Pari- Raj I'll be there for you! UPTD 13/10 PG8- Page 3

Created

Last reply

Replies

60

Views

7.9k

Users

16

Likes

53

Frequent Posters

YuNa4ever thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 16 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: Tushtih7

maryammm u hav given an awesome start... dats really wonderful... 👏

a start with a good emotion... ⭐️ so nice..

with a scope to say more about two person's thoughts, hw they feel n the understanding between them, which will take a gradual start n a fabulous go... keep rocking maryam.. am sendin u a pm dear.. 😊

thnx yami really appreciate ur comments😛 i will just goo see the om love u🤗
26javey thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 16 years ago
#22
Great concept
cont soon

pm me when you update
YuNa4ever thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 16 years ago
#23
Hey all i finally updated😆 Hope you all like it😛
Part 2:-

When two best friends meet after a long time they share their feelings and experiences with each other. Raj and Pari were different, they never needed words just knew by each other's actions that something is wrong or even if something had happened. That was exactly what Pari was concerned about because Raj was the person she told everything. But.. she did not tell him about the fact that she came to Mumbai to find Maan and confess to him that she wasin love with him. The filmy one love at first sight. She smiled and had tears in her eyes when she thought how crazy she was for a guys whom she had seen at her college where he came as an inspirational speaker and just fell for him. Suddenly she remembered the first time Raj saw her drooling over Maan.

Flashback

R:" Pari darwaaza kholo naa jaana nahi hai aaj college ki farewell party hai!"

P: "wait bus 2 minutes,"

R: "I know your two minutes jaldi bahar aa warna main andar aaoon?"

P: "shutup idiot!"

He didn't speak for some time so she replied.

P: "Raj im ready aa jao.. Raj say something raj raj!! kahin mujhe chod ke chala to nahi gaye?" She panics and opens the door and finds Raj smiling there.

P: "Jawab kyun nahi diya"

R:" Kyun ke tum ne kaha shutup."

P:" Raj u know tum kabhi bahaut annoying ho jaate ho I know im the best but meri har baat sunni zaroori nahi hoti." *she teases him.*

R: "Main tumhari baat sirf tab manta hun when I know you're correct."

P: "Acha princess ab chalein!" *he pretends to bow down in honour."

He turns around and sees the picture of Maan. It was on the wall and had taken the place of his and Pari's picture that he gave to her a on her birthday. He was shocked and more importantly hurt.

R: "Pari yeh wahi hai na jo bakwaas speech dene college aaya tha ?The boring Maan, I slept halfway through his speech." He laughs!

P: "oye shutup khabar daar isse kuch kaha!" *she looks at the picture in a dramy way*

R:*Now even more annoyed,* "Kyun?" yeh tumhara kya lagta hai jo humari photo hata ke is ki laga di?"

P: "Ok raj aaj i think I should tell you Im in love with MSK!"

R: "What?" *he says this in a very confused manner!"

P: "Shock laga na bt its just like in movies I think about him all day! Aur humari photo waise bhi woh puraani thi and plus hum dono ki itni pics hai chill maar im sure you don't mind!"

R: "Ofcourse I don't but do u even know what love is?"

P: "I do jo mujhe ab ho raha hai!" *she smiles in confidence*

R: "Pari *he goes up to her* tum paghal ho gai ho yeh film nahi hai and I know ke u tumhara sirf ek aur crush hai nothing more and plus nect time I don't want you drooling over him." *He tries to assure himself*

P: "U think im joking? *now frustrated and confused* Well I don't care what you think. Tumhe lagta hai main bachi hun I wont listen to you. Mere pyaar par doubt?" *he interrupts*

R: "Pyaar ek dafa milne se nahi hota us se hota hai jo tumhe jaanta hai aur haan Miss Pari what do you know about love. You're the kind of girl jis ko shakal dekh ke pyaar hota hai dil se nahi." *He says this in a very disappointing tone hoping to change her mind but she interrupts him right there as is annoyed!*

P: "I am not in the mood of your bhashan raj itni problem hai to just leave me alone and don't u dare say anything about what love for me is. Tum bahaut Dr. love ban kar ghoomte ho na to go find my maan for me he'll love me as soon as he sees me!"

R: "MSK jo ke abhi delhi main hai who Mumbai aae ga tumhare liye. Aur tumse pyaar karne lage ga?" *He makes fun of her in a way*

P: "Haan yehi hoye ga u wait and watch." *In a challenging tone*

R: "Tumhe lagta hai life itni simple hai ke jo chaho mil jata hai to suno tum ek dream land main reh rahi ho us se bahar aao samjhi!"

P: "Tum hote kaun ho mujhe samjhane wale?"

R: "Main kaun hota hoon? *shocked by her question!* Oh to ab tum bhool gai ke main kaun hoon tumhara."

P: "I know I know you are my best friend mere body guard nahi. Har kissi ko mujhse door karte ho." *she complains about his friendship commitments."

R: "Tum apne aap ko kya samajhti ho? aaj is larke ki waja se tum humari dosti ko chota kar rahi ho. Jab main tumhe school main kuch gundon se bachata that tab u never called me your body guard. Jab har saal diwali par tumhe main tumhari shopping karwata tab im ur best friend and I have no right now?" *He shakes his head in disapproval*

Pari realizes she made a mistake but before she could say anything he just left. Slammed the door and she could hear her footsteps. That night was the first time Raj scolded Pari. Neither did she or he meet at the farewell party.

At the party:-

She reaches the party with the worst mood possible. Knowing her nature she could never accept her mistakes. Always got raj to back her up but this time it was Raj. She can't say sorry because she has an ego which overcomes her sweet and adorable nature.. She wanted to go to him and say sorry but didn't and tried keeping herself busy with other friends. Didn't enjoy and neither did she sleep that night. Tried calling him but didn't coz she knew deep inside she was wrong. Raj ignored her for a few days. Then finally one day she decided to go and apologize well she didn't this was what happened.

Garden scene:-

P: "Raj?"

R: "Bolo?" *still a bit annoyed!*

P: "Aaj your going to Calcutta na?"

R: "Haan!"

P: "Kitni der ke liya?" *trying to start a conversation*

R: "Depends on the amount of work na dad ne nayi factory kholi hai to could take weeks or even months."

P: " I'll miss you."

R: *turns around* "Oh really? Kyun You have that Maan na!" *In a sarcastic way*

P: "Raj woh main soch rahi the ke umm who main."

R: "mere bare main sochne ka time hai tumhare paas?"

P. "Raj you know I care about u and us raat.."

R: "Acha to kya hai sorry kehna hai?"

P: "main kyun kahoon sorry?"

R: "acha mat kaho ill go!"

P: "Raj suno tum us din woh main ziada" *cuts her in*

R: "rehne do pari tum se nahi ho ga!" *in a disappointing manner*

P: "Raj please ek baar sun lo she had tears in her eyes now'"

*Raj could bear anything but not tears in her eyes. He just could'nt see her cry and made sure she never cried. He calms and down and now makes her feel better*

R: "WAISE senorita itni gehri dosti main thodi si larai hoti rehti hai lol" *says in the most filmy way possible*

P: *starts to smile* "to ab tum mujhe ignore nahi karo ge?"

R: "Tumhe kaise koi ignore kar sakta hai?" *That day too she never said sorry.*

R: "But pari I want you to promise me something? *Looks straight into her eyes* Ke tum kabhi bhi mujh se kuch nahi chupao gi aur jab tak main wapas aaon yeh MSK ka craze khatam hona chahiye aur if you think its love you will never let it hurt you?"

*Pari didn't know what to do at that time and as he was leaving for some work to Calcutta at that time she couldn't piss him off even more by not agreeing. His eyes expected a yes and seeing that smile on his face she just could not argue with him so she nods. She lies as whatever she did in his absence was what he told her not to do!*

End of Flashback:-
WHY?? Why didn't I listen to him? He was right Maan does not love me and I got crazy about a guy for no reason. Now she wondered and understood what Raj had said to her. Was it love or just according to Raj a crush??

Pari was frustrated and finally she decided to give up on what she was thinking and due to her stubborn nature she stops thinking there and then. How could she be wrong she loved Maan didn't she? Why did she have to Raj? She was scared of Raj ka reactions as they had met after so much time she just didn't know what to do but one thing she knew for sure that Raj was one person whom she could not hide anything from!

Plzz leave your comments luv maryam😃
Edited by YuNa4ever - 16 years ago
Interstellar thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago
#24
maryam nice ff....

luv this raj, a bit softer n understandin than our yuvi... pari's ego is so nice, will wait n see hw she overcomes it n moves with raj...

keepin goin... 👏 n rockin...

wish to see good emotional track so waitin fr the next one....😊
Edited by Tushtih7 - 16 years ago
flamingo_aries thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 16 years ago
#25

imao...sehbu slept halfway during maan's speech...🤣..bechare ka kachra kar diya,,,🤣...

lovely maryamm..🤗..lvd every bit..👏...unrealized love...gue going girlie...do cont...

Shamsaaa thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 16 years ago
#26
Re will read later and edit it later 😎
YuNa4ever thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 16 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: Tushtih7

maryam nice ff....

luv this raj, a bit softer n understandin than our yuvi... pari's ego is so nice, will wait n see hw she overcomes it n moves with raj...

keepin goin... 👏 n rockin...

wish to see good emotional track so waitin fr the next one....😊

i know hes really soft and thnxx a lot yami now i finally know were my FF is going😆 love u🤗
YuNa4ever thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 16 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: flamingo_aries

imao...sehbu slept halfway during maan's speech...🤣..bechare ka kachra kar diya,,,🤣...

lovely maryamm..🤗..lvd every bit..👏...unrealized love...gue going girlie...do cont...

aww yeah he did behoodaROFL and glad u liked it will update next part soon😉
YuNa4ever thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 16 years ago
#29
thnx a lot😃
YuNa4ever thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 16 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: ArTiToTheEnd

Re will read later and edit it later 😎

okies will wait for your comment😛

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".