TaSha FF..Yeh Bheege Pal.. Part 21 Pg 94

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Tina Saigal

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Posted: 15 years ago

#441

Oh my God Shabz wat a wonderful story.. I just loved it... I'm such a fool not to come across you FF in the first place.. But I read all the part today and found your FF very intresting.. Just like a typical masala serial which has all the ingredients like Enemity, Romance, Comedy, Exciting Flash Backs, Suspense and Emotions.. Loved it.. Absolutely loved it.. Sweety can you pls PM me your nxt update .. That is wen ever you do.. No prob.. take your time.. But pls do.. I loved your FF very much

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Nikita

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Posted: 15 years ago

#442

Awesome updates!

You aren't a louse writer I got your hint.

Hope Baaji saves Rano and soon!

Dutta - Aww so funny!

Cont soon!

Speak to you soon BTW so busy hopefully things calm down soon!

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suhana19

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Posted: 15 years ago

#443

Hey shabz thanx for the update yaar .... 🤗 its gettin interstin ...i hope baaji saves rano ...nupur is gettin naughty ...lol...pls make tasha meet soon....pls jaldi update karna ...take care and see u around
👏 👍🏼 🤗

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Lekha Ishwar

@-Destiny-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#444

WOWWWWW

WOWWW WWOWW

I Love it
issi khushi mei aap yeh pariye

Warning Before you Read this a Note

Balatkar = Chamatkar

Chatur Ramalingam aka Silencer's Balatkar speech, Omi Vaidya in 3idiots

Enjoy The well written comic scene

"Adarniya sabhapati mahodaya …atithi vishesh shikshan mantri shri R D

tripati ji ..maanyaniya shikshagan aur mere piyaaare sahpatiyo …aaj

agar I.C.E aasmaan ki bulaaandiyo ko chhu raahaa hai ..to uska

shreya sirrf ek insaan ko jaata hai Shri Veeru sahastra buddhe

..give him a a big hand ..he is a great guy really you are

Peechle buttis saal se inhone nirantar is college mein balatkar pe

balatkar kiye ………umeed hai aagey bee karte rahege ..hami to

aashcharya hota hai ki ek insaan apne jeevan kaal mein itni balatkar

kaisi kar sakta hai …….…inhone kadi tapaasya se aapne aapko is

kaabil bunaya hai ..waqt ka sahi upyog ghante ka purna istemaal koi

inse seeke ..seeke inse seeke ….

aaj hum sab chaatra yaha hai ..kal desh videsh mein fail jayenge

..waadaa hai aapse jis desh mein honge waha balatkar karenge I.C.E ka

naam roshan karenge …dika [dikha] denge sabko jo balatkar Karne ki

shamtaa yaha ke chaatro mein hai wo sansaar ke kisi chaatro mein

nahiii ….No other chaatra No other chaatra

Adarniya mantraji namashkar aapne is sansthaan ko wo chees di jiski

hamein sakht zaroorat thi …Stan ..stan hota sabi ke paas hai ..sab

chupa ke rakte hai ..detaa koi nai …aapne apna stan is balatkari

purush ke haat mein diya hai…ab dekiye yeh kaisa iska upyog karta hai

Is swarn awsar par ek shlok yaad aa rahe hai……uthmam dadddad

padam..Madhyam padam thuchuk thuchuk….Ghanistham thudthudi

padam..sud sudi pran katak."

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Shabnam

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Posted: 15 years ago

#445

Originally posted by: raziya56
loved it...baji jaldi rano ko bache le to achcha honga.....dutta such me latto hogya hai....serial me to nakku latto ti.......par isma dutta hau...continue sooon!

Thanx Raziya ...😳
Baaji will defo save Rano in a true hero style ...
U r gonna like this naughty & mischievous Dutta ..😆
will update real soon ....!

Originally posted by: Vedika126
nice part shabz. loved it.

Thanx Vedika 4 ur appreciation ..!😳

Originally posted by: sinak
Loved it. Baji search fast for Rano. Nupur is so naughty. She is talking to Dutta as Naku.

Thanx Sinak ...😳
Yup Nupur is naughty ....she is gonna so tang Dutta ...!😆

Originally posted by: shikhachopra
awesome shabz 👏 hoping dat baji soon finds rano.nupur is just too naughty 😉 oh i wish tasha meet soon.

Thanx Shikha ...😳
taSha will meet real soon ...😉
Baaji will defo save Rano ....!

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Shabnam

@Dew-drop

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Posted: 15 years ago

#446

Originally posted by: mariescott14
loved it shabz
hope baji comes in time to save rano

as for dutta so cute...romancing the wrong one lol

really enjoying it...hope u update soon ...cant wait aagey kya hota hai

Thanx Marie ...😳
U wont hav to w8 ...wiil update real soon ...!

Originally posted by: spandana11
nice part shabz hope baji will be on time to save ranu

Thanx Spandana ...😳
Oh he will ....don worry ...!

Originally posted by: swati2008
its fantastic sabz...........so baaji tensed about rano...........hope he save her soon...........dutta sending flowers n shayari...........lagta hai full latoo hogaya naku par...........kya banadiya mere gadhe ko..........nupur so funny..........waiting to know how nupur tease dutta...........update soon......

Thanx Swati ...😳
Gadhe to pehle se hi gadha...usko aur kya banana ...😆
Will update soon ..!

Originally posted by: shonapinky
Awesum update shabz...loved dutta-nupur scene......!!👏

Thanx Shona ..😳
I m glad that u liked it ..!

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Shabnam

@Dew-drop

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Posted: 15 years ago

#447

Originally posted by: Armu4eva
Shabz.................i luv u yaar......🤗 i luv it when Mayur fight..they are so adorable.... perfect.. hubby-wife....😳

n OMG.... that DSP ...n bouquet was soo cute..... m sure Naku is gonna b super impressed..wit her... beau...😉

parr yeh kya.. Rano in trouble... gosh..m super worried...hope Baji..saves her in time....

Fabulous update yaar..... 👏 U r becoming a marvellous writer girl.... so proud of u....❤️

Thanx Tanu ...😳
U will get more of MaYur fights ....😉
She will of course ....Dutta hai hi aisa ...😍
Baaji hai na Rano ko bachaane k liye ...
Oh thank you .....i m blushing at ur compliments ...!☺️

Originally posted by: Yuvika_15
great update

Thanx Yuvika ..!😳

Originally posted by: amitasaily
Thanks for the PM.

And lovely update. Please do continue.

God bless!

Ur welcum ..😳
& Thanx a lot 4 ur appreciation ...
will update soon ...!

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Shabnam

@Dew-drop

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Posted: 15 years ago

#448

Originally posted by: Dancingdoll
Shabzzzzzzzzz ki bachchi!! grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr...................😡

how could you?? u left us stranded on Baaji-Rano front.............Shabzzzzzzzzzzzzzz...........I have been waiting for it everyday and when u finally write it, u didnt write about them......how wuld he save her.................shabzzzzzzzzz......................

*pulls her hair*

😡😡😡.........................

Ab thoda suspense to banta hai yaar ....😆
😆
ab next kab aayegaa?? jab LTL mein actually Dutta and Naku ki shaadi consummate ho jayegi??? tab tak mere grand pote bhi ho jaayengee!!!

don worry ...usse pehle hi main update kardoongi ..😆
😆

tujhe CVs se bhi boori bimari hai.....

Nahi yaar ...mujhe CVs k saath mat mila ......itni bhi buri nahi hoon ...😳😆

one more thing, y dont u keep fixed days, like weekly episodes rather than writing arbitarily.....stleast we wuld know when ur FF expisode will be aired!!!

I used to do it b4 ......magar kya karoon ...
kabhi time nahi milta ....to kabhi mood nahi banta ...!😉

Originally posted by: Dancingdoll
aur full comments on Duttas part doongi when I am little more cool!!

abhi mein apne gusse mein us poorani factory mein Baaji ke saath latki hui hoon!!!

grrrrrrr!!

take a chill pill yaar .....
aisa kar tu latak mat aur baith ja .....!🤣

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Shabnam

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Posted: 15 years ago

#449

Originally posted by: kaly07
Wow....Shabz, you are a fabulous writer dear!! What a lovely update!!

I loved Maypur fight!! What am I reading....Dutta send a bouquet of flower to Nakku? Aww....so cutee!! I loved how Mayank teases Nupur.

Oemgi....Dutta is talking to Nupur thinking that it's Nakku who is he phone chatting. (:

Hope Baaji come on time to save Rano. Way to go girl!! I <3 it!! Next part soon!! :D

Thanx Kaly ...😳
I m so glad that u liked it ....
Mayur fight na karein to maza kaise aaye ...😆
Maza aayega na jab Dutta ko pata chalega that he is talking to a wrong gal ..
Will update soon ..!

Originally posted by: kshreya2002
Shabz...u also like LTL CVs are having what we really want...ie TaSha love story. Btw I like BaNo love story here.

Oh ..yaar tum bhi mujhe CVs se mila rahi ho ...😆
Bano sounds so feminine .. hw about RaJi .....!😉

Originally posted by: MishalLeoSheeba
Wow shabz😳...........awsomeeeeeeeeeeeee...........Hope baaji reaches on time..........Yaar Dutta was sooooooooooooooo cute and sweeet............U rock dear............

Thanx Sheeba ..😳
Baaji willl defo reach on time .....
Dutta is alwayz sweet .......
Thanx a lot dear ...!😳

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Shabnam

@Dew-drop

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Posted: 15 years ago

#450

Originally posted by: Dancingdoll
okie....so, I just watched Everybody loves raymond, I am in all good mood and here is my feedback on Part 13!!

First!!, Gal u totally used it - "By God", with Nupur ......omg!! reminded me of Nupur totally!! 🤣 and then her being naughty and troubling Mayank.....heheheh....That was Class!!! 🤣🤣.......and now poor dutta.....yahaan pe baaji, nupur, mayank, rano, chunu, munnu, tinku, sab ki shaadi ho jaayegi lekin humare Dutta and Naku kabhie aage badh hi nahi sakte.....🤣🤣

but in ur story atleast Dutta took the step!!! 😉

Chalo shukar hai ....tera mood to achcha hai ...🤣
Nupur & By God na bole ...aisa kaise ho sakta hai ...
Don worry TaSha will too get married .....!😉

Originally posted by: moully
BAHUT SHUKRIYA BADI MEHERBANI .....................

SAB KI JINDAGI MAIN HUJUR AAP AAYE...........

AUR ITNA ACHHA FF HUM SAB KO MILA.............

AUR MOST IMP

AAPNE UPDATE JO KIYA.............

I LUVED IT.

NUPUR IS NUPUR...........😉

AND DUTTA CN'T RECONGIZE NAKKU'S VOICE?

PLZ UPDATE ASAP............

Thanx Moully 4 ur sweet words ..😳
Dutta did had a doubt on Naku voice but then he was not sure as when they had met he was the one talking more & not Naku ...& also the voice on the phone does sounda little different ..
will update soon ...!

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