Maaneet FF: A Twisted Fate #1: Link Pg. 148 - Page 2

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Naina.. do add me to the PM list..
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Posted: 15 years ago
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sounds really interesting....seems like geet and maan have never met before here.....
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Originally posted by: -divya247-

interesting prologue. want to see where the story goes from here. cont soon!



thanks! i'm updating the next part soon :)

Originally posted by: miss_precious

interesting...............i like this...........

do continue soon..........and if u plan to have a pm list......then please add me to it!!!



haha thanks for reading and commenting! I'll send out the pms soon as I'm updating the next part :)

Originally posted by: sosweetsumi

do continue
yaar
geet is great aate hi shock de diya
bye sumi



thanks for reading and commenting! I hope you like the next parts and haha yeah. geet is going to be very different in the beginning, but you'll see what happens as the story moves along. :)

Originally posted by: Sofna

Do CONT N add me 2 Pm list!



thanks for reading and commenting! and yupp. I've added you to the PM list :)

Originally posted by: Starry_night

Interesting! Do continue soon and plz add me to your PM list.



thanks! I'll update the next part soon and you're added to the pm list :) thanks for commenting =D

Originally posted by: dee30

hey ...nice ...do continue
and pm me too would love to know how it goes.👍🏼



hii. thanks for reading this :) I'll continue now that I know there's people who actually want to read this. :)

Originally posted by: Sweet_Ashum

Interesting
Continue soon n PM me the whenever you update
Take care



thanks for reading and commenting! I'm updating the next part and sure i'll send the PM :)

Originally posted by: sweet-and-cute

<font color="#006666">sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much interesting...plz update soooon...............and pm ker na maaattt bhul na.......</font>


ahaha thanks for reading this! I was nervous no one would like this fiery geet, but hmm im happy people like this :) I'll surely pm you when I update next...

Originally posted by: shalini_s

Naina.. do add me to the PM list..



thanks for reading and commenting! and you're added to the list :)

Originally posted by: gauri92

sounds really interesting....seems like geet and maan have never met before here.....



ahah yeah. geet and maan don't really know each other here. but don't worry. they will soon hehe :)
ps. do you want a pm when I update?

Originally posted by: raziya56

pm me please....good start!



thanks for reading and commenting! I'll surely pm you when I update next :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hi Everyone! Thanks for all those who read, commented, and/or pressed the like button :) Here's the next part. Hope you enjoy it!

Chapter 1:

She got up, slamming her hands on the desk in front of him. "Who said you were the father. I'm pregnant with your brother's baby."

*************

"You're pregnant with my brother's baby? Do you even know what you're saying? For all I know, my brother's not that stupid, that he would knowingly get some random girl pregnant" he retorted, angry that someone could throw such an accusation at his brother.

However, she was not fazed by his angry response. She answered the man in front of her with just as much confidence, not faltered by his mean looks and commanding presence. "But he did, and when I talked to him, he said he doesn't want anything to do with the baby or anything to do with me, to keep it out of his family's ears and make sure no one ever finds out."

At this, the man raised his one eyebrow, a slight questioning look on his face. "So this kid is the product of a one night stand and you expect me to believe that this is my brother's kid without any proof. Do you think I'm crazy or are you the one thats mentally instable?" he questioned.

"Excusee me, Mister. I'm not crazy and considering you are the owner of this entire thing, I'm guessing that you aren't either. Am I right? But anyways, you're asking me for proof? I'm not one to go and get pregnant with anyone and everyone. Humph"

"But I'm going to require some sort of DNA paternity tests to prove that my brother is your baby's father. Then and only then will I even consider thinking about this issue and taking some action on this matter," the "Mister" replied.

"Of course you will" she snorted, contemplating in her mind whether she should actually go through with this entire situation.

"I'm busy today. So tomorrow, 9 AM, I want you at Sanjivani. We'll conduct the tests and then I'll see what to do about this entire situation" he ordered, as he finally turned away from her and looked down at his work again.

Getting the message, she turned away and began walking out of the cabin door. She thought about how she had landed in this situation, how she had been cheated by his brother, and how now, she was in such a big mess. "Should I actually go to the hospital tomorrow? He'll just throw money in my face and tell me to leave. What will I do then?" she wondered to herself, as she headed opened the door.

However, before she could close it though, she heard him say, "Wait. I don't want to wait until tomorrow. We're going now. Stay right here."

She turned around, looking at him with a puzzled face. "Why not wait until tomorrow? You don't trust me anyways, so why so eager?"

He stared back at her with a dumb look, not knowing why even he was paying any attention to this girl, this annoying, loud, and rude girl.

She smirked, as she responded "Maybe because you know that I'm telling the truth. Your brother isn't the world's kindest soul, if you haven't realized."

"Shut up. I don't have time for this mindless arguing. Let's go" he ordered, as he grabbed his laptop and made his way out of the door. He pushed her aside as he headed to the elevator. When everyone else in his office stood up at his sight, saying "Hello sir" he merely grunted in response, giving them a cold hard stare and stomping ahead.

Seeing this, she muttered "Khadoos" thinking that no one would hear. But the person she was referring to did hear, as did the office workers around them. While they all just stared at this girl, looking shocked at how she put all their thoughts into words, he turned around and gave her a hard glare. "WHAT did you just say? You weren't referring to me, were you?" he questioned, threatening her to say otherwise.

However, she remained unfazed by his cold, hard demeanor. Looking back into his coal black eyes, she responded "Who else would I be referring to? I was just calling a khadoos, a khadoos."

The jaws of everyone around them dropped to the ground, as did some of the files in the hands of these people when they heard. "Who is this girl that has the audacity to respond to sir?" they muttered amongst themselves.

He, however, was just as shocked as his employees, hearing someone actually respond to him, rather than merely shivering in fear, which was the usual response. "Well miss. If we've had enough of these taunts, do you want to get going to the hospital?" he questioned, not knowing how else to change the topic and get out of this embarrassing situation.

*********

On the way to the hospital, he called up his brother.

"Hey yaar. We going to the disco tonight or hitting up a bar?" he questioned, picking up his phone without looking at the caller id.

Hearing this, he was angered and fury bubbled through in his voice. "Mr. Dev Khurana. This is your brother. Get to Sanjivani in 20 minutes. I don't want to hear any excuses." He cut the call.

Dev, by then, began to worry, for two reasons. First, he was called to the hospital and that meant some was in danger. Second, he just sounded like an irresponsible fool to his brother. "Oh darn" he exclaimed as he quickly through on some clothes and ran out of his room to the hospital. "I am in so much trouble" he thought, not realizing that there was another added worry waiting for him when he got to the hospital.

Precap: Dev gets to the hospital and sees her. How does he react and what does he say?

So everyone, how was it? Please respond, and comment to let me know your ideas/suggestions and do press the like button!

Also, those of you who want a PM do let know, and I'll add you to the list :)

~Naina
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Posted: 15 years ago
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waiting for the hospital scene with Dev & Maaneet
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Posted: 15 years ago
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eeeehh.....loved it!!! and yes, dev has no idea whats waiting for him at the hospital....hah!!! serves him right if he gets disowned..
and yes, i would love a PM!!! it makes a story so much easier to follow....
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Posted: 15 years ago
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lv the calin khadoos a khadoos! Waitin 4 nxt updte
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Lovely part waiting for the next updates
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Posted: 15 years ago
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cant wait for the maneet scenes at the hospital and please try ang get out of the picture asap.......... i cant stand him anymore!!!

cheers for the pm

and update soon :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
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areeee yaar....you send them in sanjivani...........abb toh kher nehin..ager armaaan dekh liya na useee toh ....pata nehin kaya hogi.....anddddddd nice one hunny......i want to seee that dev in front of geet......maaja aaye geee....thank you for pm me.....

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