TaSha FF..Yeh Bheege Pal.. Part 21 Pg 94 - Page 48

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: nazia.icycool

thanq so much shabz for updating!!
i just read both the parts...
the previous one very well written..loved the fact that u wrote both the parts (that of baju n dutta) simultaneously,so the suspense was always there ..i was always wondering ki ye shabz har waqt cliffhangers par kyun chodti hai😆...but as i ket reading it..i loved the parts!!😃

Ur welcum ...
to ab pata chal gaya kya....
awww thanx ....i m glad that ur luving it ...
😳

im also loving nupur's character..her one linerd are just fab!so she is giving a comical touch to the story..with great dialogs!!..

Thanx again ....... Nupur is a delight ...
I will make sure u enjoy more of her ...
😉

well shabz this part was equally excellent!!..i have no wod to express😆..BaNo part was awesome!! 👏 ..cant blv tht sudarshan can stoop to this level!! 😡 ..baji to acha khasa mushtanda nikla!!😆..the previous tym it was rano who had helped baji (at the beach)..nd this tym baji was quite caring!!😆..

the strory is developin beautifully shabz!!!..u are a fabulous writer!!..bechara dutta to to sachi mein gadha bana diya!!😆..rano aur nakku tho use ungli par nacharahe hain😉..bechara dutta!!..so i hope AS is observing the change in dutta...

AS ko beech mein kyun laa rahi ho ......
Nw Its gonna b only TaSha .....& Baaji /Rano of course ..
😉

i heartily enjoyed both the parts!!..amazing work!! love u shabz!! 🤗 👍🏼




Tahnx 4 ur comments ...
will update soon ...& luv u toooo ....!
🤗


Originally posted by: Tina-Saigal2002

Wow Shabz such a wonderful Update.. I just loved it.. All 4 of them falling in love and imagining their partners in full moon night I just love tis romantic theme.. Why is Nupur punishing poor Mayank.. I feel so sorry for him.. Gr8 update Shabz.. I nvr expected that you wud update so soon



Thanx Tina 4 ur appreciation ...😳
I m so glad that ur liking my work ...
Nupur just wants to make him jealous dats all ....😆
will update soon ..!

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Irika95

great part shabz...read the last two updates very well written update soon



Thanx Irika 4 ur appreciation ...!😳



Thanx Vedika ...!
😳

Originally posted by: Armu4eva

Kya baat hai.. Baaji...the hero...... maza aa gaya....... luvd how he dhulaofied Suds..... n so happy he is fine..!! Well finally Baji-Rano love ishtory is starting...😛

n umm... eh lo.. Nups is doing shaitani.... arre bechara Dutta.. wuld b heartbroken to knw..that its not his Naku he is chatting to....!!
Eagerly looking fwd to the next update Shabz...
Lovely epi...njoyed it ...❤️




Thanx Tanu ...😳
I m glad that u liked Suds ki dhulai ...
Baaji / Rano ki love story .......main kyua bolun ...just read on ..😆
Nupur to hai hi naughty ........Dutta heartbroken ...we will see ..
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Wiill update soon ....!
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Originally posted by: mariescott14

loved it

love how baji did sundar dhulayi...really enjoying baji and rano closeness...and that song was cute
nupur is real naughty....tasha closeness is also really adorable
only mayank is left out of the loop lol
hope u update soon



Thanx Marie ...😳
I also luv this song .....
Don worry Mayank ka bhi kuch karti hoon ..😆
will update soon ..!



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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: moully

Thxxxxxx 4 update.

luved it !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
baji & rano fantastic.
achha hua us suds ke saath.🤢
jab dutta ko pata lagega ki ye nakku nahi nups hai to dutta to😡
plz update asap.
luv u. & mis ur ff.



Thanx Moully 4 ur comments...😳
Plzz use different font next time ....its gets very difficult to read ...
Will update soon ...!


Originally posted by: kshreya2002

Loved this part Shabz. I love how u have woven in TaSha and Baji-Rano together.



Thanx Ksh 4 ur appreciation ...😳

Originally posted by: kaninikabasuray

awwwww loved it Shabz😃
Baaji, the hero😳
Loved the whole Baaji Rano part and the song you added😊
Nupur is very naughty😆
Still waiting for Tasha to meet😆



Thanx Stormy 4 reading & commenting ..
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Yup Nupur is naughty .....& we love her 4 that only ...
TaSha will meet soon ...
Will update soon ..!
😉

Originally posted by: nabilamubeen

superbbb update shabz....especially the song part.....baji and rano wer great....but want tasha more.......waiting eagary for tasha to meet again.....thanks for pm...coninue soom.



Ur welcum nabila ..
& thanx 4 ur appreciation ...😳
TaSha will meet soon ..
Will update soon ...!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Dancingdoll

Galllllllll......................thanks a million for such a quick update...I was so dying for Baaji and Rano scene where he rescues her and OMG!! What a scene......I am getting addicted to Baaji and Rano's LS! What a dishum dishum....proper bollywood dishum dishum! hit the hero and nothng happens to him!! 😆😆

Ur welcum DD ..... anything 4 u my frnd..😃
Yup .....My FF is a little filmy .....
😆
I m glad u enjoyed the action scenes ...

i take my words back, u r soooooooo not like LTL CVs....u give readers (read it as DD), what we want! 😆😆

Oh Thanx .....ur so understanding ......😛
and The fantasies tht these two guys are mving into, getting all X Rated with their gals, even if its in imagination.....wow!! 😆😆

But they didn't hav X rated thoughts ........abhi maine X rated likha kahan hai...... ☺️

and last pasrt was CLASS!! All happy except Mayank....😆😆...can totally imagine, with Nupur on the opp side, aur kya hogaa!! 😆😆

Uske ke liye thoda aur intezaar .....😆

totally loved it...thx for a long update!! u can now take a break!

sach me lamba break le loon .......!😆😆
MWAH! 😳

Muaaahhh to u tooooooo ....!😆
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: dusk

wheneva i try to reply ur post light chali jati hay 🤣 nd al ma mehnat in writing a bakwas goes in vain but ab me nay b soch lia hay rply kia bgair nae rhnge 😆 😆 luvd ur last part yaar baki partz ka reply b dunge jststrtd readng ur FF nd compltd 😆 to ab is part ki appreciation lelo ⭐️ next tyme sub ki milakar dnge 😆 😳 wesay i luvd de last line mayank wz alone nupur not gvng so mch tyme to hm 🤣 bechara 🥺 but hope k nxt tyme tum mayur scenz b add karoge 😳 😃



Tere ko bhi powercut ki problem hai ...
Thanx Nimmo 4 ur comments .....😳
finally u succeeded in posting them ..😆
Yup .....next update will b of TaSha & Mayur scenes ..


Originally posted by: kaly07

OEMGI................thanks a tonnnnnn for the quick update Shabz!!! 🤗

Ur welcum Aly ....

Wow............I wanted to see Baaji-Rano's rescues and dear it was simply AWESOME!!! I am loving their chemistry!! Wow............Suds deserves that! I am liking Baaji in your FF yaar, but not in the show. 😆 And, nothing happened to him. He is becoming like our sher!

Even me liking Baaji more in my FF than Dutta .....
jaise gadha ka assistance Gadha .....waise sher ka sher ....!😆😆

Hehehehe......Nupur is such a naughty gal so finally she decided to leave TaSha alone and gave them some time on the phone to chat. Poor Dutta, he is in confusion state whether he is talking to the right gal or not. 😆 I can't wait when they will meet! I'm having fantasies yaar, love your imagination sweetoo!! Everything is simply great!! Next part soon yaar! 😃


TaSha is gonna meet real soon ....
hope u will like it ...
Will update soon ..
tahnx 4 ur sweet comments ...!
😳



Originally posted by: suhana19

Hey shabz thanx alot for the update yaar 🤗 omg i just love the song it goes in perfect with situation .....i loved the way baaji rescued rano in total flimy style mein 👏
bechara dutta totally confused and lost 😆 ..pls make tasha meet soon 😍 pls jaldi update karna 👍🏼 👏 🤗
take care and see u around...



Ur welcum Suhana ..😃
& thanx 4 appreciating ...😳
taSha will meet soon & will update soon ..!



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Posted: 15 years ago
AWESOME👏i hav red all the parts n they were fabulous...update next part soooon....keep it up!⭐️
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey frndzz ...😃
Update time .....
This part full on TaSha & Mayur ..😉
Hope u all like it ...!



Part 15

Nupur & Mayank just had a big fight …. It just happened that Dutta had called & as Nupur was in the kitchen making coffee Mayank had taken the call …. Dutta a little surprised had asked 4 Nupur …. Mayank asked 4 his name & on finding that it was Dutta had shouted at him on the phone … Mayank had also threatened Dutta not to call again … when Nupur had found out that it was Dutta that had called she had been very angry at Mayank …

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Dutta wanted to meet Nupur but as she was always giving excuses so he decided to surprise her …. He already knew her address so he thought of paying her a visit … on his way to her house he buys a bouquet & a box of chocolates …. He was imagining her expressions on seeing him at her doorsteps ,,she would be so surprised & happy also ,,,this thought bought a smile on his face ..…. On reaching her plac e he knocked at her door ….. Mayank opens the door … both were surprised & also a little shocked at seeing each other … Dutta thought she stayed alone ,,he was wondering who this person was ,,,may b someone 4rm her family that had also received his call that day ..Mayank was also wondering who he was … Mayank asks him as to who he wanted to see …. Dutta introduced himself & had asked 4 Nupur … Mayank was very surprised ,,he had never expected this man to come here …. He also thought that Nupur was teasing him with this secret admirer person ..

Mayank : Tum wohi ho na …jisne us din phone kiya aur usse pehle bouquet aur card bheja tha …. Tum yahan bhi pahuch gaye …. Achcha ,,,aaj bhi bouquet laye ho … Myank snatches the bouquet & throws it on the floor …Bola tha na k Nupur se door raho …

Dutta gets angry : dekhiye bhai sahib ….mujhe nahi pata aap kaun hai …. Aap zara plllz Nupur ko bula dijiye ….

Mayank : Nupur ka naam bhi nahi lena apni zabaan se …

Dutta : Kyun ,,,wo aap ki behen lagti hai ..

Mayank gets mad ,,,,he grabs Dutta collar & shouts at him : Behen ho gi teri … main uska hone wala pati hoon …

Nw its Dutta turn to get shocked … he jerks bak Mayank hand & pushes him : aye kya bakwaas kar raha hai ….. Nupur meri hai ….aur hum ek doosre ko pasand karte hain .. yaqeen nahi aata to usse bulao … meri phone pe usse baat huyi thi …

Mayank : Wo ghar par nahi hai ….. tum jao yahan se …. & he shuts the door …. But Dutta puts his leg in between & pushes back the door …. He goes inside saying that he will w8 4 her ….

Mayank : dekho mujhe gussa mat dilao warna …

Dutta : warna ,,,kya kar loge … zara mujhe bhi batao ..itni der se tumhari bakwaas sun raha hoon …. Dutta pushes him with his finger …

Mayank gets mad & he also pushes Dutta … & then they both get into a fight .. both of them grabbing each other collar trying to push each other down … & over this tiff …their shirts get a little ripped ,,buttons popping out … they both fall on the floor & then getting up & again falling on the sofa ….. Mayank on top of Dutta …… at this moment Nupur enters … on seeing them like this …. She is shocked …. One hand on her head & mouth open ,,,she wails ,,,,Haye main lut gayi ….. Ye dekhne se pehle main mar kyun nahi gayi …..

Mayank & Dutta both get shocked …they freeze as to what is she saying ..they quickly take off their hands each other & get up .. straightening their clothes ….

Mayank : ye tum kya keh rahi ho ….

Nupur had recognized Dutta & had been surprised to see him here & had understood at once that why Mayank was fighting with him : tumhe sharam nahi aayi …. Mujhpar shaq karte ho aur khud aisi harkat .. chee ..

Dutta : dekhiye …aap galat samajh rahi hain ….. iska pata nahi magar main aisa nahi hoon ..

Mayank : aye ….matlab kya hai tumhara ….k main kaisa hoon …. Aur sara tumhara kasoor hai … tumhari wajah se meri aur Nupur ki ladaai huyi hai …. Sharam to nahi aati parayi ladkiyon ko phool bhejte huye …..aur phone pe baatein karte huye ..

Dutta : meri wajah se …. Aur main phool bhejoon ya usse baat karun to tumhe kya taqleef ….arey tum hote kaun ho meri aur Nupur ke beech aane wale …

Mayank : dekho tum had se badh rahe ho ….

Dutta : haan to kya kar lo ge ….. they both again at each other throats but then Nupur shouts at them to stop it ….

Mayank : shout kyun kar rahi ho ….. isse bolo ,,,,ye yahan kyun aa ya hai ..

Dutta : main yahan Nupur se milne aaya hoon aur mil k hi jaoon ga …

Mayank : To milo na …… khadi to tumhare saamne ..

Dutta : Mujhe Nupur se milna hai …. Ye to Nupur ki saheli hai ..

Mayank : Aye bhai …yehi Nupur hai …. Jisse tum phone pe baatein kiya karte they aur phool bhejte they …

Dutta shocked : Kyaaaa …nahi ye Nupur nahi hai …….

Nupur looks at both of them ….

Mayank then turning at Nupur he asks : Tum to Naku ko lene gayi thi na …..wo kahan hai..

& at that moment they both look at the door to see Naku standing there .. she is surprised as to wats happening there ….. Dutta goes to her ,,takes her hand & looking at her lovingly sayz ye Nupur hai …. Naku pulls her hand out of his grasp ,,,she goes inside & sayz kya ho raha hai …

Mayank : wohi to main pooch raha hoon k kya ho raha hai ….

Naku signals at Nupur ….. Nupur winks at her : dekh maine in dono ko ek saaath range haath pakda hai …she acts all heartbroken ….she leans on naku shoulders & whispers in her ears ….. Naku understanding looks shocked : Kyyaaaaaaaaaa ….

Mayank mujhe tumse ye umeed nahi thi …she glances at dutta : aur aap aisa karte hain …

Dutta kneeling in 4rnt of her : dekho tumhari dost galat samajh rahi hai …..main to tumse milne aay atha ,,,,magar ye …he points at mayank ….is ne mujhe pakad liya ..

Mayank jumps in : aye kya matlab pakad liya ….. tum isse milne kahan aaya thay ….tum to meri Nupur pe dore daal rahe thay aura b is par ….. tum aadmi ho na girgit ….kaise rang badalte ho …… Mayank & Dutta again start fighting …..while Naku & Nupur look on enjoying themselves …. They couldn't stop their laughter 4rm coming out …. Mayank & Dutta stop …..they look at them & then at themselves …. They now understand that they hav been made fools by them ….

Mayank : Tum log ko badi hansi aa rahi hai ….

Nupur trying to stop laughing nods nahi to & then again bursts out laughing ….

Mayank pointingly at Nupur : dekho Nupur bahut ho gaya ….

Dutta confused points at Naku : magar Nupur to ye hai ….

Mayank : Aye bhai …abhi bhi nahi samjhe …ye dono tumhe bewakoof bana rahi thi ..Ye Nupur hai aur ye Nakusha hai ….

Nupur : Achch Mayank …aur tumhe kya bana rahe thay …. Waise bane banaye ko kya banana ….. with that Naku & Nupur both give a Hi5 to each other ..

Dutta is shocked …he leaves the place …. Naku sees him going … Nupur signals her to go after him ….. Naku runs after him & stops him …

Naku : Naaraz ho …

Dutta : Kuch nahi …& starts to walk again ….. Naku follows him …

Dutta : Tum mera peeche kyun aa rahi ho ….

Naku : Tumhe manane …waise tum naaraz kyun ho ….phone par to main hi tumse baat karti thi ….haan bas shuru shuru main Nupur karti thi ….maine usse mana bhi kiya tha ..par usne tumhe tang karne k liye nahi wo Mayank ko jealous karne k liye tumse baat ki ..phir baad mein main hhi tumse baat karti thi ….. she then keeps her hand on her ears asking 4 forgivness …. Smiling at him she sayz …ab to maaf kar do …aage se aisa nahi karungi ..

Dutta looks at her ….she looked so innocent at that moment that a smile came on his lips .. he turned his face away 4rm her but she had seen him smile ….. she lowered her hands & turned his face towards her ….. then they both burst out laughing …. Dutta pulls her in a hug …. Naku is surprised & exclaims : arey tum to bahut fast ho … & then hugs him bak …

Mayank & Nupur is looking down on them 4rm their apartment balcony …

Mayank : Chalo inki setting to ho gayi …. Ab meri baari … he tries to pull Nupur in a hug but Nupur stops him " Kya ,,,kiski baari …. Abhi bhi hamari dosti nahi huyi hai ….main ab bhi tumse naraaz hoon …… tumne mujhpe shaq kiya …." With this she goes away to her room & closes the door …. Mayank pounds at her door ….. "Dekh Nupur …aisa mat kar … mujhse kaisei naarazi …"

Mayank to himself " Ye sab us Dutta ki wajah se hua …..khud to apni setting kar li ….aur Nupur aur mere beech ladai karwa di ….."

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Pllzzz do leave ur comments & suggestions ..

Thanx a lot ..😳


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Posted: 15 years ago

Shabzi.............OMG......

Mujhpar shaq karte ho aur khud aisi harkat .. chee ..

Dutta : dekhiye …aap galat samajh rahi hain ….. iska pata nahi magar main aisa nahi hoon ..

Cant stop laughing reading this...🤣🤣🤣🤣 tumne to yahan bhi Dostana shuru kar diya......😆😆 Luvd it so much....!!

N wow... Naku ne bhi kya perfect time pe entry mari hai............luvd how she went after her Sher...n manaoed him...wit her innocent gestures..😳😳😳 Totally adorable....!!
Luvd the update very very much................Both MayUr n TaSha rocks..😛
Gr8 job..👏👏👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
wooooooowwwwww....what a misunderstanding it was!!! 🤣 ...
shabz likhte likhte tum khud confuse nahin hui??u did an amazing job shabz!!....enjoyed it thoroughly..

dutta kuch zyada hi jaldi maan gaya..so sweet..nakku nupur ne use itna sataya..i thought that he would be roottha hua..but nakku ki smile dekh kar pighal gaya😆..

i guess the next part would be abt baji n rano??ryt??looking forward to it😆

well done shabz!! 👏 👏 👍🏼
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi shabbz....am so sorry 4 being so late ...😳..juz now i gotto to read ur last two updatez...omg.....
⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
@Part 14 :
Wooooooow.....shabz i feel diz part gottob d best of all ur updatez.....❤️i loved it.....so romantic....
⭐️tasha-baj-rano-mayanknupur⭐️ and d way it ended.....simply outta d world..⭐️.loved d songz...felt like watch a movie...as i alwayz say...plz do sumthing yaar...i want 2 watch diz ff onscreen....awesuuuuumm👏👏👏👏👏
@Part15:
Awesum once again...diz time it waz hilarioz...😆😆 had loadz of fun reading it....and wat waz tat...dostana linez...🤣....and no baji diz time in d dostana scene😆😆😆.....and finallly tasha met....and tasha hug...hai hai....😍toooo goood.....!!! looking frwd 2 more tasha scenz...!!!!😳
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