Short Story-Take my breath away-Vik&Nags!Upd 7/26 - Page 109

Originally posted by: rushtrip

i know darling..but kya karein...bahut kaam tha..and today i am so tired..i cut my thumb..ab to space bar use karne mein bhi..dard ho raha hai..

oh lord...

would you believe, i fried 300 pooris, 300 aaloo bonda, 2 kg mathia... my right arm hurts..saare muscles..bol rahe hain...Vru Vru...mujhe de do...aleve...to relax..they have bunched up in protest...

oh god..mein..pagal hoon..with this cut thumb..i type away...

chal isse accha mein...kuch update likkhti hooon..

Originally posted by: AKANargis

Vicky Mian tau Vicky Mian...Arjun Mian bhi MASHAALLAH!!! Looking forward to Nups and Arjun's interaction!!

Originally posted by: rushtrip

hmmm...arjun..mian..to....ek baar nupur ko dekh kar ghayal ho gaye..hain...haan aur aisa ghayel hue hai ki apni USS raat ki yaad aa gayi....😡😆

hmmm steph was just an incident...nothing important nups...he was eighteen..by god..and too good looking for a girl with haywire hormones...she better be...fir aa gayi na to iss baar nups ka samna hogi....haan, 18 mein lost...😆isse to gaana gana chahiye..*saari umar mein rahu 18 saalka*😆😆

but Munda..is all yours...to love....ab to isee tarpana hoga....

Originally posted by: MaaneetDD

Oh god! Please take rest... U cooked sooooooooo much?? No wonder u were busy!

Please take care of ur hands and thumb.. WE need them so that u can type those wonderful stories for us 😉

Eagerly waiting for the next update.. But then I wont demand cos of u poor thumb 😊

Rev

PS : How do I know when u guys have commented or written something here??? Do I have to manually check in everytime or is there any other way ?? I am new to the forum world 😳.. so still finding my way through .. I came directly to the update and typed it.. Then went back to read and realized u had replied to my message 😳😳

maaneetDD - who will think my thumb is giving me problems..the way i update? well...i write when the story grips me and my imagination pushes..me..so pain sab gayab....only...the story..remains...

Chapter 41

Maan had moved away from them when Adi had come to ask him something about the arrangement and was happy to see that most of his close office associates and relatives were already here. The wait of course was for his Cherie, who he knew will blow his mind away. He then turned towards the group he had moved away to find them going towards the drinks counter set up outside presumably to get something. Maan decided follow them when he saw Adi had come back with information for Maan about the arrangements all completed. Thanking him, Maan looked beyond his shoulder to see Faz walking towards him.

He waved at her and she moved up to him at a faster pace. She came and hugged Maan and said, Bhai Jaan, she called him that when not meeting at office, as they knew each other from their childhood, I am so happy for you. How long before your bride comes? Maan looked at the watch and said may be next few mins they should be here. He turned to find Adi, looking at Faz with gaze that was telling. He saw a longing in them for Faz that was coupled with defeat even before he put a fight. Faz was quite unaware of the feeling Adi had.

Adi had seen Faz for the first time at office in a meeting and had ever since developed feelings for her. He never let anyone know what he felt, not even his closest friend Abs. He knew that there were no possibilities between them, with him being from a conservative hindu family and her a staunch muslim family that was almost royalty. Faz has always spoken to him with courtesy and she did just that now.

She said, hello Aditya! How are you doing? Aap sab acchche se sambhal rahe hain, dikh raha hai. Koi kaam mein hamari madad chahiye to bejhijhak kahiyega!

Adi, felt tremor go through him at being called Aditya. She had that effect on him. He smiled politely and said Sure Farah! Par aap relax karein sab under control hain. Aap Daadima ke saath rahiye. She might need your help.

Faz smiled sweetly at him and left both of them to walk as if floating on air to Daadima. She liked Aditya. He was a very nice man. Very polite and courteous.

Maan had then told Adi to go upto the front and let him know the minute Abs and her family arrived so that he can be near the entrance to see her as she came. Just then, Adi's phone rang and he saw it was Abs. Picking the call he said, Where are you now? I am near the front entrance. Abs replied just entering the gates. Adi said, Okay, I will be there. Abs said, thank you. I wanted you there. I am having jitters Adi.

Adi said, Yah! That's why maan asked me to be the near the entrance so you can feel comfortable. That man can surely read you Abs. He knows how you will feel. You are one lucky girl. Abs smiled nervously and said, Just be there.

Adi cut the call shaking his head. He signaled Maan that Abs was almost here with his arm as he walked out of the great room and to the Khurana Mansion's main doors and waited for Abs to arrive.

Maan moved towards the entrance and waited with abated breath to receive his bride. Vicky and Nargis had joined Daadima and Farah near the podium. Arjun and Nupur were not too far away talking in hushed tones to each other. Arjun seemed engrossed in what Nupur had to say, he was fascinated with this animated woman who was making his heart beat faster.

Abs entered the great room with Adi at her side joined by her Father, mother, brother and family members who lived in US and India.

Maan went up to them, touched Abs's father feet, then mothers and shook hands with her younger brother. The introductions were taken care by Adi. Abs was too shy to look up from the floor. Maan then went near Abs and said, Vous regardez couper le souffl! Under his breath and stood next to her. The photographer took some photographs at this point and the entourage moved on towards the dias where Daadima waited. Maan introduced the immediate family to Daadima and left the rest of the introductions to be handled by Abs' brother Anand.

The panditji then came upto them and said, the mahurat time is in ten minutes, once you are settled, we can start the ceremony. Maan and Abs were taken up to the two throne-like armchairs set up and seated there. Daadima took Farah's and Nargis's help to get the rings and the platter of garland organized on the table near the chairs. The panditji then came up the couple and started reciting mantras that would bless them. He then asked Daadima to give the ring to Maan to have him put it on Abs's finger. This was a ceremonial one, different from what was given by maan to Abs. This was a family heirloom that Daadima wanted Abs to have. It had be refitted to fit her finger. As Maan put the ring on Abs finger, he looked at her with deep love and smoldering passion that burned a hot trail on Abs spine. She blushed and stared back him with love that was reciprocal in intensity.

The panditji's voice broke the spell and he asked Abs to put the ring which she took from her mother to put on Maan's. It was a white gold ring broad band with five small diamonds twinkling at a small distance circling the ring. After Abs put the ring, Maan fidgeted with the ring feeling the responsibility that came with this, he was satisfied that now, Abs was going to be his, his alone. He suddenly felt very proprietal towards Abs. she was his. His. Going forward. Forever. He wanted to take Abs in his arms then and there and kiss her. Mark her as his. But he held on to his control and smile benignly at everyone around.

He was officially engaged. Just as the rings were exchanged, there was a drum roll from the far side of the room, announcing the commencement of party and heading that troupe was Arjun, playing it to the hilt like a true Punjabi.

Everyone clapped and joined in the beat of the dhol.

Originally posted by: rushtrip

one does get an email to the topic replies on the email you used to sign up..other than that..i donno..if there is any other way...

girls..any help?

btw...update written...will post in a sec...

Originally posted by: -sann-

why did images of Steph and him on beach that fateful night flashed before him seeing nupur??? i'm feeling scared.....😲