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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update!!
The precap sound interesting and funny lol..
Can't wait for the next part!!
Pls cont.soon and thanks for the PM
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: .sireesha.

OMG thats Awesome................

Loved it

The way Maan answered Shublee was so shocking and truthful.

The Precap is too shocking.

No words left to speak.

Thanq so much for the PM

Can't wait

pls update soon


🤗 thank you, will update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: vinithaa

Oh wow!! AWESOME UPDATE.....any ways i like the conversation between maan and geets mom that was hilarious to me 😆 i dint rape her but we made love🤣

Plz update soon cant wait for next one..

Love you,'
vinithaa


😆thank you 🤗
will update soon
love u too 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: lody

Omg wating for the next part thanks for pm dear


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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -afsha-

<font color="#9900ff" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Ur last three updates were fab</font>


<font color="#9900ff" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Jus love the love Maan does to Geet</font>

<font color="#9900ff" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">He is awesum</font>

<font color="#9900ff" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">He jus loves to irritate Geet's mum</font>

<font color="#9900ff" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">That love part was damn funnny😆😆</font>

<font color="#9900ff" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Amit was swettheart here jus loved him</font>

<font color="#9900ff" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">The way he supported Geet n did all thgs it was fab</font>

<font color="#9900ff" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Ur updates are really fab </font>

<font color="#9900ff" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Keep updating jaldi jaldi</font>


😆thank you so much 🤗
will update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: simzzzzcool

<font color="#cc33cc" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">AWESOME UPDATE....😉</font><font color="#cc33cc" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">Keep updating </font><div></div>


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Posted: 14 years ago
loved the update
cant wait to read da nxt update
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet cherry

loved the update

cant wait to read da nxt update

plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue


thank you! 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
omg.. lmao.. maan and shublee r hilarious.. lol.. maan just told his sasu ma he made love to his daughter b4 marriage.. wow how embaressing.. lol.. grea part yaar.. continue soon..
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Posted: 14 years ago
please guys let me know if this chapter has any EXTREME adult content 😆 that sounds bad but i want to make sure that this chapter is clean and safe for everyone to read.. well, let me know with your comments!
thanks again 🤗
Ru


Chapter O

we decided that we will not wait for 6 months to get married. Maan called the family for an emergency meeting at our apartment, mom, Amit, Jaya aunty and Mish came. mom didnt seem impressed by the apartment, i guess cause she after seeing Maan's mansion, no one can get impressed by the apartment. we were sitting in the living room, Maan was standing looking at us
"Geet and i decided that we will not have a wedding party"

"WHAT!?" they all shouted

"i already invited.." Jaya aunty was complaining

"she is my only daughter!" mom was anngry

"i want to invite my friend to my brothers wedding!" Mish mumbled

"QUIET!" Maan shouted, they all looked at him shocked.. Amit giggled, he wasnt talking nor thinking about joining this "me and Geet are the ones who are getting married not you all" Maan explained "we dont want to suffer for 6 months until we can call ourselves married"

i looked at their faces, they were disappointed and sad that the wedding party is off "we can still have a party afterwards" i said trying to sound excited

"when?" Jaya aunty looked at me

"i dont know.. but i can still wear the white dress" i smiled at ma

"we can have it.. 2 months from now" Maan suggested "we just want to go to the court and have the right papers.. then you all can set up a wedding"

"what about the family?"

"ma.. you know better than ask that question" Maan smiled at his mother sadly

"what about our family then?" mom asked

"you can call them, tell them that Geet got married" Maan answered and mom didnt like it "we just want this family to be with us" he said looking at them "this is our family.. bas" he reached his hand for me, i held it and stood next to him "who's coming to the court now?"

"NOW?!" they shouted, Amit giggling again

"i am not even dressed properly" Jaya aunty was looking at her clothes

"a party at the court house, is that what you want Geet?" mom asked me

"Maan! you cant do this.. i am in jeans!" Mish said it as if she was naked

"i asked" Maan yelled "who is coming?"

"im in" Amit raised his hand

mom was still looking at me, waiting for my answer "yes mom, this is what i want" i answered her honestly

"fine then.." she raised her hand

Jaya aunty looked at us, then at Shublee "ah God" she raised her hand

"who am i anyway?" Mish.. a new drama queen to the family, she raised her hand as well

i giggled and looked at Maan "then lets get married" he said looking sweetly at me, leaning down.. trying to kiss me when i moved back

"people are around us!" i whispered, he pouted "dont do that"

"fine.. lets go" he sighed

"ah.. come here" i stood on my toes, holding his neck and slowly kissed him softly

"EW!" Mish shouted

"GEET! WE ARE HERE YOU KNOW!" mom shouted

"Maan, my God!" i heard Jaya aunty leaving

Amit was giggling i could hear him, when i moved back and looked into his eyes, i smiled "i love you" i whispered

"i love you too" he whispered kissing my forehead

we are now married.. in my mini jeans skirt and pinkish shirt.. Maan in his jeans and white shirt. i cant lie and say, i didnt want him in a suit but he said lets be casual and we were.. we had a small party at Maan's mansion, there were food.. tables.. music.. i guess money CAN buy anything. around midnight, Maan kidnapped me literally, because mom didnt want to leave yet, she was in tears just looking at me from time to time so Maan held my hand and shouted "RUN" and we started running away to his car. he held me inside the apartment, and straight to the bedroom

"didnt we go through this before?" i teased him as we were in bed

"we did? when?" he smiled smugly as he was unbuttoning my shirt

"i think, last night" i raised an eyebrows at him

"i dont really remember.. remind me please?" he already threw my shirt away

i giggled, then bit my lip as i felt his lips on my neck "you were sitting.."

he stopped and looked down at me "you want me to sit?"

"you said remind me na?" he rolled his eyes then sat down, on the bed, i looked at him "oh.."

"oh?"

"nothing" i chuckled sitting next to him

"oh? what does that supposed to mean?"

i had to laugh "i was only teasing you Maan" he blinked at me, then blushed "aw" i said sitting cross him on his lap "you are so cute when you just fall for my traps"

"achcha?" Maan held my waist and i shivered, i put my arms around him and we looked at each other for a moment "i cant believe that.. we had to go through a war zone to be officially married" he smiled at me

i giggled "they still want a wedding"

"haan.. i know, we will have to give them one" we smiled at each other then got lost in our eyes.. i felt his hands opening my bra but didnt break the eye contact with him, he brought me closer to him ad hugged me "i really love the way you are sitting now.. that's why i sat on the bed" he whispered, i blushed and my cheek burned his shoulder, he giggled "you are so cute when you fall for my traps" he said kissing my head

i moved my head up and looked at him "i have a confession to make" he waited for me to talk "i did that last night on purpose" i bit my lip

his eyebrows were up in disbelief "and you say you are innocent?" i laughed hiding my face in his chest "lets see how innocent you are" he said in a very sexy tone of voice that again, i fell for his trap.

he made me feel like this was our first time, our first time to love each other.. he made it special.. and again, he hugged me, pulled me closer to him.. not leaving any small gap between us.. i sighed by the way we were moving together now.. i circled my arms around him, my eyes dropped the tears yet again and i whispered his name breathlessly.. this time, Maan knew what to say "i am complete now" he whispered in my ear.

i opened my eyes the next day and smiled.. Maan wasnt around me, but i was still smiling remembering what he said.. remembering how special i felt, still feel just smelling like him. i sat on the bed and looked outside the window andn groaned "i cant believe i slept a whole day again !" i mumbled

"it's morning sweetheart" Maan said walking inside with a tray in his hands

my smile got bigger looking at him "good morning" i said

he put the tray down ad kissed my forehead "good morning.. how are you feeling? all is well?" he asked teasing me

i hit his shoulder playfully and he giggled, then i had to excuse myself to the bathroom to fresh up at least, i came back and we sat and had breakfast in silence "i didnt sleep the whole day na?" i asked after we were done

he laughed "no, just 4 hours"

"oh" i nodded and i got up walked towards the closet and got my towels out, i looked at the open closet and wondered what to wear, i know that we will have to go to his place for lunch.. my part of the closet was filled with jeans, shirts, pjs and underwear pjs ! i cant go in jeans and shirt "Maan" i yelled as he wasnt in the room

"ji?" he yelled from outside

"i think i have to go back home"

i heard him running towards me "why?!" he asked

i looked at his worried face "i dont have dresses.." why does he look scared?

"oh" he giggled "for what?"

"remember? lunch" he blinked at me "Jaya aunty invited us!"

"OH! right!" he sighed "and we have to go?"

"Maan!"

"ok, ok" he walked towards me and looked at the closet "jeans and shirt wont do?"

"you dont want me to go home?" i asked and he didnt reply "something wrong?"

"no.. nothing" he smiled "sure, we will stop at your house before lunch"

"i'll need time to decide.." he looked away "just tell me no, and i will stay"

he looked at me "its ok.. ill take you home now" he smiled then gave me his back, was about to walk away when i held his arm

"kya hua?" i asked, he shook his head "tell me" i rubbed his arm

he sighed closing his eyes tight "you said you wanted to go home.. i thought i did something wrong and i am.." he paused "drama king"

i giggled silently, he opened his eyes and i had to laugh "Maan" i hugged him tightly "why are you so sweet?"

he kissed my head, hugging me back "cause tum yahan ho.." i smiled still hugging him "remember when i said, i dont have the power to leave you?" i nodded "you might.. see me do things or react to things that are a bit over the top.. its only for that reason" i moved back and looked at him "im old na? i want to keep you close as much as possible"

i stood on my toes and kissed him "you are not old.." he looked down, i put my finger on his chin and made him face "if you say that again, i will get upset really"

"baas ji baas, i wont say it!" he laughed hugging me back

before lunch with 2 hours, Maan took me back home to change, when i told mom that we are coming, she invited us for lunch but i told her the real reason and she got upset, Maan found it funny and Amit too.. those two will become best friends.

"ma, she invited us last night! where were you?" i was trying to talk logic to her

"haan haan, today lunch at Jaya's house, tomorrow dinner.. and then completely forget about me"

"ok ma, seriously.. i dont have time to watch a Bollywood movie" i got up

Maan and Amit were laughing already "you called me a Bollywood movie?" mom sounded dramatic

"uffu ma PLEASE i need to get ready" i walked towards my room and walked towards my closet, i sighed looking at my dresses, what the hell should i wear? i took out a blue dress but threw it away "not suitable for a wife" i mumbled, i took out a pink one and laughed "kids stuff" i took out a green one and sighed "Maan hates green"

"i do?"

i jumped and looked behind me "when did you walk in?"

he hugged me from behind "didnt mean to scare you sorry janu" he apologized kissing my head "when you said kids stuff"

i blushed "i dont know what to wear"

"whatever you like" he smiled "you will make all those dresses look stunning"

i looked back at him "i want to impress aunty"

"she is already impressed"

"still.. i have to look good" i said looking at the closet

"Geet" he turned me and made me face "you are good.. with or without clothes"

"MAAN!" i hid my face with my hands

"innocent? i doubt that"

"GOD!" i hugged him to hide myself

he was laughing "but seriously.. you are good.. in every way"

"ugh, Maan please yaar" i sighed, the more he speaks the more my face is about to explode, he was still laughing "whats her favorite color?" change subject while i can

"red"

"that's yours" i looked at him

"yeah, and her's" he smiled, i squeezed my eyes at him, i know this is a trick "fine, her's is black" he rolled his eyes

"you are impossible!" i hit his chest playfully and looked at my closet "no black dress" i sighed

"malls are open at this hour" he suggested, but i was staring at a dress in the closet "Geet?"

i swallowed hard "i have one.." i walked towards it and brought it out and showed it to Maan
"pretty" he looked at me worried "what was this for?"

"dad's funeral"

"ok, you wont wear it" he took it off my hand "malls are packed with black dresses" he threw it on the bed "why black anyway? we should be happy! we will go and pick a red one, you look hot in red" he smiled at me, i was still looking at the dress, how could i get this happy without thinking about dad? how could i forget about him completely..? Maan held my hand and i slowly looked at him "he is happy" he whispered, reading my thoughts "because you are happy.." he put his warm hand on my cheek "shopping karlo?"

i smiled then softly kissed his hand "haan"

he bit his lip "Geet.." its as if he was trying to breath "we can cancel lunch na?"

"no!"

"your fault, you kissed my hand" i looked at him shocked, i quickly left his hand and he burst out laughing "i love your face when i tease you"

"MAAN!" i shouted and he started running outside the bedroom, i was following him

"kya hua!?" ma was ready to fight

"kuch nahi aunty, we have to leave" Maan said hiding behind Amit who was laughing

"are you sure Maan?" Amit asked

"AMIT MOVE!" i shouted at him

"NOOO STAY!" Maan yelled

ma was behind me "should i go behind him and kick him?"

i stopped and looked back at ma, who was looking at me seriously, here i burst out laughing and soon everyone else.. ma was looking at us, not knowing that i was only joking around with Maan "joke tha ma!" i said between my laughs

"oh" she giggled "was it? damn"

"Shublee!" Amit looked at her shocked and then she joined our laughters too.


<font size="5">PRECAP</font>
i felt my blood boil, i got up and walked behind me where she was, lifted my hand and slapped her on her cheek, her face turned "you could say whatever you want about me, but one more word about my husband and you will get a harder slap than this one" i felt everyone's gaze on me, i looked around and realized what i did.. i stood straight and looked at Miss. Tina "i apologize"
Edited by blueyRu - 14 years ago

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