Little Personal-POEM on Pg 26(19th July) - Page 21

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Posted: 15 years ago
hehehehe I shared it wid Bhavna, I bored my mom dad very much and envied my lil bro Om a lot, he was really pissed off, heheheh, He said you didnt took me wid you and now telling me d stories what for? heheheheh But we needed to burst out yaar. I loved sharing it it on this thread in written form. I tried hands on poem as Shaggy, Jiya and Bhavana kept on telling me and convincing me. I finally tried it the output I thought was too big but I am happy you all liked it thanx 2 everyone
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Posted: 15 years ago
After I showed my and Sneha di's poems to Ujjwala di, she loved them😳 So she thought she will also try her hands at it.😃

Since everyhting was already said in the two other long poems, her one is a little different! This is the first time she is writing a full poem, but i must say its WOW! 👏👏

hope you like it... please give comments! will pass it on to her.😃



😍A DAY - By Ujjwala😍

In life such days are few,
Whose memories are always new,
As fresh as the morning dew,
Just like when I met the CID crew.

16th June is a memorable date,
A day that came after a long wait,
When I saw the CID team at the gate,
I could not believe my fate.

Moments that left me content,
Gave me another friend,
A time so well spent,
The day never seems to end.

Then Shagnika called me today,
Told me a month has passed since that day,
I said "what did you just say?"
"It still seems like yesterday."


Edited by Shagnika - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Awww !! I loved her poem,short and sweet,do tell her she's quite good at this !!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey wow Shaggy, its great thanx for compelling Ujjwala to do so or we would have never got this poem. Its really touching yaar, Its lovely. Please thank Ujjwala on my behalf and thank you sweety for posting it Love you two
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Posted: 15 years ago
Thanx Bhavana and Sneha di for reading it and liking it! Really very touching poem! Short and simple but v cute! 👏

@sneha di, u can also thank her urself! 😉U have her cell number na! 😃

would like if others also comment! Waise bhi this forum looks v v soona soona at times! Kya hua sabko?busy kya? 😕
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Posted: 15 years ago
shaggy 4 sharing such a beautifl poem...plz paas m thanks to ujjwala
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Posted: 15 years ago
Sorry yaar for disrupting between Ujjwala's poem discussion but I need to share this somewhere and this is the perfect thread for it, so here I am. Aaj subah naa main soch rahi thi dat incident when Daya sir said 'aajaa baith jate hain hum' I was repeadly thinking this and smiling while I was on the road for my way to Office, Every one on the road were looking at me as if I was some mad girl ran off from the hospital. I later on reliased this when people were looking at me with suspicion. 😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
Oh gosh di !!! I bet you must've felt very embarrassed for a second it happens with many of us but I guess aapne uss time socha hoga ki these people are thinking I'm mad if they were in my place they would've behaved similarly 😆 but yeah aap isi tarah Daya ke sapno mein khoye rahiye,jo aapko ajeeb samjhenge unhe hum sambhal lenge !!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
loved the poem, dear ujwala and shagee...
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Posted: 15 years ago
Thank u everyone for liking the poem! Ur comments have been passed on to her!! 😃

@sneha di, 😆Such incidents have happened wid me quite a number of times! 😆 😆 and specially when i am wid mom n ppl stare at me at my stupid behaviour, then she gets even more angry!!! 😆 i love such moments when all of a sudden we r reminded of such small incidents! Something everyone cherishes! 😃

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