Little Personal-POEM on Pg 26(19th July)

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visrom

@visrom

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Posted: 15 years ago

#151

sooooo sweet yaar. Extremely good. 👏👏👏

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Suhaani/Drilabh (CID/MJHT)

@Drilabh_Suhaani

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Posted: 15 years ago

#152

Hey shags!! Ure little poem is very sweet and cute and lovely!! 👏

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SAGNIKA

@Shagnika

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Posted: 15 years ago

#153

Thanx a lot visrom and drilabh!!! 😃

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SAGNIKA

@Shagnika

Rocker

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Posted: 15 years ago

#154

Okkay, here is another one from me...again credit goes to u guys...thanx for the encouragement!!!😃

❤️This one is dedicated to MY LOVE for Aditya SIR!❤️

I still remember when I saw you for the first time,
I was a kid and that was the first CID episode of mine.
You had a gun in your hand and a helpless face,
Later I came to know, it was the IMPOSSIBLE MURDER case.

Since then till today, you have always been in my mind,
I have the pleasure of seeing you every week, God has been kind.
Never ever have you dissappointed me till today,
But have always been with me, all my way.

It will be unfair if I only speak about me,
'cos people who love you are just so many.
Bhavna, Visrom, Drilabh are here to name some few
How do we tell you how much we love You!

May be you are not the best looking man,
Yet you have spelled magic on us like nobody else can.
ABHIJEET IN COMA promo made many of us go crazzy,
When it comes to thinking of you none of us are ever lazy.

The day I saw you in front of me...
what shud I say I felt-"What did I see?"
I still remember how sweetly you smiled,
I had tears in my eyes, others wondered why had I cried!

I dunno how much you remember my presence,
But its impossible for me to get over your essence!
Wherever you go, Whatever u do,
Be happy, is all that i want from YOU.

❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

😃

I know this one is again a stupid one!!!!😆😆

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sunny

@sunnyp1414

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#155

Superb Shagnika. direct Dil se.

So here we go. very beautifully written and emotional one.

Edited by sunnyp1414 - 15 years ago

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Bhavanab

@Bhavanab

Stunner

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Posted: 15 years ago

#156

shaggy lovely,just lovely,this poem has so much truth in it,I can't find words to explain how much I've loved it and thanks for mentioning my name and really ABhi SIR rocks,want to give you the world's tightest hug for this poem

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SAGNIKA

@Shagnika

Rocker

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Posted: 15 years ago

#157

Thanx a lot Sunny and zerry for liking my poem..😃

@Bhavna....🤗

Guys sorry i cudnt name every Adi sir fan in the poem...so just 3 of them!!!
Otherwise list kuch jyada lamba hai....PRABHA DI, BHINDER, SNEHA DI, AYUSHIJHA, Jiya di, jeet, bidz, etc etc etc....😆

Edited by Shagnika - 15 years ago

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visrom

@visrom

Stunner

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Posted: 15 years ago

#158

Thanks for including me in the poem!!! 🤗

I am hopeless at poetry and always wished I could write one....but you have done it on my behalf too. Thank you so much....if he ever read it, he'll know how big a fan I am.

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JP22

@JP22

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#159

wow...drect dil se ..yar esliye to mein creations nahi kar rahi hun..muzase bhi achhe creators hein abhi maujud...gud..u dint maintioned my name...i also like abhijeet..bhl gayi.