

prem:i'm dead yaar aur agar zinda rehna hay tou un k samnay bolna nahi hoga aur wo may kar nahi sakta.

pari:yaar abhi tum log meray bhai ko choro aur chalooo

geet:kahan??

pari:prem tu bta kahan chalna hay. bol teri akhri khwahish kya hay

prem:tu tou mujhay maar rahi hay. tera bhai qatal b karta hay?

pari:oh shut up prem. bta kaha chalay ga?

prem:mujhay ice cream khani hay

pari:chal phir

they all get up and go outside in prem's car

geet:prem please gari ahista chalana

prem:nahi. meri gari meri marzi!!

geet:please prem

prem:acha acha theek hay. tu baith tou sahi

the trio sits in the car. pari in passenger seat and geet at the back

prem starts the car and drives with speed 10 kmph

geet:tu kya kar raha hay? gari taiz chala na

prem:tu nay he tou jaha tha k gari ahista chalani hay

geet:tu mera mazaq urra raha hay? (and hits him hard on his head) chal ab gari taiz chala

prem:as you say madam

prem starts to drive with a high speed

pari and prem start to scream in excitment

geet:prem gari ahista kar

prem doesnt listen to geet

geet:PREM AHISTA KAR GARI

prem kept on increasing the speed

geet: prem............ (in a faint voice)

pari remembered

pari:prem gari rok jaldi kar (in a serious tone)

prem stopped the car and parked it at the side of the road

pari turned to look

prem:why so serious?? huh pari g??

pari hit prem on his head hard

prem:what was that for??

pari:peechay dekh!! tujhay b nai yaad raha??

prem looked at the backseat and found geet unconciouse

prem: oh teri.......pari duffer tu mujhay yaad nahi kara sakti thi

pari:tu zyada batay na kar ......ab ja kahi say pani ki bottle lay kar aa

pari and prem get out of the car

prem goes to a nearby shop and brings a water bottle

pari goes to geet and makes her lye on the backseat with her head on her lap

prem comes with a water bottle and pari sprinkled some water on geet's face

her eyes flew open and she sat straight atonce

her eyes began to water

prem and pari looked at each other

prem:please geet i'm sorry

pari:pari too sorry

geet started to cry

warm tears started to come from her eyes

prem:geet yaar please we're sorry na. we forgot that you were afraid of fast driving

pari:what kind of friends are we!!?

geet hugs pari and prem hugs geet

prem:jaadu ki jhappi di hay may nay ab tou rona bund kar day geet

geet smiles at them and controls herself

prem:sorry geet hmay dehaan rakhna chaheay tha

geet:its okay guyz

prem:i'm really soory geet

geet:ab agar tu nay dobara sorry kaha tou may nay rona shuru kar daina hay

prem:okay madam g

pari:yaar ab please ice cream khanay chalay pleeeeaaaase

prem:chal chaltay hay

pari:ab gari may chalau ge

prem:geet paka promise may gari ahista chalau ga lekin tu isay mna kar na k ye gari na chalaey. kabara kr day ge meri gari ka

pari:aeyy prem may itni b buri gari nahi chalati

prem:han isi leay abi tk license nahi mila

geet and prem laugh at her

geet:chalanay day na is gadhay ko

prem:agar mujhay gadha bula kr tujhay khushi milti hay tou bula lay lekin bus khush raha kar

pari and geet sit at the back seat and prem drives to the icecream parlour

prem orders tutti fruity for geet and chocolate icecreame for pari and himself

icecreame comes and they start eating it

pari:oh mujhay yaad aya!!

prem:kya?? k tu pagal hay??

pari:preeeem!! tu mujhay hamesha pagal kyu bulata hay

geet:han prem tujhay pata hay na k ye maha paagal hay tou tu isay sirf paagal na kaha kar. apni insult feel karti hay

prem and geet laugh while pari fumes

pari:tum dono b na.... ugh!!!

geet:acha sorry baba.. ab bata tujhay kya yaad aya tha?

pari:may keh rahi thi k kal bhaiya nay ana hay

prem:tu kyu apnay bhaiya ka naam lay k mujhay darrati hay? aur tu pehlay he bta chuki hay k teray akroo bhaiya nay ana hay

pari:yaar don't cal him akroo

geet:acha tou tu he bta hum unhay sadoo na kahay akroo na kahya tou aur kya kahay?

pari:just call him MAAN.... aur ab meri baat suno gay b ya nahi

prem:acha chal bol

pari:thank you MR. CHOPRA...... tou may keh rahi thi k kal bhaiya nay ana hay aur mom dad ghar pe nahi ho gay aur kal mera driving test hay

prem:tou hum kya karay??

pari:SUNN LO PURI BAAT.......

geet puts her hand on prem's mouth

geet:yaar tujhay pari k gussay ka pata hay na..... pari ab tu bol

pari:thanx geet...... as i was saying kal mera driving test hay aur wo usi waqt hay jis waqt bhaiya ki flight ka time hay

geet:ab touu tu gai

pari:thats why i need you guyz please tum may say koi ja kar bhaiya ko lay aey ga? please??

geet lets go of prem's mouth

prem:baba may tou nahi la raha unhay.....

pari:tujh say tou mujhay umeed bhi nahi thi..... geet please...

geet looks at pari who had made a puppy-dog-face

geet:okay..... per agar teray bhai ko gussa aya aur may mar gai tou prem please pari ka galla duba daina

pari:OH THANKYOU THANKYOU GEET

pari hugs geet and hits prem really hard

prem:aj lagta hay mera qeema ban jai ga

pari:waisay geet dadimaa b bhaiya k sath ho ge tou tu fikar na kar

Precap

geet to recieve maan
hope you guyz liked it
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an thanku all for the comments and motivation
love
Noor
link to part 2
Edited by NoorFatima - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#52
Res.

~Edited~

Yipee! First one to comment!
Wow! 👏
That's an awesome part you have written! 😊
It was really interesting! 😊
It was quite funny too! 😆
I toh loved it! 😃

Waiting for your next part! 😉
I'm really excited for Maan and Geet coming face to face! 😳
I hope you've added me to your PM List because I didn't wait for the PM this time! 😆
You Rock Buddy! 👍🏼

Love,
Yoshita
😊
Edited by YoshiMaanManiac - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#53
that is really awesome...me so loved it...do keep writing...
and the precap looks interesting....me waiting for it...
NoorFatima thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: YoshiMaanManiac

Res.

~Edited~

Yipee! First one to comment!
Wow! 👏
That's an awesome part you have written! 😊
It was really interesting! 😊
It was quite funny too! 😆
I toh loved it! 😃

Waiting for your next part! 😉
I'm really excited for Maan and Geet coming face to face! 😳
I hope you've added me to your PM List because I didn't wait for the PM this time! 😆
You Rock Buddy! 👍🏼

Love,
Yoshita
😊

thanx
update k baad pehla comment wo b itna lamba, thankyou
and you are in my PM list bus thori dair lagay ge anay may
and thanx Embarrassed
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Posted: 14 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: NoorFatima

thanx
update k baad pehla comment wo b itna lamba, thankyou
and you are in my PM list bus thori dair lagay ge anay may
and thanx 😳



Your welcome! 😊
Okay, thanks! Don't worry, Its' okay! I understand! 😉
And your welcome again! 😆

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Posted: 14 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: YoshiMaanManiac



Your welcome! 😊
Okay, thanks! Don't worry, Its' okay! I understand! 😉
And your welcome again! 😆

❤️
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hiiiiiiiiiiiiiieeeeeeeeeeeee..............

m here too.....

it was superbbbb lyk ur together foreva......... liked it sooooo much.........

update soon..............

wid luv,,

Adeena,




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Posted: 14 years ago
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i just can't stop laughing........i loved d bond of friendship btw them...
keep continuing...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey plz add me 2 ur pm list!!!😊
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its really awsome hmmm and interesting do continue soon

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