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Posted: 15 years ago
lovely chapter hun....xxx👏
Cant wait when Pratigya finally confesses.....
Update soon plzzzz😊 keep it up sweety👍🏼
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Wow....dear, you have a lot of things going on. Is okay...you can take your time updating each chapters. Yay....finally Komal is nice here and is close friend of Pratigya.

Now coming to chapter 15, its terrific!! I loved it completely!! Awww....all four of them are lost in their thoughts and are thinking about each other. That's so cute! Krishna is in school and is actually smart. 😆 Keep it up dear!! And no rush in updating. I can wait for you. 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
First Time I Am Visiting In Your FF ...Toh Congratulations To You For Your Wonderful FF👏👏
Your FF Is Very Nice....I Like It...!!
Scenes Are Also Too Good....I Will Try To Read It Whenever I Will Be Free...!!
Wonderful, You Mind Is Working very Well Yaar👏
Keep Writing..!!
Thanks For Pm.
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Posted: 15 years ago
tum toh bohot eeee bariyaa tari ke se likh ti hooooooo......
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Posted: 15 years ago
Aww lovely part. Loved Pratiggya's confusing feeling.😆
Eagerly waiting for the next part.😃
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ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!jz read ur update.i must say it ws soooooooooooooo cute n sweeeeeeeeeeeeeet😳😳😳😳😳😳.i jz luvd d Kriya scene inside d classroom.it ws awsom!!!!!!i thot Pratigya wud realize her luv 4 hm bt alas.........no,bt she defo hv a certain feeling 4 hm.......w8n 2 c mor.............n btw,wndrful writn......👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏.plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update soooooooooooooooooon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
n dr,cn u plz pm me wen u update d chaps?cz i dnt wnt 2 miss any of ur updates n wnt to njy it fresh n hot!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: zash_sparkling

ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!jz read ur update.i must say it ws soooooooooooooo cute n sweeeeeeeeeeeeeet😳😳😳😳😳😳.i jz luvd d Kriya scene inside d classroom.it ws awsom!!!!!!i thot Pratigya wud realize her luv 4 hm bt alas.........no,bt she defo hv a certain feeling 4 hm.......w8n 2 c mor.............n btw,wndrful writn......👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏.plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update soooooooooooooooooon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
n dr,cn u plz pm me wen u update d chaps?cz i dnt wnt 2 miss any of ur updates n wnt to njy it fresh n hot!!!!!!!!!!!!!

hey thanQ shoo much for the wonderful cmnt, and as for PM, please check the 1st page to see that u r on the PM list or not, actually i PM the ones who r in the list, plzz do visit the 1st page to b in the list thanks😊
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thanxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx alot 4 ur hard work loved it realy nice
plzzzzzzzzzzzzz update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey Aabs a wonderful chap..
i loved the classroom scene..when Krishna was thinking about impressing the professor..hez cutee
and loved the other classroom scene where he sat close to her..update soon gal..hope pratigya soon discover that shez in love wid Krish..

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thx to evrybody who commented and pressed like button..thx for liking my FF🤗
Chapter-16

(in library)
Komal was writing some notes, whereas Adarsh staring at her. He coudnt concentrate on his work, couldnt take his eyes off from her charming-innocent face. Komal was feeling uneasy sitting with him.
She looked at him, and realised he has been staring at her for long.
"Adarsh?" komal waved her hands on his face, but no response.
she then holds his hand to distract him, the moment she touched him, both's heart skipped a bit.
Their eye-locking kept for few seconds, then komal swiftly moved her hands from his.
"umm..wo maine ye kuch points note ki hain, dekhlo" said komal handing him a notecopy.
Just then a friend comes and says to komal that she needs to talk with her about other subjects.
Komal replied to the friend : "okhey tum jao, main aati hoon"
"umm, main abh aati hoon, aik zaroori kaam hain" komal said to adarsh.
Adarsh : "haa theek hain, wo mujhe ghar bhi jaana hain, actually sab log bahar gaye hain pooja ke liye to ghar mein kisina kisiko to honi chahiye, me and pratigya couldnt go due to classes and projects, so we have to reach home in time, will meet you tomorrow okay, byee" waved
Komal : "okay byee". She then leaves.Adarsh quickly arranging his notes and putting them on his bag : "abb jaldi phutle yahan se, warna iss strange feeling tujhe kha jayega." He said in a hurry tone, and rushed out of the library.
In Hurry he forgot his cellphone.

*~*~*~*

(in corridor)
Pratigya sitting on a bench, thinking about her unknown feeling, what happened to her?
why is she getting attracted towards krishna? why she couldnt stop herself from getting close to him?
She is recalling all those moments she spent with him, first their 1st meeting, their friendship-handshake, salsa dance, then she remembers the music room scene.
Just then Adarsh comes snapping her out of the thoughts : "hey pratigya lets go home, tumhe pata hain na, sab log pooja ke liye jaa rahe hain, aur mummy to khali ghar chod ke nahin jaati, we have to hurry"
Pratigya nodded and leaves. On her way, she keep looking back, to see krishna is there or not.

*~*~*~*

Komal was discussing talking with her classmates, while she recalls that she has to return a book in library, so she rushed to library to return the book, as the library will get closed after few minutes.
She returns the book, and the librarian says : "komal ye adarsh ne apna mobile bhul gaye hain, to socha ke main tumhe de doon, tum usse lauta dena. theek hain?"
Komal nodded and takes the mobile from her, and leaves the library.
She goes out of the college where krishna was waiting for her.
"bhai wo adarsh ne apna mobile bhul gaya hain, i think usse apne mobile zaroorat parenge, agar koi important call aagaya tou?" said komal.
Krishna understood : "you are right, humein uske ghar jaakar usse mobile lauta dete hain"
(actually, he got a excuse for going to pratigya's house, thats what made him excited.)
Then both komal and krishna goes to saxena's place.

*~*~*~*

(at saxena's)
Nainaji, Professor, Arushi and Daadi were ready to go. Adarsh hired a taxi for them.
Nainaji before sitting on the taxi told pratigya : "beta, apna dhyan rakhna, hum kaal subhe tak aajayenge, aur adarsh tumbhi apna aur ghar ka khayal rakhna"
Both Adarsh and Pratigya said at once : yes mom, you dont worry"
Nainaji smiles, and gets into the taxi. Adarsh and Pratigya waved them and went inside.In this empty house pratigya was feeling awkward, as if those strange feelings will now roam around her mind and heart. To distract herself from those feelings she switched on the TV, but to her surprise, she sees krishna everywhere, every channel. She switched off : "ye mujhe kya ho raha hain? har jaaga mujhe krishna kyun nazar aa rahi hain? " on saying that she sees krishna standing infront of her, smiling mischeviously : "kyunki tumhe mujhse pyar ho gaya hain, you are in love with me" he winks at her.
Pratigya stands up from the sofa to reply him but he wasnt there.
"nahin aisa nahin ho sakta, i mean aisa kaiii.... just then there door-bell rang.
Pratigya goes to open the door. When she opens the door, she saw Krishna, she was shocked,
and thought that is her imagination again, so she turned around.
Krishna got confused : "arre ghar aaye guest se koi aisa mu fir ti hain kya?"
Pratigya didnt reply. Krishna then comes inside and touches pratigya's neck.
On his touch she realised that its not her imagination, but is reality. HE IS REALLY HERE.
She turned and saw komal followed him.
"tum log yaha?" said pratigya confused.
Krishna : "haawo adarsh apna mobile bhul gaye they, to dene aaye they, agar koi important call aagaya tou?"
Pratigya : "oh thats great, come inside, pehli humare ghar aaye aaye ho"
She was still feeling awkward, she took krishna and komal on the living room.
"tum log betho main bhaiya ko bulake aati hoon" said pratigya.
"nahin tum yaha betho, main usse milke aati hoon, where is his room?" asked komal to pratigya.
Pratigya pointed : "there, second room, by the way tum log kya loge? chai coffee?"
Krishna said in a flirtitious tone : "chai peela do" Komal agreed with krishna and took the mobile and headed towards adarsh's room.
Pratigya and Krishna were alone. "umm main coffee banake le aati hoon, tum yehi bathon"
pratigya excused herself. Krishna knew that she is excusing herself.

*~*~*~*

Komal enters Adarsh's room. She stopped at the door and knocked. Adarsh turned and saw Komal.
"arre komal tum yaha? come inside" adarsh welcomed him.
"haa wo main..." said komal while walking towards him but on the way, she slipped because of a basketball lying on the floor. Adarsh catches her in time, and the mobile falls on his bed.
There is a eye-lock for few seconds. Then Adarsh helped her to stand.
Adarsh apologizing"wo i am sorry, wo basketball niche.........
"its okey, umm wo main tumhara mobile dene aayi thi, tum college chor aaye the
to maine socha ke shayad tumhara koi important call aa sakta hain iss liye" said Komal.
She looks over the bed, adarsh followed her gaze.
Adarsh : "oh thanks yaar, tum akeli aaye ho?"
Komal : "nahin bhai bhi aaya hain mere saath, ummm tum kya kar rahe they?"
Adarsh : "nahin kuch nahin baas notes taiyar kar raha tha........"
their gossips continued.

*~*~*~*

Krishna followed Pratigya to the kitchen, he stopped at the door to see her making tea.
Pratigya took out the tea-dish and filled it with water and placed it on the stove.
Now she looking for the sugar, which is at the upper-cabinet.Her hands are not reaching the upper-cabinet.Krishna realised that she is unable to took out the sugar bowl, so he came inside and puts his hand over pratigya's and takes the bowl. They were so close to each other, both can feel each other's breathe. "th.th..thanks" whispered pratigya. Krishna moved away from the closeness.
Pratigya continued her work whereas Krishna was staring at her. She is feeling very uneasy on his staring, that she was going to pour salt in the tea. But Krishna stopped her by holding her hand.Pratigya looked at him, and there was a eye-lock. 'tum chai mein namak kyun dalrahi ho?" said krishna.Pratigya then realised, saw that its salt : "ooops sorry, wo galti se chini ke jagah namak uthali..." Pratigya then stirred the tea in each cups and puts them on a tray.
"tea ready" said pratigya holding the tray infront of krishna.

*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
hope u like it,
luv Aabray

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