TaSha FF..Yeh Bheege Pal.. Part 21 Pg 94 - Page 36

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Posted: 15 years ago
Part 4: Oh! so hamari Maharani - Kala ne entry maar hi li...and as usual, Kishore might be the timid stupid one?? 😆

Awesome galll....just loved the dutta and Naku's scene in the mall and how Dutta manages to buy the shawl afterall....😆😆


and that sensuous scene, though with Baaji turned out to be some other slut......Le!! and itne der tak, u kept the viewers hopes high ki the guy might be Dutta and gal - Naku...........'


Shabz ki bachchi, sudhar ja!! 😆😆
Edited by Dancingdoll - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Part 5: oh wow!! Sups ko kala ki daughter bana diya?? 🤣...i knew dono ka peechle janam ka koi to connection hai....🤣🤣🤣....yeh hai socha nahi tha...🤣 and was Naku also checking out Baaji while Dutta was thinking about her??? 😡....yeh ladkiyaan dil ka connection kab samjhengi?? 😆
off to sleep now....next part kal.....bahut neend aa rahi hai.........yawwnnnnnn.....bbyeeeee........yawwnnnnnnn
Edited by Dancingdoll - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi Frndzz ..
Sorry 4 the late update ,,just didn't get time to type it down ..
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but here is a short update ..i hope u all like it ..
Will reply to comments later ..



Part11

Rano had gotten up early next morning …in fact she had hardly slept the whole night ….she had been thinking about Baaji & everyone …She gets ready quickly ,,,2day is her first day at office ..she had decided to take the job ,,but then stay away 4rm Baaji as possible ..she came out of the room …Uncle & aunt were w8ing 4 her at breakfast …After having breakfast they both leave for the office …They had to catch a bus to the office ..on their way Rano starts talking to him about some things & then slowly comes around on & asks him about Baaji so as not to get him suspicious ..

He say : thoda azeeb aadmi hai ,,,,kuch samajh nahi aata kab kya kar de ..uske dimaag mein kya chal raha hai koi nahi jaanta …kab uske man mein kya sama jaye ….kisi baat ke peeche padh jaye to use pura kar k rahe ga chahe apna hi nuksaan ho ..waise dil ka achcha hai ..Thoda strict hai magar apne employees k saath achcha hai … waise tumhara depart alag isi liye tumhara use saamna kam hi hoga ..aur ghabrane ki zarroorat nahi ,,,main hoon na wahan pe …

Rano nods at him ..then hesitantly asks about his family ….to which he replies .. " Nahi koi nahi hai uska …akele hi rehta hai …kabhi uske family members se mulaqat hi nahi hui …na maa na baap .. main to jab se yahan kaam kar raha hoon ,,use akele hi dekha hai …waise tum kyun pooch rahi ho …"

Rano : Nahi wo main aise hi …ab job kiya hai to thoda bahut aise hi jaanne k liye pooch liya ..


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Dutta & Aaye are having breakfast ….Aaye luked a little quite today …

Dutta placing his hand on her : Aaap ki tabiyat theek hai ..

Aaye: haan theek hoon ..

Dutta : Kal Baaji aaya tha kya ..

Aaye luking up at him : Pata nahi ,,

Dutta : Pata nahi matlab

Aaye : Pata nahi matlab pata nahi .. tum kyun pooch rahe ho

Dutta : Aayeeee ..wo maine aap k room mein flowers dekhe is liye pooch liya ..

Aayi takes a deep sigh : watch man andar le ke aaya the ,,,keh raha tha koi aadmi de ke gaya hai .. she starts crying ..Dekh aaya bhi to mil k bhi nahi gaya ,,bahar se flowers pakda k chala gaya ..… Dutta gets up & hugs her .. "pata nahi tum dono ki ye galat fehmiyan kab khatam hogi …arrey jaan to meri jaati hai tum dono ko aise dekh ke .."

Dutta thinking to himself " Tumhe kya pata aaye ,,wo sach ko dekhna hi nahi chahta ..shaq ki patti bandhi hai uski aankhon mein ..maine to kitni koshishi ki hai par wo samajhta hi nahi …aur tumhe kaise bataon aaye k usne business mein bhi kitni rukhawaten daali huyi hain ..koi mauka haath se jaane nahi deta mujhe neecha karne k liye .."

Dutta makes aaye sit down ,,gives her water to calm down …then taking her hand in his assures her that everything would b fine one day ,,, he would try his best to clear all the misunderstandings between them & bring Baaji back to her ..he promises Aaye that the day will come soon ..

Dutta had promised aaye 4 the time being but he knew this was not easy ,,,Baaji waz not going to make it easy 4 him ..but he had to do it for the sake of Aayi .. He gets up to get ready for his office ..

On his way to his office he is thinking of Aaye & dat she should b alone nw at this age ..as she keeps on thinking of past ..he is worried about her ..he decides that it was time that he settled down as it will also make his mom happy & she would have someone to talk to & taken cared of while he si at work … Naku comes to his mind at that moment & he decides to give her a call on reaching his office ..

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Baaji head is throbbing with pain when he gets up & a very bad hangover …he feels like puking ,,he almost runs to the wash room …after a while he comes out …he intercoms in the kitchen to get him sum painkiller & a glass of lime water to get rid of this hangover ... he knew that last night he must have over did with his drinking ..he walks back to his bed when he steps on something sharp ..he bends to take a look ,,,he notices sum pieces of broken bangles …he picks them up wonders how those pieces got here …he tries to remember but couldn't …just then a servant comes with his lime water & tablets ..he asks him if someone came last night to meet ..the servant nods in denial that he didn't as he was not on duty last night …Baaji dismisses him … he swallows down the tablets with the drink ….after lying down 4 a few minutes till his head had cleared a little bit ..he gets up to freshen up …he comes down all ready to leave 4 the office …the breakfast has been laid down for him but he doesn't feel like having it ..he just takes a sip 4rm his coffee …Just then the watchman comes & hands over the car keys to him saying that the driver had bought back the car ….Baaji surprised asks him : 4rm where ….the watchman a little scared sayz a girl had bought him back home last night in a drunk condition & had given him the car keys telling him the location where it was parked ..Baaji asks him that if he recognized the girl ….to which the watch man sayz he had never seen this girl before ..

Baaji nods at him to go …he is now thinking hard that who could have bought him back ….& then remembers broken bangles in his room ..he ponders aloud " kaun hogi aur ye toothi hui choodiyan mere kamre mein….kya kuch hua….& then nods his head in denial " nahi aisa kuch nahi"


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At Nupur house , Naku is getting ready to leave 4 her home …she is hurrying with the last minute packings ,,Nupur is helping her out ..

Naku : Mayank would be here any moment …aur meri tayyari nahi khatam hui ..

Nupur : Chill yaar ,,kuch nahi hoga yaar… hum time par pahunch jayenge ..

After a little while they r all set to leave ..Mayank has arrived & has been honking his car horn 4 them to cum down quickly … They quickly get out of the house & is just about to close the door when the phone rings …

Naku : ab ye kiska phone hai ..

Nupur : Mayank hoga …chal jaldi neeche chalte hain ..

Naku : Agar kisi aur ka hua to ..

Nupur : achcha main dekhti hoo ….

Nupur unlocks the door & goes to check the phone ..just as she is about to pick it up it stops ringing ..She gets irritated but then rushes bak as doesn't want Naku to miss her bus .. Nupur once again locks the door …& as she steps down the stairs she again hears her phone ringing ..ignoring it she makes her way down to the w8ing car ..


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At the office Dutta is getting irritated ,,,he has been trying to get to Naku but no one is answering his phone .. he slams down the phone ..he thinks of sum other way to get to her … but b4 he could do anything about it ..he gets busy in his work .. the small paper on which Naku number is written slips inside his lower desk drawer ..

Mayur & Naku reach the bus stand on time ..the bus was just about to leave .. Mayank helps Naku with her luggage ,,,Nupur hugs her & asks her to cum bak soon ..Mayank also reminds Naku that she has to come 4 his sister wedding .. naku sayz that she will think about it as it will b difficult 4 her to cum bak again so soon ,,,she had to look after her shop also …but Mayur cuts her off saying no excuses & that she has to cum .. Naku agrees & finally the bus leaves 4 Panchgani …Mayur keep on waving till the bus is out of sight ..


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I knw this part is a little crappy ..& No TaSha also
so maafi mere doston ..
But pllz do leave ur comments & suggestions if any ..😉
& luv u all ..!
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Posted: 15 years ago
Mere kismat khel gaye.......🥳

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Posted: 15 years ago
Wow rockingggggggggggggggggg.............Lovely..........DUTTA SLAMS the phone.........Shonaa kaa gussa bhii naa.............Love him sooooooooooooooo much............Thankx for the pm shabz............🥳
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Posted: 15 years ago
Thanks For The PM Shabz...
Baiji ko galatphemi? Ufff ho.. Hopefully he will come round soon..=)

Naku chalegayi? Please make TaSha meet again soon..=) Brill update..
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Posted: 15 years ago
great part shabzz..and thanks 4 the pm..continue soon.. andd plzz make Tasha meet soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
oh finally u updated this..tahnx a lot!!are y do u think it is crappy yaar..we cant always have tasha scenes..we sumtyms need a break , need to wait longingly for it only then we will enjoy tasha...otherwise it gets monotonous..so im loving this part!! 😆

well i always love the dutta-ayi convo that u give..dutta is totally different with ayi n totally diff with nakku thats wat i love abt his character in this FF...as of now im equally eager to knw if baji will come to knw abt rano...his reactions..i guess he will see those bangles in her hands..just wondering...i am sumhow liking this rano gurly..i have a feeling that she will put him right..she seems to knw baji really well...

aww how i wish that nakku would have spoken to dutta..lol

well now im banging on the thought that nakku n dutta will meet in the marriage ..nakku wearing sumthing amazing, looking beautiful..and dutta staring at nakku..and ayi sahib realising that dutta has fallen for nakku..i dunno wat bakwas im saying..
anyway..as usual this part was 👍🏼 ..but i want the next part to be updated real sooonnn...
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Posted: 15 years ago
Loved the last Baaji-Rano scene 😳 This part was very nice Shabz 😉 Poor Ayi, oye hoye look at Dutta calling Naku 😳😳 Continue soon, waiting eagerly for it! 😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
dutta hai naku ke liye bakharar....and baji finds ranos churiya...its not crappy yaar...its the tension building up for a big explosion...jus like in the serial..... 😉

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